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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh thats really an awesome one⭐️ such a sweet one😛😉 why amber want karan out of her life😕 and who is this abhimanyu😡 and rahul di know everything😲😛 waoh mind blowing😉 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉 sorry😳 for late reply😳 plz forgive me😳


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Posted: 16 years ago
next part updated :D
*****edited*****

PART 37

RECAP: everyone singing n dancing on soni soni '''''..@ da end karan was using ambers laptop n found sumthing

Karan: I don't think mujhe ye kholna chahiye'''.but yaar kuch nahi hota khool leta ho chupke se'''.

N he opened that folder

There was sum mc word files he opened them

He started reading

HI!!! I m amber I study in 7th standard I have one sis I have the most

precious thing in this whole wide world that is FAMILY!!

My best friend name is roshni I lyk her sooo much she is sooo sweet we both talk a lot infact I talk a lot'''''''''''.

Wow!!!! Today is the most happy day of my life I got first position in class everyone was happy''..soooooooooooooo happy including me''''''''''..

(he kept on reading)

Ajj mera 9th class ka pehla paper tha buhat acha ho gaya! I loved it I hope keh result bhi utna hi acha aae''''''''''

Ajj mera result aa gaya I m very sad I just missed A1 by two marks I got 418 n A1 grade starts from 420 I cried a lot''''''''..

Then he kept on reading it for soooooooooooooooooo long n read her whole history n now the main part''''..first day @ sanjeevani!!!

Mai ajj buhat nervous the ajj mera pehla din tha sanjeevani mai sanjeevani is a hospital jaha mai internship ker rahe ho I joined it late but sanjeevani ppl r very sweet they allowed me to join from mid

The day started

Asusual subah subah ankh khole then bath liye aur phir taxi li aur sanjeevani gae enter hone se pehle buhat buaht dar laga then pata nahi kuch acha laga kinda satisfying phir dr.keerti ne baki sab se milaya dr.armaan,ridhimma,muskaan,anjali,atul aur rahul I loved them all they all were sooooooo friendly n family lyk

Phir dr.keerti ne mujhe ek file di aur mai woh read ker rahe the my hairs were disturbing me aur asusual maine pen pakra aur baal bandh liye phir aisa laga hawa chale aur kuch kuch hoa

Karan was reading all this n expecting that she would write sumthing bad abt him but he was quite shocked to read all that

Then mere baal khudhi khool gae aur jaise hi mai muri ek larka waha khara tha he was using my pen to fill sum form aisa laga jaise pore zindagi ek isi lamhe ke liye ji rahe the mai dil kiya use waqt us larke ko gale laga lo uske sweet smile aur woh happy face mai use kabhi nahi bhula paonge woh kuch dore pe khara tha as he started walking towards me pata nahi kyun mere dil ne kaha keh ye mere liye nahi hai aur mai use faltoo mai larne lag gae I donno maine aisa kyun kiya but mujhe aisa karna para'''''''''.

Karan: ye larke pagal hai!!! Pehle din se hi pyaar kerte the n she never told me its really not fair!! Ok aage parhte hai

Ajj ka din mere zindagi ka sab se bura din tha ajj mera aur armaan ka accident hoa ajj mujhe sab samajh aa gaya keh upper wale ka ishara kis taraf tha kyun mai karan ko sab nahi bata pae kyun use humesha larte rahe mai use kabhi nahi bataonge kabhi nahi marte dam tak nahi keh mai use pyaar kerte ho''''''''..ye humesha ek SECRET rahe ga''''''..ajj dr.keerti ne mujhe bata diya

Karan: aise kounse baat hai jisne amber ko mujhse door ker diya

He started thinking

Karan: I guess aage kuch likha ho

Ajj dr.keerti ki sagae the everything was perfect lekin maine khud hi karan se kaha keh woh mere paas aae aur gana gae lekin jab woh paas aya pata nahi kyun mai haar gar'..pore tarha haar gae''''dil kiya use sab kuch sach sach batado'mai uske kabhi nahi ho sakte mai jab tak uske zindagi mai rahonge humesha use dukh hi donge there is no use of me in his life

Karan was tired

So he closed all folders

N went to sleep

Armaan n ridhimma were bzy in setting the home n cleaning everything

They were very tired so they went to sleep

Subah ho gai mamo!!!!

@ ridhimmas house

Armaan: ridhimma'.hey come on get up chalo warna duty ke liye late ho jaenge

Ridhimma was sitting on sofa n was sleeping

Ridhimma: subah ho gae???

Armaan: nahi mai pagal ho jo chila raha ho😆

Ridhimma: armaan'''baki sab uth gae??

Armaan: nahi abhi unhe uthana baki hai

Ridhimma: acha phir mai thore deer soo jate ho tab tak tum sab ko uthao

Armaan: come on washroom mai jao warna tumhe apne baho mai utha ke le jaoga!!!😲

Ridhimma: ok ok I m going😊

Armaan: come on ab tum sab bhi uth jao!!!!😡😡

To everyone

Scene shift to ambers home

Amber woke up

Amber: ye mai'''..

Putting her hand on her head

Karan also woke up

Amber recalled everything

Amber: kal'''.

Karan: haan woh kal tum sab ne bhang pe li the aur pata nahi kiy kiya ker rahe tha that's y mai tumhe yaha le aya

Amber became damn tensed n putted blanket aside n went to hall

Karan: hey ruko'''

Amber: kal ka din guzar gaya''.nahi aisa nahi ho sakta''''''mai itne irresponsible nahi ho sakte'''''.😕

N saw sum calenders n sum diaries n sum files

She was very tensed

Karan: lekin mujhe batao to sahe kiya hoa

But she was saying sumthing in low voice

Then karan shaked her

Karan: amber!!!! Amber!!!! Kaho kiya hogaya hai mujhe batao mai tumhara dost ho!

