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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!! Priti!!!!!
How are u???
I am sooo glad that you have finally updated your fic....
It was lovely.....soooo very romantic...
par ab jaldiiii se...Aditya aur Niharika ko milao......
pleaseeeeeeeee...dono ko jaldi se ek dusre ki dil ki baat pata chal jaye
aisa kuch karo naaaaaaaaaa....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
A very nice update once again...
ab jaldi se update karna....




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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!! Priti!!!!!
How are u???
I am sooo glad that you have finally updated your fic....
It was lovely.....soooo very romantic...
par ab jaldiiii se...Aditya aur Niharika ko milao......
pleaseeeeeeeee...dono ko jaldi se ek dusre ki dil ki baat pata chal jaye
aisa kuch karo naaaaaaaaaa....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
A very nice update once again...
ab jaldi se update karna....




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Riya.

HII RIYA I AM GLAD THAT U COMMENTED ON MOHABBAT I WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS DEAR...SO FIRST OF ALL THANX A LOT DEAR...AND I AM ABSOLUTELY FINE DEAR...AND HOPE THE SAME FOR U TOO...YA I FINALLY DID SO AND NOW I WILL TRY MY BEST TO TO DO IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...HAAN-HAAN DEAR DON'T WORRY ADI-NIHA BAHUT JALD HI MILENGE BAS THODA SA AUR INTEZAAR KAR LO...HAAN MAIN JALDI HI UD KARNE KI KOSHISH KARUNGI...PAR TUM COMMENT KARNA MAT BHOOLNA...TAKE CARE...BYEEE...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!THANX A LOT DEAR.........

Niharika ne Adi ko bulaya aur tab jaake usse ehsaas huay ke woh khwaab dekh raha tha!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN PAR KHWAAB BAHUT HASEEN THA KYUN.........

Yeh Adi toh gaya kaam se!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Ankh khol kar sapne dekh raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† HAAN POORI TARAH KAAM SE GAYA.............HAHAHAHAHAHA............

Aditya Niharika se gussa ho jaata hai toh Niharika uska haath pakad leti hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 HAAIIII NAHIN KAHO AAYE HAAIII.........

Waise mujhe nahi lagta Adi Niharika se gussa ho sakta hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 IT'S SO OBVIOUS........YEH BHI KOI KEHNE WAALI BAAT HAI........

Niharika ka Adi ko manane ka tareeka bhi bada hi cute tha!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HAAN AB JAB HUMAARA ADI HI ITNA CUTE HAI TOH PHIR AAGE MAIN KYA KAHUN...........

It is like Kitani mohabbat hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Niharika Adi ko sorry bolti hai aur Adi apna favourite dialogue bolta hai its ok senurita aur waisi bhi aise bade-bade desho mein aisi choti-choti baatein toh hoti hi rehti hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HAAN MUJHE BHI YEH PORTION BAHUT PASAND HAI.......AUR KHAASKAR YEH DIALOGUE...............

He forgives her with a very sweet smile!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 YES AB JAB NIHARIKA ITNE PYAAR SE SORRY BOL RAHI HAI, TOH ADI KO TOH USE MAAF KARAN HI THA NA...........AUR EK SWEET SI SMILE NE USMEIN CHAAR CHAAND LAGA DIYE........

Niharika kehti hai woh bas yehi soch rahi thi ke Adi ko kaise manayegi aur woh usse maaf karega yaa nahi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN AUR BECHAARI SOCH BHI KYA SAKTI HAI...........

Adi usse naraz hi nahi tha woh toh bas thoda sa bhav kha raha tha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Nautanki saala!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† HAAN AB WOH NIHA SE NARAAZ KAISE HO SAKTA HAI.....BUT THODA SA BHAAV KHAANA TOH BANTA HAI NA ADI KA..........KYUN.....

Adi tum toh meri bolte bolte rukh gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Kaash usne aage kaha hota!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” TOH WAHIN PAR...........HAHAHAHAHA..........

Niharika completed for him ke uski sabse acchi dost hai yahi na!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN PAR KAB TAK ................

Niharika tum toh uski jaan ho usse bolne toh diya hota!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 HAAN KAASH AISA HI HOTA...........

Niharika Adi se akele mein baat karna chahti thi isilye hall se bahar aa gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Tareef toh hall mein bhi ho sakti thi toh phir??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ AB SAMJHLO AAGE AUR MAIN KYA BOLU..........

