Michi: Every Breath I Take[Epilogue] Pg 145(31/12) - Page 9

I loved this part 👏

Thanx for the update

hey, once again i loved it 😊
i am glad that you made miland funny...its good to see this side of him ...plzz update soon 😊

Originally posted by: wande

☺️ ☺️kuku look at what u have done to me after reading ur lovely update and OMG I loving it thank u gal it was really awesome thanks alot👏and pls do keep it coming darling cause Fati reading it😳😉and I also find this line or thinking of Milind really cute Okay! You should write a book on, "101 things to say when you are in an embarrassing situation". 1) Okay. 2) Oh Okay 3) Ooooooookay. Great going champ! only 98 more left. by the end of the conversation you will have all 101, if not more, ways of saying "Okay".
Shut up!! You start your every conversation with "Okay!"
Okay! Thats my style😆 😆that was really funny of Milind😆he sounded so cute and hottttttttttt😳thank u once again love😃

😆i am so glad u liked it!😆😆😆will post the next part soon for fati😉
😆'okay!' was added just to make out whether it was the mind or heart talking.
okay! is always sarcastic about everything Milind does, except for anything concerning Prachi😆😉
Milind is hot and cute😳😳

Originally posted by: dudley

hehehehe 😆 😆
i love milind, he is sooooooooooo cute 😳 😳
we are two bodies and one soul!!!!
you are a great writer, i just can't stop laughing,
well seems like milind is going to get into alot of trouble, but then prachi is there to save him 😉
k update sooon, thanks for the hilarious part 😛

😆 two bodies and one soul, was Neev's dialogue! He said tht to convince Milind, and looks like it came handy😆
thank you so much.... I am so glad, u found it funny...will try to add more funny comments/scenes.
And what if, he falls in trouble because of Prachi😉😆?
will try to update soon😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

👏

thank you so much😃

Originally posted by: nick_bon

ahaha he is funny!! 😆 well his thoughts... lol
"oh Boy!"

😆thank you!

Originally posted by: fahimataq

hey Kuku (hope u dnt mind me calling u tht ) 😊
omg i absoultely loved it. 👏

Milind is soooo sweeet!!!! 😳 😳

reminds of mujhse dosti karogi a lil bit 😳

cannot wait for the next one!!! 😉

Update soooooonn!!!! 😊

of course u can call me Kuku😃... i prefer every1 calling me Kuku than calling me Shivgauri😳
i am so glad, you loved it.
yeah Milind is damn sweet, but poor thing is fed up with his evil conscious.
yeah, basic idea was that. i was watching tht movie long back, and i thought of writing a fanfic on ShivGauri, but somehow never got a proper story idea, and then recently this story suddenly came to my mind, and I thought of writing it on Michi
will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
i liked the way prachi was saying o boy each time it was really cute
👏

thank you so much😳... even i find o boy cute, so does Milind, and he fell for her o boy only😉

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Last part was tooo good. 😊 I couldnt stop laughing, Milind and Prachi's convo esp Milind's thoughts cracked me 😆😆 Thanks Kuku for starting the FF.

thank you so much!i am so glad, u guys liked it and found it funny... will try to have more of that kind, oh and Milind and his convos with his evil alter is gonna get crazier😉
and thank you accepting me here, and liking it😃

Originally posted by: nihita

great part dear!!!!!!!!
loved ur style for describing their inner turmoil!!!!!!man cant wait to read next part!!!!!
oh girl!!!!!!u were splendid here! 😆

love
nihita

thanx nihita!
Milind is one confused character😉
😆thanx
will try to update the next part soon