FF: Ek nazar mein bhi NEW!! pt5 pg7 05/ - Page 3

Originally posted by: matwamango

Make sure U make this a lot longer and make the fonts size 4 that way it seems you've written a lot. I loved the beginning. Please intro Ranbir 😳

Originally posted by: yogitz

what do you mean crappy, its great but a little short. if you make a longer we will all love you a little bit more.

thnx for reading and commenting nisha, all23eyzonme, unpredictable91 and disha11😀 glad you liked it, will make it longer

Recap: Its adita and suhas's wedding and kanya is about to fall but someone catches her( who is this someone)

After 2 mins of waiting to be released from the grip of the rescuer, kanya finally speaks up

K: um excuse me, dude with the long hair, back to earth? If you don't mind can u plzzzz let go of me?

Dude wit the long hair( feeling relli embarred) oh um ya im relli sorry,

Lets go of kanya

K: btw thnx for catching me!

She waves and leaves

A; Wah bhai lag ta hai bhabhi mil gaye!! Mein abhi mom ko batakar ata hoon

MN: kya batao gaye mujhe? Arre RANBIR tu agaya? Aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin?

R: woh mom… uh… mein appse milne wala tha… lekin… wo…

A; Bhai bhabi ko pakar ke khatde( standing) the!!

Ranbir elbows adi in the ribs and malika leaves hearing it half way( assume someone called her)

A: ouch!!, meine kya kiya?

R: kya kiya?? Kya bhabhi bhabhi laga rakha hai? Who tumhari bhabhi nahin hai.

A; acha to phir kya hai? Ek minute mein guess karta hoon?

R: nahin tu plz rehnede. Mujhe aur kaam bhi hai.

With that ranbir leaves. Adi noes his brother well enuff to know he's in luv at first site!

So suhas and adita r getting married in the mandap, witht the saat pheres and sinddor and stuuf. So whn all that is done, kanya and her gang come up front to tease he jiju and di.

K: hmm to jiju app humari di ko honeymoon ke liye kahan lekar ja rahein hain?

Ad ( turning red): kanya, chup kar!

Poo: kyun? Pata to lage humari jiju appko kahan le kar ja rahian hai. Kahin apko Antarctica to nahin lejaigey.

Kanya and the others laugh. Ranbir standing a little bit to her right looks at her laughing and think " wow she luks so cute, just like an angel" he keeps starring at her whn he snaps out of it and feels a tap at his ahoulder. He turns and sees aditya grinning.

R: tu kyon haas raha hai?

A; mein dekha raha hoon ke app bhabhi se kitna pyaar karte hain. Hai! kya jodi hai!

R: oye tu chup kar, wo teri bhabhi nahin hai! Aur mujhe tang maat kar.

A: kyun? Ohhh ap babhi ko dekhna chahtein hai? Koi baat nahin. Aap dekhtein rahiey.

R: mein tumhe choduga nahin!!

Adi runs for his life with ranbir running after him. Adi runs past kanya and she falls again but just in time ranbir catches her before she falls. Kanya has her eyes shut tight, her hands in fist. Kanya realizes she hasn't fallen. She opens her eyes and sees ranbir starring at her cutness.

K: Is there something on my face I shud know about? Your always starring at it!

R ( turning red): huh? Oh no! im sorry.

K laughs: its ok. Btw im kanya wuts ur name? never seen you here before.

R; im ranbir, suhas's brother, I came from London today.

K: ohhhh, ur jiju's brother? Cool. U study in London?

R: ya and I handle the business there too. But now im going to join college here.

K: wow that's so cool! Which college r u joining?

(I don't know anything about india's colleges so I made the name up)

R: im going to J R College.

K( excited): relli?? I go to the same college!! And I hve so many frinds…..

Kanya keeps talking on and on and ranbir just stares at her beauty. " I 'm going to the same college as her??. I cant believe it!! Yay me!" Aditya is standing at the distance looking at his brother looking so happy.

i hope this is longer and i hope u like it, plzz comment gud or bad

aditya rocks lol

😭 no one liked my update??😭

REALLY CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was a brill update... pls continue soon

a little bit longer would make the love o meter go higher.

gr8 update.

thnx for all the comments😃