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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey ur ff is loads of fun. I loved the talks with their conscience. Hilarious. 😆 Ur writing is just awesome. 👏 Continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i just started reading ur ff....all of them were so lovely part.....usually in FFs when i see index on forst page I try to remember page numbers...for example pg 1,3,7,9,12......
in ur FF also i did the same...i tried 2 remember numbers of pages....but i got so much involved in ur story that every time after reading a part i forgot the page numbers and again I had to go on 1st page 2 c the index :D

awesome parts...please continue soon and plz plz plz try 2 PM me if it is ok for you.

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Posted: 16 years ago
I AM SO SO SO SORRY EVERYONE!!!!
I Have had so many exams and recently my compuiter broke down and so i couldn't update my FFs as all of you know i have my FFs written out and hopefully by the end of this week i wi;ll have atleast two updates up and i will everyone including all the newcomers.
A NOTE TO ALL THE NEWCOMERS: Thank you for reading my FF i hope you likeed it i am sorry for the very late update very very sorry
thank you for still keeping in touch for those who did i will update soon thank youuuu
i love you all 😊😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi....
just read u ff...its lovely.....plzz continue ssonn & pm me ......
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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyyyy guys im backkkk with another funny yet heartbreaking update for you I know this will be really really bad for a lot of my fans but seriously what you are going to read had to be done otherwise my story wont be a story anymore hahahha anyways I hope you guys enjoy it and im very sorry for the late reply L

So we left off with ejaz and priya (armaan and rahul's parents) talking about armaan and ridz being bachpan ke dost lol and then rahul meets armaan at university and amaan and ridhima walk to their lecture together and now read on J

Riddhima waited for muskaan after university she was leaning against a car holding her books

R:kahaan reh gayi pagal kahin ki

Ridhima started cursing muskaan and armaan came

A:yaar tum uss bechari pe thoda tou rehem karro jab bhi dekho usse galiyaan deti rehti ho

R:abhe chup! Usse pata hai aaj humme dad ko khana dene jaana hai unki night shift hai aur hummed air hori hai pata nahi kahaan reh gayi apni dostoon se bate kar rahi hogi

A:chod na yaar

He leaned on his car aswell

R:by the way ye gadi kis ki hai mein tou aaise khadi vi hoon jaise meri hai

Armaan started to laugh…

A:yaar meri gadi hai kuch nahi hota

From a distance armaan saw muskaan walking smiling and laughing

A:who lou aa gayi tumhari choti behen

R:aane de aaisi dhulai karoongi na ke apna naam bhi nahi yaad rakhe gi

A:ridhima tum itni violent kyun ho?

Riddhima looked at him..armaan gulped

A:I mean who dekho rahul bhi saath aara hai

Ridhima smiled

Muskaan and rahul walked towards armaan and ridhima together they were laughing and joking about

M:no it was your fault

Ra:my fault?? How???

M:you bumped into her and her things fell

Ra:yeah because you came in front of me

M:and what's that supposed to mean??

Ra:figure it yourself beautifull

Muskaan blushed

M:jab bhi dekho flirt karne ko laga rehta hai rahul don't you have anything better to do?

Ra:not when you're around

M:rahuuuulll!!!

Ra:muskaannn

She smiled

Ra:hyeeeee ye muskaannn

She started to laugh

Thye both came towards armaan and ridhima

R:oye chudail kahaan reh gayi tumhe pata nahi humme hospital jaana hai

M:oh crap!! Mein tou bhool gayi

R:tujhe yaad kya rehta hai??

Muskaan looked at rahul and he winked at her. She widened her eyes

M:erm di chalein

R:aur kya chaloo

riddhima looked at armaan and then hugged him

R:oki dokki byeeeee

A:byeee riddhima

armaan hugged muskaan aswell

M:bye

Rahul took advantage and went forward to hug muskaan

Ra:bye muskaan

Muskaan whispered

M:moka mila tou toot pade meray upper

Ra:tumhare upper meri jaan bhi qurbaan meri jaan

she blushed

M:kamina chal hat

they let go off each other

riddhima and muskaan went and rahul watched muskaan walk away

Ra: when will i get herr man

A:sabar ka pahl meetha hota hai ab chal mere aage drive karna and drive carefully dont be breaking signals aur bike sahi tarhaan chalana

