Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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YEAA!! 😛 UR GONNA UPDATE!!
haha i've been waiting for the first part for a LOONGG TIME! i hope it's a long part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1

"I'm home!!!!", Riddhima beamed as she stepped into the house only to see her worst nightmare before her. The smile on her face slowly faded and soon an angry frown took over her face. She saw her sister, Anjali, and her sister-like friend, Kripa, fighting with each other. The Living room was a mess. Even a trash dump would have looked neater than the room at that point.

Riddhima was getting angry. The house was a mess, the two girls were screaming at each other at the top of their lungs and the phone was ringing. Riddhima guessed what could have happened there.

Riddhima(yelling at the top of her lungs): STOP IT!!!!

Both Kripa and Anjali looked at Riddhima, and then at each other. They started yelling again completely ignoring Riddhima. Riddhima put her bag on the side table and rushed to the phone. She took the phone and walked out of the house slamming the door behind her. Kripa and Anjali, once again looked at the door, then at each other, and continued arguing.

Riddhima(barking into the phone): HELLO?

Anne: whoa….what happened to your ridzie? The usual?

Riddhima: the usual…Kripa and Anjali…

Anne: hmm….no surprise…anyways……are you three going to reach at my party??

Riddhima: oh yea….wouldn't miss it!

Anne: alright then….i'll see you at 10:00 at the Copacabana Club?

Riddhima: sure thing! Alright anne….im gonna hang up….gotta see how those two are doing in there…..gotta make sure they don't injure each other…

Anne: they wont…they love each other too much for that…

Riddhima: that's true…but if I want to stay in the house for one minute without getting a headache…they have to shut up…

Anne: alright…good luck with that…see ya!

Riddhima: bye!

Riddhima hung up and took a deep breath before opening the door again. She groaned loudly when she saw them still arguing!

Riddhima: ALRIGHT! I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU TWO!

Riddhima angrily walked to Kripa and whispered something into her ear. Kripa gasped loudly and looked at Riddhima with a frown.

Kripa: Don't say that about her! She's your sister! God! How can you say she looks like a frog when she's angry??

Anjali: I DO NOT LOOK LIKE A FROG.

Riddhima just looked at them and grinned. Kripa and Anjali looked at her as if she was drunk.

Riddhima: finally…got you to shut up! Seriously….what were you two fighting about??

Both girls pointed fingers at each other.

Kripa & Anjali: Its her fault!

Riddhima crossed her arms and turned to Anjali. Kripa smiled ear to ear while Anjali stood there thinking up of a good argument.

Riddhima: ahem anju…would you like to tell me what happened?

Kripa: leave her alone Riddhima….she'll clean up the mess……..right anju?

Anjali: oh yea definitely……………NOT…….riddzie…..if you have a problem with the mess….you clean it up…..im a lawyer….not a janitor.

Riddhima: I'm a surgeon!!! Do I look like a janitor to you???

Kripa was a silent observer until both Riddhima and Anjali turned to her and grinned.

Kripa: what???

Riddhima and Anjali flashed their lashes.

Kripa: oh no! I'm not cleaning it up! And Anjali you owe me remember? I cleaned up the mess you made last Friday?

Anjali: what proof do you have?

Kripa: well your honor! I have an Eye witness.

Anjali: who?

Riddhima put her hand up. All three looked at each other and burst out into laughter. All three gathered themselves into a group hug.

Anjali: ridzie…you go and rest….you've had a hard day today….kripa and I will clean up the mess…

Riddhima: no its okay…I'll help…

Kripa: shut up and go to your room!

Riddhima followed Kripa's order and walked up to her room. She had a busy schedule that day, since she had to catch up on a lab she had missed. Kripa and Anjali got down to cleaning right away.

Kripa: you know….this is all your fault….i have to clean up this mess because of you…

Anjali: me? It was your fault?

Kripa: oh yea? Was I the one sitting right beside the phone but not picking it up?

Anjali: but you were on the couch too…..

Kripa: but you were closer..

Anjali(yelling): well you shouldn't have started throwing things

Kripa(yelling back): well you shouldn't have started saying things!

Riddhima(from her room): that's it! If any one of you yells one more time! We're not going to anne's Party!

Anjali: oh yea…that's today….i completely forgot about that…I want to go…so I'll shut up

Kripa: I forgot about it too….its your fault.

Anjali: what? Me??

Kripa: yea….because of you I forgot!

Anjali(yelling): HOW THE HECK IS IT MY FAULT?

Riddhima(stomping down the stairs): That's it Anjali! You're not coming with us!

Anjali: WHAT??

Kripa: Riddhima…if Anjali doesn't go, then I'm not coming either. You can go alone. And give it a thought…..if anju doesn't go….i wont go and if we don't go…..there is no way you're going to go all alone!

At Anne's Party:

Anne: wow….this party was supposed to be fun!...its so boring….the dance floor is empty…everyone seems bored!