Amber murmured

Karan: bolo amber

Amber had tears in her eyes😭

Amber: karan tum plz abhi yaha se jao plz I beg u'''😕

Karan: ok ok I m going lekin kuch to batao

Amber: tumhe jald hi sab pata chal jaega😲

Karan left

As karan left amber threw all files away

Amber: sab khatam ho gaya!!!! Sab kuch

N sat on floor n started crying

Then her phone rang

Amber: hello!!

Dr.keerti: hello amber'''..kaha the tum'maine kal tumhara buhat wait kiya but tum aae hi nahi isi liye woh wapis chale gae

Amber started crying

Dr.keerti: hey just don't cry sab theek ho jae ga''.abhi tum jalde sanjeevani aa jao then hum baat kerte hai😲

Amber: yes ma'am I m coming

Karan listened all these things

Scenes shift to ridhimmas home

Ridhimma: come on ab to uth jao sab!!!!

Everyone sleeping on sofa

Armaan: ridhimma ye aise nahi mane ge just a second mai abhi ata ho!

He took a bucket full of water n just pour it on them

N started laughing

Sab jaldi se uth gae

Anjali: AAAAAA armaan ye kaisa mazaak hai???😡😡

Armaan: tum logo ne waise bhi nahana tha to maine nahla diya

Muskaan: lekin hum yaha kab aae????

Ridhimma: kal bhang ke nashe mai kiya kiya ker rahe the''''..abhi jalde chalo warna hitler dante ge

Rahul: haa haa chalo!

They all went to hospital n their they changed their clothes

Sab ke sar mai dard ho rahe the

In locker room

Everyone was there except amber

Everyone was standing quite

Anjali: ajj toh mera sar paka phat jae ga!

Atul: anjali tum se pehle mera phate ga'''.

Amber came in while calling sum1

Everyone: hi amber!

Amber didn't replied

Amber: just a sec. guyz

Amber: dekhiye app samajhne ki koshish kare mera unse milna buhat zarori hai''.plz plz mere ek baar unse baat kerwa de'''''..hello hello!!!

N then she sat on bench holding her head

Armaan: kis ko call ker rahe the

Amber: kuch nahi bas aise hi

Karan in his heart: zaroor kuch baat hai mai pata lagwa ke rahonga

Announcement: sabhi interns apne apne duties pe report kare!!

Everyone went to their rspectve duties

Ridhimma was just passing the coridoor she saw armaan

With a lady wearing skirt n armaan is touching her shoulders n trying to feel her comfortable

Ridhimma felt very bad after seeing it

She went to nurse station n paged armaan

Armaan came to nurse station ridhimma was standing there

Ridhimma was behaving normally

Ridhimma: hey armaan'''

Armaan: hi! Tumne mujhe yaha bulaya hai?

Ridhimma: haan! Kyun tum kahe bzy the kiya?

Armaan: nahi ''..woh mai bas pat lab se kuch medicines lane gaya tha!

Ridhimma understood that armaan is lying

Armaan: ok ab mujhe kahe jana hai mai tumse aad mai milta ho bye'''

Ridhimma: armaan tumne ajj mujhse jhoot bola!!

After duties

Everyone went to their respective homes

@ ridhimmas home

Anjali was trying to call abhimanyu

@ last he picked it up

Anjali: hey abhi I was trying 2 talk 2 u for sooooooooooo long

Abimanyu: hey anjie!

Anjali: kal tum ghar kyun nahi aae?

Abhimanyu: anjali listen I wanna say sumthing 2 u

Anjali: ya go ahead

Abhimanyu: anjie kal mai tumhare ghar aya tha aur tum sab kuch nashe mai lag rahe the

Anjali: haa woh kal by mistake humne bhang pe li the!

Abhimanyu: lekin bhang pe ke sach bool rahe the tum sab

Anjali: kiya matlab''''..seedhe seedhe bolona

Abhimanyu: listen anjie I m not ur type im not the right man 4 u

Anjali: tum ajj aise baate kyun ker rahe ho?

Abhimanyu: coz maine tumhara right man dekh liya hai!

Anjali: who is he??

Abhimanyu: dr.atul joshi!!!

Anjali: wat???? R u crazy'..atul is just a friend!

Abhimanyu: he loves u

Anjali: crap!

Abhimanyu: no I m serious'''''kal jab mai tumhare ghar aya I saw keh atul tumhare samne confess ker raha tha n u also love him tum mano ya na mano u love him n I want both of u to be together

Anjali: but tum??

Abhimanyu: mai kal America jaa raha ho aur shayad wahe settle ho jao

Anjali: lekin ye sab itne jalde''''.

Abhimanyu: listen anjie u r a darling aur atul humesha tumhe apne paas apne kareeb rakhe ga just promise me one thing

Anjali: mmm''..

Abhimanyu: love him till the end!

Anjali: I will'

Abhimanyu:aur kiya pata mujhe bhi America mai koi mil jae!

Anjali: I really hope so

Abhimanyu: bye!

Anjali: bye

Anjali thought of atul for sum tym

Then scene shift to muskaan she Is calling sum1

Muskaan: tere file''.tera patient to file mere paas kaise aa gae??

Rahul: tu bas check kern a

Muskaan: rahul tu bhi na kitna kaam kerwata hai mujhse

Rahul: ok ab baate mat er file dhond!

Muskaan: ok ok dhond rahe hona

As she opened a cupboard many files fell down

Muskaan: are yeh to gir gae!

Rahul: to utha na!

Muskaan: rahul mai tujhe thore deer baad call karo!