Adi ish baat se bahut khush ho gaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Khush toh aise ho raha hai jaise abhi Niharika apne pyaar ka izhaar karegi!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† HAAN BECHAARA...............

Niharika ne Adi ki tareef ki!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Karni hi thi akhir Adi ki performance toh best hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ BESTEST HE IS A ROCK STAR........

Niharika ne kaha ke Adi uska liye bahut special hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HAAN WOH TOH HAI HI.........

Adi bhi kam nahi hai pucch raha hai kitna special!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 OBVIOUSLY AB SPECIAL KI BHI TOH CATEGORIES HOTI HAIN.......HUMEIN BHI TOH PATA CHALEIN KI KITNA SPECIAL HAI ADI NIHARIKA SE.............

Niharika bol rahi hai yehi ke woh uska bahut hi special friend hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Jhoot bol rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” WELL YEH TOH WAQT HI BATAAYEGA..............

Adi ne kaha usse pata hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Ab usse pata hai toh why doesn't he make her admit it??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” YA WELL YEH TOH ADI HI JAANE KI WOH KYA KARANA CHAHATA HAI...........

Niharika pucch rahi hai kya pata hai??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Adi ko sab kuch pata hai bas Niharika ke muh se sunna chahta has sab kuch!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 PAR NIHARIKA HAI KI KUCH BOL HI NAHIN RAHI HAI................

Niharika ke puchne par kehta hai yehi ki woh special hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Woh toh woh hai lekin usse pata hai ke Niharika ko pyaar hogaya hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 SHAAYAD.........LET'S WAIT AND WATCH........

Adi aur Niharika dono hi ek dusre ke baare mein sochte sochte soh jaate hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 HAAN WARNA DASTAAN AAGE KAISE BADHEGI...........

The next day they are all discussing ke aaj kya kare!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ladke toh bas adventure sports karna chahte hai jo ladkiyon ko pasand nahi aa raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” IT'S SO OBVIOUS..........

Pooja ne papad ki baat ki toh Rahil ne usse papad banane ko kehta hai aur dono as usual ladne lag jaate hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† HAAN HAHAHAHAHA...........

Adi unhe rokta hai aur uski papad aur jhapad waali baat pe sab log hasne lag jaate hai!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 HAHAHAHAHAHA......

The boys agree on trekking aur Adi ke samjhane par ladkiyan bhi trekking par jaane ke liye maan jaati hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 U KNOW NA KI ADI KI BAAT KOI BHI NAHIN TAAL SAKTA HAI............

Akhir Adi ne jo manaya toh koi kaise mana karta!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊He is just wonderful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ADI ROCKS NO DOUBT ABOUT THAT..........

When Pooja said mazza nahi aaya toh woh log wapas aajayenge toh Adi agreed!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar mann hi mann bol raha hai ke woh aane denge tab naa!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†What is going on in Adi's mind??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› LET'S WAIT AND WATCH...................

Yeh Adi ne zarur kuch plan kiya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌHe is so naughty!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 YES HI IS TOO NAUGHTY................

Sab log trekking par nikal jaate hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I am looking forward to the trekking because I am sure it will be exciting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 LET'S WAIT AND WATCH..........


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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 22

Kuch hi der mein sab log trekking ki jagah par pahunch jaate hain, aur apna-apna samaan lekar gaadi se niche utarte hain……..

KIR-{mesmerized by the beauty of the place}-wow! What a beautiful place………..

NIHAL-{romantically}-haan, magar tumse kam…….

Aditya nihal aur kiran ke beech mein aate hue, kehta hai……

ADI-{in a teasing style}-haan yeh baat toh tumne bilkul sahi kahi, balki main toh yeh kehta hoon ki kiran ki khubsoorti ke aage toh yeh kuch bhi nahin hai………..

Aditya ki yeh baat sunkar nihal uski taraf ghoorkar dekhta hai……

ADI-{muskuraate hue}-tum yahi kehna chahte ho na ki main kabab mein haddi hoon, {suddenly a change in expression}-main bas yahi kehne aaya tha ki, sab kuch yahin par kar daaloge, ki aage ke liye bhi kuch chodoge…

Aur itna kehkar aditya wahan se chala jaata hai, aur woh dono hasne lagte hain……….

