Pehla pehla pyaar AR & RM pg22 uptd - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey falak...amazing update yaar...luvd it...waiting 4 more...do continue soon...nd thanx 4 ur pm
Afreen😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice ff!!
and great part!!
please do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb thank God Rahul is safe😊 sorry for late reply😳 some problem so i can't able to plz continue it soon😛 & u have not PMed me😭😭😭

"To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you're my destiny,
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it......
One-day love is everything,
You ever dreamed would be,
Then suddenly it leaves you,
Saying 'I' instead of 'We'..
I want to share my whole life with you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
Loving you is whole life what I want to do."






Nidha
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey falak, i had always liked ur FF..😳 so glad that u took it up again.. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb thank God Rahul is safe😊 sorry for late reply😳 some problem so i can't able to plz continue it soon😛 & u have not PMed me😭😭😭

"To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you're my destiny,
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it......
One-day love is everything,
You ever dreamed would be,
Then suddenly it leaves you,
Saying 'I' instead of 'We'..
I want to share my whole life with you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
Loving you is whole life what I want to do."






Nidha

I am so sorry Nidha my jaan 😔 im sure i did PM you I will surely PM you now with the other FF oki love you lots and thanx for commenting on it 😉🤗 take care xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rapi_c

Hey falak, i had always liked ur FF..😳 so glad that u took it up again.. 😃

Hey Thank You for replying. would you like a PM for next time. It won't be a problem 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey amazing ff..plz PM me whenever u update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey falak wohooo welcome back dear missd u a lot finally apke darshan ho gaye its been long n long time na wow finally updated its tooooo gud yaar but emotional toooooo rahul accident nd ridz dialogs gosh she ws soooooo violent hehehehe nd all wre crying aww ridz cnt see him lv dit yaar nd now awhn ur goi cont wth ur anothr 1 hmmmmmmm nd pm me tooooooooooooo ..........u didn't pm me...........
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi i read this and pressed like too. This is a really good ff.
I love RM and the way you've written about them in this story is awesome. Could you please PM me when you update?
Thanks,
Saby
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank You for all your lovely comments guys i ahve finally updated xx
Part 8

P: Mujhe kitna daraa diya tha tune. Apna khayaal nahi rakh sakta?

Ra: mom im fine na

P:chup kar mere bachay ka kya haal ho gaya hai

Ra:mom stop n aim fine

Rahul felt embarrassed in front of muskaan who was smiling at him

P:bas tu apna dehaan rakh mujhe abhi kaam pe jaana hai vapis. Lekin dil hi nahi karra raha tujhe chod ke jaane ke liye

Ra:mom im coming home na ghar ppe dekh lena

A;not happening little bro

Ra: what??!!!

A: yup tum idhaar raho ge a month two months jab tak fractures heal na ho jayein

Ra: no mom not fair please tell them na mujhe ghar ajaana hai

P:mein kuch nahi kar sakti you got yourself into this mess ab chup kar. Now lay down aur apna khayaal rakhna ok I love you beta

She kissed his forhead.

Ra: I love you too.

A:mom mein aap ko bahar tak vhod deta hoon

P:chal

Priya and armaan walked out. Riddhima walked to muskaan

R:mein dad ke paas ho kar aati hoon as soon as im back we're leaving ok. Take care rahul

Ra: thanks

Riddhima walked out and closed the door.

R:hum tum aik kamre mein band ho'..

Muskaan turned to rahul

R:what?

M:mein kuch kaha

R:nahi lekin agar kuch kaho gi tou acha lage ga

Itna flirt karna chod de pite ga

Abhe chup kar

Kyun muskaan ki muskaan dekh ni hai

Now we're on the right track

She came and sat next to him on the little chair

M:tumhare haat pair aur tod doon gi'.kisne kaha tha taiz bike chalao apona khayaal naih rakh sakte

Wah muskaan itna emotion kahaan se la rahi ho

Woh mein'woh

Haan kehti hai ke nahi mein usse pyaar nahi karti ab kis ka khayaal rakh rahi hai

Abhe chup kar woh kuch bole raha hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa rahi

Ra: wah wah tumhe meri bohot fikar ho rahi hai

Ab bole muskaaan

Abhe chup kar

M:tum mere dost ho na is liye'

She looked at him the bandage on his forhead his arm on his side. She couldn't stop herself she put her head down and cried

R:hey why are you crying

M:do you not know how to take casre of yourself

R:yeh its my fault na koi kanoon tod ke bhaag raha tha

M:rahul its not funny. Asb idhar tum kitni dair raho ge mujhe nahi pata

R: and we are back on the topic'mujhe mss karogi na

M:rahul! Tumhe hospital ke bistar pe bhi na flirting sooj rahi hai

R:tum paas ho na is liye

She looked at him, she looked in his grey dreamy eyes

I think I do love him

Congratrulations you finally agreed with me

With you? Who are you hain?

I'm you and besides I'd love a piece of him one day

What?! Shut up if I do get him I'm getting him not yu

I'm you and you're me so we're fair and square

Rahul looked at her smiling

Yaar she's so beautiful

Well get in there lover boy

Not too quick though

Why not she loves you and you love her

How do I know that?

I forgot you're so slowwwww

Shut up

Riddhima came in.

R:chalein muskaan

M:haan di chaltein hain

R:anyways rahul take care

Ra:thanks you too

R:bye

Ra:bye riddhima

M:bye rahul

Ra:bye'''er'.muskaaan

She smiled and they walked out'.riddhima walked out to see armaan.

R:muski tu ja gadi mein beth mein aati hoon

M:ok di

Muskaan went

Riddhima walked up to armaan.

R:hey

A:hi..thanks riddhima for being there for me

R:whar are friends for eh she smiled

Her smile it's so mesmerizing

She's just beautiful

Eh stop looking at her

I swear you don't understand the whole I am in you thing do you

A: are you going?

R:yeah gotta get home mum's gonna go crazy if I don't get home now. Apna lecture shuru kardein gi'riddhima tumhe itni dair kyun lag gayi'you know the whole drama

He started to laugh

Uff the smile hye the laugh

Shut up let me just look at him

Well I wanna look at him too na

You are stupid

See you finally figured it me and you are one na

No me and him are one oyu are a third person

But im you!!! Does this happen to everyone

Riddhima moved closer to armaan and put her hand on his cheek it was bit pink due to slap from his mum.

A:what happened?

R:it didn't hurt did it?

A:oh'no its ok thanks

He held her hand. Sparks flew in ridhima but she kept a straight face. Armaan helkd the soft hand.

R:well I best be going then

A:ok take care

Ridhima hugged him. He hugged her back and they stood there for a few mins.

she is so soft

He holds so me firmly

The feeling is just great

I think I need him

I do need her

So what do you think guys!! ?? xx
Edited by falak298 - 16 years ago

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