FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 8

Originally posted by: meow23

strwaberry cake. my mouth is watering dear.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..... a new twist hope it clears sooon........................... amzng update........................... luvd d prt..................... update sooon 😊 😊 😊

thnx hun!!!wil update asap

Originally posted by: ttimpy

what have u done????????????????????
is it gng to be a comedy of errors..naseem...............?

im sure u have a gameplan up ur sleeve...but just like to see us fall off our seats............uve got all the traits of a prankster........do keep it up.......

loved the entire update......strawberry pie........love cd and the broach.........

just imagine what a turn any half heard conversation cud take..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow that was quite a threatening compliment 😆 i was kinda oscilating between smiling and then ummmm getting scared....but il assume wat u meant in the totality was that the part was not horrible but the twist was....i hate them too but they have to be there 😕 ll update asap hun!!!!

Originally posted by: ttimpy

what have u done????????????????????
is it gng to be a comedy of errors..naseem...............?

im sure u have a gameplan up ur sleeve...but just like to see us fall off our seats............uve got all the traits of a prankster........do keep it up.......

loved the entire update......strawberry pie........love cd and the broach.........

just imagine what a turn any half heard conversation cud take..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh n fporgot to say....u got it bang on point wonder how....i was nicknamed COE by my frends in high school n then in undergrad...COE:Comedy of Errors!!!

Originally posted by: pal_279

OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!aryan n ridzi....no no shash pady u r thinking wrong....pls sum1 tell dem.....pls clear d misunderstandin......

d whole strawbeery pie part ws so lovely 😳 😳...ridzi preparin it for armaan....best ws hw did she presented it....herself fully drown in flour n d pie already quaterly eaten.....😆 😆 n i absolutely luvd d ridz-chris convo......chris is an amazin guy......he put her at such ease.....i cud actually visualise all d scenes....awesome... 👏

hw thoughtful of armaan(or i must say u) to cherish der spl night.....aww....."U, Me and Taj...and so it all began..."....jus luvd it....

u kno frm many days i ws thinikin dat the story is goin 2 perfect(nt dat i mind it...i absolutely luvd it) n nw u gave dis superb twist....hope everythin gets sorted out soon enuf....
congratulations for the new thread....u deserve it...👏 😃
thnx a ton for d pm....pls pls cont soon....

thnx hun...glad u liking it all, including the twist!!!!will update asap n i hope u will like the way it unfolds.....

Originally posted by: jia..

OMG cant believe i missed a part out here. Really apologise for the delay in my comment. Gosh i feel so bad at not being able to comment.

Nyways to make now.....all i can say is u r simply a true genius. Told a 100 times already but cant help telling u again. u r a genius. Part 16 was so very very delightful to read NJ. Rite from the scene wen she takes to the dhabba to them walking together. Awwwwww loved their convo so much.It was a real treat to read the convo.Brilliant as usual.👏

Next part 17......well well as u can see everyone's mouth watering for strawberry so is mine. call it the side effects of ur parts😆😆.......as earlier we were dying to know which cologne he uses😆😆😆.......loved the entire aryan-ridz-minne scene there. Awwe aryan nd minnee!! Cho cute.
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Coming to my fav scene......ridz-chris convo!! OMG felt like hugging u reading it. It was so very very adorable and gave the part a such a special feel. And next his gift Superb!!! Simply brilliant.
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Finally coming to the twist!! Sigh*** Y do there have to be twists in perfect stories???😕😆😕Am sure the misunderstanding well be cleared soon.😊 But then again the entire plot was set so very convincingly and naturally. Hats off to you yet again.
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Will be as usual more eager than ever to read up the next😳.
And before i forget a very big congrats on second thread. Feel really happy as its all very much deserved.😳Jia

jiaaaaa honey i was wondering where u were...glad to see u back....thnx for the comments, which were read n re read by me as always.... 😊 coming to why a twist....lolzzzz guess u know the answer better than me lady crowned ff writer of the week!!!!but yeh...hope fully the unfolding of events will not be disappointing!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: saridena

hey 😊
where is my pm sweety
coming to the part it is sooooooooooo beautiful but what the new problem u have introdued plzz donot make it big
👏

hey sorry abt the pm dear i did it at like 2am....n was so sleepy dont know how many i missed hehehe!!!!n the twist....well lets see wat happenss!!!

