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Posted: 17 years ago
ashu i just loved this one.....⭐️
i dont have words to explain that how beautifully u have written⭐️ and explained the lovly moments between mohini and prem❤️...wow!!!!!!!!!😍
every dia is just superb ☺️😍😍 welldone yaar👍🏼

😳aur mujhe to tumhari har story pasand hai😉 so i cant skip any😆 ....
aur ye kya last movements of mohini ???😲kya ab wo phir se nahi ayegi tumhare FF main??😒
waiting 4 ur nxt update as i know shera will be coming😛

ok will wait 4 ur comments on my ff😳
aur haan maine dekha hugging queen agayi hai with lots of hugs🤗....dekho maine yaad kiya aur wo hazir hogayi😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

archana.....kitna romantic tha..............aur tum kehti ho ki abhi tak tumne kuch aisa nahi likha.................. no comments 😆 btw...it was a beautifull update.............prem~mohini😍

aw Kiran, glad u liked it 😳 well... no comments.. but still they are many romantic moments to come 😃😛
Thanks dear, im very happy u liked their jodi, as its purely of my imagination 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: starpisces123

ashu i just loved this one.....⭐️ aw! glad of it,🤗 but i didnt 😛
i dont have words to explain that how beautifully u have written⭐️omg! 🤗 and explained the lovly moments between mohini and prem❤️...wow!!!!!!!!!😍 omg! 🤗i dont think its that much yaar 😳😕
every dia is just superb ☺️😍😍 welldone yaar👍🏼 aw! thanks 🤗🤗

😳aur mujhe to tumhari har story pasand hai😉 so i cant skip any😆 .... lol again... but har story? each story? 😕😆 wich stories yaar?? 😆😕
aur ye kya last movements of mohini ???😲kya ab wo phir se nahi ayegi tumhare FF main??😒 well, ayegi.. but very less times, it was a temporal and non important charcter di 😊
waiting 4 ur nxt update as i know shera will be coming😛 -->😆😆 lol, i will try to include her 😛

ok will wait 4 ur comments on my ff😳 i commented 😳
aur haan maine dekha hugging queen agayi hai with lots of hugs🤗....dekho maine yaad kiya aur wo hazir hogayi😉😆 --> 😆😆 well, not only you 😆, aur ayegi toh zaroor hugz se hi, thats obvious 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Note: I cudnt update today, but tomorrow I will post the next part. Thanks for your support and patience.
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Posted: 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
Comment On Part :- In The Kitchen:-
Lolz...VEER'z Tests Were Still Going On...😆😆😆
He Took Prem To Da Kitchen For Cooking Food...🤣...Wat a Mind VEER...! 😳 [ 😆 ]
Awww Prem Seems Simple n Obeying Bacha..😳 [ 🤣]
Wo Oh Prem Noes How To Cook...Huh...*Impressed*...😳...Bt Still I'll Go wid VEER...😆😆😆
Poor Dharam,He Took Da Plate Bt VEER k aage kisi Ki Nai Chalti...😉😆...Took d Plate n Started Eating Widout Even Thinking Dat Even Other Cud b Hungry...🤣


Prem watches carefully, trying to guess by Veers expressions the taste of the dish. And Dharam watches embarrased, trying to distract Prems attention. "Woh kiya hei, ki khaane ka samay ho gaya hei, isliye woh... Par tum chinta mat karo, agghar Veer kha raha hei, toh usko passamd hi hoga.."

Prem reacts indifferently to Dharams comments, who doesnt know what to say

Y So...? 😕😕😕

Lolz...Stucked head Thru d dooor....😆....Seeing d Scene Inside...! 😆
🤣 How many maids are cuming...? Lolz...those giggles heard by dem ....Neva bought gud news to dem....!!! 😆


Veer smirks naughty, and continues back with his food, aware of the coming comments at them.

