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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Kat, I am so touched, just for me....😳
will read & come back
me back.....thanks so much for updating....
I am serious, u need to give ur FF to bollywood, how do u come up with such wacky ideas....& dailogues, just mindblowing.....

"You too I look at that bedroom door and she there rocking to my guitar and I don't want to touch the god dame guitar as it remembers me of her dancing around the room with her nightie on…" Rahul looked at him shocked and gulped the beer…

ofcourse, Rahul is shocked, he knows Arman is a babe magnet, but this fast, seeing someone in their nightie....only Arman can do....
Arman's problem is the problem, which all men have a very very very biiiiiiiiiggggggggggggg EGO, he knows that he has hopelessly attracted to her, but NO, the fact that she dumped him, bothers him more

"I want revenge no-one Turns ARMAAN DOWN!" he said looking at him

This was quite funny I thought, how do u develop these dailogues....am so baffled...
"I thought not…papa's boy can't even tell papa I don't want to get married …but I want revenge Rahul…she said no to Big Armaan…Big Armaan!…" Rahul looked at him he was plastered and not understanding what he was say.
And, again rahul& muskan have borrowed the identities for our stars.....& calling them only for help too....the next part is gonna be a killer, cos most of the suspense will come out, with Rahul calling Arman Rahul, Arman calling himself Arman, Ridima callin Muskan...& ok, I better stup up, cos I am gone crazzy....
do update soon....& thanks once for dedicating this only to me...I am so much touched...
take care
Edited by Jodubai - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part kat... as usual... omg thr gonna tell the truth...hmmm police station??? random!!! lol... i'm guessing they bvoth had an argument...lol

continue soon, and pm me if u can
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Kat, great update as expected, poor Armaan cant forget Ridz, lol he wants revenge because she didnt want him!!
Rahul and Muski were going to tell the truth, when they got disturbed by a the other 2!!
what have they done to be at the police station???
cant wait to find out in the next part
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh no!!!!!!!!!!ok this is gonna be bad!continue sooN!!!!!!!!PLZZ!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol guys will update next weeeeeeeek
Love kat
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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG yay!! I was waiiiiiting for u to update this ff!!! Gr8 work!!! OMG said such crazy things in his inebriated state!!! lol...It was hilarious!!! I hoooope they find out the truth about each other's identities soon!!! OMG I wonder y are they in the police station though....Do continue soon!!!

Love,
Ananya


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i luv tha FF plz cont soon is Armaan in jail i hope not! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz PM me!
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 17 years ago
intertsin prt i hpe dey find ot d truth sn!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahaha luved yur last update!!!
sexy twist!!!:D


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