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Posted: 19 years ago
#21

OH YA AND FORGOT TO SAY THAT I JUST CANT STOP LAUGHING AT THIS PARA 😆

"The year just started, its their first week.. Ash and Kripa r in their first year, while happe, komu, and evee r in second year.. zainab di the oldest is in her final year. Prithvi is a junior (third year)."

U MUST BE Thinking i have lost it but actually the reason is that do u always think that i always keep on dreaming about uncle yaar ..........dont i study .u idiot..... dreaming about uncle is gonna be my prefession kya??????????????

I KNOW U FORGOT TO WRITE IT IM ONLY J/K BUT SOCHNE WALI BAAT HAI NA BHATIJI>??😕 me dont want to be illiterate😭
<RITU>

Edited by ritu29 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22

😆😆deeeppppo ji lubed it..Dadi is going to the sen citz classes in the same university to keep on eye on her potis and of course their dudes!!!😉😆😆

🤗Anamika🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago
#23

NEXT PART

Angad's group:

Angad and Prithvi are best friends. Angad never liked Prithvi's "other" friends because he thought they were weird, talked about nothing, and are always laughing for no reason.

Other than Prithvi, Angad's best friends are princess and sana..

Princess is Angad's younger sister. And sana has been angad's friend since they were little, so shes like a sister to him..

THE REAL STORY STARTS NOW.. (finally)

Kripa is walking towards her dorm, after buying some books. Shes looking through the bag making sure she got all the books, not looking up.

She bumps into angad, and her bookd fall..

K: arhhhhhh

Angad is about to say sorry but then sees who it is and thinks "this weirdo"

K: u can atleast say sorry

A: oh, im sorry

She starts picking up the books, and Angad bends down to help.

K: no thanx, I can do it..

A: I was just trying to help.

A: No thanx Mr. "I m better than everybody " u have helped me enough.

A: oye

K: oye

A: I don't wanna waste my time, tum jaise logo ke mu lag kar.

K: yeah yeah whateva, Evee told me about you. You stupid ABCD what the hell do u think about urself. No matter how much u try to be American, u can never be one.

A: shut up "mera bharat mahan"

K: oye

A: "I have more important things to do than waste my time arguing wid u."

Just then Princess comes, seeing Angad, she gives him a hug.

P: hey bro, sup

A: nothing sis, this gurlll

Kripa gets up and sees princess, she drops the books again, and gives princess a tight hug.

K: princess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! my love

P: Kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 what r u doin here..

K: yaar, even I don't know what im doin here. Hehe. I can believe I actually got accepted.

P: haha, gawwddd its been forever since we talked.

K: I know

Angad who's just staring at them finally speaks.

A: whoa whoa princess u know this gurl.

P: duh bro, remember kripa. Oh never mind, remember the last time I went to India, Kripa also went. Shes sharma uncle's daughter. Shes like us too. Her parents r in India, shes just studying here.

A: oh, well whateva

P: Kripa r u livin in a dorm, or what.

K: Dorm yaar

P: acha, mne and bro rented an apartment here. We should get together sometimes.

K: yeah we should.

P: Angad be a gentleman, and get the books for krips.

Angad gets the books and puts them in her hands.

K smiles evilly: thankoo ji.

A just leaves.

K: ur bro is such a kharoos.

P: nahh hes really sweer, just doesn't talk to everybody.

K: hes still a kharoos to me.

P: acha meri ma.

K: prince I missed u yaar, come lemme introduce u to my losas.

P(laughs): acha lets go.

Kripa takes princess to her dorm, where the whole gang is watching a movie.

K: oye, u losas started the movie without me.

Ash: duh what did u expect, u took forever.

K: anywayzz, guys meet my princess, I know her from the time I went to India.

The gang: hey princess.

P: hey guys.

They all watch the movie.

Soon their lives gets busy wid work and studies.

One day princess comes to meet Kripa.

K: hey prince

P: hey krips, do u have a lecture today??

K: nope, even if I did it doesn't matter

P; shut up

K: ok ok sowwy

P: can u help me out.

K: ur askin me for help. Haha

P: shut up, not wod studies.

K: ok acha then?

P: we r moving out into a new apartment, closer to the uni. So it'll be easier for me and bro to come to campus everyday.

K: oh acha, u need help wid that. Chalo ji anything for my rajkumari.

P: nayi looser, I need a bigger favor than that.

K: even bigger, kya???

P: I have a midterm and I need to study for that, so can u help my bro in moving Pleaseeeeeee. Prithvi is also busy, u have to do it for me.

K: u mean help that kharoos?? Never

P: pweaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

K: ok ok fine.

Princess smiles and gives her a hug: thankooo ji

K: ur welcomeee ji

P: comeon lets go, now I have to make bro agree in letting u help him.

