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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is shrewd and Naina is the ice princess!!!Raj is the business king and Naina hates business!!! 😊 The case of opposites attract!!!! 😉

I loved that line Men are sharks!!!! 😊 Its so true!!! 😊 😊 😊

Naina wants to stay away from men!!! 😊 😊

Naina feels a pull towards him as he looks at her!!! 😊 😊 😊 They are attracted to each other from the first sight!!!! 😳

Navin is usless!!! 😡

Did Naina love Aalekh??Then why is she still sad about it?? 😕

Huda is her friend and Aalekh is the one who jilted her at the alter!!!This seems kind of strange!!!Maybe you should have put it the other way around!!!!

I mean Aalekh seems to be good at playing Naina's best friend and Huda someone we love to hate!!!! 😊

Raj is arrogant!!!And he wants to seduce Naina to his bed!!! 😊 Agar koi aur hota toh everyone would have thought that he is sick but with Raj they obviously don't mind!!! 😉

Raj does not want to marry Naina!!!He just wants a passionate affair with her!!! 😳

Naina is attracted to Raj but does not want to admit it!!!!Par phas rahi hai uske jaal mein!!! 😈 😈

When he looked at her she felt exposed even wearing a saree!!! 😳

Waise mujhe ek gaana yad aagaya Raj aur Naina ke ish meeting aur attraction se

Dekhti hai jistara se
Teri nazrein mujhe
Main khud ko chupayu kaha....

Also Naina is born rich!!!Still you had to add her stint at the orpahange to show her as a quitessential heroine!!!!Can she not find a better way to spend her time?? 😒 😒 😒

This looks deliberately put in to show her as goody goody types and not the high class types!!!!Jaise forcibly you are trying to show her as caring and sensitive!!!!

As for who will blackmail whom Raj will blackmail Naina into marriage zidd mein aakar!!! 😉 Or maybe Naina will after getting dumped by him but that is neither probable not as much fun!!!!😉 😉 😉 But better make it fast as eveyone is waiting eagerly for it!!!! 😉



Now for your story!!!Its very interesting!!!Better update it fast or the audience will kill you!!! 😊

But where did you get your inspiration for it?? 😕 😕 😕

It seems like a Mills and Boon story!!!Are you inspired by that by any chance??

Also this seems like an Angad-Kripa fic for some reason and not an RN fic!!!The story and the charcters make it more suitable for amybe an AK fic!!!!

Are you inspired by an AK fic for this??

And then the description and casting of the hero do not match at all!!!! 😕

Character wise also tumara hero seems more likely to be played by Iqbal Khan than Rajeev!!! 😕

And the long hair and the other description does not fit at all!!!!Seems to be Ansh Gujral or Ranbir Nanda (Akashdeep Sehgal) from your description!!!And I just hate Ansh Gujral even though I do like Ranbir Nanda!!! 😊

hey first of all thnx 4 da bigggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gg

comment...............& yet the detailed info...........

yup the case of opposite attracts....... it works everywhere........& the proverb

"Men are sharks" i totally believe in it............ so thought of adding it.......... i m happy u loved it...........

weel it was juzza kind of attraction 4 naina 2 aalekh as she thought he was a good person........ but now its clear a sthe truth came in front of her tht aalekh is married........

well here naina is very sweet & innocent........... so i thought the orphanage 2 help children r bst......... nothinh wrong in tht..........

no not at all mills & boon story............. i juzz thought it by myself as it came into ma mind............ & as about raj looks........... i tried & changed his looks........... juzz as shahid changed his looks.............. 2 make him more handsome & sexy............... as hee is no doubts...........

thnx 4 asking u questions 7 i loved giving answers........ thnx again

loveu

sana

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

sorry for the late comment but as usual amazing update👏 👏 👏 hai! raj ka gaze ooooooh, so hot yaar, naina is a lucky girl😳 but bless her she is feeling really awkward, well evn i feel like that when people stare at me like that.

