Teri Ishq mein mere jaan fanaa..PART4 P.5 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lmao!! ahah continue soon angad and shy...its hard to take in but i love it!!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

lmao!! ahah continue soon angad and shy...its hard to take in but i love it!!! 😳 😳


Thanks.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: stars_shine*

gr8 update
continue soon


I will try to post the 4th part today.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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like both of your fan fics
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ai_111

like both of your fan fics


Thanks so much.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 4:
2 days later:
Anita came in Angad s place near noon. Since 2 days, Angad was waiting for Kripa s phone. He didnt wanted to go out cuz he didnt wanted to miss the call of Kripa.
Anita: So today are you coming out?
Angad wanted to say no once again, but he couldnt hurt the heart of his best friend again and again.
Ang: Ok, I am coming with you today, if I dont get any call till noon.
Anita got happy.
Anita: FInally.
There were left 5 minutes before noon.
Anita: BTW what did you say to Anita about the jobs that you are doing in life?
Angad didnt answer for some time cuz he knew that he didnt do the right thing.
Ang: I said that..... I was an engineer.
Anita: What? You think that she will never know that you arent an engineer.
Ang: i know that one day she will know that I am not an enginneer, but that I will try to convince her that I was majboor.
Anita: You better tell her the truth before your relationship goes too far with her.
Ang: YOu know what? I have start my studies and I have decided to never do any robbery again.
Anita wanted to jump from excitement that moment. She waited that moment for years.
She run and hug Angad big time and give him a friendly kiss.
Anita: Kripa thank you!!!! Ohh!! I am so happy.
Suddently, the phone rang. Angad jumped on it and take it.
He was very nervous.
Ang; aaaa...allo.
His hands were shaking.
Kripa: Allo, is it Angad?
Ang: ya ya. It s me.
Kripa: hi, it s Kripa.
That time, Angad wanted to yell YESSSSSSSSSSSS.
Anita was next to Angad and she looked excited to.
Ang: Hi.
Kripa: I have call you to ask you if you would like to watch a movie with me today?
Angad got more excited and he yelled
Ang: YES
And Kripa laughed.
Ang: I am coming to take you from your house.
K: ok.
They hang the phone.
Angad looked with a sad eyes to Anita.
Ang: I cant come with you. Sorry.
But Anita didnt seem to care. She looked happy.
Anita: It s okay. I am happy that Kripa is in your life. Because of her, you are know a good guy.
Angad give her a hug.
Anita: Ok now you will have to go.
Angad goes and dress himself and cameback. He again looked very well.
Anita: Ok now I have to leave. Bye. Best of luck.
Ang: Bye.
Then, Angad takes a taxi and went to Kripa. He stopped the taxi a little far from Kripa s house cuz he didnt wanted her to know that he doesnt have a car. He walked for like 5 minutes and then, he came in front of the house of Kripa and Kripa was there already waiting for him.
K: Hi
Ang: Hi
THey again were very shy.
So, they walked to the cinema. This time, they had more conversations than last time and they were less shy.

In the cinema:
Ang: Which film do you want to watch?
K: hum.... you what do you want to watch.
He wanted to choose an action movie but he didnt cuz of Kripa. So he said Jaane ty Ya Jaane Na.

Ang: I heard that it was good.
K: Ya meet too. So lets go and see it.
They got 2 tickets and went to the movie.
During the movie, they really enjoyed. They liked the songs, the story etc. Toward the end of the movie, where the main characters were confessing their love to each other. Angad took the hand of Kripa and looked at the eyes of kripa. Kripa looked suprised. He very romantically and seriously told her:
Ang: I love you.
Kripa was shock and didnt answer for some time. Then, she decided to tell what her heart was saying.
K: I love you too.
They both hug each other.

END OF PART 4.

Edited by yeah_cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Important:
GUYS I MAY STOP WRITING THAT FAN-FIC CUZ I FEEL LIKE THERE ISNT MANY THAT IT S READING IT. I AM WRITING ANOTHER FAN-FIC AT THE SAME TIME (IDENTITY).

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