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

oh no...talk of the twist n the twist is here already!!!
well, luks like my intuitions have become quite strong then!!
all this time i was just wondering wat the twist wud be..n was eager to know..but now that i know it, i want to get rid of it badly!!
all in all, a gr8 part again..hey, spare that last quarter of the pie for me.. 😆

yeh thats with twists u want them coz nothing ever perfect...n then u can wait for them to vanish!!!!thanx for comments will update asap

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

PART 17

Hey Aryan is way too smart (actually only initially )... he got Ridzy... I loved d Conspiracy played by Smart 5 stars - Muskaan, Reg, Minnie, Aryan & Armaan on Ridz... well too gud...

But again D BEST was d FATHER-DAUGTER conversation i will call it... I admire Chris Uncle a lot now... He is such a Sweetheart... too-too-too sweet... i wish everyone has a father/father-in-law like him...

But i know considering d SMARTNESS of Ridzy's PARENT, next part is gonna b a MESS... How come dey just consider it... i mean i know d things were looking like obvious, but if dey know dat kind-of similar stuff happened in case of Atul & Anjie, den y dey didnt bothered to ask dem DIRECTLY, instead of asking about IT using REFERENCES...

& of course, our stupid-idiot friendly pair - Madam Ridzy & Mr. Aryan... even dey didnt bother to ask wat EXACTLY their respectable n SMART parents r talking about... STUPID-N-IDIOT-N-FOOLISH-N-DUMB-N-CRAP-N i donno wat all adjectives i shud use for dem DEY R JUST... 😡 ...
SUPER-HIGHLY-DUMBHEADED-FOOLISH FROGS, with 3 of d legs broken, one stoned eye, broken ear drums, pottish tummy, leaking gall bladder(of course if it exists) wid lacking br& A TOTAL LACK OF BRAING CELLS... MENTALLY RETARDED FELLOWS, no actually BRAINLESS fellows... Humphssssssss it feels better now...

Eeeehhhhhhhh, its so Daily Soupish... sorry to say dat... 😕 u can hit me if u want... 😃

Actually i m a lil flustered... sorry, i didnt mean to offend anything u wrote... i didnt really mean it... but i m aaahhhhhhhh i donno, wats stuck, i better put a stop on it, before i crash into further crap off my mouth... No actually my fingers guided by idiot brains of mine...

Bur i really mean it when i said dat I loved Uncle Chris & Ridzy's conversation... 😃 😃


Love u dear
- Sheetal

oh no sheetal u really had me scared by that comment... but dont worry hun...things alwaz solve out um just not a sad ending person....but without a twist its hard...cant keep stuff ideal....thats not how life is....i was trying to keep any bad guys out, ut u think its soapish aaawwww thats lame on my part i apologize to have disappointed u....hope fully the unfolding of events will be good enough...will update asap....thanx for taking so much time to comment on each part....i love reading them....

ps why do u think id be mad at u....getting gaaliyan for twists is a treat for me...makes me feel um doing a god job at it!!!! 😆

oh naseem,

I sooooo did not expect that,...But that is u Naseem. You are always so good with twists and so unpredictable. In the beginning I though Aryan was gonna be the thorn but then he turned out to be a sweetheart and now this,...wow!!! like I said u are a master at this.

Now to my fav parts: I was in love with the relationship Aryan & Ridz share,...they have so much comfort amongst themselves.
Loved the convo between chris and Ridz,..and ofcourse :
she grinned turning around to see his rare embaressed look...!!! well ofcourse even the dude has his days,...

well like once u said it cant be all sweet and no spice in their relationship right....
love -Ria

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

NJ....dat was the last thing i could expect after sucha lovly talk with her father in law....that shashank gettin her n aryan married...omg no ways....cmonnn.......dont do this...hehehehe plz plz plz make shashank understand...hes sucha porblem god..humesha sab kuch galat samajhta hai...heheheheheh but in a way...itz fine coz itlll extend ure story lil...n i wanna see more n more n more parts of the fic....but yea i dont wanna see AR seprate too...pleeeeeeeesssssssseee.....dont seprate them....n cont real soon...this slifhanger wil surely kil us this time 😆 😆 the walk part was fantabulous...loved every acyion n every dialogue there...the way they descired everyhtn too cool... 👏

lolzzzz yeh twist are essential...hate to make shanx the bad guy...but he isnt realy a bad guy u see...no bad guys here....just plain communication gap!!!!wil update asap!!!!!!!!!