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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok this is d secind part
naina ne raj ko dekh liya hai aur vo raj ke paas ati hai
naina- hello raj kahan kho gae
raj- haan n n nai naina
naina- haan kya hua r u ok
raj- yes i'm ok par tum
naina- kya
raj- tum to ab or bhi khoobsurat lag rahi ho............tum mere sath kma nahin ja sakti
naina- wat?
raj- haan tum mere sath kma nahin ja sakti
naina- par kyu? kya hua
raj- tum mere sath kma nahin ja sakti kyunki kyunki tumhe dekh kar to mere hi hosh ud gae hai to kma ke male cadets to pagal hi ho jaenge or main nahi chahata ki koi tumpe line mare
naina-hahahaha........ raj tum bilkul nahi badle sbhi bhi vaise ke vaise budhu ho
raj-blushes 😳
naina- ab chale
raj- sure

(in d car)
raj- did u missed me
naina- ye koi sawal hai ofcourse i missed u ek hi to time paas hai mere paas
raj- acha to me tumhara time pas hu haan
naina-ya mera cute sa bhola sa time paas
raj- oho good achievment raj 2 saal me tu cule or bhola dono ban gaya
naina- jyada uchlo matme to timepaas ko sute and bhola kehe rahi thi time paas karvane vale insaan ko nahin
raj- naina tum koi moka nahin chorne vali meri tang khichne kaa
naina-nop
(they both laughted at dis)
naina-ek bat batao raj
raj- do bate pucho naina
naina-raj
raj-aha sorry bolo
naina- vo mc jiske bare me tum apni mails me likhte the kya vo abhi bhi kma me hai kya?
raj-unfortunately yes
naina-cha hai jo usne tumhe itne tang kiya hai na ab dekhne me uski kya halat banati hon or uska cha wala maza nahin chakka diya na to mera naam bhi naina nahin
raj- oho itna confidence iska matlab ki ab mc toh gone
naina-blkul
raj-my chweet nia
nia-raj vaise serioudly yaar i really missed u
koi bascketball me harne wala nahin tha naa
raj-got emotional when said that she missed him but when continued it
raj-naina harta main nahin harti tum thi
naina-no tun harte the
(and the fight goes on)

raj- acha ye baad me dekhenge kon harta the or kon jitta tha kma aa gaya hai chalo
nia-wow raj kma to abhi bhi vaisa hi hai jaise 2 saal pehele tha
raj-hmm...
nia-raj hame pehele bc se milna padega kya
raj-milna to padega
naina-hmm chalo

(in bc's room)
raj-capt. rajveer singh shekhawat reporting sir.
bc-at ease capt.
raj-sir ye naina hai meri meri wife
bc-oh hello mrs. shekhawat
nia-hello imean good morning i mean good afternoon sir
(she was a bit confused abit nervous and a bit exited deep in her heart)
(by seeing her face raj was smilling ang gigling inside)and naina was looking at raj with i'll kill u look
bc-it happens mrs.shekhawat u can leave noew capt.
(they went out of d room)
nia-tumhe hasi aa rahi hai
me vahan forget it tum to aise hi ho
raj- ok baba i'm sorry
nia-it's ok ab chale
raj-chaliye

(every body was looking at them as except navin, shalini, abhi and suriji nobody nows dat raj was married)
(they reached there room and they saw all of d people knows about d marrige ar waiting for them outsing d room )
nia-ye saab kon hain
raj-ye saab mere frends hai
navin- yes ham iske frends hai or main hoon capt. navin singh alluwalia u can call me neev
nia-hi
shalini i'm dr.shalini and u can call me shalu
abhi-aur humhe capt.abhimanyu rai chuhan and u can call me abhi
suriji-and myself subedar. sukhvinder suri aur ae sare menu suriji bulande ne te tusi vi menu suriji bula sakde ho
nia-bilkul maim tuanu ai hi bulavan gi
suriji- are twanu to vadi changi punjabi andi ae naina puttar
raj- vo suriji naina punjabi hi thi
suji- oh to chal tu ja kuch der aran kar le thak gai hogi ane lanbe safar ich
nia- thik hai
(sab phir apni apni clases me chale jate hai oer raj naina apne room me)

guys sorry for late ud
or is fic me naina ka naam naina mehera tha

plz comment
Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
awesome too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rituka7

too one
update soon........

thanx dear

i'll ud d next part tommorow

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

thanx for d wonderfull reply i'll ud d next part tommorow

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ki shaadi ho chuki hai!!!!Aur kisi ko pata nahi!!!! 😛

Isse kehte hai dramatic entry heroine ki aur teri bhi toh the world of fics!!!!Welcome!!!! 😊

Par aisa kya ho gaya ke Raj ek dum sab ke saamne achanak aise jawab de raha tha!!!! 😕 😕 😕

Raj ne Abhi se kaha ke Naina ko bhabhi na bulaye!!!!Kaafi darta hai Naina se!!!!! 😆

I loved Naina's saree!!!! 😊 😊 😊 Raj toh pura fida ho gaya usse dekh kar!!! 😳

They were friends naa!!!Great!!!Their convo was very sweet!!!!And Naina is very naughty!!!! 😆

So Naina is not Navin's sister!!!!Naina Mehra!!!

MC ki ab bandh bajne waali hai!!! 😆 [:D/] [:D/]

BC ke saamne Naina nervous ho gayi aur Raj has raha tha!!! 😆

Naina finally met everyone!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Ab dekhte hai Raj ke saath uski equation exactly hai kaisi!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey just read your fanfic.....

It is very cute and interesting 😳 👏 ..... its s very differnt story line....but seems quite exciting....

soo please continue....we are all waiting.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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caught up wid ur fic...its awesome......
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lipi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj ki shaadi ho chuki hai!!!!Aur kisi ko pata nahi!!!! 😛

Isse kehte hai dramatic entry heroine ki aur teri bhi toh the world of fics!!!!Welcome!!!! 😊

Par aisa kya ho gaya ke Raj ek dum sab ke saamne achanak aise jawab de raha tha!!!! 😕 😕 😕

Raj ne Abhi se kaha ke Naina ko bhabhi na bulaye!!!!Kaafi darta hai Naina se!!!!! 😆

I loved Naina's saree!!!! 😊 😊 😊 Raj toh pura fida ho gaya usse dekh kar!!! 😳

They were friends naa!!!Great!!!Their convo was very sweet!!!!And Naina is very naughty!!!! 😆

So Naina is not Navin's sister!!!!Naina Mehra!!!

MC ki ab bandh bajne waali hai!!! 😆 [:D/] [:D/]

BC ke saamne Naina nervous ho gayi aur Raj has raha tha!!! 😆

Naina finally met everyone!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Ab dekhte hai Raj ke saath uski equation exactly hai kaisi!!!



thanx dear for d great reply and tumhare sare ques ke ans tumhe jald hi mil jaenge

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey just read your fanfic.....

It is very cute and interesting 😳 👏 ..... its s very differnt story line....but seems quite exciting....

soo please continue....we are all waiting.

thanx for reading my fic and liking it

i'll ud very soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

superb 👏 .cont soon...

thanx

i'll ud very soon

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