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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
caught up wid ur fic...its awesome......
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lipi

thanx lipi for reading and liking my fic

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karishma

@KRIZZY

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

here's the next part

(in raj & naina's room)
nia-to kafi sare dost bana lie hai tumne
raj-tum nahin thi naa to koi to tumhara subsi chahie tha naa aur ek to tumhari kami poori kar nahin sakta soo
nia-choo chweet of u
raj-smiles
nia- oho abhi to mujhe apna saman unpack bhi karna hai
raj-hmm...iska matlab mujhe tumhari help karni padegi right
nia-are tum itne inttelegent ho mujhe to pata hi nahin tha 😆
raj-shut up now shuru karen
nia-sure go on capt.
raj-are tum kahan ja rahi ho
nia-wash room fresh hone
raj-are fresh bad me hona pehele saman unpack karo
nia-my sweet -2 capt. tum karo naa me fresh ho ke ati hoon
(naina wash room chali jaati hai)
raj-kabhi nahin sudhregi par naina tumhari inhi baton par hi to main fida hoon (smiles and starts unpacking naina's bag use bag me ek photo milti hai or vo us photo ko dekh kar blush karta hai vo unki shaadi ki photo hoti hai aur tabhi naina wash room se ati hai)
nia-kya dekh rahe ho
raj-yahi ki jis din hamari shaadi thi hum kitne nervous the
nia-hmmm.....nervous bhi or main to tab bhi shock se bahar nahin ai thi
raj-hahahaha yaad hai mujhe us din hamari shaadi ki baat sun kar behosh hi ho gai thi
nia-mr. rajveer tum to jaise bilkul thik the mera fav. flower pot tod diya tha tumne.
raj-hahaha janta hoon

FLASH BACK
we see a handsome tall young guy entering a big bunglow that's raj this is the pic of d bunglow
raj-hey anybody here
raj's dadi-are rajveer tu aa gaya
raj-yes dadi me aa gaya apko ohir se tang karne
nia-dadi ye lijie apki davai or dadi ye to
rd(raj's dadi)-rajveer hai mera pota
nia-hi i am nia i mean naina dad apke bare me bohot bate karti hai
raj-really vaise aap kon
nia-me apke best frend karan ki choti behen
raj-oh to tum vahi naina ho oh god me tunhe pehechan nahin paya tumhare bare me to itna suna hai ki mere kan pak jate the par karan ki baten nahin khatam hoti thi tumhare bare me
naina-hmm.. so achi bate ya buri
raj- dono
(karan is karan mehera popularly knon as vedant of virrudh and karan of pari hoon main)
karan- are tum meri behen ke sach yahan khare ho aunty vahan tumhe dhoond rahi hai
raj- oho tu to or bhi smart ho gaya
good ab thora bohot mera computater lag raha hai
karan- acha thik hai ab pehele ja or aunty se mil le
raj- hello ma hai dad
ma- kaisa hai beta tu maine tujhe bohot miss kiya
dad-really bete we missed u very much
raj- ab plz ye emotional scene band karie ab apko pata hai me yahan 2 months ki chuti aya hoon
dad -are beta ye to bohot achi bat hai
raj-achi baat to hai ab dekhnaa me kitna maza karta hoon
ma- are beta tum naina se mile
raj- ji maa me naina or karan dono se mil chuka hoon
maa- acha hai aj me teri sari pasand ki chize banaugi
dad- beta mujhe abhi office jana hai i'll catch u later ok
raj- ok dada bye
karan- putting his one hand on raj's shoulder so tu 2 maheene ki chutti ke lie aya hai good
raj-yes ab me tujhe poore 2 mahine tang karoonga
karan-i'm ready
they both hug each other
nia- ab ye hug khatam ho to kya me ao dono se se puch sakti hoon ki app dono cofee lenge
raj- oh i would like to hav coffee vaise bhi apki hath ki bani coffee ke bare main maine bohot suna hai aj try bhi kar lete hai
karan- sis me too
nia- ok bro
raj or karan chat kar rahe hote hain
nia-ye lijie coffee
(raj after siping d coffee)
raj- hey nain coffee is fab tumne to ccd ki coffee ko bhi peeche chor diya
nia- thanx and mere frends mujhe nia bulate hain agar apko lagta hai ki ham frends ban sakte hain to ap mujhe nia bulaiye ga
raj- sure i want to be ur frend nia

