Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey sound very exciting! cant wait to read more!

Thank u!

Originally posted by: Sujalthegreat

Hey brilliant start can't wait to read it <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

Lol thanxx sajidd!!

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

like the character sketch cont soon plz <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

thankss!

Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey...sound great...cnt wait 4 1st prt... <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

Thank u!

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

lmao!! this ff is gonna be sikk!! i cant wait till it begins...i love the overprotectiveness on both sides of the family...lmao armaan why him and hijacking hehe...i wonder how he got out of that one...awesome character intro devershi and ekta..and awesome ff please do post the first part...imma go crazy with this ff i can tell u that for sure <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

Thank u! lol...yes the brothers are very over protective...ur gonna enjoy armaan and kripas relationship in this.... im glad u have expectations from us we will try our best to fulfill them!

Originally posted by: prabhi

haha woah! this is gonna b goodd.! haha armaan hijacked the plane? wow he must really not want her to lve! awwh soo kripa and angad haven't met?
it's soo cute how the guys r protective over their sisters!! <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->can't wait for the first part!! plz continue soon.. <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

Lol yes armaan didnt want her to go he loves her too much...Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey brillant...loved the character of Armaan...lolz nearly hijacked the plane...haha continue soon pls..

lol Thank u!

Originally posted by: rima791

armaan hijacked plane just to stop kripa <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->wow i am surely gonna love their relation <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->can't wait to know more about it <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->i had a question how come naina and dilip don't know about kripa <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->i mean it just shows how they love kavya and armaan then why not kripa <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->do post concept with part one SOOON!!! <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

Posting the concept soon.....glad u like it..thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 intro
the guys are overprotective cho sweet <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->
cont soon

lol yes they are...wait and watch how protective they are..lol..thanks!

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

hey,
fab intro yaar, <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->
can't wait for the first part

thank u soo much!!

Originally posted by: GuJu_Qt

wonderful character analysis... and aarman hijacking the plane to stop kripa... too funny <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

please continue soon.

willl do...glad u liked it...thanks!

Originally posted by: kvn1983

intro is wonderful please continue it soon <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

thanks!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

haha armaan hijacking the plane is hilarious!!
this fan fic is gonna be fab!!!!
i know this will be an awesome one! hershi and ekta comin together and writing a fan fic! can't wait for first part!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol yah we decided to write one together...thanx masi...lol!!

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

this one is gone be rocking!!! armaan hijacked the plane...heheheh!! my 2 awesome sisters.....ur gone rock it...all the best hershy dii...its ur first one!! looking forward to first part!!!!!!!!

love u both.

aww thanxx sammy...hope u like it!!

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

awesome charcter sketch; I'm really looking forard to this since ekta is an excellent writer and the new writers coming are just as wonderful. I love both of you for this fan fic; waiting for it start <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

thanks faiza!! yes ekta is a wonderful writer..!!

Originally posted by: nimrah

Ooooh! Amazing Introduction.. <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->
Amazing sis-bro relationships!! Armaan is soo funny! Gosh.. Cant wait to read more. Please continue soon! <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

lol yah they share a good relationship...armaan is hilarious...thank u!

Originally posted by: mar-

really good love the intro
pls continue soooon

thanks!

Originally posted by: gidha

Wow great intro
Really luking forward to this one
Plz do cont. sooon <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

aww thank u!

Originally posted by: Love''sAngel

fab chracter sketch...
will b waitng for the intro...
continue soon

thanks!!

Originally posted by: juicylove6

Awesome and amazing intro...
Can't wait till it begins..absolutely loved the intro...dis ff is gonna be bangin lolxz...lmaooi loved the bro and sis relationships btween krips and Armaan and Kaavya.....kripa sound awesome.....con't soon waiting impatiently lolxz...<3

aww thank u soo muchh glad u liked the characters!

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

hiii
gr8 intro
armaan hijacked the plane <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->
luved the character sketch!
continue soon!!

yup he did..lol...thanxx!

Originally posted by: *princess*15

soundz kool <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->intro was amazing <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->love the character sketch <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->looking forward to the first part <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->continue soon <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

thanxxx!!

Originally posted by: deeya123

fantastic intro
waitin to read soon

thanx!

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey...

gr8 intro.. seems reli interesting... can't wait 2 read part 1... so the girls haven't met the guyz yet.. well except thr brothrz...lol <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->./... can't wait till they meet... i wonder how they'll react with each othr, whether they'll have a friendly start or an argumentative one... but i think i can guess <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]--> <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->...lolzz... love how the brothrz r reli protective over thr sisters nd love them loadz... love kripa's way of describing kavya nd armi.. i guess she's more close 2 kavya, but when she needs help or to get out of something, she'd go 2 armi as they share tht kind of relationship...reli sweet <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->

continue soon... nd pm me if u can <!--[if !vml]--><!--[endif]-->


Love,
Irsa

hey thanks for liking it...yes the grlz and guys havent met yett...will definetly pm u and let u kno...thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13

that was an awesome intro cant wait to read the first part.

thanxxx!!