Rahul: ok Ill be waiting

Muskaan lift sum files as she turned one PRIVATE N CONFIDENTIAL was written on it

Muskaan: yeh kiya hai lets c

As she opened

She became tensed

Muskaan: yeh toh'''''''''

Scene shift to ambers room

Amber: plz plz plz I beg u app mujhe unse baat kerne dijiye jitney paise chahe mang lijiye but plz lemme talk wid him

She saw muskaan coming there

Amber: mai appko baad mai call kerte ho

Muskaan: hey amber kiya hoa buhat pareshaan ho

Amber: nahi woh kuch nahi bas aise hi

Muskaan: amber mujhe tumse kuch pochna hai!!!

Amber: haa bolo!

Muskaan: amber ye kiya hai?

She gave her that file

Amber: kuch nahi ye mere patient ki file hai

Muskaan: amber tumhe mai andhe nazar ate ho'''..ispe clear cut tumhara naam likha hai!

Amber: nahi who'''.

Muskaan: amber mujhe plz sach batao'.ye sab kiya hai?plz amber plz

Amber turned to opposite side

Muskaan started crying

Muskaan: ok yane keh tum mujhe apne friend nahi samajhte ok mai ye ghar chor ke ja rahe ho

As she turned

Amber: tum to sirf ye ghar chhor ke jaa rahe ho mai ye duniya chor ke jaa rahe ho

Muskaan stopped there

Amber: haa ajj tumne job hi is file mai parha sab sach hai

Muskaan turned

Muskaan: to kiya tumhe'''.

Amber: I have lungs cancer

Muskaan: lekin ye sab kaise'''''.kounsi stage hai??

Amber: 3rd

Muskaan: no this cant happen''''''tumhare saath ye sab nahi ho sakta! This really cant happen

Amber: humesha woh nahi hota jo hum chahte hai u have to understand this

Muskaan: lekin tum mujhe aise akela chor ke kaise jaaa sakte ho

Amber came near her

Amber: muskaan nothing s over kuch khatam nahi hoa tumhare zindagi abhi shuroo hoe hai

N muskaan started crying louder

Amber: ek baat kaho tu rote hoe bilkul bhi ache nahi lagte

Muskaan: lekin tune mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?

Amber: batane ka moka hi nahi mila'''''tu itne khush the to mai apne problem bata ke tujhe dukhe nahi kerna chahte the'''cha lab tu ja aur so ja its really very late

N she turned

Muskaan: lekin karan???

Amber: muskaan u have to promise me jab tak mai ho tu karan ko kuch nahi bata sakte tujhe mere kasam hai humare dosti ki kasam hai infact kisi ko kuch nahi batae ge ok! Plz

Muskaan: aisa kaise amber'''''..

Amber: use agar sab pata chal gaya to woh bhi toot jae ga aur mai use tota hoa nahi dekh sakte mai sab ko happy happy chor ke jana chahte ho sad sad nahi

Then scene shifted to ridhimmas room

Ridhimma: armaan tumne ajj jhoot kyun bola!!! I just don't lyk it tum sach bool dete to kya ho jata but kyun????

N she was crying

Ye raat sabhi ladkiyo ke liye buhat mushkil the

Muskaan jo ab tak amber ke cancer wale baat ko maan nahi rahe the

Anjali jisse abhimanyu ne ye bataya tha keh atul use pyaar kerta hai lekin woh uske zubaan pe ye baat kaise lae?

Ridhimma, jo ajj buhat hi dukhi the coz she watched armaan wid sum other girl

Aur amber jo chahte hoe bhi karan ko kuch nahi bata sakte

Woh raat pore saal ke baraber the

Precap:

Ridhimma in the b court recalling all previous memories n wat happened yesterday

N armaan came there but as he came ridhimma left from there😭😭

Muskaan is heartbroken😭

Karan dr.keerti se amber ki sachae poch raha hai

@ sum place

Omi: amber kabhi tumhare nahi ho sakte karan!!😕

N kara beat omi very badly😲

The episode ends😃

Hope u all like it plz do read comment/critisize😃

PART 38

Recap: muskaan came to know abt ambers lung cancer n armaan tell a lie to ridhimma

Next day starts

Subah subah asusual ridhimma jogging ker rahe hote hai she was physically running but mentally she was sumwhere else she was thinking abt y armaan told her a lie

As she reached basketball court she smiled n entered there

She started dribbling a ball n remembered when they met be4 going to medical college (first scene of this ff) n then suddenly this thought came in her mind

Ridhimma: armaan mujhse jhoot bool raha tha woh patlab mai nahi balkeh kisi lark eke saaath tha'''..armaan ab tak nahi badla!!!! Who kabhi badal hi nahi sakta''''''

As she was thinking all this armaan entered

Ridhimmas back was towards him n she was dribbling ball

Armaan came 4rm baq n hugged him

Ridhimma turned

Armaan: hey kiya hoa??

Ridhimma looked quite surprising

Ridhimma: nothing bas woh mai ghar jaa rahe the

Armaan: itne jalde''''.lemme remind u hospital 1 n half hour ke baad jana hai

Ridhimma in a rude way

Ridhimma: I know'''.

Armaan: hoa kiya hai tumhe itne ukhre ukhre kyun ho??

Ridhimma: nothing bas ab mai jaa rahe ho di ko uthana hai aur tiyaar bhi hona hai

As she went

Armaan hold her hand

Ridhimma: armaan ajj nahi!.........

N left from there

Armaan: isse kiya ho gaya????

He was very confused

@ sanjeevani

Locker room

Everyone was there except armaan n rahul

Atul: yaar kal ki bhang kitne strong the na'''

Anjali: ya

Atul: mera sir to ab tak dard ho raha hai

Amber was thinking of sumthing else she came in senses wid a jerk

Amber: bhang milae kisne the???

Anjali: pata nahi

Rahul was holding a book of Agatha Christie

N was just lost in it

Muskaan: oe'..