Ra:i know i know mein bacha nahi hoon

they both went seperate ways rahul to his bike and armaan to his car

Rahul drove in front and armaan behind rahul. they came near a signal and rahul drove forward and went passed the signal armaan saw the red light and stopped but as seeing the red light he saw another tragic seen that he never thought he would see. A caar came from the west side of the road and banged into rahul's bike he drove away leaving rahul crash into another bike and slip on the road. his bike came over him and he hit his head on the lampost. the traffic stopped. Armaan didn't move policce came and suddenly everything went slow for armaan he jumped out of his car and ran towards his brother. The police stopped armaan from coming forward

A:hes my brother move!!!!!!!

rahul was covered in blood when they reached the hospital thye quickly took him into the emergency ward

N(nurse): doctor Gupta a new emergency case has come up its serious police case inlcuding a bike crash

DG: ok hurry get the ER ready I'll be there come on hurry

Riddhima and muskaan reached the hospital

R:sit here I'll be back

M:no I wanna come pleaseee

R:ok come on then

Muskaan and riddhima walked into the hospital together they met a nurse there

R: hi julie how are you?

J:I;m fine how are you?

R:im fine thank you have you seen my dad?

J: yeah he's in the emrgency room there's a serious case and it could get serious the family is in the waiting room.

R:oh can we go there?

J:go ahead just don't make noise and tell this little crazy girl to stay quiet.

She looked at muskaan muskaan's mouth fell open :O

M:meeee why me

J:see this is why

She laughed and they both smiled and walked towards the emegency ward. It was dark when they walked into the waiting area. Riddhima noticed a guy sitting down and sniffing and stopping himself cry.

R:go get water

She told muskaan. She did as she was told and went.

Riddhima walked towards the guy she put a hand on his shoulder

R:don't worry erm whoever it is in there he or she will be ok

The boy looked up

Riddhima?!

R:armaan

The boy turned and she saw armaan. His eyes were red and he was crying badly.

He looked towards the emergency room door

A:rahul

Riddhima was shocked she hugged him and he cried on her shoulder. It hurt her deep inside to see tears in his eyes. She stroked his hair

R:shhh kuch nahi hota who theek ho jaye ga

Muskaan brought water and looked over riddhima's shoulder.she saw armaan. Her heart beat fast. Riddhima turned to take the water and muskaan walked towards the emergency room door. She looked in through the glass and she couldn't see him.

M:please don't be rahul please don't be rahul she repeated it to herself..

The nurse moved and revealed an unconscious rahul laying on the bed

A tear fell from her eye and slowly it built up and she felt like crying her eyes out.

"armaan!"

All three turned around..muskaan wiped her tears and riddhima got up. She saw a woman walk up to armaan who wiped his tears. Riddhima went to stand next to muskaan.

Armaan's mum came in crying his dad behind her.

P:rahul kahaan hai? Bola tha us ka khayaal rakhna. Apne aap ko uska bada bhai bulata hai. You are an irresponsiable brother how can you not take care of him

She slapped armaan.(riddhima felt hurt) He did nothing but she cried and slowly he hugged his mum.

Suddenly the door opened and Dr Shashank gupta came out. He looked around.

S:riddhima?muskaan?

E:shashank?

S:ejaz malik?

E:rahul kaisa hai?

S:rahul…tumhara??

Ejaz looked at him and gestured not now

S:he is fine just need to wait till he wakes up. Don't worry

E:thank youu so much

S:if you follow me thoda paper work fill karna agar tumhe already pata nahi hai this is a police case.

P:what do we have to do?

S:just follow me

Priya, ejaz armaan and riddhima followed Dr shashank.

Rahul lay on his bed in a room. Muskaan entered. She sat down next to him and looked at him. She started to cry. She held his hand

M:theek se nahi chala sakte. Khud ka khayaal nahi rakh sakte.

She cried on and on

M:ab mein university mein, mein kya karoon gi?

Ra:mujhe miss karogi? Finally keh diya na

Muskaan looked up and she wiped her tears still holding his hand.

M: mein tumhe miss kyun karoon gi

Ra:hellooo tum resist nahi kar sakti mujhe keh do na

M:rahul tumhe idhar bhi flirting sooj rahi hai.

He held her hand tighter.

Ra:atleast mujhe koi tou yaad karre ga

Muskaan just looked at him.

Finally everyone walked in and they let go of each others hands.

Rahul kept looking at her while his mother hugged him and cried.....

So what do you think guys did you like it once again sorry for the very very late reply :( hope you dont mind
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!! 👏 👏 👏
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please cont. soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow...it was lovely.....Thanks 4 pm.....continue soon..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww thank youuu i will try and update as soon as i can xx

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