~ FF- Pyaar Ki Jeet~ new update pg. 25 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

😆
what's so funny 😆

I dunno i just felt like laughing 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
Oh alright i will continue today 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
^Can't wait to read it.
Please make in LONG!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
oOoOoO Very interesting, Dimple with another guy!!!😛 Waiting to see how Akash handles this?😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Multani90

oOoOoO Very interesting, Dimple with another guy!!!😛 Waiting to see how Akash handles this?😉

Hehe interesting naa lolz 😉

@ Nisha: Sure i will make it long i wil update today at night.😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you 😛
Hey can you cont romantic scenes of RanKan 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^Ya sure.
But while I work on that you have to work on this FF.
Deal?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sure Sure but later i am really busy hehe 😆 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Next Part:

Recap: Akash saw dimple with another boy.

He getts really mad. He called dimple .

Akash: where are you?

Dimple: I am with my frind.

Akash: why you didn't pick up phone

Dimple: am so sorry jaan. Actually she is really sick.

Akash: May i know whats his name.

Dimple: Not his, her. She is girl and her name is khushi.

Akash: oh her i though it's a boy.

Dimple: Nahi jaanu . Okau I'll talk with you later.

Akash: so when are you coming home.

Dimple: very soon. Bye . Love you.

Akash cutted off.

Dimple came to meet akash on his home.

Dimple: Hey jaannnnnn i missed you so much.

Akash: U sure you really happy.

Dimple: yes why what happened.

Akash: I thought you forgot me in 1 day.

Dimple: Please don't ever say that. You know i love you so much. So , why is this.

Akash: Do not lie to me. Now tell me everything where were you yesterday. I know you dont have any frind name Khushi and please stop lying to me. I know you do not love me .

Dimpel: Okay stopped it.

Akash: what happened. I saw you with guy today. Now dont lie to me.

Dimple: That's mean you don't trust me.

Akash: first i do , but now i dont trust my love either. You know there was a time. I thought you were for me i guess i was wrong.

Dimple put her fingers on his lips.

Dimple: Please don't ever say that. You don't know how much i love you.

Akash: if you love me as this much. Why did you lied to me.

Dimple: So you want to know the truth right.

Akash: yes. I do not really know if i can trust you now or not. I was so blinded in your love. If you really loved me . So i want to know the truth.

Dimple: Okay . My frind his name is vishal he came from America yestersay and i went to meet him yestersay sorry i dint tells you about this because i want to give you suprise . I want you to meet him . But no you din'ttrut me

Akash: Is this truth.

Dimpel: yeah. Akah i can't beleive it . I cared for you, love you but please don't say that you dont love me. I am serious i told you the truth. He is mine best frind. He is just my frind . Please try to understand me jaanu. I really love u a lot.

Akash: okay i trusted now. But next time if you lied to me then i wil kill myself.

Dimple: No dont say that.

This is vishal. Dimple best frind. His character is negavtive. He loves dimple from childhood . But he never get time to tell her.

He is going to create a lot of problems between Akash and dimple. But their love is so strong. They trust each other a lot.

Akah and dimple hug each other very tightly.

Akash: I am so sorry .

Dimple: It's okk it happens.

Akash : Please forgive me jannu.

Dimple: No it's okay .

Akash took her hands and kissed on it.

Later, the have a pillow fight. Both stated looking into their eyes for a 5 mins.

Dimple blushing. Akash pulled her away and throw her on the bed. Took a picture .

Akash: i love you so muchhhhhhhh.

Dimple: Me too.

They both sit togther and talking romantic things. Akash put a ring on dimple hand and kissed on her forahead .

Dimple really feeling cold. Akash give dimple his jackot.

Dimple: I dont need it.

Akash: yes you do. You feel cold.

Dimple: Akash.

Akash U love me naa.

Dimple: nooooo

Akash: Really! You don't love me.

Dimple: Pleaseeeeee

Akash: There is no police.

Akash+ Dimple: laughing.

Dimple put her head on akah arm .

Akash: what happnened?

Dimple: i cant live without you. OOpsss my cell phone is ringing wait .

Akash: who is it?

Dimple: Dad. Hate him.

Yadav: Where are you.?

Dimple: with akash. Any problem.

Yadav : oh he is there. Beta come home.

Dimple: okay i wil. Yoy go to sleep. I will come.

Akash: what did your dad said.

Dimple: Nothing. Okay so what we talking about.

Akash: go to home.

Dimple: Noooooooo

AkashL please for my sake. You always in my heart sweety now go your dad is waiting for you.

Dimple: But .

Akash: For me. Bye now

Dimple: Okay . You know why i love you so much.

Akash: i know . Now go . Don't try to make me fool.

Dimple: okay bye love u and always remember that i love you forever and nobody can separte us not even my dad , my frind, vishal and God.

Akash: Love you too.

Will continue tommrow

Edited by Himanivineet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
gr8 update
i am not lykin vishal 😡
continue soon!

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