N hitted him

Rahul: oe ruk na yaar bas murderer announce hone hi wala hai

Muskaan: band ker ye

N closed his book

Rahul: tune mere bookband ker di''''''''woh bhi bookmark ke bagher ab mai kaise dhondo ga '..mai tujhse baat hi nahi kerta

Muskaan try to convince him but his face got red

Armaan: oe rahul ye tune kounse nae book start ke hai

Rahul: ye Agatha Christie ki hai

Atul: agar ata Christie'''''.ye kaisa naam hai?

N everyone laughed

Rahul: agar ata Christie nahi Agatha Christie'''..kher choro''.armaan tu ye book zaroor parhna

Announcement: sabhi interns apne apne duties pe report kare!!!!

Everyone went to their duties

Anjali was thinking wat abhimanyu said yesterday abt atul n was closely observing him n she get to know how much he cared 4 him but she never noticed it all

In cafe

Muskaan was trying to tell rahul abt ambers cancer but he was angry from her for closing his book

Muskaan: acha ye wala page tha

Rahul nodded his head in no

Muskaan: ye wala

He again nodded no!!

Muskaan ka temper ab high ho gaya

Muskaan: oe bhar mai gaya tu aur ye tere book

Rahul: muskaan tujhe ho kiya gaya hai ajj se pehle maine tujhe itna preshan nahi dekha

Muskaan: wahe to mai batane ki koshish ker rahe ho keh

Rahul: are karan''''..aa na beth

They all sat

Muskaan was trying to tell rahul but he was talking to karan

Amber saw the whole situation from a distance

Amber went there n sat wid them

Rahul: haan ab bolo muskaan kiya keh rahe the tum

Amber stared @ her

Muskaan: kuch nahi bas awae hi'''

As they all left from there

Karan directly went to dr.keertis cabin

Karan: may I come in maam

Dr.keerti: yes aye dr.karan

She was bzy in reading sum files

Karan: dr.keerti mujhe amber ki file chahiye the

After listening this her eyebrows raised

Keerti: kyun???

Karan: kyunki tab uska case maine sambhala than a wto abhi use se madad chahiye the

Keerti: mai apko woh file nahi de sakte

Karan: magar kyun dr.keerti??? interns ke liye porane file read kerna allowed haina

Keerti: haa hai but mai amber ki permission ke bagher uske file kisi ko nahi donge now u can go now

Karan ko ab paka shak ho gaya keh kuch toh garbar hai

As he went out

Dr.keerti called amber

Keerti:hi amber ''''..

N told her everything

Amber: ye karan ka kuch kerna hi parega!!!!!

Ridhimma in sum ward

Ridhimma: sister ye file dr.keerti ko de dijiye ga

Nurse: ok doctor

As she was abt to turn she again saw that girl with armaan armaan was laughing n having gr8 tym wid her

As armaan saw ridhimma

Ridhimma pretended that she have not watched him

In corridor

Armaan: hey ridhimma!

Ridhimma while reading sum file

Ridhimma: haa bolo

Armaan: ridhimma problem kiya hai???

Ridhimma: kuch bhi to nahi

Armaan: jhooti

Ridhimma: nahi armaan sach mai koi problem nahi hai

Armaan: to subah se kaha the fire escape mai bhi nahi aae

Ridhimma: haan woh dr.keerti ne bula liya tha

Armaan: jhooti!!

Ridhimma: kiya ye jhooti jhooti laga rakh hai mai koi jhooti nahi ho

Armaan: its fine mai toh bas mazak ker raha tha

Ridhimma: zindagi mazak nahi hai aur na hi humara rishta

Armaan: ridhimma ab batao bhi '''''.kya problem hai???

Ridhimma: I hav to go

Armaan: haa ye buhat bare problem hai

N she went out ov there

Everyone in locker room

Rahul muskaan bzy in fighting

Anjali bzy in noticing atul

Amber is standing still

Ridhimma is doing sumthing wid her locker

Armaan is bzy staring @ her

Karan is reading sum files

Amber: yaar ye bhang kisne milae the???

Anjali: tujhe kiya hoa ek dum se??

Amber: mujhe us insaan ka naam chahiye jisne mere zindagi badal ke rakh de

Ridhimma: zindagi badal ke rakh di?????

Amber: bas tum log us ka naam pata kerwao

Armaan: yaar y don't v party tomorrow

Atul: gr8 idea yaar

Atul: anjali tum chalo gi??

Anjali: jaha tum waha mai

Atul raised his eyebrows

Rahul: im in too

Armaan: good toh kal is done

Then everyone left

@ ridhimmas home

Anjali: (calling her servant) ramu kaaka( I cant think of any other''.lolXxX)

Anjali: ramu kaa

Ramu kaka: bolo bitiya

Anjali: holi wale din dhodh mai bhang kisne milae the??

Ramu kaka: mujhe khud nahi pata lekin ye baat hai us din karan sahib aae the yaha aur ek glass ke saath kuch ker rahe the phir jab apne kaha keh ye thanda nahi hai tab maine sare glasses jug mai ulta diya

Anjali: ohhhhh''''..thank u ab app jao

Anjali called amber

Anjali: hey amber

Amber: haan bolo anjie

Anjali: ull be thrilled to know that who did it!

Amber: oh really''.kisne kiya tha ye sab??

Anjali: DR.KARAN NE!!!!!

