Bol Na Halke Halke!Imp note pg29 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey......i just got updated with ur FF!! its awesome!! please, please update soon!!!!! can't wait!!.........btw can u pm me wen u update??

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Posted: 16 years ago
i just read the whole thing I just loved it . PLz do couti.....................I just love RM..................................u r doing awesome job
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey...where are u?? please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
ofcourse we want an update.
its been months...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey darling where r u?? plzz update soon..............dying to read the next part...........😊



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Posted: 16 years ago
PLEASE DO CONTINUE SOON...
I AM NEW TO THIS FF AND IM REALLY LIKING IT...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy!!
i read ur post about stopping ur FF cuz u don't get comments!!
but u didn't continue!!!!!!!
plzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey do you guys really want me to update
i know im sounding a stupid asking you the same question so many times but i really feel this ff is damn boring but if you guys want me to cont, then i will cont but honestly i dont feel like continuing. and if you want then i will cont but after a week or two. till then lemme think of some rapchik twist like armaan dying orsomething like that
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Posted: 16 years ago
finally updating the next part in 30 mins
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 10
in Sanjeevani
everyone is waiting at the nurse station for Doctor keerti
Doctor keerti comes in and smiles at Armaan and Riddhima and frowns as soon as she sees Atul standing with an aloe vera plant in his hands
DR KEERTI: DR Atul aap yahan patients ko dekhne aate hai ya ped paudhe bechne😡
AT: maam ye aloe vera plant hai ise chehre par lagane se chehra aur accha ho jata hai
KE:to aap yahan khoobsoorat hone aate hai😈
AT: ye mere liye nahi hai maam ye to meri....i mean anjali ke liye hai
KE:gives a tough look to him bt then softens realising wat happened on Armaan and Riddhima's reception. keerti smiles and goes away after assigning duties to all of them
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Rahul and Muskaan in Children's ward. Rahul is ignoring Muskaan as per Armaan's guidance. Muskaan is all confused. She is in a mood to fight with Rahul but Rahul is not reacting to ny of her nonsense. Atlast when she couldnt bear anymore she finally said
"oye piddhe kab se dekh rahi hoon teri yeh bakwaas dekh mera bheja mat garam kar warana main ... main.."
she was about to finish when Rahul moved away from there leaving her confused.
MU:[to herself]:ab is ghonchu ko kya ho gaya
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Armaan and Riddhima both are there at their lovers point[fire escape]
Ar:[kisses her on her neck]
RI:[shying]Armaan kya kar rahe ho? koi dekh lega toh?
Ar:kissing her]toh? |I'm ur husband......
RI:a-r-m-a-a-n
Ar:ab mujhe seriously lagne laga hai ki mera naam kuch aur hona chahiye tha....
RI:Armaan
Ar:phir
RI:Ar....
AR...
RI:gives a light kiss on his lips and runs away
Ar:oye hoye...kaha bhaag rahi ho basket wapas to mere hi paas ana hai
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Atul and Anjali are in Cancer ward
At: anjali ye lo main tumhare liye laya tha
An:mujhe pata hai...thnks...[kisses him on his cheecks]
At:[was abt to faint when anjali holds him]
AN:shambhal ke Atul
AT:nods his head and then finally falls down
AN:[smiles and then wakes him up]
AT:hugs her and says " I LOVE YOU ANJALI MORE THAN MY LIFE"
AN:[hugs him bacck] I LOVE YOU TOO ATUL
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Its 5 pm and everyone is busy with their work when suddenly they get a call from doctor keerti to report at the nurse station
everyone cmes there
KEERTI: good evening everybody
ALL: good evening maam
KE:well iss waqt aap logo ko maine iss liye bulaya hai taki app logo ko ye bataya ja sake ki sanjeevani chennai se ek nai intern aa rahi hai....wo aaj shaam tak join kar lengi sanjeevani so guys pls be helpful to her..tht's all u may go now
keerti leaves...they all start discussing abt thge new intern
MU:oye yaar main to use apni frnd bana lungi
RA:[to himself]:jab janegi ki wo kaun hai to frnd to dur....use apne pas fatkne bhi nahi degi
MU:oye khajoore tune kuch kaha kya
RA:looking here and there]nahi to main kyun kauch kahunga
MU:[confused] mujhe aisa laga ki tune kuch kaha
RA:[to himself] baap re kitne tej kaan hai
MU:kya
RA:kuch nahi..tu kya subah se mere peeche padi hai..apna kaam nahi kar sakti kya
MU[gets upset but doesnt show][says in a very angry voice]:oye tere peeche pade meri jooti mere ko koi shauk nahi hai tujhse baat karne ka..aur ab tu aa mere paas baat karne ke liye...main na karungi...ab khud chal ke bhi aya na to bhi nahi[goes away stomping her feet]
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PRE:some tense moments at Shank's house......sunehari's arrival......Riddhima crying.........Armaan tries to speak to her bt.....................

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