Sabrina: well that's because the terrific trio isn't here yet……are they even coming?

Anne: ridzie said they were…I don't know where they are….

"Hey Guys!", the three said in Unisom as they entered the club.

Anne: finally…..we thought we were going to die of boredom…..the party is a flop sweetie!!

Kripa: not anymore!

Anjali: yo DJ!! Turn the music up!

All three walked up to their friends and pulled a few onto the dance floor and started moving to the beats. Soon, the dance floor was crowding and the party was going on in full swing. Riddhima, Kripa, and Anjali walked up to the bar and gulped down one shot each. One shot was all they needed to hit the roof and they did. The music was loud but it wasn't enough for the group.

Anjali:
Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
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Kripa:

Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Riddhima:
it goes 1 by 1 even 2 by 2
everybody on the floor let me show you how we do
lets go dip it low then you bring it up slow
wind it up 1 time wind it back once more

Everyone:
Run, Run, Run, Run
Everybody move run
Lemme see you move and
Rock it til the grooves done

Kripa:
Shake it til the moon becomes the sun (Sun)

Anjali:
Everybody in the club give me a run (Run)

Riddhima:
If you ready to move say it (Yeah Yeah)

Kripa:
One time for your mind say it (Yeah Yeah)

Anjali:
Well i'm ready for ya

Riddima:
Come let me show ya

All Three:
You want to groove im'a show you how to move
Come come

Anjali:
Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Kripa:
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Riddhima:
Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

All three:
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
Hey Mr.
Please Mr. DJ
Tell me if you hear me
Turn the music up

Anjali:
It goes 1 by 1 even 2 by 2

Riddhima:
Everybody in the club gon be rockin when i'm through

Kripa:
Let the bass from the speakers run through ya sneakers

Everyone:

Move both ya feet and run to the beat
Run, Run, Run, Run
Everybody move run
Lemme see you move and
Rock it till the grooves done

Kripa:
Shake it til the moon becomes the sun (Sun)

Anjali:
Everybody in the club give me a run (Run)

Riddhima:
If you ready to move say it (Yeah Yeah)

Everyone:
One time for your mind say it (Yeah Yeah)
Well i'm ready for ya
Come let me show ya
You want to groove im'a show you how to move
Come come
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Riddhima:
Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Anjali:
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Kripa:

Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

All three:
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
Hey Mr.
Please Mr. DJ
Tell me if you hear me
Turn the music up

Hey Mr.
Please Mr. DJ
Tell me if you hear me
Turn the music up

Kripa:
Okay everybody get down if you feel me
Put your hands up to the ceiling

Riddhima:

Okay everybody get down if you feel me
Put your hands up to the ceiling

Anjali:

Okay everybody get down if you feel me
Put your hands up to the ceiling

Everyone:

Okay everybody get down if you feel me
Put your hands up to the ceiling
Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

The Dj blasted the music as loud as possible. Everyone partied until the morning. When the girls reached home, it was already 6 in the morning. Since it was a weekend and they didn't have to go to university, they all retired to their bedrooms and fell asleep in no time.

Edited by Hershy_Katie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
yea!!!!! 😛 u updated! 👏 👏
haha they fight but they still love eachother alot 😃
they bring the party eh?
it was a great part.. but could u PLEASEE make it longer.. if you can. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
researved!

*EDIT*

awesome part both of u..could u please do the honors of making it a bittt loooonger?? i was like lost in it and it ended..lol!! gr8 start!! loved it!!

luv ya
sammy!
Edited by aRohAAnGeL - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
wow...excellent part...interstin way of introducing all three girlz..one wont go without the otha two..lolz...love their bond... hope we see the guyz next...will b waiting for ur nxt part.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
awesome part; I loved it; Looking forward to the fanfic; its awesome, lol anjali and kripa were blowing eachothers heads off 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
very enjoyable part, i love anjali-kripa's character 😳 😉 can't wait for the boys introduction 😳 😃 do cont soon guys 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hey 😊
wow yaar both u girls r doing an amazing job lovely concept n ff its rocking 😉
its superb update soon
n plz pm me
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

really a nice one its very interesting waiting for next part please continue it soon

"Love is like standing in the wet cement,
The longer you stay, the harder it is to leave
And you can never go without leaving your shoe behind."

"Raat kya dhali sitare chale gaye,
koi aur kya mila aap hume bhulate chale gaye,
dosti ki baazi jeet to hum bi sakte the,
par aap ki khushi ke liye haarte chale gaye….."

"Chupa chupake raat din aansu bahana yaad hai,
Humko ab tak, Aashiqui ka, wo zamana yaad hai…
Aisa lagtaa hai, ke saaree khubsuratee tuj mein samaagaye
Raahon mein chalte ho, to nazarein tuj par rekhtee hai,
Andheraa jeevan bhi, tuj se roshan ho jata hai…"




Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
wonderful part.... awww even doe anjali n kripz were fytin...kripa cdnt hear a wrd agenst her...plz cont soon 😃

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