Amber felt sooooooo bad

Amber: ok thanx

Amber started crying

Next day

Sham ho gae

Everyone went to that specific place armaan told them

Armaa: ajj aae ga maza a bap dekhiya ga dr.ridhimma ajj kiya kiya hota hai

Precap: karan beating omi soooo badly(I know I know this part was to be done in this part but kiya karo frame mai fit hi nahi aa raha tha I promise next part mai paka)

Under limelight ridhimma n armaan were sitting

Ridhimma: I wanna go armaan''.bye

Armaan grabbed her towards him n bent on his knees

Atul anjali standing in sum garden kinda place taking

And the episode ends

Hope u all liked it I know its too early to post next part but actual thing is I have fever today n flu as well so I was having a holiday that's y I wrote the next part

Plz do comment/criticize

Take care

Love amber

PART 39

Precap: ridhimma armaan ka jhoot pakar lete hai but use batate nahi hai keh use sab pata chal chukka hai lets c aage kiya hota hai?

Everyone is very excited for tonights party

Muskaan went for the place of party wid muskaan n amber was also sumwhere else

Karan acalled muskaan

Karan: hi muskaan

Muskaan: hi karan bol kiya baat hai?

Karan: woh amber ne mujhe patient no.7 ki file dene the

Muskaan: oh woh to ghar pe nahi hai

Karan: I know mai tumhare ghar ke baher khara ho….actually its quite really important

Muskaan: ok to welcome mat ke neeche ghar ki chabiya pare hai ander jake lelo………..aisa karo pehle amber ko call ker ke poochlo

Karan: ok mai ker leta ho

Muskaan: kahe ye phir se koi shararat to nahi kerne jar aha………(looking up) ya rabba plz is baar kuch kharab mat kerna)

The party place!

Armaan is wearing a perfect black suit n a pair of jeans n normal blue or black joggers specifically(coz his yellow shoes were looking disasterious)

Ridhimma wearing a black suit the one which is upto the knee that frock kinda sorry don't remember its name

Muskaan wearing a red salwar suit wid perfect jewellery

Anjali wearing a simple but gorgeous white dress

Rahul wearing…………….. hmmmmmmmmmm…………….aaaa………………….clothes :D lolz……………

Amber wearing a white salwar suit wid silver coloured border

Karan wearing a white suit n fully white white ban ke aya hai

Anjali armaan ridhimm n atul r just formally talking

Ridhimma is looking quite tensed

Then muskaan enters n rahool n karan too

Everyone greet them

Ridhimma said quietly

Ridhimma: armaan mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

As the music was very loud

Armaan: kiya bool rahe ho kuch sunae nahi de raha

Ridhimma: ARMAAN MUJHE TUMSE KUCH BAAT KERNE HAI

Atul: COME ON GUYZ DJ NE MUZIC HUMARE LIYE HI BHARAYA HAI TAKEH HUM DANCE FLOOR PE UTRE

Armaan: OK LETS GO

As they reached dance floor some music starts n guess which 1 is dat my very newly favourite one…………….LOVE MERA HIT HIT

Firstly sum music

So everyone gather on dance floor n perform sum steps

Then armaan start singing

Armaan for ridhimma while ridhimma is just standing:

Dekha tujhe dekha mene hua mein to crazy
Tauba Meri Tauba meri kudi hai to sexy
Aaja meri bahon mein tu aaja baby love me

aa aaa aaa

Rahul for muskaan:
Dekha tujhe dekha mene hua mein to crazy
Tauba Meri Tauba meri kudi hai to sexy
Aaja meri bahon mein tu aaja baby love me

aa aaa aaa

rahul armaan for muskaan n ridhimma:
Mujhe tu zara si
Haan is dil mein entry de
Chupa le yun mujhko na rahe koi exit


Hai love mera hit hit soniye
To phir kaise khit pit soniye
To baby badi fit fit soniye
Na kar aise khit pit
khit pit

Anjali singing this while atul is talking to sum1 else:
Ek bas tu hi meri pheli pheli arzoo hai
Tu hi meri aakhri tamana
Naam bas tera mere dil pe likha hai meri
Aaankhon mein basa hai tera sapna


Muskaan for rahul:
Ek bas tu hi meri pheli pheli arzoo hai
Tu hi meri aakhri tamana
Naam bas tera mere dil pe likha hai meri
Aaankhon mein basa hai tera sapna


Atul pretending that he is just fulfilling the need of song but he mean it:
hoa nazar mein
Magar tu dil mein jagah de

Tu jaane bahein
Love koi jaane ka limit

all intern gang dancing on:
Hai love mera hit hit soniye
To phir kaise khit pit soniye
To baby badi fit fit soniye
Na kar aise khit pit
khit pit

Hai love mera hit hit soniye
To phir kaise khit pit soniye
To baby badi fit fit soniye
Na kar aise khit pit
khit pit

Amber enter wid a blow of air

She is wearing a white dress n truly looking too good

Karan standing n staring @ her

Background music:
Dekha tujhe dekha mene hua mein to crazy
Tauba Meri Tauba meri kudi hai to sexy
but as he saw omi standing next to her he became red😡😡

All interns welcumed amber n omi n they joined the dance floor too

N start dancing on:
Dekha tujhe dekha mene hua mein to crazy
Tauba Meri Tauba meri kudi hai to sexy

Aaja meri bahon mein tu aaja baby love me


Amber wid slight twinkle in her eye seeing towards karan:
Janu mein tu janu teri baatein mithe mithe
Per karu kaise karu mein barosha
Badi muskil hai yeh darta yeh dil hai
ho na jaye kahin koi dhoka

Ridhimma behind a pillar wiping her tears:
Janu mein tu janu teri baatein mithe mithe
Per karu kaise karu mein barosha
Badi muskil hai yeh darta yeh dil hai
ho na jaye kahin koi dhoka
armaan grab her n asure her of his love:
Hai Dhoka to khale
Kabhi to ajmale
Jo mene tha kehna
Keh diya bas Thats it!


