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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehasfan

nice part....
cont soon...


thnks! I would write now but its not my ff its mona's too so I have to wait for her feedback! 😳
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still waiting 4 u 2 continue....
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Hello,
I know its been a long time since I posted and I just wanted u guys to know that I m sorry and I will post although small parts but ASAP!
Thanks alot!!
Mona.
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Part 7:

Kripa entered her cabin and seated herself infront of her desk. She took a deep breath and leaned against her seat. She was lost in the events of the previous night. She wanted to write another article about Angad and his real character, her heart ached to do that. But her body and her mind refused. She felt very tired and lazy, and thus decided to take a day off from the office.

Kripa took off her elegant sandals, and closing her eyes, kept her feet on the table. A while later, she opened her eyes, a little annoyed, when she heard her cellphone ring. It was a reminder she had set, in order to be prepared for the meeting which was now exactly 34 minutes away. She kept her cell phone down, and massaged her temples. "Hey Jenny listen." Kripa called her secetary. "Can you please cancel the meeting with Carmen Vessel?". Jenny was silent for a second. This girl was amazing. Cancelling a meeting with the world's best designer, needed guts. "Sure ma'am. Do you want me to rescheduele it?" Jenny asked, taking out Carmen's phone number from the computer. "Yes," replied Kripa,"anytime on tuesday or wednesday.... Better yet, why dont you ask her to set a time and date." . "Yes ma'am. Anything else?" . "Yes. Can you please tell everyone who calls that I am unavailable for the whole day?" Kripa asked, just to polite. "Sure thing." Jenny confirmed. "Thank you."

Kripa shut the door, about fifeteen minutes later, and walked towards her car. She opened the door and threw in her bag. She decided she would go to The SeaView Club*. She would work out, swim a little and then go sleep in her house.

She parked her car in the parking lot, and entered the club. On her way to the work out area, she saw Roshan talking to a cute girl in the club's cafe. She walked upto them. "Hey Roshan." She greeted him. He smiled at her, "Hey!" He greeted her back. Kripa looked at the girl next to him. "And who is this?" Kripa asked. "This is Meghna." Roshan replied, as the girl stood up and smiled brightly. "And this is my sister Kripa Sharma." Roshan said proudly. "Hey. I am such a huge fan. Really I just think you are amazing." Meghna spoke. Kripa smiled, colour visible on her cheeks. "Thank you." . "So Kripa, will you join us?" Roshan asked, hoping she would say no. "No, actually I am here to you work out a little. But I could give you and Meghna, a ride home, if you want?" Kripa said . "O! I would love that! But I am about to leave, with my brother actually. He'll be out in a minute." Meghna explained. "And I brought my car." Roshan shrugged. "Oh well, that's too bad. Nyways you guys carry on. See you later." "Later" the youngsters replied at the same time. She smiled as she walked away from them. They were so cute together. She really liked Meghna. She was perfect for Roshan. "Roshan weds high school sweetheart Meghna!" She thought, and then shook her head laughing.

Kripa smiled as she walked towards the swimming pool. No one was there. She thanked God for that. She quickly went and changed into her swim suit. It was a full modest one,with half sleeves, and a length of just above her knees, just like the ones the professional female swimmers wear. She jumoped in the cold water and swam a little. Then, when tired, she just started to float in the water, her eyes closed. She smiled, unaware that someone had his eyes focused on her. She swam for fifeteen more minutes and he waited there looking at her admiringly. He saw her exit the water with the wet swim suit hugging every curve of her perfect body.

He sighed. And finally giving in to his desire, he moved towards her to talk to her. That is when he noticed that her face looked a little pale and tired. Her eyes were squinted together. She looked weak. He walked upto her, just in time to catch her as she fainted. He looked at her face. "Why did this stranger have such a effect on me?" He asked himself. Then ignoring his own self, he lifted her, placed her on the nearby seat. He took a little water a splashed it on her face.

She woke up with a jerk. Her breath was heavy, and her eyebrows raised. Slowly she calmed down. She looked up and was shocked to see Angad. "You?" Kripa voiced her feelings. "Yeah, I was passing by when you fainted." He explained. "O!", Kripa said," well thank you khanna.", adding a little while later. "Angad.", he corrected her," Call me Angad." . Kripa nodded in confirmation. "You seem weak. Get a sugary drink or something." Angad shocked Kripa with his words. Kripa didnt know what to say. She just looked away and nodded again. "I'll see you around." Angad said . "Yeah, later." Kripa said. She saw him walk into the building, after he waved.

