FF: Ek nazar mein bhi NEW!! pt5 pg7 05/

hey guys im saba, writing a new FF, its my first one so plz forgive my mistakes!😳

characters:

NANDA FAMILY

Ranbir Nanda: a rich son of Malika Nanda and Krishnath Nanda, has two brothers Suhas and Aditya. is sweet and caring from the inside but from the outside is hard and strong. he believes in love.

Suhas Nanda: older thn ranbir is a very luving bro and is gettin married to adita

aditya nanda: younger thn ranbir, luvs his bros alot but play alot of pranks on thm. ( played by gaurav khanna from meri doli tere angana)

Mr and Mrs Nanda: r rich buisiness industrials and luv their sons alot. best friends wit Godboles.

GODBOLE FAMILY

Pammi Godbole: fun and luvin mom , is kind and caring best friends wit malika

anand godbole: rich buisness man, luvs his children, friends with the nandas

Kanya Godbole, cool, rich, fun luvin and carin, sweet, luvs his sisters alot and is luved by everyone. is the youngest

adita: older sis, gettin married to suhas, luvs her sisters alot

pooja: middle one, same as show

shanta tai: same as show but is kinder to ranbir😆

Plot: ranbir and kanya meet at adita and suhas's wedding and ranbir has luv at first site. but does kanya have any feelings for ranbir yet, will she ever hve feeling for him? will someone come in between thm? read on to find out?

i dont no if u guys will like it, plz comment gud or bad, and tell if if i shud add kripa and angad in it too?will add more character later on

ooo saba love the plot! glad u decided to write one!
it sounds interesting dear!
start soooooooon!

Originally posted by: princez-preciou

ooo saba love the plot! glad u decided to write one!
it sounds interesting dear!
start soooooooon!

thnx alot for the comment salma😃

i will post part one as soon as i get more comments!

Great & Nice Intro!
I am not going to say much becuz its just the begining but I can't wait to read the next update!

great intro!
continue soon 😊

it was a nice intro
continue soon

you intro is great!!!
i want to read your ff asap,pliz.

very positive intro. very interested to read ur fresh ff

Ek Nazar Mein Bhi
Part 1
U enter a big brown mansion thts covered with beautiful lights and there are a lot of people rushing around. Then u go in the mansion and u c its nicely decorated, just like for a wedding. Then you go upstairs and in a room there is a bunch of girls and one of them is sitting on a chair getting dressed up.

G1: wah di aaj to app bohut sharmarahi hain

G2: hai aj apki shadi hain

G3: ek minute tum log kyun meri behen ko satarahe ho?

Adita: thnx kanya

K: thnx kyun, yeh to mera kaam hai, app ko satana!!

Ad: kya??

All girls laugh. So its adita's wedding and kanya and her friends, cuzins r tesing her.
Scene shifts to another big mansion a few houses down . its Nanda mansion. U c a guy sitting on a bed and a bunch of guys around him. Its none other than suhas.

Adi=aditya ad= adita

Adi: meri bhai ki shaddi hai( singing and dancing)

S: eh tu chuup nah, ek marun ga.

Adi: bhai ranbir kaha hai? Aj uski flight thi na?

S: haan wo aaj London sey araha hai, lekin abhi tak nahin aya

Sm1 at the door: ajaay ga, a bap sab neeche ajaeye, barat ka time hogaya hain.

The someone was Malika nanda. All the guys run out the door . so the barat goes over to godbole house and everyones dancing and talking, wit music.

MN: yeh ranbir kaha gya? Abhi tak aya kyun nahi?

Adi: pata nahin, meine use call bhi ke lekin who Utah nahi raha. Thn kanya and her friends running around ordering people to make everything perfect when someone ushes her. She is almost about to fall when someone catches her.

Ek nazar mein bi pyaar hota hai meine suna hai
Do baton mein bhi iqraar hota hai meine suna hai
hai Sama rangeen sa hone lagta hai Jahaan haseen sa lagne lagta hai Koyi dil pe chhaa jaaye to
aisa hota hai, maine suna hai Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai, maine suna hai Do baaton mein bhi

this is part one but i felt it was crappy,plz post ur comment, gud or bad, next part will be better.

great part..it was good but make it a bit longer next time!
continue soon 😊