Hai love mera hit hit soniye
To phir kaise khit pit soniye
To baby badi fit fit soniye
Na kar aise khit pit
khit pit

karan for amber who is standing wid omi:
Dekha tujhe dekha mene hua mein to crazy
Tauba Meri Tauba meri kudi hai to sexy
Aaja meri bahon mein tu aaja baby love me

aa aaa aaa

karan came in between them:
Mujhe tu zara si
Haan is dil mein entry de
Chupa le yun mujhko na rahe koi exit

n then all intern gang end the song wid a BANG:
Hai love mera hit hit soniye!!!!
To phir kaise khit pit soniye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To baby badi fit fit soniye!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Na kar aise khit pit!!!!!!!
khit pit!!!!!!!!

As the song ended

Armaan: haan bolo ridhimma tumhe kuch kehna tha

They both r sitting on a separate table from all other inters

Ridhimma: haan…………….

N her eyes down

Ridhimma: armaan agar tum mujhse pyaar nahi kerte to sedhe se bool dete mai khud hi tumhare zindagi se chale jate😭😭

Armaan: wat😲😲!!!!!!! Ye kiya keh rahe ho ridhimma…………….i DO love u believe me

Ridhimma: woh special ward mai jo patient # 7 ki wife hai……………maine tumhe unke saath dekh liya tha……n its really ok if u love sm1 else😭

Armaan: ridhimma mai tumhe kuch batana chahta ho

Ridhimma is still looking down

Armaan: ridhimma woh mere dids hai

Ridhimma: what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

Armaan: haa

Ridhimma: lekin woh tumne…….kabhi bhi…….

Armaan: I know tumhare dil ma buhat se sawal hai I guess I know all answers my mom n dad r in new York aur hopefully jald hi wapis aa jaenge but jab mai chota tha hum sab yahe india mai the………..mere mom dad mujhse humesha door rahe kabhi mujhe woh pyaar nahi diya jo mai chahta tha phir ek din mai us jail ko chor ke bhag gaya……………..ek woh din tha aur aj ka din hai aj tak kabhi unke shakal bhi nahi dekhe lekin phir ek din dids hospital mai aae mujhe pata chala keh mom dad new York mai hai aur did ski shaadi ho chuke hai but mujhe use koi farq nahi para coz ab mujhe unke nahi tumhare pyaar ki zarorat hai

After saying this he kept silent for a min

Ridhimma started crying😭😭

Ridhimma:I don't deserve u armaan mai buhat bure hai I really don't deserve u😭

After saying this all she just stood up n was abt to leave

But armaan hold her hand

Everyone was now looking @ them n just then the music was off

Armaan went to his knees n just lyk a lil kid

Armaan: ridhimma mujhe pata hai mai pagal ho tumse faltoo mai larta ho tumko tang bhi kerta ho but mai shayad yeh kabhi na keh pao keh mai tumse kitna pyaar kerta ho(are ye toh sab rhyme ho raha hai!!)kabhi nahi bool paonga ke jab tak tumse laro na tab tak din shuroo nahi hota tumhara lal chehra dekha bina neend nahi ate aur…………………I just wanna say I love u will u marry me??

Anjali was damn shocked n everyone else too

N other ppl in club started hooting

SAY YES!!!!😳

@ that moment they both were feeling nothing else but only the luv😳😳

Armaan murmured: say yes😃

Ridhimma nodded her head

Anjali: RIDHIMMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡

N went out

Ridhimma: di app……………

Armaan was still sitting on his knees then he quickly stood up n ran be4 ridhimma

Anjali near her car

Anjali: that's ridicules how can u do this wid me mai tumhahare behan ho mujeh to bata dete I wot have killed u……………

Atul: exactly anjali bilkul sahe keh rahe hai that's…..R I D I C U L E S

Pronounciating ridicules very carefully😆

Anjali: I know I m right………………😡

Muskaan: armaan yeh tum dono ne buhat galat kiya hume to bata dete kamaskam

Ridhimma kabhi muskaan ko samjha rahe hai aur kabhi anjali ko

atul: armaan tune mujhe dhoka diya!?

Everyone: KIYA??????........ewwwwwwww…………….😲🤢

Atul: are dirty minds mera matlab woh nahi tha mere kehne ka matlab tha keh tumne mujhe kyun nahi bataya😆😆

Karan: oh

Amber: ok na anjali ab jo ho gaya use bhool jao its ok aur waise bhi ab to pata chal hi gaya na

Anjali: ab jab armaan use propose ker raha hai tab bataya hai n ur saying its OKjust leave it

N leave from there

Everyone else left anjali n atul left together as atuls bicycles tyre was punctured rahul n muskaan went together n except armaan ridhimma amber karan n omi whos presence is not noticed by any1

Ridhimma: dekho armaan ye tumne kiya ker diya………ab

Armaan: ab shaadi phir……….

Ridhimma: armaan pehle di ko to manao

Armaan: woh to mere bae hath ka khel hai larkiyo ko manana mujhe buhat ache se ata hai

Ridhimma: acha!?

Armaan: haan jaise abhi tumhe manaya………………….

Ridhimma: btw armaan I also love u

N they both hugged

Amber: aham aham…………..bye guyz mai bas itna hi kehne aae the

Scene shift to omis car n amber is going wid him

Karan came there

Karan: amber tum mere saath chalo!

Amber: kyun koi zabardasti hai kiya?

Karan: nahi mujhe kuch kehna hai

Amber: per mujhe nahi sunna bye

As she was abt to sit karan hold her hand quite tightly

Amber: ouch karan…….kiya ker rahe ho

Karan: chalo mere saath

In angry youngh man voice

Omi interrupted

Omi: karan uska hath chor!

Karan: tu koun hota hai bech mai bolne wala chal hat yaha hai

N pushed him

Omi: karan im warning u jus leave her

Amber: leave me karan

Karan stilled continues to grabb her

Omi: KOI LARKI ZABARDASTI TUMHARE NAHI HO SAKTE!!!!