Cut to pooja and rahil………

POO-dekho main bata de rahin hoon, main papad nahin banaungi…………

Pooja ki yeh baat sunkar rahil chaunk kar uski taraf dekhkar kehta hai………

RAHIL-kya? Tum ab tak us papad se hi chipki hui ho…..are yaar maine toh sirf mazaak kar raha tha,main bhala tumse kaise kaam kara sakta hoon, agar zaroorat padi toh main khud baawarchi ban jaunga, tumhe toh main paon bhi zameen par nahin rakhne doonga, apni palkon par bitha kar rakhunga tumhe…………

POO-{smile karte hue}-sachchi………

RAHIL-{softly}-muchchi………

"bas dhyaan rakhna ki kahin palkein tutkar niche na gir jaayein, aur haan philhaal tumhe palkon ki nahin, in rassiyon ki zaroorat padegi, aur haan ek baat aur pair toh zameen par rakhne hi padenge"

Yeh baat sunkar pooja aur rahil piche ki taraf turn karte hain, aur dekhte hain ki aditya unke piche rassi lekar khada hua hai, adi undono ke paas aakar unhe rassiyaan thama deta hai, aur wahan se chala jaata hai………..pooja aur rahil aditya ko dekhte rehte hain…………

Cut to sagar and niharika.

SAG-kya hua niharika? Aaj tum bahut chup-chap ho, kahin tumhe darr toh nahin lag raha hai…………

NIHA-nahin lag raha hai ka kya matlab?

SAG-iska matlab ki tumhe darr lag raha hai……….

NIHA-haan…………..

SAG-waise sach kahun toh thoda-thoda darr toh mujhe bhi lag raha hai…………..

NIHA-kyun?

SAG-kyun ka kya matlab? Ab aisi-aisi baatein sunne ko milengi toh darr toh lagega hi………

NIHA-{ghabraate hue}-kaisi-kaisi baatein?

"Kuch khaas nahin bas bhatakti hui roohon ki baatein……aur kya?"

Niharika apne side mein aditya ko dekhti hai…………..

NIHA-{ghabraakar niche dekhte hue}-bhatakti hui roohein……..

Aur aditya sagar ko dekhkar aankh maarte hue halke se muskuraata hai………..phir jaise hi niharika aditya ki taraf dekhti hai……..

ADI-{expression change}-haaaaaaan………….balki maine toh yahan tak bhi suna hai ki………….

NIHA-kiiiiiiiiii…………?

ADI-ki yahi ki, jab bhi koi ladki us pahadi par chadai karti hai, wahi roohein use apni taraf khinchne lagti hain………..

NIHA-khinchne lagti hai matlab!

ADI-are yaar, khinchne lagte hain matlab ki haathon se unke pair niche ki taraf khinchne lagte hain, aur kya……….

NIHA-par niche ki taraf hi kyun?

ADI-are yaar niche nahin khinchengi toh banda upar kaise pahunchega…………aur upar ka matlab seedha swarg ya phir narak bhi ho sakta hai, well yeh toh bande ke karmon ke upar depend karta hai…………

NIHA-lekin yeh roohein ladkiyon ko hi kyun khinchti hain?

ADI-are yaar kyunki woh roohein ladkon ki hain, toh obviously woh ladkiyon ko hi khinchengi na……..warna dostana nahin ban jaayega……….

Niharika kuch der tak aditya ki baaton par gaur karti hai, phir usse kehti hai…………

NIHA-magar tumhe nahin lagta hai ki yeh partiality hai………

ADI-partiality?

NIHA-aur nahin toh kya, insaano ki duniyaan mein kya kam bhed-bhav hai, ladke-ladkiyon ke beech mein, jo ab roohon ki duniyaan mein bhi shuru ho gayi {after a pause}- toh is baare mein tumhaari kya rai hai?

ADI-ahhhhmmm………tumne pakad liya na…….

NIHA-haaaan…………

ADI-main toh bas tumhaara darr door karne ki koshish kar raha tha………..

NIHA-{gusse se}-tum mera darr bhaga rahe the, ya phir use bhada rahe the……..

Aur itna kehkar niharika wahan se cahli jaati hai……..

ADI-are niha suno toh, ruko toh…………

SAG-hahahahahaha…………."kya se kya ho gaya"……….

Aur yahi kehte-kehte sagar bhi wahan se chala jaata hai…………..

ADI-yeh niha bhi na zara sa mazaak bhi nahin seh sakti, ab ise manana padega, chal aditya beta kaam par lag jaa………

Aur itna sochkar aditya bhi niha ke piche ho leta hai………..

