The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud 👏 .plz cont soon.....

Thanx Versha darling.Come back soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx dear

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritib0

Hiiiiiii vartika first of all again sorry for the late reply dear, now about the ud, the ud was awesome dear, but i wish it to be much more longer, anyways i wish ki agla ud thoda sa aur lamba hoga, aur isi tarah se behatareen bhi hoga, mujhe tumhara yeh wala part bahut achcha laga, aur yeh tumhare liye 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.

with lots of love and good wishes.

priti.

Thanks Preeti chahe late hi par atleast tumne kiya na reply dat in enough for me n i will try my best to give u all a long update.

Thanks for replying n liking dear.

Luv u take care.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Here's the next part guys:-

At the same day at 10:00'o clock in RoyalCollege of Mumbai (imaginary)

"Tu bhool gaya kya ki aaj tere mom aur dad ki anniversary hai." Sameer remind him. . (Sameer Sinha Shalabh ka sab se accha frnd hai Shalabh us ko Sunny bulata hai. Sameer bahut hi studious aur accha student hai,aur bahut he seedha bhi,ladkiyon se vo sharmata hai isiliye sab us ko champoo kehte hain sivaay Shalabh k.)

"Oh shit how can I miss it?" he hit the bike with his hands " Ab kya Karen?".

"Kuch nahi kar bus apne mom aur dad k sabhi khass doston ko call kar k invite kar le in Hotel Blue Moon aur baaki ki arrangements mai kar loonga.Aur haan sab ko bata dena ki uncle aur aunty ko pata nahi chalna chahiye." Sameer said.

"Aisa kar chal mai tere ko Hotel chod deta hoon aur mai aaram se baith kar call karta hoon ." Shalabh said.

"Ok" , Sameer said.They both reached in Hotel Blue Moon . Shalabh called some of his frnds to help them.They talked to the receptionist n booked the basement for party.

"Kya karna hai batao". All of their frnds reached there n asked in chorus.

"Thanks to u all for help yaar." Shalabh said smiling.

Shalabh ka dil aur dimaag ek jagah par nahi tha isiliye us se koi bhi kaam dhang se nahi ho paa raha tha. Sameer ye to samajh raha tha ki koi problem hai par kya hai problem us ka pata nahi tha. To us ne Shalabh ko bola ki tu baith jaa kaam hum log kar lenge.

Shalabh gave him thank u look. Vo samajh raha tha ki is condition me Sunny ne us ki kitne help ki hai.

Finally all done hotel waale ko kuch instructions de kar dono aa kar park me baith gaye.

"Aaj to meri class over hote hote bachi agar mai time par nahi aata yahan to teri hi tarah mai bhi bahar khada hota aaj." Sameer said but found no reply from Shalabh.

"Kya hua yaar kahan gum hai tu mai tere se hi baat kar raha hoon shayad." Sameer said.

Phir bhi no reply. "Kya ho gaya hai tujhe?Mai aaj subah se dekh raha hoon ki tera mood bada ukhara hua hai;kya tu mujhe batayega ki hua kya hai?" Sameer asked politely.

"Kuch nahi hua hai yaar kuch nahi." He said almost screaming.

"Chal theek hai mat bata mai tere ko insist nahi karoonga." Sameer sighed.

Kuch nahi kaha aaj Shalabh ne jo ki Sameer ki har baat par kuch na kuch kehta jaroor hai.Aaj Shalabh apne nature k against parties bhi nahi gaya aur discothque bhi nahi.(vo to vaise bhi na jaa pata kyounki ki aaj mom dad ki wedding anniversary hai par Sunny k sochne ka matalb ki aaj us ne vahan receptionist k saath bhi flirt nahi kiya jo ki vo hamesha koi bhi ladki mil jaaye flirt jaroor karta tha) Pata nahi kyoun khamosh hai aaj vo.

"Kabhi kabhi dil ka bhojh kisi k saath batne se bhi kam ho jaya karta hai. Pata nahi kyoun hum ye baat nahi samjah paate." Sunny said this with the intentions that may be Shalabh speak something.

Jab us ko laga ki koi fayda nahi hai kuch bhi aaj kehne ka to vo samajh gaya ki jaroor aise koi baat hai jo Shalabh bata nahi paa raha hai. He was about to leave when Shalabh hold his wrist n stopped him n said , " Ruk jaa baith yahan par."

Sunny ko aaj pata nahi kyoun us ki voice me koi bharipan feel ho raha tha but he didn't say anything. Shalabh ne batana shuru kiya.

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"Mr. Mehra ko yahan bhejiye."

"yes sir"

Kuch der baad Mr. Mehra apne boss k office me enter hue.

"Mr. Mehra ye rahe aap k transfer orders. Aap ka transfer Shimla se Delhi kiya jaa raha hai aur aap ko promote bhi kiya jaa raha hai.Now you are Branch Manager." His boss Mr. Thakur told him n shook his hand with his to congratulate him.

"Thank u sir", Mr. Mehra said smiling.

"Sir nahi Mr. Thakur" , Mr. Thakur said.

"Kuch bhi ho aap to hamesha mujh se senior aur bade hi rahoge na." he replied.

