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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#101

awesome part kat👏!

"I know what is like to live without a parent Bi…I did not want her to loose her father because of me… What I did was for the best!… I can live with her hating me at least she feels something for me…I could not see her hating her father whom she loved so much…." Bi looked at him walking away….''

^cnt believe armaan did that for ridz😭😳

plz update soon😳

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#102

OMGOMGOMGOMG!

New Bedtime ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic intro...Was absolutely mind blowing!👏👏

Superb!👏👏

And the 1st part was really interesting!👏👏👏

Especially Ridz's past...sad and heart wrenching!

Ridzie slapping Anjali is new...but good!😆

But i liek Bi...cudnt help laffing!😆😆

And 2nd part so soon??😲😲...Wow Kat...not bad!😆😆

But t'was good...Ridzie tinks Armaan is married wid a kid??😲😲...Oh no!

And Armaan doesnt wanna go close 2 her so she can stay wid her dad?!

I luv my Armaan...Dats so sweet and adorable!😳😳

Continue soon and do PM me!

Cant afford 2 miss ur ffs!😆😆

*~*Marisha*~*

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#103

Gosh!, your on a roll!!!, part 2 already?! wooohoooo!!!

LoL, i soo knew he wasnt married teehee, cuz i remember ritu had chirag lol

Brilliantly expressed, lol I wonder how she gunna take care of her niece, Bi is brilliant!

-Natasha

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

Sorry for the delay give me like 15 mins

Love Kat

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aredhel

@aredhel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#105

WOW sooo sweet luv your concept plz continue im waiting impatiently!!!!!!!

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

Updated sorry for the delay

Part 3 is up long part....

Love Kat

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#107

OMG, Kat now that has got to be one of the best piece of update you have written - it was awesome again im just in awe of your writing style!!

again i loved Maya the little cutie, youngsters these days know too much lol

operation Kuch Kuch Hota Hai - sounds intriguing, cant wait to know what else they have planned

cant wait to read what happens next since they were disturbed lol

Sania

Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 17 years ago

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Ria

@hibos1

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#108

Kat kat kat,

I am in love with this FF...wow man!!!! is this Armaan for real....he can take care of a infant and a 6 yr old brat at one time...and he checks the baby formula's temperature before he feeds the baby....I almost was in tears when I read that.....

and the end was such a cliffhanger.....why did he pull back...and I am soooo hooked.....

and thanks a lot for the frequency of the updates...👏

-Ria

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missing Vmars

@missing Vmars

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#109

OMG Kat ...... ur each update is like better dan da previous one n like always even dis part has left me speechless !!!! OMG armaan is like da most adorable guy on earth .... da way hes managing da kids ... b it da brattish 6 yr old maya or a small baby n Bi i told u i was growing really fond of heri n da last part ... well in dis one i cud give her a hug !!!! shes bought KKHH hai into armaan n riddhima's life n maya plays anjali junior ...... aaaah dis FF has me sooo hooked i have forgotten ( temporarily dat is ) all abt Its in his kiss !!!!! n da most aamzing part is dat v get an update almost everyday !!!! n now i wonder y hes pulled back ...... aaaah cant wait 2 read da next part !!!

PS: Kat v missed u on NJ's birthday post yesterday !!!!!

PPS: thankfully dis part didnt make me cry ..... coz after da first 2 parts OMG i was bawling like a baby !!!!

Edited by missing Vmars - 17 years ago