WoOo...Loved It....☺️😍....! Liked d Comparision with such a short example btwn dV's character...😛....Dharam starts to srry where as VEER smirks naughtily n Continues back to his food...🤣...He's crzy bout eating....😆😆😆...Hww Chwwweeeettt...😍....Lolz Even aware what Comments He'z Going To get Nao...😆😆😆....Mah SmaRT VEER....😎😍 😉\😳😳😳

By d way archu plz update d firssHt Page Olso...😊....Didnt got ur recent update der...!

Newayz It Wz a Fabulous Part....👏...Owessummm...! ⭐️

Continue Such Naughty VEER'z Parts....😉😆





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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Wow Read d updatte ''Trying to stop Her'' 👏Woo Tasha is a very understanding brother... Ya he is..😳but first of all..
🥳Yieppiee!!🥳
(finally a comment of urs!😃😳) Lolz...havnt seen sum1 so happy by jus a comment of myn...! 😆


I relli Lyk deR meeting...I Mean itz full of innocence, respect 4 each other...Sweet love...wIdout ne fyts...True frenship...Wow..!😊 wow! thanks! im very very glad that u noticed it. In fact, wat u said is exactly wat i wanted to show WoO So I Finally Get It...Lolz M Glad...! 😳😆

🤣Lolz..this tym returning back 2 da window seeing siya n dharam...😳....Gosshh...Dis Boy..! Wz so much astonished 2 c dat ....dat wz Bout to fall dwn...😆well, that scene was a bit too much dramatic..😕but bechara ladka kiya karta..ek toh woh bahut carelessly hein, aur updar seh subha subha romantic scenes dekhne ki aadat nahin..woh bhi uske adarniya brathashri ka😆😆😆Lolz...Nahh i didnt find it dramatic bt sumthing close to VEER'z Character...😃Like d way d True Character Of VEER shud Hav Dun,Itz Exactly d same..!

Pheww thanx 2 mohini...Bacha Liya..! 😳 another reason to add an intelligent lil sis in the story!😆 Lolz Again d same Thing...I Jus Lub Ur Idea 4 Adding a sis Of dV...👏👏👏..I Even Related her to a character of a serial If Yew Watch It...''Sugna'' Of Balika Vadhu...! She'z Exactly da same as Ur Mohini Iz..! 😃

Lolz....Neva Knew VEER wud jus ran 2wards D's mum...😆😆😆...!![😆😆😆]chala mummy ke paas😆 Ahhh Mah Cutie Pie,Mummy's Boy...😆😆😆...Lolz Itz Rhyming...😲...Aha See Hw Gud I m at Rhyming...! 😆

Btw Am Confused frm d very begining...🤔...Whu were d siblings...Or Ol d three r cuzins..??? I Meant D iz av's son n VEER nivi's😳..n mohini...? mohini is swathi's (dharam's mom) sister daughter😃i will clear it in coming parts😃
NooooOo 😲...yEH Bahot Duuuurrr Ka Relation Ho Jayega...😭...Make Her Either Dharam,VEER Or Agni's Real Sis...! 😛 Yew Havnt Said Nething Bout Her Parents Yet..! 😃



Ummm...avadhi's queen replied...'' par rajkumaro ka toh koi sandeh hi nai utha''....Means...??? actually i wanted to say that no doubt of the princes, they are the best thing of the palace...but i guess my hindi is quite poor yet😆Ohh Okiez...Nope actually Yew Hav Written It Correctly,I Read It Wrng......Bt Must Say Yew Write Pure Hindi...'' Bhrata,Kadap Hi Nahi...😲..'' Isse acchi hindi kaisi hogi archu..?😆

And how would i mind..i really love the fact that u read my updates line by line, and try to understand them, no matter how difficult it takes😃😃so please, dont say sorry😳🤗🤗If u have any doubts, dont think twice and just ask me😃😛. This will make the ff better😃🤗thanks!
Aww Okiez...!🤗 Lolz True I relli Try To Understand each n Evry thing In It...😳😉😆


Wot....!!!! 😲 Koteshwar yatra...!!! Wwwowww....reminded me of SURYA...! 😍
oh my! u so shocked about it😆 well milne ke liye koi na koi rason chahiye, and this was the simple one😳😛Wow...Wat a Reason...👏 Super Duper Hittt...!⭐️