"To aap ko within one week wahan shift kar lena hai." He told them.

"Ok sir" Mr. Mehra said n leave the room.

Within no time whole staff started congratulating him n requested him for a party.

"Haan haan jaroor milegi aap logon ko party", Mr. Mehra announced gladly.

At the evening when he reached his home Mugdha n her mom were not there both of them had gone to market for shopping. Mr. Mehra found it locked par un ko jyada der wait nahi karna pada Durga aur Mugdha bus aa hi gaye.

"Are kahan chali gayi thi tum dono pata hai mai kitni der se tum logon ka wait kar raha tha?" he asked.

"Oh common paa ladies se jhooth nahi bolte aap to abhi aaye ho", Mugdha said smiling.

"Tujhe kaise pata?" his father asked her.

"Bus chal gaya pata ab aap batao mai sach keh rahi hoon na?" she again said.

"Haan meri maa par achanak tum logon ko shopping par jaane ki kya soojhi?" he asked in curious manner.

"Paa aap kya samjhte ho ki aap nahi bataoge to hum ko pata nahi chalega." Mugdha said smiling.

Aditaya ji na samjha ki un logon ko pata chal gaya hai transfer k bare me so he said, " hmmmmmmm to aap logon ko pata chal gaya".

"Haan Aditya pata chal gaya ki tumhare paas koi new shirt nahi hai to hum log tumahre liye kuch naye kapde hi lene gaye the." Durga said.

"Oh,ok.Maine kuch aur he soch liya." He said.

"Jaise kya?" Durga asked.

"Ab andar chal k baat kare ki yahin khade rehna hai." Aditya asked.

"Haan haan chalo andar chal k baat karte hain." Durga said n unlocked the door and all three went in .

"Actually tum logon k liye ek good news hai." He informed them about his transfer n promotion.

"Vow it's g8 paa! I can't believe it ki hum Delhi jaa rahe hain." Mugdha jumped with joy from sofa.

"Are are hold on aise mat jump kar otherwise chot lag jayegi kahin tujhe." Her mom said , " Aur aap ko kab pata chala aisa?"

"Bus aaj office pahuchne k kuch der baad." Mr. Mehra said.

"Paa hume shift kab tak karna hai vahan par?" Mugdha asked her father.

"Within one week aur haan maine tumhare college me baat kar li hai ,vo hum ko tc aur migration provide kar denge 3 or 4 days me. Ek baat aur office k log party k liye keh rahe hain." He dicussed it with of them n they decided to give the party day after tomorrow.

"Par paa Anu ………Mai Anu ko nahi chod sakti hoon." She said feeling down n her eyes were moist.

"Kis ne kaha hai chodne ko?" someone said n they all turned to see who's that.

There Anushka was standing with her mom,dad n bro.

"Namaste aunty,namaste uncle aur tu kehna kya chahti hai mai samjhi nahi".Mugdha said.

Here Sunny n Shalabh:-

"To ye baat hai ab dekh mai kya karta hoon us ladki ko to kuch na kuch samjhana hi padega." Sunny said .He was fuming badly. "Filhaal tu abhi ghar jaa change kar k mom aur dad ko leta aa kisi bahane se yahan".

"Hmmmmmmmm" he nodded n both of them left.

Hello guys ye tha next update.

I hope aap logon ko accha laga hoga aur agar nahi bhi laga to bhi to bhi comment jaroor kariyega .

I will wait for it.

Bye take care.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago
ashu20 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
hi
liked the part
plz continue soon
bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
it was really nice 😊 plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Hii vartika dear,kaisi ho? bahut achcha ud tha, mujhe behad pasand aaya, i just loved it dear, hats of to u for such a beautiful ud, keep on writing like this, and this is for u 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.

with love

priti.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Absolutely great update.👏
Carry on the good work dear.
waiting for the next update.
take care.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Kajal is very strong and responsible!!! 😊

I loved the casting for Kajal's mom!!! 😊

Kajal ke baap ne bahut bura kiya!!! 😡 By the way Kajal ke dad role ke liye how about Cezzane Khan or maybe Hiten Tejwani?? Par kisi aur ke saath chala gaya toh probably Caezzane Khan will be suitable!!!

By the way Aanchal ke role mein junior Sanyogita hai yaa senior Sanyogita of Prthviraj?? 😕

I loved Vardhan!!! 😊 😊 😊 He is so sweet!!! 😳

I loved Aditya and Vaishnavi as well and their casting!!! 😊

Vashnavi aur Vardhan ke beech ki understanding was very nice!!! 😊

Mugdha was very sweet!!! 😊

But is Durga(Jijyasa) looking as she looks in Kasamh Se?? Or is she looking more like Misha of K .Street Pali Hill with her normal short hair??

By the way I think its ok but I am still not sure about Ashwini Kalsekar and Jatin Seal as Mugdha's parents!!! 😕

But Mugdha ko Delhi kyun bhej rahi ho??Isse kya faida?? 😕 😕 Shalaab aur Vardhan and Kajal are in Mumbai toh usse bhi wahi bhejo naa!!!!

Aur yeh Sunny aur Shaalab ka kya kisaa hai ki Shalaab aise behave kar raha hai?? 😕 😕 😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
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