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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: matwamango
Make it longer and this part was funny. trust me the more U write each update the more the creAtive juices start flowing. Can't wait for the next part

sorry for the short part, will make it longer, thnx for the comment

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: princez-preciou
saba i luv ur writing style..
great part yaar so interesting!
continue soon!

thnx alot for the comment salma, glad you enjoy reading it, will continue soon

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

EK NAZAR MEIN BHI

part 4

recap:first day of college

Ranbir, Kanya,Adi and all their friends go to class. Ranbir and Kanya have the first two classes together.

R: thank you God i have clas with kanyaaa ( dreams off)

K: uh ranbir... ranbir... ranbir to earth? ( shakes him)

Ranbir comes back to earth from moon and looks at kanya embarresed.

R: oh kanya im sorry i ummmm...( thinking of an excuse)

K: ( laughing) its ok ranbir, no worries( walks off)

kanya is walking and the janitor is mopping the floor. he is done but forgets to put the " wet" sign on and kanya slips. BUT our hero Ranbir comes to the rescue and catches kanya before she falls. kanya shuts her eyes tightly and covers her face with her hands. but when she realizes she hasnt touched the floor she opens her eyes. and she sees ranbir starring at her face. then they both have a eyelock for like about 2 mins. but just then aditya and the gang walks bye and adi whistles.

A: bhai, ...

R:----

A: bhai, hello?? why do you always dream off.

mukti: kanya. oy kanya!

kanya and ranbir snap out of their eylock turning all possible shades of red.

K: oh. umm uh. sorry about that.

the gang is laughing and walks off.

K: thnx for catching me ( smiles and kisses ranbir's cheek and walks off)

Ranbir gives the widest grin possible and touches the spot where kanya kissed him.

ranbir and kanya reach to their first class and both sit beside each other. ranbir keeps glancing towards kanya and kanya looks through the corner of her eye and smiles. classes are over and college is finished.

everyone goes to the parking lot and sit in and leave.but kanya notices that one of her tire is punctured and everyone left except for ranbir. she also has no spare tire so she is stuck. ranbir notices her worried face and walks over.

R: kanya kya hua? tum itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho?

K:woh ka hai nah, mera tire puncture ho gaya hai aur sab chale gaye.i have no way to get home.

ranbir thinking this is an excellent chance to spend more time with her.

R: no problem, you can come with me. we live close bye anyway.

K: ( thinking) ummmmm ok ill go with you.

both sit in ranbir's car and set off. the first 10 mins. its silent. so kanya breaks the ice

K: umm ranbir?

R: ya?

K: can i turn on the CD player? i cant' sit in silence.

R: ya sure no need to ask.

Kanya turns it on and the song that is playing is pappu can't dance.

R/K: NEXT!!

both laugh and kanya puts the next song on. you're my love starts playing now.

R/K: NEXT!!

kanya puts the next song on. tum se hi starts playing.

R/K: YES!

K; wow i didnt knw we had similarities between us.

R: neither did i . so what else do you like doing? i mean your hobbies?

kanya and ranbir continue talking about hemselves and they realize they have alot of similarities.

they reach home and say bye to each other and leave.

plz plz plz post comments, gud or bad, i dont mind. hope you enjoyed this part.

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

readers could you please please leave comments, i don't mind if they are good or back. and if you want i can discontinue this FF. i feel as if nobody is reading it and i work hard on it. so plz leave comments even if its one word

thnx

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Jas

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

nice ff

loved it....continue with it....😊

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Shreya Patel

@spate22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Yes, please do continue this story!!! We do love this story!!!😃 Actually we love all the fanfics on this forum. So please don't assume that we don't want you to continue, we do. Sometimes we forget to leave comments but it doesn't mean you should stop writing. We know you work hard and we do appreciate your work. 😃

Shreya

Edited by spate22 - 17 years ago

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