It wud b soo much fun...a yatra..Yippeee...!!!! Ol d teens on yatra...! 👏👏👏 Awww Hw sweet....Her childness came out in frnt of VEER...coz VEER himself is a shwweeettt l'll child...Bt is brave enuuf in frnt of enemies...!
i wish it will be funny😛 But mohini isnt going, actually it was a temporal character, but she will come whenever its needed😃. Huh Y So ...? 😕 Mohini a Temporal character...?
Huh....mohini Getting ready...😉...Itz tym 4 his boy to enter kya Archu...?😉
Yes Vinu! 😉 You cath this things very fast👏😆 Lolz I Noe ...I'm Expert In Such Things...!


Ur FF Iz Truly...⭐️ ....Greatttt...! 👏
Thank you a lot!!😃😃😃
RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍




Me Quoted In Blue...! 😊

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍
Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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Ur MossHt welcumm...! 🤗


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Comment On Part :- In The Kitchen:- yaayy! 😃😃
Lolz...VEER'z Tests Were Still Going On...😆😆😆 yup, still 😆
He Took Prem To Da Kitchen For Cooking Food...🤣...Wat a Mind VEER...! 😳 [ 😆 ] well... 😆😆 dunno why the idea came suddently to my mind 😆
Awww Prem Seems Simple n Obeying Bacha..😳 [ 🤣] yaa... 😳
Wo Oh Prem Noes How To Cook...Huh...*Impressed*...😳...Bt Still I'll Go wid VEER...😆😆😆 [😆] yup, i supposed that in gurukul they must have learned every thing, so he know to cook a simple dish, atleast.
Poor Dharam,He Took Da Plate Bt VEER k aage kisi Ki Nai Chalti...😉😆...Took d Plate n Started Eating Widout Even Thinking Dat Even Other Cud b Hungry...🤣 [😆😆] he must b thinking, agghar aur kisi ko chahiye to mangle dasiyan se.. na? 😛😆


Prem watches carefully, trying to guess by Veer's expressions the taste of the dish. And Dharam watches embarrased, trying to distract Prem's attention. 'Woh kiya hei, ki khaane ka samay ho gaya hei, isliye woh... Par tum chinta mat karo, agghar Veer kha raha hei, toh usko passamd hi hoga..'

Prem reacts indifferently to Dharam's comments, who doesnt know what to say

Y So...? 😕😕😕
he shows no differece to dharams comments, well of dharams reasons and pretexts to jusify his bros embarrasing actions, bcz he was paying attention to guess the taste of the food by any possible expression in veers face 😊

Lolz...Stucked head Thru d dooor....😆....Seeing d Scene Inside...! 😆 [😆😆] yaa..
🤣 How many maids are cuming...? Lolz...those giggles heard by dem ....Neva bought gud news to dem....!!! 😆 yup 😆😆


Veer smirks naughty, and continues back with his food, aware of the coming comments at them.

WoOo...Loved It....☺️😍[😳😳😃thanks]....! Liked d Comparision with such a short example btwn dV's character...😛[thanks]....Dharam starts to srry where as VEER smirks naughtily n Continues back to his food...🤣ya, both are different😳😆...He's crzy bout eating....😆😆😆lol.. 😆...Hww Chwwweeeettt...😍aw!this luv of urs😆....Lolz Even aware what Comments He'z Going To get Nao...😆😆😆of curse, he has lived wid thm na?....Mah SmaRT VEER....😎😍 😉\😳😳😳 aw!! 😆😳

By d way archu plz update d firssHt Page Olso...😊....Didnt got ur recent update der...! im sorry, actually i have to again change the pages of the parts bcz they got 8 posts now na? and im very lazy these days.. 😆

Newayz It Wz a Fabulous Part....👏...Owessummm...! ⭐️ thankss!! 😃😃

Continue Such Naughty VEER'z Parts....😉😆 sure 😃





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