~ FF- Pyaar Ki Jeet~ new update pg. 25 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next Part:

Dimple in her room and thinking about all the moments of her and akash that she spends togther. Her dad came.

Yadav: Beta i m so sorry .

Dimple: Sorry for what dad . Please if you came here to tell me to forgot Akash then sorry you are wrong and can you please leave me alone i feel sleepy now. I'll talk with tommrow .

Yadav: I came here to tell you your chachu and chachi coming next week and their daugter too with them. I hope you will go to the airport to recieve them.

Dimple: Why aren't you going?

Yadav: Nope. I have to go out of station for some days i wil be back after 2 weeks . So, i am telling you next week on sunday they coming. I hope you get there on time.

Dimple: Why me ? Your's servent can go to naa. Then why me always he is your brother and sis-in -law and i do not have any realtionship with them.

yadav: dimple bus bhut hoga don't you have manner how to talk with your dad.

Dimple: You never gave me . So there is no point of talking with you.

Yadav: Listen why you hate me.

Dimple: why you hate my mom.

Yadav: why you keep asking me this stupid Question.

Dimple: (loud) Not a stupid question . Now please leave me alone. I have to go somewhere tommrow. Bhut raat hogi hai.

Next Morning,

Yadav:Ramu, Tell dimple to come and have breakfast. ( Ramu is servent).

Ramu: Sir, she is not her room

Yadav: where did she go?

Ramu: don't know sir

Yadav: why you here ? Go and start searching for i hope she is not went to meet that bloody boy.

Will cont very soon sorry guys again have to go somewhere now

Edited by Himanivineet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22

Very good!!!👏 I am anxious to find out where Dimple went!😃 Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Multani90

Very good!!!👏 I am anxious to find out where Dimple went!😃 Can't wait for the next part!

Hehe lolz di will continue tonight 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next Part:

Dimple dad's went to see Akash home to see if she is there. Akash house is very small and dimple dad didn't adjust there. He didn't come inside.

Akash: Sir please come in

Yadav: No it's okay i am fine here . Did my daughter came here

Akash: Oh dimple nope she isn't . Is everything okay.

Yadav: Don't know where she is gone? Did she tells you anything about it.

Akash: No sir .

yadav: yeh ladki bhi naa don't where she is?

Akash: do not worry i will go and look for her.

Yadav: excuse me . I do not need you help.

akash: Why not? I love her .

yadav: so what . Uska dad abhi bhi zinda hai .

Akash went that place . Where dimple and he meet . He was waiting for there . Because he thinks she will come there and he told her yesterday.

He still waiting for she didn't come . After 2 hours he started asking people if they saw this girl. He has a picture with him. He got tired of searching her .

He din't leave the place . He still waiting for her to come . He called her cell phone like 15 times she din't asnwered and pick up the phone. Akash call her dad .

Akash: Sir

Yadav: who is this?

Akash: sir aksah

yadav: why did you call me?

Akash: i want to ask you if you find out about dimple.

Yadav: No she still didn't came home. Don't know where the hell is she?

Akash: Don't worry everything will be okay.

Yadav: This all happening because of you.

Akash: what I did? Maina sirf pyaar hi kya hai .

Yadav: i know everything you want to marry my daughter because of money. Tell me how much money you need it and get out of my daugther life.

Akash: Sir don't take me wrong . Main aapki beti sa sacha pyaar karta hoon not for money . I can also make money more than you .

Yadav: Oh wow i love your syle dude. Now i m going looking for dimple if you want to come with me you can .

Akash: Thanks but i am fine. I can look by myself. Let's see who found her first .

Yadav: Okay here is deal . If you find out first i wil not have problem you can marry her if i did you have to leave her.

Akash: Okay ummm ok then i agree.

Yadav: Nice. So, start looking for her. You gonna lose dude.

Akash: We will see.

Edited by Himanivineet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
good update and continuation of story. love the challenge but u bad have to stop and leave suspense like dramas. plzz update soon! aur tum badhi filmy lines likti hain sania di 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 oye agar suspense hi nahi hua to maza nahi ayega 😆 ..
Main filmy hoon na like adiya bhaiya 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Guys i changed my tile into Pyaar Ki Jeet hope u all liked it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
I just caught up with your ff.It's really different with Akash and Dimple as the lead pair.It's fast-paced too.The dialogues are natural.The characterisations of the major characters are good.Over all,it's quite interesting.Loved the challenge part.Continue soon Sania!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
gr8 part
lets c who finds dimple!
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
ahahah halairious i love akash's style and attitude very interesting concept and yes the suspense ... is killing 😆 soo is kanya's raaz gonna be out soon or should i start bugging yu??

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