deepeys newest fan fic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Alright guys, deepey is starting a new fan-fic… hope u all will like it. I'll try to make it different, it's kinda associated wid my life..

12:59 in the afternoon, the sun is up…..

we see a tall building close to a big university…

the camera enters a dorm, we see two beds on two opposite sides of the rooms..

one side is really clean, the other side is all messy, wid clothes all over the place. And in the bed we see a gurl lying on her stomach wid a pillow over her head..

tring tring (the phone rings)

But no answer, it keeps ringing after five minutes the gurl finally answers..

G: "arhhhhhh wtf. Stupid people, don't even lemme sleep in peace."

She pickes up the phone and yells "WHAT"

On the other side: "Kripa duffer, idiot, khota, losa where the hell r u, the class is about to start, hurry ur a** up. We have presentations today losa. Hurry now."

Kripa gets up from the bed shocked her hair all over her face and yells "SHYT, arhhh I forgot dam*, ash u stupid losa couldn't u have reminded me earlier. I hate u"

Ash: "shut up losa, I've been tryin to call u since forever, but ur lazy a** wouldn't get up."

K: "ok whateva bye"

She hangs up and runs to the bathroom, brushes her teeth in the bath tub, while the shower is running over her head. She has no time to find an outfit, so just puts on her pajamas and tank top again. Gets her bag, doesn't bother to fix her hair, just holds her hair up and puts a cap over it, and runs out of her dorm, jumping down the stairs two at a time, praying at the same time "oh babaji please I hope the presentation goes well today, please babaji please." running on campus and finally reaches her hall. She fly's in the room, flings the door open, causing all the students and the professor to look up.

The class isn't very big, only about 30 people..

Professor Lang: "ah miss sharma only 15 minutes late today, I must say that's a big achievement from u. 15 minutes earlier than ur normal time."

K: "sorry professor, I….."

Pr: "Ms. Sharma please have a seat, if u haven't noticed a student is presenting her work."

Kripa sits down quietly next to ash.. who looks at her with a dangerous look..

Deepey will continue later… temme if u all like it ok ji. i think i forgot how to write fan fics its been forever.

lub ju all

Edited by deepey - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
awesome
I loved it
u looser better continue soon
ashooooo :kiss: :hug:
deepey :slap:😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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:grin: i m innnn
muahaha
lubed it ji
pls continue

this looks more like a convo between u and me..hehe
and now i see y u said kripa is sumone else..aham..lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds excited plz continue soon👏👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haha thankoo my loosers, some bery special people r gonna be in this.

take care.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur welcome deepey😆😆
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K sits down quietly next to ash.. who looks at her with a dangerous look..
She sits there, listening..
They all give their presentations, and the class ends.
The professor leaves.
K: thanku babaji, I love u,,, u saved me today
Ash looks at her
K: what why r u givin me those looks.
A: how many times do I have to tell u, start concentrating on ur studies, and stop foolin around.
K: what did I do?
A: nothing, do u ever do anything.
They go outside..
K: yesssss an hour break. Lets go c what the other loosers r up to.
A: yeah lets go
They both make their way to a group of people..
K: hapeeeee
H: oho u here, I wont be able to study now
K: oye katabi kire.
Kripa hugs another gurl…. Swinging on to her: zainab diiiiiiiiiii
Zainab di: hello my baby
She then goes to komu, evee, and ritu: losas u all in ur dream world…komu dreamin about prithvi eh, and u baba don't u have to worry about ur engineering go study… and u ritu aunty.. dreamin about uncle again..

Kripa, ash, zainab di, happe,komal, evee, and ritu are all best friends. They all live in dorms on campus. Kripa and ash have one dorm.

Ok now before I make this into a conversation between us. Lol. Lemme introduce some real characters.

Another important part of their gang is prithvi, who is like a brother to all of them except for komal.. they both have feelings for each other but r never able to express it.

The year just started, its their first week.. Ash and Kripa r in their first year, while happe, komu, and evee r in second year.. zainab di the oldest is in her final year. Prithvi is a junior (third year).

Prithvi is the jaan of all the gurls, but they don't really hang around together. He hangs around wid his own friends.. his best friend angad who is also a junior.. also knows the gurls, but he doesn't really get along wid them. He thinx they r too indianish.

instead he only has one friend and her name is princess

Ok ill continue later, the real stoey is gonna start later, this is only my jaans intro's.

Edited by deepey - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wah wah
deepay..kay baat hai...all jaans in one story..hehe..gud gud..now cant wait for another part..hurrryy
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Posted: 19 years ago
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loved it
better continue soon
haila, angad is in same unvi 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome deepo di luv ya cont soon 😃

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