She didnt understand anything. Why was he being so nice? What was his game now? "Better be really carefull and steady Kripa, this guy is very unpredictable." She told herself.

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Kripa went inside the store near the gas station, as her car was getting filled with gas. She grabbed a couple of juices and paid the employee at the counter, making her way out. The guy who was filling his car up, signalled her that the tank was full. She nodded, and moved ahead. Not far away from the store she heard someone scream. It was girl's scream. She quickly followed the scream into a dark alley.

The girl was wrestling with a guy, who seemed drunk, and unstable. It remineded her of the incident that changed her life. "Help! Please somebody help!!!" She screamed continuesly. Kripa looked around and saw a metal rod. Picking it up, she quietly walked towards the man and hit it hard on his head. The man, after grabbing his head fell to the ground. Kripa grabbed the girl's hand and ran out the alley. She threw the rod and turned towards the girl. "Meghna!" Kripa exclaimed. "It's you! Are you alright?" Kripa asked hysterically. "Yeah, I am fine.", Meghna replied in a sad scared tone. "Aw sweety, lets get out here!" Kripa took Meghna to her car. They both got inside and Kripa drove until they reached a park. Kripa turned the engine off, and turned towards Meghna. Meghna, too looked at her with teary eyes, and instinctively, they both hugged each other. Meghna cried on Kripa shoulder. "It's okay, It's alright." Kripa consoled her. Kripa then parted form Meghna. She wiped Meghna's tears and cupped her face. "Why were you there all alone? In the dark alley. I thought you were with you brother. That was dangerous you know that!" Kripa pitched. Meghna nodded her head. After a couple more tears, Meghna told Kripa that she was in the car with her brother, but she was mad at him for making her wait so long in the club, that when he stooped to by something, she got angry and started to walk, expecting him to come looking for her soon. That was when the man started following her. He chased her into an alley, and then a minute later Kripa came to her rescue.

"That was so stupid, so dangerous!" Kripa spoke angrily. "Listen to me! Never do that ever again! Okay?". "Ok." Meghna replied. "Now call your brother, and tell him I'm dropping you home." Kripa ordered. Meghna nodded and called her brother. Kripa could hear her brother screaming, but she couldn't hear anything a while later so she knew he had calmed down. "Sorry Bhaiya!" Meghna said for the last time and ended the phone call.

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Kripa dropped Meghna home, and drove towards her house. She tried to calm herself down but her anger didnt stop. Now she hated Angad more. If I bring justice to Kripa Sharma, I bring justice to every girl, she thought.

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Hey guys! Really sorry for the late update. I just got my internet back that to through my cell phone.

I am really sorry If I dont PM you. Please forgive me.

Yes I am in a hurry lol.

But Do comment and know that I am reading them.

Thank you!

(yes I copied it from And Action! Sorryf or that lol. ^_^'
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hey gr8 update
cont soon
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Part 8: Ever action has an equal and opposite reaction.

Two weeks later, Kripa Sharma gave another powerful jolt to Angad. Kripa had contacted Mishty, who she knew wanted to break up with Angad. She payed Mishty, and promised her that she will be in the news big time if she chose to break up with Angad through her magazine, but Kripa told Mishty to only say what was true, "We don't publish lies," Kripa had said.
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Said the Daily newspaper:

"Angad's career on rocks as girlfriend Mishty Bajaj reveals Angad's secrets, through Sensation, the number one magazine."

Angad Khanna, the world's best and most wanted football player, is yet in another controversy, the secondth one in a month. His girlfriend Mishty Bajaj, announced through the world's best selling magazine, Sensation, their break up and revealed details about Angad's private life.

After announcing her break up with Angad Khanna, Mishty Bajaj reveals Angad's secrets. "He wouldn't answer my phone calls, he would scream when I asked him where he was or what took him so long." Says a teary eyed Mishty. "He would always be angry. At first I thought he was on drugs, but then through his cell phones and his friends I got to know he was regularly having one-night stands. I got angry, so I decided to avoid him too. And I started fliriting and dancing with other men. At first he didnt notice me much, but then he got angry, so angry that one night, when he was drunk, he got physical, and slapped me." Mishty paused and took a deep breath. "I was quiet about it all but, then his pictures were revealed and I just had to end it then. So I did." Mishty nodded.