Cut to the mountain, for trekking.

Jahan par sab log pahadi par chadne ki tyayaari kar rahein hain………….

RAHIL-common girls, get ready for the adventure…………..

POO-adventure ya phir suicide……….

RAHIL-suicide!

POO-aur nahin toh kya, ab koi normal insaan toh yeh kaam nahin kar sakta, toh koi pagal hi hoga jo is pahadi par chadega, aur is par chadne ka matlab hi hai suicide karna……..

RAHIL-thik hai suicide hi sahi, lekin tum yeh kyun nahin sochti ki un aakhiri palon mein bhi main-main tumhaare saath rahunga…

POO-main toh chahti hi hoon ki tum humesha mere saath hi raho, isiliye keh rahin hoon waapas chaltein hain, kyunki main tumhaare saath zinda rehna chahti hoon……

ADI-kaun jiyegaa kaun maregaa iska faisla upar waala karega, tab tak hum chadai shuru karte hain…..

Aur itna kehkar aditya pooja aur rahil ko pahadi par chadai shuru karne ko kehta hai………….

Cut to nihal and kiran, jo ki pahadi par chadne ki tyayaari kar rahein hain….

KIR-samhal ke….

NIHAL-tum meri nahin apni fikar karo….

KIR-kyun tum kisliye ho?

ADI-aur agar tum nahin ho, toh phir main hoon na……..toh tum dono tyayaar ho chadai shuru karne ke liye………….

NIH-KIR-{ek saath}-haan………….

ADI-all the best……………..

NIH-to u too……………

KIR-apna khayaal rakhna adi, aur haan samhal kar upar chadna……………

ADI-ya sure…………..

Cut to sagar and niharika, aur woh dono bhi chadai karne ki tyayaari mein jute hue hain…………..tabhie aditya wahan par aata hai……………

ADI-toh tum dono tyayaar ho gaye, shuru karein chadai?

SAG-"AB", I am really sorry magar main upar nahin chad paunga…………..

ADI-kyun kya hua kido? Any problem?

SAG-haan……….. pata nahin magar mere daayein pair mein halka-halka sa dard ho raha hai…………….

ADI-agar zyaada takleef ho toh mujhe batao, hum log abhi waapas hotel chaltein hain…………..aur main doctor…………..

SAG-nahin "AB", plzzz aap mere liye sabka trekking trip cancel mat kijiye, main yahan niche tent mein araam kar loonga toh, thik ho jaunga, plzzz both of u enjoy ur selves………….

NIH-lekin sagar hum tumhe aise akela chodkar thode hi na jaa sakte hain, kam se kam tum doctor ko toh………….

SAG-nahin niharika plzzz tum apna trip enjoy karo, aur meri fikar mat karo, I will be fine, just trust me…………….

ADI-what fine kido, tumhe kya lagta hai ki yeh enjoyment tumse bhadkar hain, haan…………….

NIH-aditya bilkul sahi keh raha hai…………..

SAG-oh God! Ab aap dono ko main kaise samjhaayun, plzzz meri baat maaniye aur aap dono chadai shuru kijiye, maine kaha na ki main thik ho jaunga, aur haan mujhe doctor ki koi zaroorat nahin hai philhaal, aur jab hogi toh aapse hi kahunga na…………….

ADI-NIHA-{together}-are u sure………………..

SAG-100% sure……………and now plzzz both of u go, and enjoy yourselves, and plzzz don't worry about me, I will be fine……………

Cut to pooja and rahil………….

POO-agar main niche giri na RS, toh………….

RS-phir RS, kitni baar kaha hai tumse mujhe rahil keh kar bulaya karo……………..

POO-meri jaan ki bajaaye tumhe apne naam ki padi hai…………..

RS-jaan ki padi hai, tabhie toh dil se laga kar rakha hai tumhe……………

POO-aur agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh………….?

RS-phir main kisliye hoon, meri jaan se pehle {referring to pooja}, meri jaan jaayegi {referring to himself}…………..

POO-{kisses lightly on rahil's lips}-humaari………………

Cut to kiran and nihal………………..

NIH-{jokingly}-tum kitni bhaari ho gayi ho kiran, mujhe toh darr lag raha hai ki kahin yeh rassi hi na tut jaaye, phir toh tumhaare saath-saath main bhi…………….

KIR-{gusse se}-kya? Kya kaha tumne ki main moti ho gayi hoon, aur tumse samhaale nahin samhalti…………..

