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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#171

hi kat

i hv just read whole of ur ff its too gud how can i miss it how stupid of me its really a nice one😊😳 so sweet touching one ⭐️👏can u please pm me when ever u update if u dont hv any problem.😳

"Friendship doesnt occurs with special ppl, people becomes special after becoming friends, Just wanted to let u know that U r very "Special" to me."

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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mahru

@mahi4u

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#172

hey di

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!

dat was grt prt ⭐️

cont super soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

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princess4120

@princess4120

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#173

haha.. this was pretty entertaining.. loved it... rahul and muskaan like each other.. hopefully soon they will know who they really are.. bring AR back together.. please.. hehe.. they do have the hots for each other.. lol.. anyway.. great update.. hope you update soon..

take care

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#174

Ahhh me finally here too.....now 😆😆

okas usual a superb start here.....he was staring at her?? Having ahem ahem thoughts???😆😆 Naughty naughty boy....
OMG Armaan you are a disgrace… I mean stop staring at her ….white milk thighs and every curve of her body as she asleep in the bed next to you… Your Pathetic man you never slept with a woman and this god dame pillows in the middle of the bed …. Uff Rahul I can just kill you as now I have to sleep with a woman and not in that way…. Man I am aroused to the max… I need a cold shower

🤣 Hawww Kat wonder how ueven think up of such things!!!😆😆😳 Brilliant.

Go to sleep before Muskhan spirit gets up again… 🤣 Ohhh gosh there again another one!!! Muskaan spirit??? Lmaoooooo😆😆

Ok backto RM.....as AR....😆😆 Man they surely seem to be on with each other noww poor actual AR........😆😆...loving the way their sweet talks are going.😳

Go back to sleep darling… Armaan is tired!" 🤣

Haww he said it??? armaan is tired?? Lol loving this....loved her reactions following it too...desire...he covered it up.😆 And the breakfast scene. Awesome Kat.

Ok so now Rahul is off the proposal?? I mean his dad refused and now Armaan is free as muskaan supposedly has a BF...so Ridz is free as faked Chirag as her BF who is Ritu's husband!! and real RM falling for each other and Armaan has a date....wow kat loving the way ur penning this woman. ur a genius really.👏 Am in ur serious awe....waiting for AR to meet again now....the real ones i mean😆😆

Kat ur awesome....an understatement there i knowww
Will be waitinggg....sorry for this delay u know the reasons,....
love
Jia😳

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#175

Hey Kat...

I loved the last part a lot...Armaan's crazy thoughts before going to bed had me in splits..😆 Armaan and Riddhima's inner thoughts are seriously hilarious...You seriously are too good of a writer..Im glad I came by your FF's... Im trying to read a lot of your FF's when I get time..They are seriously too good! You are a natural writer...How do manage to find time to write soo gooood???

-Anita

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#176

Hi Kat...

r u really busy... i got a PM for dis FF only for d first 2 episodes... thereafter none...😔... Anywayz its ok...

Wow... dis ones going on a nice pace...😊 i mean Part 4 revealed a lot too much... As always i was a lil confused about few dialogues... i mean i cudnt make it, which dialogue belong to which character... i sometimes think how dumb i m... leave it, i know i so silly...🤪

But i loved dis episode...👏 😃 Does Ridz actually have a Boyfriend or not...??? i understand dat Chirag was only a part of d game... but she also said something about her boyfriend in America... well may b i will understand it in next part... i m a wacko i guess......

So Rahul & Muskaan r getting along... dats nice... But my poor Armaan... he didnt get anything... 😒... i mean Rahul & Muskaan got each other... Ridz ( i think 🤔 ) already have a boyfriend... & Armaan wat about him... Just a time pass Date wid Anjali...🥺

Wat up wid Nana & Sumit's Kidnapping plan... did dey gave it up...???😛

Well dis episode have re-generated a loads of Curiosity viruses in me now... u hv got to update d next part really fast... i m already dying to know wat will happen next... & wats up Armaan's expedition of finding his Sister & Mother...❓

Love

- Sheetal

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#177

OMG they are sooo crazy!!! They obviously ove each other!! Their thoughts are hilarious!!! They were obviously checking out each other!!!! Thank God Ridzi doesn't really have a boyfriend!!! OMG Rahul-Muski!!! Awww....cute!!! Can't waaait for AR confusion to be sorted out...Loved this part...👏

Love,

Ananya

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desi_angel101

@desi_angel101

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#178

lol keep the gr8 stories coming kat! This one is soo funny its like they're all completely getting mixed up but the funniest part is the s*xual tension that's so obvious yet they ignore it n fight like cats n dogs... Nd of course she doesn't have a bf... Its so funny how Rahul n muski planned all of this n end up falling into luv themselves... Continue soon!

Luv Richa

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#179

Hi Kat,

When u updating this one......I read the updated parts for Its in his kiss & Heartbeat, so thought you would have updated this too...but nope...not in luck in this FF

I searched through 15 pages to get to this FF, for this effort of mine, I think you should update soon now

please continue

take care