Michi: Every Breath I Take[Epilogue] Pg 145(31/12) - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great FF
Please continue soon


thank you😃will try to update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: KillSerpent

KuKu nice FF.wow milind and neev r half-brothers.

Niharika god why cant pranay dump her.

hey r u going on the lines of mujse dosti karoge ?????????? But loved the concept.hope neev falls in love with ayeesha. 😆 😆 😆


thank you so much!!yeah they are, but very close.
sum u na!!! Niharika is dead😳😆, so no worries abt her😆😆
Yeah, its somewhat like Mujhse Dosti Karogi😳.😆
sorry babes, neev is not gonna fall for Ayesha!anyway not anytime in the near future, and Ayesha in love with Milind😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Part 2


Milind with his heart pounding: Hello?
Okay! Awesome start Milind Mishra! you sound like a frog!
Prachi : Hi, this is Prachi.... can I speak to Neev please?
Milind takes a deep calming breath: Hi Prachi, this is Neev speaking.
Prachi: Hi Neev, actually your Dad asked me to give you a call.
Milind: Oh okay.
Prachi : Okay.
Milind: Prachi, I am sorry I couldn't call you before, I was a little busy with getting settled and meeting up my friends. I was planning to call you today.
Prachi: I thought so... and no need apologize.
Milind : Okay.
Prachi: hmm okay.
Milind was totally clueless on what to say just like Prachi.
Milind: Okay
Okay! Great going Milind Mishra.
Prachi had no idea what to say, so she just said what she has been saying for so long: Okay.
Milind : Ooooooookay.
Okay! You should write a book on, "101 things to say when you are in an embarrassing situation". 1) Okay. 2) Oh Okay 3) Ooooooookay. Great going champ! only 98 more left. by the end of the conversation you will have all 101, if not more, ways of saying "Okay".
Shut up!! You start your every conversation with "Okay!"
Okay! Thats my style.
Prachi embarrassed: o boy! This is so embarrassing.
Milind starts grinning: I know.
Prachi giggles.
Milind chuckles.
Prachi silent.
Milind silent.
Prachi waiting for "Neev" to say something.
Milind waiting for Prachi to say something.
Prachi is still silent.
Milind is still silent.
Prachi is still waiting for Neev to speak.
Milind is still waiting for Prachi to speak.
Prachi wondering whether Neev hung up.
Milind wondering whether Prachi hung up.
Prachi and Milind together: You there?
Prachi and Milind starts laughing.
Prachi: Hmmmmm........So?
Milind: So?
Okay! Great going PARROT!!!
Prachi : Is there anything you want to ask or tell me?
Milind: I think you have a beautiful smile.
Okay!Where the hell did that come from???
Prachi: Er.... thank you. Even I think you have a cute smile.
Milind : Thank you... have you seen me?
Prachi: Your Dad gave me your picture.
Okay! Obviously Dad would have given it!You are an idiot Milind! But no problem, and no need to worry as she thinks you are Neev!
Milind : Oh okay.... which photo is that?
Prachi: The one with your brother.
Milind: With my brother?
Okay! Relax! So what if she has seen your photo? Stop getting excited.
Prachi : Yeah, you are wearing a blue shirt and he is wearing a black shirt.
Milind: Oh. The one in Bangkok?
Prachi: Yeah.
Milind: So what do you think about my brother?
Okay! Have you lost it? And why the hell would she think anything about you???
Prachi : Huh??Your brother?
Okay! She is shocked. So far, great going! You deserve a standing ovation.
Milind: Yeah.
Prachi: O boy
Was he THAT BAD???? He knew, that he should have combed his hair! But still WAS HE THAT BAD????
Okay! I have no idea, since half your face was covered with your gelled-thus-no-need-to-comb-hair
Prachi: O boy.... hmmmmm... (hesitantly) he is good.
Okay! That cleared your doubt! You were bad! Don't ever comb your hair!
It was too windy, thats why my hair got messed up. I had gelled it properly.
Okay! Blame it on nature! One day, you are going to wake up and find a bee hive on your head Mr Milind-I-am-allergic-to-combs-Mishra.
Milind : I don't know you all that well, but I can bet that was not what you wanted to say.
Prachi: O boy! Can I tell you later?
Milind confused: Later?
Prachi: yeah, after we get to know each other a little better.
Milind : Okay.
Prachi: thanx.
Milind: Then?
Prachi: I talked to your brother today.
Milind: Yeah I know!
Prachi: How do you know?
Milind: I was on the phone with him when you had called.
Prachi: Oh!!
Milind didn't know what to say now, then he remembered what Prachi had asked him, decided to ask her the same thing: So, is there anything that you want to ask me or tell me?
Prachi was silent for sometime: O boy!
Milind smiles, he liked the way she kept saying "O boy": What happened?
Prachi: There were lots of things I wanted to ask you, and tell you. But nothing is coming to my mind now.
Milind chuckles: No problem, may be the next time we talk you can ask me.
Okay!NEXT TIME???? So you decided to go with Neev's plan???And do you really think she is going to call you again?
Prachi: yeah.... then?
Milind: Hmmmmmmm you are studying right?
Prachi : Yeah, final year B.com, I am in Ayesha's college.
Milind surprised: I didn't know you knew Ayesha.
Prachi: I didn't. We bumped into each other in the college canteen yesterday. And she recognized me, as she had seen my picture when your brother was checking me out. (laughs) Thats what she said.
Okay! Be glad that she didn't see you drooling after Prachi.
I was not drooling, I was just imagining how she will look with Neev.
Okay! Neev the hollow man! but didn't know you could see invisible people.
Oh!Just Shut up!
Milind started blushing: I was not... I mean bhai was not checking you out. He was just seeing your photo thats it.
Prachi laughs: Yeah, I guessed that much.
Milind: Then, what else did she tell you?
Prachi: That you are a shaithaan.
Milind was shocked, then realized that she was talking about Neev : Yeah at times.
Prachi: Yeah, then she told me how your brother pampers you and he calls you 'beta', at times, and how you hate it.
That somehow made him sound toooooooooo old. AND his brother just acts as if he hates it, but the truth is he loves it when he calls him beta!!! And he calls him beta only once in a while!
Okay!Do I look like I even care????
Milind: Man, Ayesha talks too much.
Prachi: Hehehe I liked her.
Milind: We all love her, but still she talks too much.
Prachi: She told me that we are going to be best of friends.
Oh God!
Note to self: Have a talk with Ayesha, about what all she can tell Prachi.
Okay! And what are you going to tell her when she asks you why do you care so much about what I tell Prachi?
Note to self: Ask Neev to talk to Ayesha.
Okay! Of all the people Neev??? Neev - the prankster???
Note to self: Supervise the conversation.
Prachi: She has invited me home.
Note to self: Voice conferencing with Ayesha and Neev- TODAY!
Milind: Thats great. Then, did she say anything else about my brother or me?
Prachi: Hmmmm that your brother is a sweetheart.
Milind starts blushing: Thank you.
Prachi: Not you, your brother.
Milind embarrassed: oh!
Prachi laughs.
Milind tries to defend himself, and remembers what Neev said: My brother and I are two bodies and one soul.
Okay! That didn't sound gay at all.
Prachi bursts out laughing: I am sorry, but that was so cheesy.
Milind grins: I know.
Prachi: You and your brother are very close right?
Milind : Yeah very close. He is the best brother one can ever get.
Milind remembers all the time Neev fought with their mother for him.
Milind: He has always been there for me. He is the best thing that ever happened to me.
Prachi: I don't know you all that well, but by the way you are talking and in your voice, I could really feel the love you have for your brother.
Milind didn't know what to say to that, so he just remained silent.
Prachi : O boy! I shouldn't have said that, it made me sound like a 50 year old.
Milind chuckles: but it felt nice.
Prachi: Oh then its fine.
Milind: Why do you keep saying O boy?
Prachi: No idea, I think I heard someone use it once, and I liked it and started saying it and now I can't seem to stop it.
Milind : Ok.
Prachi: My mom hates it.
Milind: I kinda find it cute.
Prachi: Hehehehe my mom says that people are gonna think that I love boys thats why I keep saying O boy!
Milind laughs: And what do you tell her?
Prachi grins: Now everyone knows what my preference is.
Milind starts laughing: So are you saying that I should start saying O girl, just to be on the safe side.
Okay! If you ask me, you should say that for the rest of your life, after that two bodies and one soul dialogue.
Prachi laughs: It wouldn't hurt to be on the safe side.
Milind: O girl!
Milind and Prachi starts laughing.
Prachi: Neev, I have to hang up now.
Milind: Oh!
Milind didn't understand why he was feeling disappointed that they were going to end their conversation.
Prachi : I will call you later?
Milind: Yeah sure.
Prachi: It was fun talking to you.
Milind: I had a great time talking to you.
Prachi: Bye Neev.
Milind: Prachi?
Prachi: Yeah?
Milind; Can you give me your cell number? I think I lost your number.
Okay! What the hell do you think you are doing Milind Mishra??