K: im not helping him, im only moving ur stuff not his.

P: ok baba.

They get to the apartment.

P: Kripa u just go na and tell him that I sent u to help him. If I go in he's never gonna agree.

K: ok ok fikar not, ill take care of the kharoos

K: when r u coming back from campus

P: late coz I have evening classes, then im going to happe's dorm and we r gonna study together.

K; ok ill tell kharoos.

P: here take the keys

K: ok bye, have fun studying hehe

She goes up to the apartment and opens the door slowly.

Angad is still sleeping on the sofa, with stuff all over the place.

Kripa slowly comes in and sits next to him.

She taps him on his arm

K: uthiye ji, bacho ko school shodne ka time hogaya.

Angad just mumbles and turns around

Kripa gets mad and hits him: GET UP

A gets up wid a shock: whoa whoa what r u doing here.

K: helping u duh

A: what

K: princi sent me to help u

A: I don't need ur help, I got it under control.

K: haha I can tell

A: shut up

K: u kharoos. Im going to put all of princess stuff in boxes ok. You go drop em at the new apartment

A: no

K: oye

A: what

K: im ur boss ok

A: no

K: yes

A: ok fine, I can do wid a servant, u do princess's room, ill do mines. We'll do the living room later.

K packs princess's stuff in 2 hours, since prince only has the necessary stuff there.

K is hungry and yells

" kharrosssss I'm hungry"

A yells from his room: "what am I supposed to do about it"

K goes in his room and lies on the bed.

K: comeon yaar, don't kill me now. Im starvingggggggggggggg. I want lunch.

A: R u donr wid princess's room

K: yeah, I packed all the stuff in boxes.

A: ok fine, I need to drop the boxes at the new place anywayzz. So we'll get some lunch on the way.

K: yess, thankooo ji. Lets go. Waisey ur really slow man. Ur barely done wid half of ur room. U wernt sleeping again were u.

A: don't worry about it.

He gets his keys and says "lets go"

K: oye, pick up all the boxes first.

A puts all the boxes into the trunk and backseat of the car and they go to the new apartment.

Kripa goes to the new apartment, while angad is takin out the boxes.

K: wowwwwwwwwww this is nice, and the view from this room, its beautifulllll

A: obviously, its my room thas why.

K: shut up. Im gonna come here everyday now.

A: why

K: because my building is like a block away, ab mera breakfast, lunch and dinner to paka yaha fixed.

A: shut up pig, this isn't a dharamshala.

K: oye, who r u. this is my princess ka mahal ur nobody.

Angad holds her from the neck. A: if only I could kill u.

He lets her go.

K: haha itna gussa, wah wah. Hurry ur a** up im hungry.

A: acha meri ma, lets go. Where do u wanna go anywayzz.

K gets an evil look: I loveeeeeeeeeeee Indian food.

A: me too

K is surprised: oye u ABCD u like Indian food.

A: duh

K: oh

A: comeon lets go

K: lets just get it packed, u know how Indian people be thinking, if they see a guy and a gurl together.

A smiles: apko apki reputation ka bada khayal hai.

K: obviously Im a good kuri, waisey I love ur hindi ji

A smiles

Tyhey get the food, and go back to the old apartment.

K: jaldi jaldi, im hungry. You drive like an old lady man. Now open the door, im starving.

A: if u keep on acting like this, im gonna eat the whole thingmyself.

K: no ur not.

They go inside and sit on the sofa side by side.

K: oye, why r u takin my sholay.

A: ur sholay, learn how to share pig..

K: kharooss, u tool al the sholay. Im gonna take all the bhature now. Now eat ur sholay alone.

A: you eat ur Bhature alone.

Kripa looks at him. She gives him half of the bhature, and Angad puts the sholay in the middle. And they both share

Ill continue later

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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
awwwwwwwwwww..i read it ji

bery bery nice
aww a-k..wah..atleast fiction mein chem hai..phew!!

cant bait for next..huryy n post!!:GRIN:
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Evee

sholay? i though u were tlaking about the movie for a sec😆BTW I love chole bhature YUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

very good! I loving it! btw angad ABCD, Ms sharma (me😳) IBCA....khoob jamegi!!!😆

lol that is what i thought at first too!!! lol IBCA?? (indian born confused american??)😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
wow, so cute. Deepey please continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
awwww aloo, me loved it
continue soon idiot
love ya
:slap: for everyone 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: komal2310

me too 😭 that be wicked n we would rock together, hahaha 😆

Lmao guyz..That uni wud go down..with u all in it 😆😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: komal2310

lol evee hate ur siggy though 😆

y Kommu?? Sahi to hai 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
continue...loved it...post the next part soon plss.

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