NIH-ab maine aisa thode hi na kaha tha………………..

KIR-magar tumhaara matlab toh wahi tha na…………..

NIH-kiran tum bhi na kis baat ka kya matlab nikaal leti ho…………..

KIR-agar main tumhe itni buri lagti hoon toh………….

NIH-toh…………are baba main toh bas halka sa mazaak kar raha tha……….aur tum toh sach mein naraaz ho gayi…………..

KIR-aisa mazaak bhi koi karta hai bhala…………

NIH-ok baba I am sorry, ab dobara aisi koi baat nahin karunga………..aur mazaak toh kabhie nahin…………….i promise………..

KIR-pakka promise……………

NIH-haan baba pakka promise…………..

Tabhie kiran ka haath nihal ke haathon se phisalne lagta hai………….lekin nihal fauran apni pakad ko mazboot banaate hue kiran ka haath kas kar pakad leta hai……….

KIR-{relieved}-mujhe toh laga tha ki……………

NIH-ki main tumhaara haath chod doonga………

KIR-nahin…………..

NIH-phir………….?

KIR-{apni nazrein jhukaate hue}-kuch nahin………………

NIH-yeh haath chodne ke liye thode hi na thaama hai, ab toh yeh saath saat janmon tak nahin chootega…………..

KIR-{expressing belief}-mujhe pata hai………….

Cut to aditya and niharika.

ADI-ab tak naraaz ho mujhse…………

NIHA-nahin toh……………

ADI-agar naraaz nahin ho toh phir mujhse baat kyun nahin kar rahi ho…………..

NIHA-kar toh rahin hoon…………

ADI-tum is haan toh aur nahin toh ko baat karna kehti ho……………

NIHA-mujhe lagta hai ki humein baat karne ke bajaaye upar ki taraf chahdai karne par zyaada dhyaan dena chahiye…………..

ADI-bilkul dena chahiye magar hum chadte-chadte bhi toh baat kar sakte hain………..

NIHA-magar mujhe nahin lagta……………

ADI-kyun?

NIHA-kyunki jab zindagi hi nahin bachegi toh baat kya khaak hogi…………..

ADI-ab is baat ke beech mein zindagi aur maut kahan se aa gayi………..

NIHA-tumhe nahin lagta ki agar humaara dhyaan zara sa bhi chukka toh humdono seedha niche khaayi mein jaakar girenge……….

ADI-nahin……………

NIHA-achcha aur who kyun?

ADI-kyunki tum jo mere saath ho………….

Niharika chaunkar aditya ki taraf dekhti hai…………

ADI-{smile karte hue}-aur phir jab tak main tumhaare saath hoon, tumhe kuch bhi nahin ho sakta………….

NIHA-oh really itna over confidence bhi achchi baat nahin hai………..

ADI-yeh over confidence nahin hai mera vishwaas hai, aur kehte hain na ki vishwaas mein itni taakat hoti hai ki who pahaad ko bhi hila sakti hai………..

NIHA-who toh waqt hi bataayega……………

ADI-haan yeh bhi sahi hai, chalo is bahaane hi sahi magar tum mujhse baat toh karne lagi…………..warna main toh………….

NIHA- toh?

ADI-mar hi jaata………….

NIHA-ab yeh mat kehna ki main agar tumse baat nahin karungi toh tum apni jaan de doge…………..

ADI-nahin yeh toh tum keh rahi ho, haan magar main tumse yeh zaroor kahunga ki mujhse apne dil ki saari baatein karlo, kya pata kal ho na ho………..

NIHA-adi plzzz ab yeh filmi dialogue jhaadna bandh karo, waise bhi mera abhi baat karne ka zara bhi mood nahin hai…………..

ADI-thik hai jaisi tumhaari marzi, magar kahin aisa na ho ki kal jab tumhaara mujhse baat karne ka mann ho toh main hi na hoon…………..tab kya karogi?

NIHA-kyun tum kahan jaa rahe ho?

ADI-main tumhe chodkar kahan jaa sakta hoon, magar zindagi ka koi bharosa bhi toh nahin………….

NIHA-yeh tumhe aaj ho kya gaya hai, itni ajeeb baatein kyun kar rahe ho?

ADI-baat toh tum nahin kar rahi ho, main toh bas itna hi keh raha hoon ki kahin aisa na ho ki kal ko tum mujhe dekhne tak ke liye bhi tarso………….