i like the huda in your's he's quite sensible, maybe because he doesn't love naina lol😆 😆 😆 i found it funny when he said i was wondering when your gonna say that because he was getting bored😆 😆 😆 god he cracked me up😆

god these business associates😆 😆 😆 are not letting them go. but what were they laughing about when naina said that naveen was sick😕

i can't believe that naina was getting married to alekh and he was already married omg 😕 i always saw them in a brother sister kind of relation ship never expected that

damn raj just wants naina in his bed eugh!! he is sick, but i know for a fact this attraction is soon gonna turn into love, and thus he probably black mail her into marriage or imagine naina black mailing him after getting seduced and dumped, hmmm i could just imagine her blackmailing though i prefer raj to do that because he will look hot doing so😳 😆

anyways once again hats off to you👏 👏 👏

luuuuuve yaa hun!!

take care😃

yasmin

hey yasmin hows ya.............. yet thnx 4 da comment............even though i 2 feel akward when people stare at me............ i juzz hate it..........tabhi i tried & changed naina aalekh relationship..............& ur other questions will be answered soon as the updates will come...........

thnx once again

loveu

sana

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART – 4



"Yes, I will be there"

Naina gently placed the phone down as she stared out of the window from her office. She loved this job. She worked as a child relief coordinator at CRY (Child Relief and You). Even though the job paid minimally it gave her the internal peace and satisfaction she always craved.

Her work at CRY never failed to fascinate her. She was very fortunate that she found the perfect job that she desired. Even though the wages were minimal she possessed an ample private income of her own. She knew she was fortunate to find her dream job and also not to have to worry about her expenses.

A pang of guilt took over. She enjoyed the private income because of Walia Industries and it was thanks to Naveen She felt sad for Naveen. He was really not cut out to run Walia Industries.

Thinking of Naveen brought back memories of the previous night dinner. A shiver ran through her spine.

He had disturbed her whether she wanted to admit it to herself or not. There had always been something about him that threatened her.

In her inner most thoughts she saw him again, lazily lounging in the chair like a contented lion, happy with his spoils of the night. He had trapped her with his hooded eyes making her his prey. Like last night, the memories prickled her skin.

Giving herself a resolute shake annoyed at herself she tried to return to the notes in front of her. She was organizing a CRY marathon and a follow up event in the next couple of days to support various projects the organization funded for the helpless babies and children.

She tried to suppress a yawn that was trying to make its way past her mouth. She had not had a good night's sleep. She had tried to sleep but her sleep had been disturbed by dreams which during the light of day she wished she hadn't had.

Those dark, laconic eyes had haunted her dreams. They had watched, desired and assessed her.

The phone gave a shrill ring jolting her out of reverie. She lifted the phone and cleared her mind.

"Yes" her voice was business like.

"Can I speak to Miss. Naina Walia?"

She stared at the phone disbelievingly. She knew the voice on the other end. Think of the devil and he has called…the thought leapt into her mind .She deliberately pushed the thought aside and tried to concentrate on the phone call.

"It's me" she said as her breath caught in her chest.

"Naina, come out for dinner tonight" he commanded with ruthlessness that she could only associate with him. No request, just a demand that she go out with him. After all this time the effect was still the same.

"Pardon…" her voice chilled even more as the sensation of being swamped tightened her chest.

"I said, come out for dinner" he repeated the same question once again. She could feel the amused smile that clearly was on his face right now.

"No" with an abrupt reply she cut off the phone and placed it on the cradle.

She could feel her heart beating unevenly at receiving this phone call. She knew that she had been rude but she just wanted to get him off the line and out of her life.

Naina watched the phone for another ten minutes expecting it to ring again. But it didn't ring again. She breathed a sigh of relief as her breathing came back to normal.

Rajveer sheekhawat.

How did he find out where I worked? My phone number?

She chastised herself for asking those silly questions. Of course he had all the money in the world. How hard it could have been to gather this information. All it would have taken was a single phone call. Angrily, she pulled the file that was in front of her and tried her best to get back to the work at hand.

Around 3.00 in the afternoon a bouquet of exotic lilies arrived for her. She looked at the card and immediately knew that it was from him. The card was simply signed RS in his bold hand-writing. So, he had taken the time to sign the card personally, what did that mean?

He was the only one who would have known that she loved exotic lilies or was this bit of information that he recently rediscovered about her.

