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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey another awsome part.. hope kripa realizes her feelings.. continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhan

mindblowing part 😃



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Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey another awsome part.. hope kripa realizes her feelings.. continue soon

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Hey. LOL , I knew it would be something like this. That's what you always write. No offense though, I just find it funny. 😆 😆 😆
But thanks alot. I like it when yuo comment. You are a regular commentator. Lol.
Anytime .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 12:
Kripa woke up with Angad's strong arm around her waist. His face was buried in her neck and his warm breath sending chills down Kripa's spine. She looked at his face. He looked so innocent while sleeping, away from all the worries of the world, safe and happy in his wonderland. But was he really what he seemed? She knew today would be a hard day for her. She was no less confused than last night. She wanted to go back to sleep again. She closed her eyes, and that is when she remembered she hadn't called her family. They must be worried sick! She looked outside trying to predict what the time was, but it was hard for her. Today was very dark and cloudy. It seemed liked 10 in the night. She turned her face towards the clock on the side table. It was only 3 p.m. . She sat up and removed his arm from her waist gently, trying not to disturb him. He seemed to be enjoying his sleep. She got up quietly and went downstairs. She just couldn't believe it was just 3 p.m. . She roamed around a little, exploring the house. It was beautiful but cozy. Elegant and stylish with green plants added to alot of places.There was lot of black in the house, she noticed. There was a small dinning table, right beside the counter of the open kitchen. Not far away from it, was a black couch, opposite a plasma t.v. . Kripa noticed a DVD player and play station next to the t.v. . There was another room downstairs-it's wall were plain white, exactly like the one she was sleeping in. It's furniture was sleek and brown, with hints of blue and white on the cushions, and the sofa's. It was artistically decorated.
There were black comfortable seats, on the porch, that gave a beautiful view of the garden. The garden, was however, now wet. Kripa hoped it wouldn't be logged, because it was beautiful.
Kripa went upstairs again. She walked towards the unfamiliar rooms. One was painted light yellow, with cream colored curtains. It had white furniture kept in it. Gadgets, clothes, pictures, Cd's, all were scattered over the room. The bed was also not made. She realized it was Angad's room. On the other end of the room was a translucent slide open door. She went upto it and opened it. It was filled with gym equipments. The room was simple but beautiful. It also had a large terrace with plants organized in pots, while some were hanging.
The other room had a simple sofa, and a polished table surrounded by chairs, and huge sophisticated shelves and racks filled with books, and CD's and trophies.
There was another door at the end of the hall way. She opened it. It was a music room she concluded when she saw the instruments settled in different places. How ever one of them caught her eye. It was a grand piano, at the far lonely corner of the room. She walked upto it and touched it. A few distance away from the piano, was the entrance to yet another balcony. She walked out of the room.
She passed by "her" room and peeked inside. Anagd wasn't there. She frowned a little and went downstairs. He was there, in the kitchen, settling the frying pan on the stove.
She walked upto him. He turned to look at her. "Oh! There you are.", he said. "Where were you?". "Just checking this place out.", Kripa shrugged. "Can I use the phone?", Kripa asked. "Yeah, sure.",Angad said pointing towards silver cordless kept on the table near the couch.
She dialed her house number. Roshan picked up the phone. "Hello.", he greeted. "Hey, Roshan. It's Kripa.", Kripa greeted back. "Di! Where have you been, Chachu has been worried sick!" Roshan screamed. "I know! I know! Tell him I am sorry. I forgot top call. It started raining heavily, so I couldn't come back. Tell him I am fine and I'll be home as soon as posible. Ok?" , Kripa voiced. "Ok. Take care." Roshan agreed. "You too. Bye.", Kripa said, and kept the phone down.
She walked back to Angad. He smiled at her, that just made her angry. "Who are you, Angad?", she asked, unable to hide her confusion any longer. Though Angad had a clue about what she meant, but he wasn't sure about his prediction's efficiency. "You do realize how that sounded right?",he smirked. His smirk pursued her to ask him further. "I mean, you're - you're like this whole new person. You aren't mean or angry . You aren't Angad Khanna! You are, you are -". "A stranger?", he interrupted. "Yes!", Kripa nodded, "a totally different person, a stranger!". "A stranger.", Angad repeated. "A stranger.", Kripa also repeated. "How about we rephrase that.", Angad smirked again. Kripa gave hima confused look. "How about something like: I'm "your stranger".". Kripa looked at him she couldn't help but smile. "My stranger?", she said tilting her head. "Yup. Kripa Sharma's stranger.", Angad said moving closer. Just when he put his hands on the counter trapping her, the phone rang.
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Edited by lalala10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey an awsome part.. Continue soon.. Can't wait to read more..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey an awsome part.. Continue soon.. Can't wait to read more..