It seems Angad is turning out to be very much the opposite of what we thought of him to be. Well let's wait and watch.
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Kripa picked up her cell phone, it was an unknown number.
Kripa: Hello?
Angad: Kripa. - anger was clear in his voice.
Kripa: Oh! Hi! How have you been?
Angad: Kripa please! I dont know what you want but please we can talk. I am sure there will be a solution-
Kripa: There is no solution Angad. You can do nothing but watch.
Angad: Kripa. Dont do this! - His voice was now desperate.- We are not enemies.
Kripa: You are right. We are so much more than enemies.
Kripa heard Angad swear under his breath.
Kripa: The only reason I am doing this is that I want the truth to come out.
With that, Kripa just smirked and ended the phone call.
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The next day, Kripa Sharma woke up to welcome a rather dark morning. It was cloudy and the wind was strong too. As soon as Kripa entered the kitchen, she heard thunder and the next moment Roshan yelled it was raining. Instantly the Sharmas ran upto the backyard and took all the dried clothes off of the drying stands and ropes.They went inside, laughing ridiculously, enjoying the family moment.

Kripa went back into the kitchen, and ate the cheese omellette, Prem had prepared for the family. "Where's Roshan?", asked Prithvi as he sat down next to Kripa. "I dont know." Kripa shrugged. Prithvi smiled and nodded before eating his breakfast. "Alright kids!", Prem said walking in, " a heavy rain fall is forecasted, so no work for either of you today." . "Cool." Kripa said. Prithvi opened his mouth to say something but immediately, Roshan came in running. "Di! We need to talk now!". Prem, Prithvi and Kripa shared confused looks. Kripa was trying to figure out what was it that was so important. He seemed hurt and scared. A thought hit Kripa. "Did Meghna tell him about yesterday?" . "Di! Quickly!!" Roshan broke Kripa's thoughts. "Yeah, I'm coming." Kripa said getting up and following Roshan.

He directed Kripa to his room. "What is it Roshan?" Kripa inquired. "Di, I , I am so confused!" He exploded. "About what?" . "I just dont know what to do, I love her so much! I just, Oh God!" Roshan continued . "Roshan!" Kripa stopped him, "Tell me what happened. It's about Meghna isn't it?" . Roshan nodded.
Kripa sighed. She knew how he was feeling. The same things happening to the two women he loved. She moved towards him to comfort him, oblivious of the fact that what she thought was bothering him, was not it at all!
"Meghna's full name is Meghna Khanna." Roshan said difficultly. Kripa was now confused. "What?" She asked, "This isn't about yesterday?" . "Yesterday?",Roshan answered with another question, "why would this be about yesterday?" . Kripa figured Meghna hadn't told him yet. "Sorry.", Kripa said, "I had something else in my mind. Anyways, continue. What were you saying?". "Di. Meghna's full name is Meghna Khanna." Roshan repeated. "So?", Kripa said not getting the point. Roshan raised his eyebrows like she didnt understand the obvious part. Then it hit her hard!

"O! I would love that! But I am about to leave, with my brother actually. He'll be out in a minute." Meghna's words rang in her ears. She remembered how Meghna told her that he was mad at her brother for taking so long in the club. She then remembered the encounter with Angad near the swimming pool.
"No!" Kripa exclaimed shaking her head. She looked at Roshan. "Yes," He said, "Meghna is Angad Khanna's sister!"
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Hope you all like it.
Do comment!
Edited by lalala10 - 15 years ago
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Thanks! I will soon. 😊
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Too Good to be true; love.
Part 9:
You and Me.