NIHA-bhala main kyun tarsane lagi tumhe dekhne ke liye, main kaun sa mari jaa rahin hoon tumse baat karne ke liye………

ADI-who bhi hai, jaan toh meri jaayegi, lekin ek baat bata doon, ki main marne ke baad bhi tumhaara peecha nahin chodunga………….

NIHA-{gusse se}-thik hai jaisi tumhaari marzi……………aur haan mujhe koi farak nahin padta hai tumhaare jeene ya marne se…………

ADI-dekhte hain, yeh bhi waqt hi bataayega ki kisko kitna farak padta hai…………..

Aur baaton hi baaton mein aditya aur niharika mountain ke peak tak pahunch jaate hain………….

ADI-pata hi nahin chala ki kab dekhte-dekhte humaari manzil aa gayi……………

NIHA-{relieved}-haan aur woh bhi sahi-salamat…………..

Pehle niharika peak par chadti hai, phir aditya ki taraf mudkar use apna haath thaamne ko kehti hai………….

ADI-soch lo ek baar haath thaam liya toh phir zindagi bhar kya saath janmon tak bhi nahin chodunga…………..

NIHA-adi pehle tum upar aa jaayo phir hum sochenge is baare mein…………..

ADI-nahin pehle vaada karo ki saat janmon tak saath nibhaayogi…………

NIHA-adi yeh kya bachpana hai, plzzz pehle tum upar aa jaayo…………

ADI-nahin aaj toh faisala hokar rahega ya toh is paar ya phir us paar…………..

NIHA-{tensed and a little bit shocked too}-adi plzzz…………

ADI-niha tumhaari ek haan aur naa meri zindagi ka rukh badal degi…………

NIHA-adi tum yeh…………

ADI-niha ab meri zindagi aur maut ka faisla sirf tumhaare haathon mein hai……….tumhaari haan meri zindagi aur naa meri maut………….ab faisla tumhaara hai………..

Tabhie achanak se ek baraf ke tukde ki khisakne ki wajah se adi ladkhadane lagta hai…………..

NIHA-{at once}-haan-haan-haan…………

ADI-{khushi se pagal hote hue}-yipeeeeeeeee………….{showing his victory]-yes…………

NIHA-{halke se smile karte hue}-ab toh upar aa jaayo………….

Aur phir niha aditya ko apna haath deti hai, aur aditya bhi peak par chad jaata hai………….aur niharika chain ki saans leti hai…………..

ADI-{holding niharika's shoulders}-mujhe pata tha ki tum haan hi kahogi…………

NIHA-achcha itna vishwaas tha tumhe mujhpar………….

ADI-khud se bhi zyaada…………

NIHA-adi main tumse………….

Aditya niharika ke labon par apna haath rakhte hue kehta hai…………………

ADI-{holding his breath}-I love u…………..

Niharika aditya ki taraf chaunkar dekhne lagti hai, aur aditya bhi niharika ko hi dekhe jaa raha hai………..

NIHA-aditya?

ADI-niharika main………….main tumse…………….?

Magar isse pehle ki aditya apni baat poori kar paata, ki uski nazar niharika ke piche ki taraf jaati hai jahan par ek baraf ka gola tezi se niharika ki taraf aa raha hota hai, aditya ka shocking expression dekhkar niharika bhi piche ki taraf turn karti hai, toh uske hosh bhi ud jaate hain, aditya aur niharika ek doosre ka haath pakad kar opposite direction mein bhaagne ki koshish karte hain ki achanak se dono niche gir jaate hain, kyunki unki pairon ki rassiyaan aapas mein ulajh gayi hoti hain, dono fauran rassiyon ko kholne mein jut jaate hain,aur doosri taraf baraf ka gola bhi apni poori raftaar se unki taraf aa raha hota hai, aur jaise hi rassiyaan khulti hain, aditya niharika ko opposite direction mein dhakka de deta hai, aur khud us baraf ke gole se takraakar niche khaayi mein gir jaata hai……………

ADI-!!!!!!!!!!"NIHARIKA"!!!!!!!!!!

NIHA-{shouting out powerfully and forcefully}-!!!!!!!!!!!"ADITYA"!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AUR CHAARON TARAF ADITYA KA NAAM GUNJ UTHTA HAI…………………….