Pls comment guys
Kuku😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

☺️ ☺️kuku look at what u have done to me after reading ur lovely update and OMG I loving it thank u gal it was really awesome thanks alot👏and pls do keep it coming darling cause Fati reading it😳😉and I also find this line or thinking of Milind really cute Okay! You should write a book on, "101 things to say when you are in an embarrassing situation". 1) Okay. 2) Oh Okay 3) Ooooooookay. Great going champ! only 98 more left. by the end of the conversation you will have all 101, if not more, ways of saying "Okay".
Shut up!! You start your every conversation with "Okay!"
Okay! Thats my style😆 😆that was really funny of Milind😆he sounded so cute and hottttttttttt😳thank u once again love😃

Edited by wande - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
hehehehe 😆 😆
i love milind, he is sooooooooooo cute 😳 😳
we are two bodies and one soul!!!!
you are a great writer, i just can't stop laughing,
well seems like milind is going to get into alot of trouble, but then prachi is there to save him 😉
k update sooon, thanks for the hilarious part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
ahaha he is funny!! 😆 well his thoughts... lol
"oh Boy!"
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

hey Kuku (hope u dnt mind me calling u tht ) 😊
omg i absoultely loved it. 👏

Milind is soooo sweeet!!!! 😳 😳

reminds of mujhse dosti karogi a lil bit 😳

cannot wait for the next one!!! 😉

Update soooooonn!!!! 😊

Edited by fahimataq - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
amazing part
i liked the way prachi was saying o boy each time it was really cute
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

Last part was tooo good. 😊 I couldnt stop laughing, Milind and Prachi's convo esp Milind's thoughts cracked me 😆😆 Thanks Kuku for starting the FF.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part dear!!!!!!!!
loved ur style for describing their inner turmoil!!!!!!man cant wait to read next part!!!!!
oh girl!!!!!!u were splendid here! 😆

love
nihita

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