"But if that is true than Meghna would have seen the magazine a couple of weeks ago. How come she didn't say anything! We met yesterday, but she didnt say anything!", Kripa said. "We had our exams sometime around back then. Meghna is very studious, she probabaly didn't get time to read it.", Roshan said. "So how did you know Meghna is his sister?", Kripa questioned. "Meghna read your latest issue, and she called a couple of minutes ago. She said that she was his sister. I was shocked and told her I'll call her back.", Roshan answered.
They called Meghna on her cell. "Meghna,", Kripa started,"are you really Anagd's sister?". "Yes! I am.", Meghna confirmed. "Meghna, I am so sorry I didn't know, I just, it's nothing against you.", Kripa stumbled. She hated Angad, true. But she would never let him get in the way of any of her loved ones' happiness. Taking a deep breath Kripa continued. "I just want the truth to come out, and honestly, I didn't lie. Everything is based on solid evidence. But, I am so sorry! I will stop if you want. Really I didn't mean to harm you or anything. Neither did Roshan we didn't even know you were his sister." Kripa finished. This was so hard for Kripa. This was the reason she had transformed, this was the aim she had in mind for the past years, this was what brought her this far. "It's okay.", Kripa heard Meghna say, "I know everything in your magazine is true. But I still I love him! He is my brother, and I can't see him upset, but at the same time, me or my parents we dont want you to stop. No
! We want you to expose him, so that he may accept his mistakes, and be a better human being, somehow. Even though it may be embarrassing or sad for us. Just do it." Meghna spoke quickly. Kripa could feel the courage she had to gather to say those words. "Are you sure?" Kripa asked. "Yes.", Meghna confirmed. Relief washed over Kripa. "Ok then, bye! Take care.", Kripa said. "You too. And Kripa?". "Yeah?" Kripa asked. "Thanks for everything." Meghna voiced. "Your welcome, kid." Kripa said and handed the phone over to Roshan, who started talking to his girlfriend.
Kripa entered her room. She sighed, and threw herself on her bed. This wasn't what she wanted. She wanted to destroy Angad, to show everyone his true face, to punish him for his every sin. She did not want to do it to make him a better human being. She turned and layed on her back, looking at the ceiling. After debating for over quite sometime, she concluded that she and Angad's family wanted the same thing, even though for completely different reasons. So she would insult him by exposing him, and move on with her life; live with her family, work, go on vacations, and just chill out. But she didn't do it for making Angad a better human being, oh no! She was doing it only so she could see him as devestated she was 2 years ago. She turned to her side and hugged her pillow. In the process of hating Angad Khanna she forgot her aim.
She promised herself that she would show Angad Khanna's true character infront of the whole world, that was all! All she would ever do would be revealing his dirty self, and then never look at his face again! She fell asleep, not knowing when.
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Angad was on his bed thinking of Kripa and the effect she had on him. She was after his career, after his life, after him, but he couldn't help it. He was attracted. But it wasn't just physical, it was so much more deep. It was like his life was a puzzle and Kripa was the missing center piece. It felt like he was a wrinkled, disformed picture , and Kripa was the frame that was needed to bring out his beauty. This had never happened to him before. He was a little scared but yet he was enjoying every minute of it. What was happening to him?
His cellphone rang, disturbing him and his thoughts. He wanted it to be Kripa. His eyes suddenly glittering, he smiled at the possibility. Slowly he extended his hands towards his cell phone. But it was his coach. He rolled his eyes and ignored it, letting it ring until it fell silent again.
He looked outside the glass door of his terrace. He heard the rain drops, hitting the solid structures, why was it never as melodious, as it was now. He saw the wind moving the leaves of the plants in his terrace, it was beautiful. He saw the rain drops hit the floor of his terrace, with such furiousity, such force, such passion that they reminded him of Kripa. He imagined her, with her eyes closed, as water droplets hit her face, and slided down. He remembered how he had caught her when she had fainted, he remembered carrying her. Oh, how perfect it felt!
He looked back outside. Was he this oblivious of nature before? He was amazed at how he could ignore this for the past twenty-three years of his life. He walked outside and allowed the rain to fall on him. It felt nice, the cold tickling sensation. He looked towards the sky and smiled.
"Angad.", He heard someone whisper. He turned around to see Kripa running away from him laughing. She turned around to look at him, her laugh, adorable, her wet hair clinging to her beautiful face, and tempting lips. She gathered her hair, and pushed them back, splashing drops of water on Angad's face, as he closed his eyes and turned his face away. He opened his eyes again. He looked to his left, where she was standing just a few seconds a go.She wasn't there .
It was then that Angad felt fingers running down from his temples to his ears, and neck. He turned around and quickly grabbed her hand, before she could run away. She turned her face to look at him, her eyes full of joy. Then she was gone. Like sand, she slipped away from his hands. And then she was gone. Angad smiled, running a hand through his hair. Holding his neck in his hands, he shook his head, and went inside.
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Hey! Do read and comment, please do!
Thanks for reading!
Love you!

Edited by lalala10 - 14 years ago

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