Originally posted by: ishu124

haha. loved it, can't wait to read more about the hijaking the plane for kripa.

haha.
contiue soon.
wonderful start.

lol yess...thankss!!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing intro
sounds really intresting
i liked the relationship between all the charachters
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thanks alot!!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

plzzz contuied soon your partss plzzz i love your story Bepanah

thankss!!

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a great intro please continue it soon please

"Dil mein basa ek khayal ho tum,
Pyaar ka haseen ehsaas ho tum,
Jab muskurate ho toh lagta hai,
Kubsurati se lajawab ho tum."

aww love the poem thank u soo much!!!!

please update it please please😳

"Apni dosti koi pepsi nahi jo dil mange more,
Koi wills nahi jo made 4 each other,
Apni dosti to woh lic hai,
Jo jiwan k sath bhi aur jiwan ke bad bhi."

Kripa Sharma moved to London to finish high school and join the most reputed college Oxford University to become a Cardiologist. When she left Mumbai she was very excited but a fear still inside her of leaving her loved ones and going to an unknown place without any knowledge of the city. She didn't know that this unknown place would give her not one but two people who she could call her best friend. Riddhima and Anjali Khanna like Kripa came to finish their studies in London as well. While Riddhima the elder one wanted to pursue her career in Cardiologist Tech., Anjali wanted to become a Lawyer. Due to having a profession in the same field Riddhima and Kripa first met in their Biology class. And the main thing that got them both talking was their fascination of their professor who was only 28 and very good looking. Well what was next Kripa needed a place to live and Riddhima needed someone to save her from Anjali's craziness so she offered Kripa to come and live with her and her sister and Kripa of course took the opportunity at first.

Anjali and Kripa hit it off as soon as they met. While Anjali was the more verbal one Kripa was the more physical one. For Kripa it was as if she found a girl version of her brother except for the fact that Anjali was more of the talk back to me and I will show you who is the boss type of a person. And Riddhima being herself was stuck in between the two. In a short span of time all three girls became really good friends, well more like sisters. It was as if they were all destined to be friends.

After their lovely sister Kripa moved to London, Kavya and Armaan joined a university which specialized in business programs. Kavya and Armaan met Angad Khanna in their marketing class. All three seated in a row, bored to death by the boring teacher. Angad had commented on the conversation Kavya and Armaan had about the professor, and then soon, all three were equal partners in crime of a prank

played on the teacher. Since that day on, the trio has been unbreakable. Kavya and Armaan had another brother: Angad. They weren't the dynamic duo any longer; they had promoted to triple trouble. The three could make the most sane man insane in a matter of few hours. No matter how mischievous they were, they were well focused on their education and knew their responsibilities inside out. They wouldn't exactly fall into the party-animals category but they did like to have a blast every now and then.

The Khanna family and the Sharma family didn't know each other but because of their sons' strong friendship, both families met frequently and soon had become like one single family. They had become so close, Dilip Khanna and Surayabn Sharma had even decided to merge their businesses which their 'three' sons would lead in the future.

Yes the boys loved their sisters, but when guys get together, do they ever talk about their sisters? not really. most of the time they end up talking about the hot girls in their classes. Yea of course they had mentioned 'my sister' to each other but never really found it necessary to say the names.

what do you do when someone asks you "you have any sisters or brothers?"....a normal person would go "yes I have so and so sisters and so and so brothers."...

The families don't know that the Khanna Daughters and Kripa are in London living together like sisters.

Nor do the girls know about the strong friendship bonding between their families.

Love holds no boundaries

Friendship knows no reasons

Relationships can't be broken

Will any of these be proven wrong when they meet?

cant wait to read further!

plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

looking forward to it................continue soon! 😊 👏

next time update please pm me!! thanks a lot ! 😃 😛 😉

Superb concept. OMG cant wait to read..continue soon please! 😃

okay that clears up every misunderstanding, concept looks gr8, can't wait to know more 😳 do cont soon when you can 😃

great concept....lookin 4ward 2 readin more....plz cont soon 😃

triple trouble?? lol!!
i like the concept very much!!
strange that the daugters/sisters are left clueless about the whole thing...u would think that the family would talk to them or even their brothers! weird! but this will be quite amusing when the guys meet the gals!!
can't wait to read the first part!

fantastic job u guys!! 😃 👏