Karan stopped

Omi: haan yahe sachae hai amber ko zabardsti apne saath leke jane se woh tujhse pyaar nahi karege

Amber: no omi………….just stop

Karan left ambers hand

Karan: kiya bola???

Omi: woh tumhare kabhi nahi ho sakte tujhse koi pyaar nahi kerta karan koi nahi aur koi kyun karega tumse pyaar tum bas ek dare hoe pagal insaan ho

N then the fight start

Again my old dialogue

DISH DISH BANG BANG

After a couple of punches karan found a metal rod n attacked omi wid it n blood start coming out of his head

Amber: OMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!what the hell karan ye kiya kiya?????????

Next scene

@ ambers house

Everyone is there except armaan n atul n anjali

Karan is sitting on the sofa n not even a sign of guilty is on his face amber is just walking in front of him everyone is present there

Amber: KIYA ZARORAT THE USSE MARNE KI??????????????😡😡😡

N he didn't answered

Amber: ab agar omi ne police case ker diya to?????????? To jail ho jae ge tumhe ye mbbs ki degree bhi kisi kaam ki nahi rahenge……………

Armaan enter hall

Amber: haan armaan ab omi kaisa hai??

Armaan: under observation hai bleeding kafi zyada ho chuki hai aur ghao kafi gehra hai!

Amber: oh shit! To ab………

Armaan: ab to uske hosh mai an eke baad hi kuch pata chal pae ga lekin ye sab hoa kaise????? Karan answer me

Karan was murmuring sumthing

Amber: are ye kiya bole ga ye bas use jealous tha kyunki woh mera best friend ban gaya tha aur ye nahi

Karan stood up

Karan: amber tum bhi waha the aur tumne dekha keh usne kiya kaha

Ridhimma: lekin kaha kiya usne???

Karan ek do steps aage bharta hai jaha

Jaha amber khare the n went near her

Karan: batado in sab keh waha kiya hoa tha

Amber became a bit tensed

Muskaan was looking worried in fact everyone was tensed

Karan: tum apne dil se pocho aur batao maine jo kiya woh theek tha??

Amber ignored him

Karan hold her shoulders n shaked her

Karan: bolo amber!!!

N went really near to her that he can also feel her breath

Karan: ajj koi natak nahi koi planning nahi koi acting nahi sirf sachai …………..bolo amber jo maine kiya woh sahe tha

Karan saw tears gathering in her eyes

Amber: I DONO!!!😭😭

N went far him

As she was abt very far from him she feeled sumthing stopped her it was her dupatta which got stuck wid his shirt button

Karan: oh really tumhe nahi pata!!!!! Tumhe nahi pata ab tak keh mai tumse kitna pyaar kerne laga ho!!!!!!! Tumhe nahi pata keh mai tumhare bina ji nahi sakta!!!!!!!!!!! Really tumhe ye ab tak nahi samajh mai aya aur tumhare siwa is kamre mai sab ko samajh mai aa gaya

Amber turned

Amber: ye possible nahi hai karan!

Karan: kyun possible nahi hai ……….mai isse possible banao ga na

N started moving towards her

Amber: ye nahi ho sakta karan plz……………plz mujhse door raho I beg u

N leaving her duppatta there left 4rm there

N went to her room

Muskaan: AMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KARAN ye tumne kiya ker diya??????? Tumhe pata nahi hai zyada stress uske liye acha nahi hai use………………

Amber apne room mai chale jate hai n waha andhera hai pora andhera she is just crying there

In hall

Every1 listening carefully to muskaan

Rahul: use………. kiya muskaan?

Karan: haa use kiya???

Muskaan: sorry amber mujhe woh promise torna hoga aur mere paas koi rasta nahi hai

Armaan: bool na muskaan

Muskaan: amber ko LUNGS CANCER HAI😭😭😭

Oh that moment the atmosphere was freezed not even the sound of anyones breath was listened no one was able to start wid a word

Karan is holding her duppatta in his hand n just looking towards it

Armaan is also in gr8 shock just thinking of that why it always happen why not everything is perfect…..ajj hi toh use apna pyaar mila aur ajj hi amber ke bare mai………………..

Everyone gathered around karan

Armaan: karan woh……………..

Karan:kounsi stage

Muskaan while crying: 2nd last!

A tear broke off karans eye

Ridhimma n muskaan were also crying

Rahul n armaan were trying to make the atmosphere normal but of no use

Scene shift to atul n anjali

Anjali: disgusting!!!!!!!!!!! Ridhimma aisa kaise ker sakte hai

N she was crying

Atul: roo mat anjali

Anjali: lekin woh mere sage behan hai!😭

Atul: lekin jab tum rote ho mana keh tum tab buhat cute lagte ho

Anjali smiled

Atul: lekin mujhe acha nahi lagta

Anjali: ohhh how sweet atul!😳

N hugged him😳

Anjali: atul mujhe tumse kuch baat kerne hai

Atul: haa kaho anjali

Anjali: woh mai…………..

Her cell rang

Anjali listened to it

Anjali: WAT!!!!

Everyone is still in ambers room

Anjali arrived there

Anjali came n hugged karan

Anjali: sab theek ho jae ga don't worry

Atul anjali ko peche hatata hai n hugged karan

Just lyk if he is jealoused if anjali hug him………..lolxXx

Karan: I guess ab hum sab ko apne ghar chale jana chahiye

Everyone looking @ him coz abhi abhi to itne bare baat hoe the n he is still behaving normal

Armaan: lekin karan is waqt amber ko hum sab ki zarorat hai

Karan: nahi is waqt use apne app ki zarorat hai aur waise bhi hum yaha rahe ge to woh aur dukhe ho jae ge woh dekh ridhimma aur muskaan kaise ro rahe hai woh ye sab dekh nahi paege

Rahul: I think karan is right hum sab ko ab chalna chahiye

N everyone left

Scene shift to ambers room

She is still sitting in dark

She switched the lamp on

N guess what she saw

Uske aur karan ki pix charo deewaro pe lage hoe hai

Her taraf jaha woh dekhte use karan nazar aa raha tha

She stood up n went near those photos

They were actually there

She went out

Amber: muskaan muskaan!!!!!!!!

