FF:Back to Newton’s Laws-3...part 46.... - Page 74

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry NJ, since i havnt been able to comment on part 45, will do tonight just cant get time to sit on my own, someone or another interrupts lol
take care for now, and i will have it done
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago

so sweet⭐️ NJ really a nice😳😊 one to gud😉 please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the p😉

"Smile is the Electricity &
Life is a Battery.
Whenever U Smile the Battery gets charged &
a Beautiful Day is activated
So Keep Smiling…"
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey NJ, my my part 45, was just out of this world, totally blew me away, I just loved it from the flashback to the reality!! It was awesome!!

The way in which you described that whole flashback was truly commendable - I could actually picture that whole scene and the way it went, with expressions and everything, dont know how you do it girl but I loved it!!

"he ran his fingers through his ruffled hair, then stood up n turned around for her inspection ...as she ran her eyes top to bottom, she looked at him with teasing 'need-i-say-much' look.....the tux of course had come off, also the shoes, the tie knot loosened ....n the red shirt with top few buttons undone wasnt quite perfectly tucked in....

but that was just him....whatever he may be dressed up as, or even messed up as, she couldnt deny the obvious....he could carry off any look, yet maintain the magnetic appeal"

Magnetic alright!! He can pull off any outfit!! Loved Ridz analysis of his dress sense, made me smile

That whole conversation that transcribed between the two of them was thought out superbly, it was just nice to see that the mess was being sorted. Ridz made my day when she made a promise never to hide anything from Armaan in the future. That was just so cute!! Im so glad they finally laid all the cards on the table addressing each others insecurites and issues that had arised it was just described perfectly!!

" i promise il tell u everything....except...."
he looked at her frowning with raised eyebrows...."except about my secret dates with newton on full moon nights...." she said faking a look of being lovestruck....seeing his expression change rapidly from confusion n anticipation to a mean nasty look with narrowed eyes she burst out laughing"

OMG NJ, how did you even pull this one off? It was a true classic!! Loved it!!

The video camera scene was just so sweet, Armaan being his cheeky self, capturing their special moments together!! And then Ridz being her teasing self joining in the fun!! Lol, that scene highlighted so much fun and mischief.

Rahul and Armaan these guys just totally rock, their friendship is just brilliant, the way Rahul has stuck by Armaan in his dilemma, and no matter what he has been there for him, truly nice to see such friendship, made my day when Rahul questioned Armaan about his hastiness on the proposal, wonder how long Armaan will be able to hold off the real answer!! Lol

Im so glad to see that the evil bro and sis are out of the way, loved Muskaan's suggestion but was obviously not practical, the guys didn't want the girls to be a part of the nitty gritty details of the wrong doings, finally some justice for Ridz and Armaan!!

The scene of the part was the mention of London, to invite the mother, that was very sweet, looking forward to some magical scenes NJ, since this was already out of this world!!! Lol

So NJ, im done with finally commenting, and after a major delay too, anyhow I done it, just waiting for the next part, hopefully my comment will not be as delayed!!

Thanks for the PM, and an illustrating part NJ

Sania

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey NJ...
i m being a lil toooooooo busy these days. so a BIG sorry once again for being late...
Well when i was reading Part 44, i was wondering how closely all these characters r related... its not about blood, but its is through d invisible string of love, affection, friendship, believe & care... 😊
Just like d conversation between Armaan & Muskaan, D one between Rahul(Reg) & Uncle Arthur was very well penned... i cud feel each word spoken... the mutual understanding between the characters is so clear & pure... 👏 👏
Personally i think Ridz lil "ACT" of pretending dat she is sleeping when Armaan came in her room was a right decision on her part... Understanding Armaan character, he needed to pour his heart in front of Ridz openly widot any hesitation, & Ridz gave him dat chance... She knew his undue guilt will never allow him to speak openly when she is wide awake... She knew dat he is NOT actually guilty of anything, but as Uncle Arthur said. his nature of blaming himself for everything might have created a blockage... so her silent ACT was more than praiseworthy...👏👏👏 👍🏼
Well i love d way Ridz reacted when she got d gud news about Anji... Though i m a quite person in general, but still i cud b a loud person for few things, specially when it comes on expressing my happiness... i mean even i jump, shout, keep repeating things & blabbering a lot when i m very happy... 😆 I remember once i even jumped off my chair shouting a loud in my college canteen in front of almost a hundred students... it was d time when India won one of d Cricket Match against Australia... & i even remember d expression on friends' faces... dey stared at me like stupids & den realizing d scene pulled me back on d chair, causing me almost fell on d ground...😆 😆 😆 Ridz reaction reminded me of dat event... 😃
Love
- Sheetal
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey when r u posting your next part!!!!!!!! dying to read more!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
still at it....gosh cant believe how much i delaye this one.....😕
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Hey NJ, me back again...😃
Well i loved, in fact admired d convo between AR... it was d one i was looking ahead for, for such a long time... it made my day actually...😊 Not only o loved their soulful convo, but i enjoyed d cute moments after dat WID HANDYCAM...😆 Though it is "THEIR" lil secret, i still want others to find it out, specially Reg, Muski, Anjie, Atul, Minnie & Aryan... & to add another name to d list also UNCLE CHRIS.... Wow wat a scene it wud b...😍 😍 😍 🤣 🤣 🤣 a loads of teasing sessions cud b there for it... 😈 😈 Hey NJ if u cud, cud u please jot down one part wid such fun... Plzzzzzzzzzz... 😃
But d BESTEST part was Ridzy's wish & her reason to go to LONDON... she is really adorable... i m sure Armaan got one of MOST PRECIOUS gift from her wid this type of Demand...😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 Love u for dis NJ... Thanx a lot...
& Hey wat a fun filled way ofending d Episode...😃 i loved Armaan-Reg's chemistry... Once upon a time, i asked u to make Reg probe Armaan further about the night which resulted in "Armaan's hasty proposal"... Now i want dis scene to continue futher... or atleast i want Reg to keep nagging Armaan to reveal "D SECRET"... i wud b so much fun...🤣 😈
Love
- Sheetal
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey nj
dont keep us waiting any more. just update whatever you have written. im sure it will be amazing as usual. cant wait to read further. pls pls pls update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
oki ppl me gona b done tonite..after a long long delay il have the part up...hope u all not gona be r5eady to whack me!!!ps:id say even if u want to gime benefit of doubt n read the part first...hehe just my appeal ur honor!!!

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