The scent of the lilies surrounded her room. She couldn't take it anymore. She picked it up to throw it in the trash but something stopped her.

Realization struck, why she should show her anger on the beautiful flowers, when they did not do anything wrong? Picking them up, she went and gave it to the receptionist to keep it on display at the entrance



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In the presidential suite at the Marriot, Rajveer glanced at the tickets that were delivered to him earlier today. It was lying on the glass table next to the file that he was currently reviewing.

He knew the facts about her. She was 24 now, worked at CRY as a coordinator and spent a lot of her evening at the orphanage. She did not have many friends. Her constant friend and companion the last five years had been Amardeep Huda.

That Naina did not jump at the chance to have lunch with him did not surprise him nor did it bother him too much. He expected it. And he was pleased that she did not come to lunch with him. He wanted the thrill of the chase.

He gave a mocking smile to himself. He would meet her tonight even if the event was boring, it would have its compensations.

Thinking he walked towards the bathroom to shower and change.



Naina eased her way through the crowd of people at the CRY Annual Fund raiser. The event was about to start as she headed towards her seat. The event was going to start with a musical and the electricians were tuning the mikes to get everything ready before the actor's came on stage.

A sense of pleasant anticipation and happiness at the way the event was progressing thrilled her. As she sat down, her pleasant anticipation turned to shock as she saw the person who occupied the seat next to her.

Rajveer was the sitting at the chair besides her.

He stood up to greet her. "Naina" he greeted her as his lips lifted with sardonic amusement.

On the other side of the chair her friend Pooja leaning forward, said brightly "oh, you two know each other?" her eyes alight with curiosity.

"No" Naina said abruptly and tried to open up the pamphlet that was handed over to everyone before the program.

"Yes, we know each other" he contradicted, bestowing her with one of his briefest smiles. Pooja reacted and extended her hand introducing herself

"Pooja"

"Rajveer Sheekhawat" he said extending his hand to shake hers.

Naina refused to confirm the speculation in her friend's eyes. She buried herself in the pamphlet refusing to lift her head.

But throughout the program she was punishingly aware of the tall, dark frame besides her. He was intruding into her personal space. His hands rested at the back of her chair not touching her but stepping into her close personal space.

She was horribly aware of him.

She could feel him beside her. His jacket brushed against the bare hands of hers. She wanted to pull away from this horrible awareness that was creeping through her body but couldn't.

Somewhere in between her friend pooja had disappeared after seeing her boyfriend. Now, she sat horribly alone with just Rajveer for company.

Rajveer glanced down at her bent head.

His lips tightened as he watched her. She was waiting for him to say something but he did not say anything at all. To her utter disbelief his hands slowly stroked the exposed nape with his finger tips.

"I hear that you have turned into an ice-princess now, Is that so?" his hands moved on her exposed skin on her back. He felt the instant trembling and quivering to his touch.

"No, I think not. You haven't lost it…yet! Those men are fools!" he said as he dropped his hands from her back.

She couldn't move a muscle. Her anger was like a volcano trying to erupt any moment. How dare he touch her? She couldn't stop her hands from swinging up to give him a tight slap.

Something dangerous came into his eyes.

"Try it and you will have to face the consequences" he murmured with something akin to hate.

She got up abruptly and tried to leave but he caught her wrist and exerted sufficient pressure on her hands to make her sit.

"Sometimes" his voice told her quietly "or rarely does a girl like you forget her past mistakes or may be you have" he said looking cynically at her.

He let her go and abruptly walked way, heading for the exit. She stood watching him blindly as icy waves washed through her.

And something else she wouldn't think or wouldn't allow her to think.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
awesome too good waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow superb 😛 😛 😛 u are a great writer.
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good waiting for next asap.

thnx ............& i will surely update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyapriya

wow superb 😛 😛 😛 u are a great writer.

thnx

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey simply super n very diff plz do contn dear 👏 👏 👏 ,sorry 4 late reply, 😊

excelent realy 👏 👏 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!i'm speechless........superb!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Absolutely superb👏👏
I don't have words to comment on your writing style!!!!
Fantastic👏👏
God bless u
take care.

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