FF- 'Wedded By Blackmail'part 8(pg18).!! - Page 5

I thought i'm reading MILLS & BOON
just too gud

👏 👏 👏 Fantastic....I wanted to tell u after reading the first part itself..i feel as though i am reading a Mills and boon novel....it's a compliment... 👏 ..

I like raj's character a lot...it's different ..😳

My god rajveer is shrewd ...instead of raj if someone was there in place of him then i would have said his thoughts are sick and disgusting but with rajveer i don't feel so.. 😉 😉

My guess is rajveer won't ask naina to marry him instead he would settle for a passionate affair...i am right?? 😉 😳 😳 ..then somehow they end up getting married

This is getting interesting..please update as soon as possible

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is shrewd and Naina is the ice princess!!!Raj is the business king and Naina hates business!!! 😊 The case of opposites attract!!!! 😉

I loved that line Men are sharks!!!! 😊 Its so true!!! 😊 😊 😊

Naina wants to stay away from men!!! 😊 😊

Naina feels a pull towards him as he looks at her!!! 😊 😊 😊 They are attracted to each other from the first sight!!!! 😳

Navin is usless!!! 😡

Did Naina love Aalekh??Then why is she still sad about it?? 😕

Huda is her friend and Aalekh is the one who jilted her at the alter!!!This seems kind of strange!!!Maybe you should have put it the other way around!!!!

I mean Aalekh seems to be good at playing Naina's best friend and Huda someone we love to hate!!!! 😊

Raj is arrogant!!!And he wants to seduce Naina to his bed!!! 😊 Agar koi aur hota toh everyone would have thought that he is sick but with Raj they obviously don't mind!!! 😉

Raj does not want to marry Naina!!!He just wants a passionate affair with her!!! 😳

Naina is attracted to Raj but does not want to admit it!!!!Par phas rahi hai uske jaal mein!!! 😈 😈

When he looked at her she felt exposed even wearing a saree!!! 😳

Waise mujhe ek gaana yad aagaya Raj aur Naina ke ish meeting aur attraction se

Dekhti hai jistara se
Teri nazrein mujhe
Main khud ko chupayu kaha....

Also Naina is born rich!!!Still you had to add her stint at the orpahange to show her as a quitessential heroine!!!!Can she not find a better way to spend her time?? 😒 😒 😒

This looks deliberately put in to show her as goody goody types and not the high class types!!!!Jaise forcibly you are trying to show her as caring and sensitive!!!!

As for who will blackmail whom Raj will blackmail Naina into marriage zidd mein aakar!!! 😉 Or maybe Naina will after getting dumped by him but that is neither probable not as much fun!!!!😉 😉 😉 But better make it fast as eveyone is waiting eagerly for it!!!! 😉



Now for your story!!!Its very interesting!!!Better update it fast or the audience will kill you!!! 😊

But where did you get your inspiration for it?? 😕 😕 😕

It seems like a Mills and Boon story!!!Are you inspired by that by any chance??

Also this seems like an Angad-Kripa fic for some reason and not an RN fic!!!The story and the charcters make it more suitable for amybe an AK fic!!!!

Are you inspired by an AK fic for this??

And then the description and casting of the hero do not match at all!!!! 😕

Character wise also tumara hero seems more likely to be played by Iqbal Khan than Rajeev!!! 😕

And the long hair and the other description does not fit at all!!!!Seems to be Ansh Gujral or Ranbir Nanda (Akashdeep Sehgal) from your description!!!And I just hate Ansh Gujral even though I do like Ranbir Nanda!!! 😊

sorry for the late comment but as usual amazing update👏 👏 👏 hai! raj ka gaze ooooooh, so hot yaar, naina is a lucky girl😳 but bless her she is feeling really awkward, well evn i feel like that when people stare at me like that.

i like the huda in your's he's quite sensible, maybe because he doesn't love naina lol😆 😆 😆 i found it funny when he said i was wondering when your gonna say that because he was getting bored😆 😆 😆 god he cracked me up😆

god these business associates😆 😆 😆 are not letting them go. but what were they laughing about when naina said that naveen was sick😕

i can't believe that naina was getting married to alekh and he was already married omg 😕 i always saw them in a brother sister kind of relation ship never expected that

damn raj just wants naina in his bed eugh!! he is sick, but i know for a fact this attraction is soon gonna turn into love, and thus he probably black mail her into marriage or imagine naina black mailing him after getting seduced and dumped, hmmm i could just imagine her blackmailing though i prefer raj to do that because he will look hot doing so😳 😆

anyways once again hats off to you👏 👏 👏

luuuuuve yaa hun!!

take care😃

yasmin

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

fabulous is d word..........every emotion was minutely taken care off........
👏
tooo good 👏 👏

thnx..............

Originally posted by: prerna1

too good 😊 plz update soon

thnx. i will update soon

Originally posted by: ananyapriya

fantastic 😊 😊 😊

thnx

Originally posted by: yakkudimag

YEH DIL MAANGE MORE...give longer update..and blackmail kab karega Raj??aur jaldi se shaadi karvao yaar... intezar nahi hota ab...pleaseeee😭

intezaar karo......... intezaar ka fal mitha hota hai/............. anyways thnx

Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 👏 👏 Fantastic....I wanted to tell u after reading the first part itself..i feel as though i am reading a Mills and boon novel....it's a compliment... 👏 ..

I like raj's character a lot...it's different ..😳

My god rajveer is shrewd ...instead of raj if someone was there in place of him then i would have said his thoughts are sick and disgusting but with rajveer i don't feel so.. 😉 😉

My guess is rajveer won't ask naina to marry him instead he would settle for a passionate affair...i am right?? 😉 😳 😳 ..then somehow they end up getting married

This is getting interesting..please update as soon as possible

thnx 4 da comment.......... & as per as ur questios will be solved soon as the updates will come..........& sure i will cont soon thnx