AUR SAB KUCH EK DUM SHAANT HO JAATA HAI…………………

END OF PART 22.PLZZZ DO COMMENT……………

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesum!!! hey bhagwaan pzz adi ko safe rakhna!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiiiii sis a very nice update...bahut zyada mazza aaya...
I loved it to the core......!!!
thnx a lot....πŸ˜›
but plss adi ko kuch mat hone dena...😭
Nd i m sorry mein abse chote comments hi de paungi bcas ol bahut rarely aati hoon as my school has started..
Hope you understand..πŸ˜•

waiting tor the next part eagerly..
lots of love
ritu😊

Edited by RSZR - 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Kiran is mesmerized by the beauty of the place while Nihal is being romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Adi beech mein aakar unhe tease karne laga!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Pooja abhi bhi papad pe atki huyi hai!!!!!

Rahil is being all romantic and saying he would not let her do anything at all!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Adi yahan bhi beech mein aa gaya and his comment was so funny!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Niharika is scared and even Sagar admitted and that he is also a little scared!!!!!

Adi is now trying to scare Niharika by talking about ghosts!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

I loved his dialogue ke kyunki woh roohein ladko ki hai toh obviously ladkiyon ko hi khinchenge na warna dostana nahi ban jayega!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Magar Niharika bhi usse pakad leti hai aur kya jawab deti hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Niharika ab gusse mein chali jaati hai and Sagar is taunting Adi by singing a song!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Aditya samajh gaya ke ab usse Niharika ko manana padega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja commented that climbing this mountain is definately suicide and wanted to go back but Rahil tried to coax her to climb it!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kiran and Nihal are saying romantic things even while trying to climb!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sagar said that there was a pain in his right foot and convinced Adi and Niharika to go on without him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure he was pretending so that Adi and Niharika could spend sometime together alone!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Here Pooja and Rahil are getting romantic even while climbing!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Nihal joked with Kiran and she gets angry but when Nihal stops her from falling they are again back to their romance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Niharika is not talking much to Adi while climbing!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

When he said about it she reminded him that they should concentrate more on climbing as unka dhyaan zara sa bhi chuka toh dono seedhe jaake khai mein girenge!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi kehta hai ke jab tak Niharika uske saath hai Niharika ko kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya vishwaas hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Adi started saying ke kal jab Niharika ka usse baat karne ka mann ho toh woh hi naa ho kyunki kya pata kal ho na ho!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Finally Adi ne Niharika ko propose kiya and Niharika ne bhi usse apna haath diya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

That scene was just great and the way he proposed aise sirf wahi kar sakta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Niharika kehne hi jaa rahi thi when Adi stopped her and told her I love you!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Itne acche moment par hi yeh barf ka gola girna tha jab finally Adi ne finally Niharika ko propose kiya this is not fair!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Adi was talking about life and death a while ago aur yeh ho gaya!!!!!

I hope nothing has happened to Adi and he is alright!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”After all woh Niharika ko aise chhod kar nahi jaa sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*faint*

Yeah kya hora hain???

Tell me that Nothing has happened to Adi, *worried*

I'm to Upset to Write anything ... but that finally Adi says I Love you And this Happens ... For Niha's sake let him be safe ..

and ofcourse for us readers sake

btw a very good update ..

Loved how in the beginning Adi just came in between all the couple and gave his comments, he so funny ... I love him ..

but yeh Sagar ko kya hua, or was he just pretending that his foot hurts so he can give some time to Adi and Niharika ..

Anyways i think i'll go back to sulking .. i didn't think that when he was talking about death and life, and kal ho na ho .. this will happen ...

Take care

yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Priti, I'm a new reader of this fic. Bahut waqt se iss fic ko catch karne ki koshish kar rahi thi n now I'm done. But ye kya......mere catch karte hi Adi gir gaya. I feel like cursing myself only.
Anyways, Pls Keep Adi safe. I really luv his character here. Kitni pyaari baatein karta hai n specially in this part he was extra-fabulous. Har baat dil ko chhu rahi thi. The last scene where Adi confessed was so cute but then woh stupid baraf ka gola aa gaya.
I really hope he is f9. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
this is not done!!!! ye kounse point pe end kiya hai?plzzzzzzzzzzz ADI ko kuch mat hone dena varna next update per comment nahi karungiπŸ˜‘πŸ˜‰

anyways Awsome update!as always ADI n NIHA r rocking..ADI's confession is so CUTE...πŸ˜› plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon just cant wait to know what next....so plzz update ASAP.

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