Muskaan wipe her tears

Amber: muskaan mere kamre mai tu gae the?

Muskaan: nahi kyun?

Amber: aoo mere saath

She grabbed her towards her room n switched on the lights

Amber: ye dekho!

Muskaan is damn shocked to see that

Muskaan: ye sab……………kisne???

She recalled that she told karan abt keys

Muskaan: woh tune karan se koi file lene ko kaha tha?

Amber: nahi toh kyun?

Muskaan kept silent

Amber: to yane keh ye sab karan ne…………………..thats it!!

N went towards the phone

Amber: mai abhi use dantte ho

Muskaan: amber!! Abhi use phone na ker

Amber: kyun?

Muskaan: woh abhi tota hoa hai

Amber: wat!!...kahe tune??? No muskaan bata kahe tone sab ko bata to nahi diya?

Muskaan: haan amber maine sab ko sab kuch bata diya

Amber: per kyun?

N started crying

Muskaan: kabhi na kabhi to unhe pata chalna hi than a to aj hi sahe

Amber: muskaan ye tune kiya ker diya

N sat on the bed

Muskaan: lekin tujhe pata hai karan ye sab sun ke bilkul nahi tota ridhimma ro rahe the armaan aur rahul bhi tensed the lekin karan ne apne app ko sambhal ke rakhe uske ankh se ek anso bhi nahi baha

Amber: really!

Muskaan: haan!...............dekh amber ab to tu use………

Amber: nahi muskaan in fact ab to mujhe use aur door rehna chaiye uska dil ek baar tot gaya to phir nahi jud pae ga

Karan: dil paas hoga to tote ga na woh to tumhare paas hai

Amber n muskaan shocked

Muskaan: karan tum yaha is waqt

Karan: haa woh dupatta……….

Muskaan went out of the room

Amber karan se ankhe chura rahe the

Karan: ye lo tumhara dupatta

Amber: side pe rakh do

Karan: nahi tum khud pakro

She was holding that

Karan: amber mere taraf dekho!

Amber: tum jao ab buhat daer ho gae hai

Karan: amber tum ne kuch galat nahi kiya to phir mujhse kyun door bhag rahe ho

Amber look towards him

N she was crying

Amber:do u really think maine kuch galat nahi kiya maine buhat buhat galat ker diya tumse pyaar ker liya……………tumse sacha pyaar ker liya maine

While sayng al this she sat down

Karan: bas mujhe yahe sunna tha

N sat wid her

Karan: tumhara pyaar mere saath haina to asmaan pe se chand bhi tor ker la donga

Amber while smiling: pagal ho gae ho kiya?

Karan: haa tumhare pyaar mai

Amber: karan mai tumhare pyaar ke laik……….

Karan: ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh………………bas ab aur kuch nahi

Amber: lekin

Karan: ssssssshhhhhhhhh maine kaha na chup

Karan: waise tumne kiya buhat galat

Amber: ok I m sorry

Karan: lekin kuch chahiye bhi hoga mujhe

Amber: kiya?

While wiping her tears

Karan: ek hug bas

Amber hugged him

Pata nahi in dono ke raste kaha likhe tha were they destined to be together or not???? Us waqt kisi ko kuch samajh mai nahi aa raha tha yaha tak keh karan ko bhi nahi woh amber ko apna banana ki than chukka tha lekin kaise? Who use khud ko bhi nahi para tha aur yaha armaan ko double problems ka bojh sehna par raha tha ek to amber ki problem aur ek uske apni I mean ridhimma oops I mean ridhimma se shaadi ki baat ki problem atul anjali ko story to confession kea as paas bhi nahi bhatak rahe the but lets c aage kiya hota hai

Precap: armaan begging to anjali

Armaan: plz plz plz anjie I truly beg u plz

Anjali: no way

Amber in omis ward

Amber: ab kaise ho omi?

Karan: ab to isse milna chor do ab bas tum mujh pe concentrate karo

Amber: very funny karan lekin for ur information hum dono kabhi lovers the hi nahi woh sab natak tha

Karan: WAT!!!!!!!!!!!😡

i hope u all liked this one i hope i have done justice to all chracters n all scenes plz do read n do comment

luv amber

Edited by hmm... - 16 years ago
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Great Hun !~
Thnx 4 PM !~
BEst PArt Was Atul Scene ~!
And Bestest Was AR I Love U !~~!


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hey it ws mindblowing boring nooooo chance yaar it ws funluving prt vryyy cute prt seriously all wre drunk hahaha lvd it sab pagal ho gaye the heheheheheheeh soooo funny nd whts d seret of amber hmm dr keerti nd muski,rahul playing musical chairs wo bhi wrong hahaah vryy cute arridz scenes wre sooooooooo cute yaar thy took pheras wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww shaddi awwwww bt reh gayi nd angie aunty calld her aunty omgggggggggggg nd all wre calling her aunty myy god vryyy cute prt jst lvd it..............
cont sooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Amazinggggggggggg part didi
i lvoed it soooooooooooooooo much
do continue sooon
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amazing...Thax 4 da pm..😃
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interstin! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
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hi! i came across your ff and read it all at once. i loved the writing. :)
please continue soon and could you also add me to your pm list? i'd really appreciate it.
thanks,
mona :]
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hey lovely update! cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update! and...................
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AWESOME pr lubed it mwah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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