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😊 Hey. Thank you. I will continue asap.
Anytime dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 13:

Angad sighed and made his way to the phone. "Hello?", Kripa heard him say. "Yeah mom, I am fine. - No. -Ok Bye. - you too." He put the phone down, and jogged over to Kripa. "What were you making?", Kripa asked him. "French toast. You want some?", he offered. "Yeah, I am kind of hungry.", Kripa said.
After ten minutes, Angad and Kripa sat down for lunch. "Angad, these are delicious!", Kripa exclaimed, quite surprised. Anagd smirked. "Yeah, well. I am an all complete package.", he winked at Kripa. They ate thier lunch, in silnce then. Angad smirking, while Kripa was nevertheless confused.
Fifteen minutes later, Kripa was sitting on the couch, watching the weather forecast, when Angad threw himself next to her. "How's the weather?",he inquired. "Worse!", Kripa said, giving him a glance, and turning towards the t.v., only to look at him again. He was smiling widely. "What?", Krip asked. Angad took a bite of the chocolate bar, he eating. "You get to stay longer!", he pointed the chocolate bar towards her. Kripa gave him a irritated look, and then turned towards the t.v. again, as Angad slouched.
"Kripa?", Angad took her name. It gave her heart a jolt, just the fact that he took her name. He had taken his name other times too, but this was the first time she felt the jolt. She was still staring at the t.v., lost in her thoughts. Annoyed, Angad took the remote form her hands and powered the t.v. off. "Kripa?",he voiced, as Kripa came out of the shock of the t.v. closing suddenly. "Yeah?",she asked. Angad sat back a little, and played with the remote. "You said we will play football.", he reminded. "Can we play now?", he asked. "Oh Angad! I would love to! But the ground outisde is soaked in water. So we can't play,", Kripa said. "Now, " Kripa said smiling, " excuse me.". And she went upstairs to use the washroom, leaving a frowning Angad behind.
She was shocked when she came back. The living room was empty. The couch, the plasma t.v., the rug, the tables, and everything else was pushed behind, the stair case, and there was nothing left in the living room, except a dangerously handosme Angad, with a football under his right foot. He lifted up his chin and pointed his index finger towards Kripa. "Ready Sharma?", he smirked. Kripa smirked back. "As ever.", she stated. He then pointed towards the space between two large, empty bottles of Coke, at the end of the room. "That's the goal.", he said. They both kept the ball in middle of the room, and stood an equal distance away. "On the count of three.", Kripa raised her eyebrows. Angad nodded. "One,", said Kripa. "Two.", said ANgad. "Three!", they both said together and rushed towards the ball. Angad took it first and made his way towards the goal, he was half way there when Kripa used the three-sixty (360) trick and stole the ball away from him. He was surprsied at first, but then as he saw her near the goal, he ran upto her, and tried to steal it. But Kripa was faster, before he could do anything, Kripa gave the ball a hard kick and it landed right in between, the two plastic bottles. "Bulls eye!" Kripa screamed. Angad shook his head, and started the game again. On the count of three Angad quickly took the ball again, battling against Kripa, took the ball near the goal and scored. "Now we are even!", he said smirking. Kripa nodded and started the game again. Kripa took the ball, first this time, but Angad quickly stole it. And to his ultimate shock, she used Angad's very own classic trick, and stealing the ball, scored. "Like the taste of your own medicine?", Kripa taunted him, grinning. "So you know my moves too?", Angad voiced his shock. "I know all your moves, Angad.", Kripa smirked. They were about to start again, when Angad's cordless phone rang. Angad whined, and ran towards it picking it up. "Hello?", he said in annoyed tone. "Hello. Is Kripa there?",Angad heard a man say. "Yeah, she is. Hold on.", he answered. Angad handed the phone to Kripa. "Hello?", Kripa said. "Kripa, where are you?", she heard her father speak. "Dad, I am at a friends house. I'll be there asap.", Kripa answered. "What? Dad, I-. Ok. Bye take care." Kripa said. "What's wrong?", Angad asked. "My dad wants me to stay here as long as the rain doesn't stop.", Kripa aid in a tired tone. Angad smiled broadly, and Kripa rolled her eyes at him."So,", she said suddenly smiling, "I win!". "No!", Angad said, and took the ball from near Kripa, running towards the goal, as Kripa ran after him.
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Twenty minutes later, Kripa and Angad were soaked in sweat. "I'm going to take a shower.", Kripa said and went upstairs to her room. Angad smirked. "It's time!", he said to himself. He too, went upstairs, and peeked into Kripa's room. He saw her taking out a pair of jeans and a red shirt to wear. He quickly, hid behind the wall when she came to lock the door, of her room.
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Edited by lalala10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Me First .

Lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy part .
Loved it .
sorry for not commenting earlier yaar was not well .

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Love yuh.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Me First . Lol. 😆 😆

Lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy part . Thank you so much.
Loved it . I am glad you did.
sorry for not commenting earlier yaar was not well . Aray! *slaps forehead* ! No problem, yaar 😳. But I am glad you commented. Thanks. 😳 😊 Oh I forgot to read that you were not well. I am so sorry. Hope you are feeling better.
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Thanks for the PM . Anytime.
Love yuh. You too.




Edited by lalala10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww awesome part i love it angad is so smart ...game going good ..something gona happen for sure please update soon and thx for pm
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

aww awesome part Thank you so much! i love it angad is so smart He is really cheesy too 😃 😃 ...game going good 😉 ..something gona happen for sure, haha, it will happen please update soon I will and thx for pm , anytime.

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