The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
HIIII Vartika....
sorryyyyyyyyyyyyy maine late repliii diya.......m soooooo sorryyy
par me bahat busy thi yar......so sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

tumhari ud maine pehle se lekar end tak padhi......just toooooo
gooooddddddddd wery gooooooodddddddddd,,,,,bahat achhi story hai par yar...ek problm hai tum na...kiska dilouge kaunsa hai
side me nam likh kar likhna taki padhne me asani ho...warna
pata nahin chalta ki kaunsi diloge...kiska hai hehehe😕agar
maine ghalat kaha ho to so sorry😭 ab baat ye ki ye Vardan
kiitna sara kam karta hai yar.....tooooo much.......aur uske
dad usko kam karwate rehte hain hahahah😉 ab
uska pyar to bas aa hi raha hai..jaldi un dono ko milwao na..
😳 are han.......ye mugdha badi shrarti hai 😆 😆
UPDATE bahat achhi thiii just toooooo gooddddd.....keep
it up dear....😳 😳 😳 😳
THIS IS 4 YOU👏
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
Shai kahan ho tum ?
Dekho maine correction kar diya hai.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
nice ud 👏 .plz cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Hiiiiiii vartika first of all again sorry for the late reply dear, now about the ud, the ud was awesome dear, but i wish it to be much more longer, anyways i wish ki agla ud thoda sa aur lamba hoga, aur isi tarah se behatareen bhi hoga, mujhe tumhara yeh wala part bahut achcha laga, aur yeh tumhare liye 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.

with lots of love and good wishes.

priti.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
hi!absolutely great update.
your characterization is very nice.👏
too good.
sorry for replying late dear.
God bless u
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
update soon long asap

Abki isiliye jaldi kar de rahi hoon ud last time kaafi der ho gayi thi.

thanks dear for waiting n liking.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

So finally n update...Gud1 indeed..It was very short dear but still gud

sorry yaar update late ho raha tha so i thought ki ud kar doon chahe thoda chota hi ho but next time thoda bada karoongi ud.thanx for liking.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: prerna1

nice one 😊 plz update soon

thanx sweety for liking

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: rlrl

HIIII Vartika....
sorryyyyyyyyyyyyy maine late repliii diya.......m soooooo sorryyy
par me bahat busy thi yar......so sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

tumhari ud maine pehle se lekar end tak padhi......just toooooo
gooooddddddddd wery gooooooodddddddddd,,,,,bahat achhi story hai par yar...ek problm hai tum na...kiska dilouge kaunsa hai
side me nam likh kar likhna taki padhne me asani ho...warna
pata nahin chalta ki kaunsi diloge...kiska hai hehehe😕agar
maine ghalat kaha ho to so sorry😭 ab baat ye ki ye Vardan
kiitna sara kam karta hai yar.....tooooo much.......aur uske
dad usko kam karwate rehte hain hahahah😉 ab
uska pyar to bas aa hi raha hai..jaldi un dono ko milwao na..
😳 are han.......ye mugdha badi shrarti hai 😆 😆
UPDATE bahat achhi thiii just toooooo gooddddd.....keep
it up dear....😳 😳 😳 😳
THIS IS 4 YOU👏
👏

Actually Sarthak k dad ka ye sochna hai ki present time me jo jitna hard work kar leta hai aage future me us ko utni kam problem hoti hai to vo apne bete ko bhi yahi samjhana chahte hai.

Un ko smajhna chahiye na ki ek hi beta hai un ka itna kaam nahi karana chahiye na bechare se.Kajal jaldi hi milegi Adi se.Akhir kab tak door rahegi us se.

Mai jaanti hoon ki tu busy thi so i didn't mind n aap ki baat par dhyan doongi mai next time dilao . samjhne ki problem nahi hogi ok.

Haan Mugdha naughty hai aur cute bhi.So mai hope karoongi ki next time se aap ka regular comment aaye.

Thanx take care and bye.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

hi!absolutely great update.
your characterization is very nice.👏
too good.
sorry for replying late dear.
God bless u

Thanx darling for blessings mai koshish karoongi ki aap logon ko hamesha mera ud pasand aata rahe.

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