newt day
raj- chalo aj baschet ball match ho jae
nia-bilkul
kran- hey guys tum bhool rahe ho ki mujhe bascket ball nahin ata
naina-bro maine apko rules to batae hain naa to app refree ban jao
karan- ok
raj- chalo dekhte hai who is d best
nia- let's see
(phir match shuru ho jata hai or raj beech beech me cheeting karta tha par naina ko koi farak nahin padta tha kyonki vo aju se bhot achi thi bascketball me aise hi din beette gae or jab bhi bascket ball hota tha tab naina hi jitti thi)
ek din raj- karan ke sath ghoom raha tha or naina karan ki gf sanya(sameera of lrl) ke sath
karan-raj tujhse ek bat puchu sach-2 bataega
same ques was asked by sanya
naina-haansame ans by raj
sanya&karan-tu raj/nainase pyaar karti/karta hai naa?
raj&naina-kya?

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Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Hey i just read second part of ur fic right now.
it's too good. 👏
Raj ki biwi hai Naina par dono ki baaton se lagta hi nahi hai dono acche doston ki tarah se fight karte hain. 😉
Raj aur Naina Rahul aur Anjali ki tarah ladte hain from K2H2 . 😆
sab ne welcome kiya un ka. 😊
Naina ki BC se mulakaat kaafi acchi rahi bechari dar k maare bol hi nahi paayi. 😆
Ye Naina kab aayi hai KMA ye batao. 😕
Navin ka naam Neev kaafi laga aur accha hai. 😊 😊
update soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Ye Sanya ka character kaun play kar raha hai pehle ye batao. 😊
Ye mere comments third part k liye hain.
Ye achanak Karan aur Sanya ko ye ques poochne ki kya soojhi? 😡 Jab ki abhi tak ki story se ye pata chalta hai ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. 😉
Vaise kuch to twist hai accha sa.
Update soon.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

hey too good plz update soon but plz post a long part this time plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😕 😊 😉

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

gr8 part.......loved d choice of karan......

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj and Naina seem like best friends!!! 😳 Their convo was very cute!!!! 😆

I loved the choice for Naina's brother and his girlfriend!!!! 😊

Raj and Karan ka friendship and their equation was great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina's basketball match reminded me of K2H2!!!! 😊 😊 😊 They fight just like Rahul and Anjali!!!! 😛 😆

Naina used to win always...great!!!!😊 😛 👏 👏

But suddenly one day un dono se yeh kyun poocha ke they love each other or not?? 😕

Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey i just read second part of ur fic right now.
it's too good. 👏
Raj ki biwi hai Naina par dono ki baaton se lagta hi nahi hai dono acche doston ki tarah se fight karte hain. 😉
Raj aur Naina Rahul aur Anjali ki tarah ladte hain from K2H2 . 😆
sab ne welcome kiya un ka. 😊
Naina ki BC se mulakaat kaafi acchi rahi bechari dar k maare bol hi nahi paayi. 😆
Ye Naina kab aayi hai KMA ye batao. 😕
Navin ka naam Neev kaafi laga aur accha hai. 😊 😊
update soon.

thanks . ya mene bhi fic kuch rahul aur anjali ko soch kar hi banai thi.

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Ye Sanya ka character kaun play kar raha hai pehle ye batao. 😊
Ye mere comments third part k liye hain.
Ye achanak Karan aur Sanya ko ye ques poochne ki kya soojhi? 😡 Jab ki abhi tak ki story se ye pata chalta hai ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. 😉
Vaise kuch to twist hai accha sa.
Update soon.

sanya ka charector kon play kar raha hai mene lkha tha shayan tumne dekha nahin chalo kuch nahin hota aur achanak sanya aur karan ko vo ques puchne ki kyon padi ye tumhe next ud me pata chal jaege.