Teri Ishq mein mere jaan fanaa..PART4 P.5

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shraddha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

hey great start 👏 its great to see ak fanfics back 😊

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yeah_cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

PART 2:
Ding Dong! Ding Dong! Ding Dong! Finally, Angad wakes up.
Ang: Ahhhh!!! Will you let me sleep?
Anita: Open the door!!!
Ang: ok
Angad goes and open the door. Suddently Anita screamed:
Anita: What were you doing? It s 12 pm and you are still sleeping.
Angad: What? 12!
He run in the kitchen to watch the time and he saw 12 pm.
Anita: We were suppose to watch a movie.
Angad hit his head.
Ang: Sorry.
Anita: Usually you dont sleep that long.
Ang: Ya. Now, its different. I am in love.
Anita gets sad.
Anita: Oh! ya.... Who is she?
Ang; I dont know. I saw her for the first time yesterday and fell in love.
Anita changed the topic because she couldnt take that discussion.
Anita: So lets go for another movie.
Ang: Ok, I am coming. Let me change first.
He goes and comeback in 5 min. He was dress beautifuly.

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Anita s heart started to beat quicker.
Ang: How I am?
Anita: Perfect!!!
Ang: After today, I will always dress well cuz I am in love.
Anita gets angry.
Anita: Lets go.
They were walking and suddently Angad and Kripa comes in front of each other. They again stare at each other. They were both lose. In the background it was playing:
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Then, Anita saw Kripa. Her old friend.
Anita: Hey Kripa.
Kripa was lose.
Anita: Kripa. it s me Anita.
K: uh..uh... Anita!!! Oh Hey.
Anita: I thought that you forgot me. How are you doing?
Well, they were chatting, Angad couldnt stop looking at kripa.
Anita: Angad
Ang: uh... ha
Anita: It s Kripa. She was my best friend in high school.
Very shyly he said to Kripa
Ang: Hi
Kripa too said hi.
THey were both red as a tomato.
Anita: Ok Kripa. We have to leave for a movie. Give me your phone number and I will call you later.
K: Ok
She gave her her phone number.
Anita: Ok bye.
Angad and ANita restared walking. While walking, Angad was loose.
Anita: Are you okay?
Ang: Uh.. what? ... Yes I am okay.
Anita look at him suspiciously.
Anita: Is she the girl that you love?
Ang: Ummmmm..... Yes.
Then, there was some secondes of silence between them.
Ang: Anita. Can you plz meet us. I really love her.
Anita didnt like that. He was her best friend and even, if she loved him, she decided to help her best friend.
Anita: Ok I will arrange a meeting between you two.
Angad hug Anita. Anita had a little a bit of tears in her eyes.
Ang: Thanks!!!
Anita: I will always be here for you.

END OF PART.

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Edited by yeah_cool - 17 years ago

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yeah_cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Will post part 3 as soon as I get some comments.

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Saba

@stars_shine*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

hey
read ur FF
and its gr8!
continue soon!

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yeah_cool

@yeah_cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: stars_shine*
hey
read ur FF
and its gr8!
continue soon!

Thanks and plz do read and comment in future.

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eternal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

awwww poor anita...but anyways none the less very cute part please do continue soon 😳 😳

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Rima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

cute part 😛 poor anita 😭 oh well do cont soon 👏 👏 👏

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yeah_cool

@yeah_cool

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani
awwww poor anita...but anyways none the less very cute part please do continue soon 😳 😳

Thanks. The next part is coming today. Do read it.

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yeah_cool

@yeah_cool

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

PART 3:
Early in the morning Angad wakes up and dress up. He takes his car and quickly goes to Anita.
Ding DOng!!!
Anita opens the doors. She looked very sleepy.
A: Ahh!! What?
Angad was very excited and had a big smile in his face.
Ang: Aren't we going to meet Kripa today?
Anita looked at him very strangely.
Ang: Why are you looking at me like this?
Anita looked at the clock.
Anita: It s 6:00 am.
Ang: So
And Anita screamed:
Anita: Come on. YOu serious!! We were suppose to meet her at 12 pm. Are you ok mentally?
Ang: 12 pm. Oops. I made a mistake.
Angad very sadly went toward his car and Anita stopped and asked to stay with her till 12pm.

At 12 pm:
Angad and Anita were in a restaurant waiting for Kripa. Suddently, she came. She looked extremly beautiful. Angad had his eyes open BIG.
Ang: Oh my god. WOW.
Kripa came to their table.
K; hey guys.
Very shyly, Angad said:
Ang: Hey Kripa.
He was again all red and also, Kripa too.
Suddently as planned, Anita got a call and she had to go. So, she went away and let Angad and Kripa alone.
For the first 5 minutes, they both were very shy. All they did was waiting for the orders and looked down at the table. Then, Angad broke the ice.
Very slowly and shyly he said:
Ang: What are you doing as work?
Kripa was surprise that a discussion started between them.
K: Me... I am a doctor.
Then, again, there was a big silence between them, and then, Kripa talked.
K: And you what are doing?
Ang: Me... uhhh... I am an engineer.
Angad felt bad to lie for his love.
K; That s good.
Without knowing what he was saying, Angad said:
Ang: Do you have a boyfriend?
Kripa looked strangely, and Angad was like Oops, what did I say?
K: ..... No.... I dont have.
Angad was very happy inside of him and wanted to jump.
And very excitly, he said:
Ang: I dont have any girlfriend.
Kripa laughed.
That s when they started to feel less shy toward each other.
After eating, they went to a walk. While walking, they had a lot of discussions like discussions like about their friends, what they like and etc.
When they reached in front of the house of Kripa, it was time to say good bye. K: I must go.
She didnt wanted to go , but she had to.
Ang: Uh... ok. Do you have any free date so that we can meet?
K: I will see. Give your phone number. I will call you when I can.
And he gave his phone number.
Sudently because of a cat, Angad falls on Kripa.

They were very close to each other and looked at each other on the eyes. They could hear each other s hearts.
Then, they realise that they have to go. So Angad, stand very slowly.
Ang: Man, that cat.
K: It s okay.
They said bye to each other and left.

When Kripa entered her house her parents were waiting for her.
They had a smile in their face.
Papa: Who is he?
K: A friend.
Papa: Only a friend?
He said that with a smile.
Kripa: Ya.
papa: What is he doing?
Kripa: Stop this papa.
Very shyly, she run to her bedroom.
Her parents were very happy cuz she finally fell in love.

Edited by yeah_cool - 17 years ago