FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 10

Originally posted by: spln

jiaaaaa honey i was wondering where u were...glad to see u back....thnx for the comments, which were read n re read by me as always.... 😊 coming to why a twist....lolzzzz guess u know the answer better than me lady crowned ff writer of the week!!!!but yeh...hope fully the unfolding of events will not be disappointing!!!!!!!!!

Dont u even dare say u dissappointed me hunny. I had u know mentioned in my comment how very very convinceingly and wonderfully u have brought in this plot. Again left me in ur awe hunny. I have no complains against the twist as if we dont have a twist how will it move yaar?? Wonderful plot and i have to admit ur doing a great justice to it!! Ok i will seem insane to the rest u know applauding u for a twist😆😆😆 but then that is wat i feel.😳 Great job as usual👏

hey

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AWESOME prt yaar 😉

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

ohk...ive got 2 say..it ws jus awesome...
hopefully the misunderstandin clears soon...as im all 4 a happy endin..lolzz..i think the misunderstandin thingy is damn interestin...
gr8 job..
update soon


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amazing part
i really liked ridz and armaans dads conversation it was really sweet
hope the misunderstanding is cleared soon
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wow congratz on second thread..wow they r thinking that aryan and ridz love each other...wonder what will happen now..continue soon...

Hey NJ!!!

Firstly Congratulations for the second thread. Secondly I apologise for the longggggg delay on my part for commenting, had science exam, so was busy and had not visited India forum. Anyway so here goes my comment for the last 4 parts i think.

Part 14: This part was just amazingly written, the anxiousness, nervousness, she was feeling about his whereabouts. The scene at the Taj was just breath taking, it was so emotional. I listened to that song; Lucid dream, i have to say it's a wonderful song. Really liked it, very soft to listen to. The words are just so touching. That whole scene with him talking about his mother, him letting go of her pic....seriously it was just WOW... I have no words to describe that scene, just mindblowingly fantastic. Ok I am glad i read the parts altogether, or else I would have been dying to read the next part.

Part 15: The scene which preceeded the confession, was even more beautifully written, I just loved the simplicity of that scene, the way she voiced her thoughts...so plainly. You are an amazing writer...no denying in that. Ok, have to say, though the singing song for her was sweet, yet i don't know how to say it... a bit cheesy (If that's the right word) it was very filmy.. but heck i am a sucker for filmy stuff...😆 Btw I like that song too, it has a nice rythmn to it...
Rahul and Muski engaged, how cute...

Part 16: Totally loved the dhaba scene, its good Ridz punished him by depriving him of food, but actually i don't blame Armaan for being a bit apprehensive about the food.. afterall he is Lord Benz!! Ive never ate at a dhaba as well...so I could empathise with him.
The walk was so romantic, i love their talks, both of them getting to know more about each other. The whole scene was adorable and dreamy.
Chris is just so cute, i loved their whole convo, man i could actually imagine Karan acting out this scene, specially the dumbfounded look he must have had when his gran was trying to talk to him on the table. That scene was so funny, yet sweet.

Part 17: I am liking Aryan, and him and minnie.. very interesting indeed. Oh bechaari Ridz, they were all in the plan apart from her, I really liked the Chris and Ridz talk, he is such a sweet heart, guess Armaan got his charms from his dad. Ok you had to bring in a twist... oh well what's a story without any hiccups.

Looks like ive written a very lamba comment. So if I take time to comment...you know why..can't wait to see how u handle this new twist..

Luv
Nainu
XxX

when's the grand update coming NJ??

heyy... just read the entire ff... simply great! when are you updating? plz continue soon!!!!

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

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hey NJ
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<br><span>It was awesome dear...loved the new twist...such misunderstanding does happen if u hera after the conversation
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<br><span>awww armi's gift was cho chweet...n ridz made him strawberry ...both r really damm sweet
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<br><span>N i also liked ridz n armi's conversation0 dad
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<br><span>in short yet another wonderful pt by u dear </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span> <span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> u really rock dear</span>

thnx hun!!!!love your comments just as much....will be updating soon now....

Originally posted by: jia..

<span>Dont u even dare say u dissappointed me hunny. I had u know mentioned in my comment how very very convinceingly and wonderfully u have brought in this plot. Again left me in ur awe hunny. I have no complains against the twist as if we dont have a twist how will it move yaar?? Wonderful plot and i have to admit ur doing a great justice to it!! Ok i will seem insane to the rest u know applauding u for a twist😆😆😆 but then that is wat i feel.😳 Great job as usual👏</span>

jia sweetie....what do i say....ur really really sweet, i took it all just as positively as you said it trust me....but um touched by ur gesture....thnx hun, its trully a treat to have pl like u read my ff....will update soon!!!