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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj aur Naina ki suhaag raat!! 😳

But bechare Raj aur Naina!!!! 😭 Raj ko agle hi din wapas bula liya!!! 😭 Aur raat ko dono pcking karne lage!!!! 😭

Raj and Naina emotions and love for each other were very well portrayed!!!! 😊

Bechare dono do saal tak nahi mil paye!!!! 😭 Woh dono toh theek se pati patni bhi nahi baane!!! 😭 😭 😭

Toh yeh thi kahani!!! 😊

Well I hope ab jab dono saath hai to looking forward to loads of romance!!!! 😳

vaise yaar i'm not good at writting romantic sequences but i'll try my level best and ya age bohot sare rn scenes hai so parte jao

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: prerna1
very nice plz continue the fic and update soon....

thanx and i'll defenately cont. d fic as u all r replying and liking my fic aur me tum logon ka dil nahin torungi

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
it was awesome..... 👏

thank u dear

and hope more replies from u for d next coming up parts

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

r u going to update rite now or not

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: rituka7
r u going to update rite now or not

i'm writting d ud

par pata nahin ye light kabhi bhi chali jati hai or agar nahin gae to me abhi ud kar dungi

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

raj naina ek dusre ki ankhon me khoe hue hai or peeche se avaz ati hai
abhi-very interesting
raj-ha abhi tum yahan
neev/shalini/suriji/abhi-hum saab yahan hai
raj-tum saab yahan pe kar se
shalu-jab se tum ye story remind kar rahe the humne to tumhari poori story sunli
neev-yaar I'm very jelous meri love story itni achi kyon nahin hai
suriji-teri koi love story vi haegi hai jo interesting hogi har ladki main to tu nooks nikalta rehaeta hai tere lie kya miss India aegi
neev-nahin nahin suriji miss India ko kyun bula rahe ho mere lie to bas naina jaisi koi la do main to usme hi khush ho jaunga
raj-good tune naina jaisi kaha naina hi kaha hota naa to tu aj mujhse bach ta nahin
neev-acha beta teri kismet achi hai jo tujhe naina mili hai varna tujh jaise ko khan itni khoobsurat ladkiyan milti hai
raj-oh really
(they started their tom & jerry race)
raj-abhi batata hoon tereko kisko kya milta hai
(naina was was laughing as well as blushing)
abhi acha ab tum dono
raj-neev aj to me tujhe chor raha hoon agli baar nahin
neev-haan haan thik hai har bar yahi keheta hai
shalani-acha ab ye to batao hamare hero heroine ko milane vale karan aur sanya kahan hai?
Naina-vo vo karan bhaiya hamesha ke lie delhi ke paas gurgaon chale gae
Raj-are vo gurgaon kyon chala gaya tum yahan ai ho vo bhi to tumhare sath aa sakta tha
Nia-haan aa to sakta tha par unhe kuch kam tha
Raj-ok
Suriji-acha ab ai sab chado aur mess wich chalo tuanu garma garam paranthe khilata hoon
Nia-paranthe pata nahin kitna time ho gaya parante khae hue
Suriji-oh to thik hai putar aj mere hath ka parantha kha

(they all r going to d mess par announcement hoti hai ki sabko hall me report karna hai)
raj-abhi
neev-chal dekhte hai
sab hall me gather hote hai
bc-ap log sovh rahe honge ki mene apko yahan kyon bulaya hai to mein aplogo ko bata dun ki mene ap logon ko ye batane ke lie bulaya hai ki capt. Rajveer singh shekhawat ki wife aaj se kma me rahin gi so plzz welcome mrs.naina rajveer singh shekhawat.
(naina aur raj dono bc ke paas jate hai)
and sare cadets ek dusre ko dekh rahe hote hai aur bol grahe hote hai
capt. Rajveer is married capt. Rajveer married hai
pooja-sharukh ki kajol uske saath hai
ud-dude capt. Ne to kabhi nahin bataya ki vo married hai
ali-ab jante hai naa ud bhaivo apni personal life share karna pasand nahin karte
ud-hmmmmm u r right dude
(us waqt huda vahan nahi tha actually use pehele cadets ki nainr ki claas thi huda behosh ho ke gir gaya tha to vo is waqt infirmary me tha)
bc-silence
bc-I axpect that u all will give a nice welcome to mrs.naina rajveer singh shekhawat
bc-dismiss cadets

Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: yyyy
👏 good...continue soon

thanx. i think u have replied for d first time .right?

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Riya

@Riya_16

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#88

nice update😊.continue soon👏👏👏

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#89

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

I loved their teasing!!!! 😆

Karan Gurgaon chale gaya!!!!Oh well its ok!!! 😊

I loved Pooja's dialogue Shahrukh ki Kajol uske saath hai!!!! 😳

But where is Aalekh?? 😕 😕 😕

Huda nahi tha ush waqt!!!! 😉 😉 😉 Matlab usse pata nahi hai ki Naina kaun hai!!! 😉 This is going to be fun!!!! 😆