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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

oyee next ud kab karegi?????????jab log characters or story ka plot bhool jaayenge?????????

AISA MAT BOL PLZZZZZZZZZZZ YAAR, PHIR MERA KYA HOGA DEAR, MAIN JALD HI KARUNGI SWEETY, AUR BADA SA HI KARUNGI, PLZZZZZZZZ BEAR WITH ME, DEAR............. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rlrl

abe update kar na .😡

ARE YAAR NARAAZ MAT HO SWEETY, JALD HI KARUNGI YAAR, PLZZZZZZ THODA SA AUR WAIT KAR LE DEAR, GUSSA MAT KAR, TU HANSTI HUI ZYAADA ACHCHI LAGTI HAI. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hii everybody, next ud sunday ko hoga, and i promise u that, ki bada sa hi hoga, plzzzzzzzzzz bear with me for some time, actually aap sab toh jaante hi hain ki mohabbat mera pehla FF hai, toh main is par bahut mehnat karti hoon , iske scenes aur dialogues likhne mein, mujhe thoda sa zyaada waqt lagta hai,aur mujhe is mehnat se koi parhez nahin hai, kyunki i want to give u the best, from me as a writer, so plzzzzzzz aap log thoda sa sabr kijiye, aur main aap sabse promise karti hoon ki, aap sabko best se best ud's karke doongi, but it will take some time, i hope u will understand.................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

Hii everybody, next ud sunday ko hoga, and i promise u that, ki bada sa hi hoga, plzzzzzzzzzz bear with me for some time, actually aap sab toh jaante hi hain ki mohabbat mera pehla FF hai, toh main is par bahut mehnat karti hoon , iske scenes aur dialogues likhne mein, mujhe thoda sa zyaada waqt lagta hai,aur mujhe is mehnat se koi parhez nahin hai, kyunki i want to give u the best, from me as a writer, so plzzzzzzz aap log thoda sa sabr kijiye, aur main aap sabse promise karti hoon ki, aap sabko best se best ud's karke doongi, but it will take some time, i hope u will understand.................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

No probs dear and we shall wait for that.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

Hii everybody, next ud sunday ko hoga, and i promise u that, ki bada sa hi hoga, plzzzzzzzzzz bear with me for some time, actually aap sab toh jaante hi hain ki mohabbat mera pehla FF hai, toh main is par bahut mehnat karti hoon , iske scenes aur dialogues likhne mein, mujhe thoda sa zyaada waqt lagta hai,aur mujhe is mehnat se koi parhez nahin hai, kyunki i want to give u the best, from me as a writer, so plzzzzzzz aap log thoda sa sabr kijiye, aur main aap sabse promise karti hoon ki, aap sabko best se best ud's karke doongi, but it will take some time, i hope u will understand.................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.



okkkk willl wait
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

I knew it ke woh ladki Niharika nahi hogi!!!!😊 😊 😊

Lekin yeh ladki toh peeche hi padh gayi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeh apne aapko samajti kya hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Kuch bhi bole jaa rahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Waise hi Adi itna pareshan hai aur ismein anap shanap bak rahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Accha huya Niharika waha par aa gayi!!!!!

Niharika said ke usse Adi par pura bharosa hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved it when Niharika said ke Adi uska husband hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aditya toh bilkul shocked ho jata hai hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Niharika ne yeh baat gusse mein kahi magar gusse mein dil ki baat muh se nikal aati hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Acchi khabar li ush ladki ki Niharika ne!!!! Woh bhi yeh baat sunke bilkul shocked ho gayi thi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆

Niharika said to Aditya aap chup rahiye!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaiiii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Niharika ish ladki se sorry bhi bulwati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊

Niharika ka yeh roop Aditya ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha aur dekhta hi rahe gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Zahir hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when Adi called her Mrs.Malhotra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Uski kitni khichai kar raha tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waise Mrs.Malhotra ka gussa aisa hai to pyaar kaise hoga??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi kitna natak karta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kehta hai ke tumne isse galati ka naam de diya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh Niharika ka dimag itna garam pehli baar dekha hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕

Adi bhi kuch kam nahi hai kehta hai ke uske dobara gayab hone ka risk woh nahi lena chahta!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waise Niharika gayi kahan thi aur yeh admi kaun hai??😕 😕 😕

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!THANX A LOT SWEETY, I AM GLAD.

I knew it ke woh ladki Niharika nahi hogi!!!!😊 😊 😊YES DEAR..........

Lekin yeh ladki toh peeche hi padh gayi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeh apne aapko samajti kya hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡PATA NAHIN.............

Kuch bhi bole jaa rahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Waise hi Adi itna pareshan hai aur ismein anap shanap bak rahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒BATTAMIZ KAHIN KI.............

Accha huya Niharika waha par aa gayi!!!!! HMMMMMMM.......

Niharika said ke usse Adi par pura bharosa hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏HAAN SO TOH HOGA HI, AB SAMAJHDAAR KE LIYE ISHAARA HI KAAFI HAI.

I loved it when Niharika said ke Adi uska husband hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ME TOOOOOOOO..............

Aditya toh bilkul shocked ho jata hai hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲SO TOH HOGA HI.

Niharika ne yeh baat gusse mein kahi magar gusse mein dil ki baat muh se nikal aati hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉HMMMMM.............

Acchi khabar li ush ladki ki Niharika ne!!!! Woh bhi yeh baat sunke bilkul shocked ho gayi thi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆AB BAAT HI KUCH AISI THI................

Niharika said to Aditya aap chup rahiye!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaiiii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳CHUP JO NAHIN HO RAHA THA................

Niharika ish ladki se sorry bhi bulwati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 YA............

Niharika ka yeh roop Aditya ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha aur dekhta hi rahe gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Zahir hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊OBVIOUSLY..............

I loved it when Adi called her Mrs.Malhotra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Uski kitni khichai kar raha tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆EVEN ME TOO............HAHAHAHA...

Waise Mrs.Malhotra ka gussa aisa hai to pyaar kaise hoga??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊HMMM...........LET'S WAIT AND WATCH..............

Adi kitna natak karta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kehta hai ke tumne isse galati ka naam de diya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆HAHAHAHA................

Yeh Niharika ka dimag itna garam pehli baar dekha hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕REALLY HOT HAAN............

Adi bhi kuch kam nahi hai kehta hai ke uske dobara gayab hone ka risk woh nahi lena chahta!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆YAHAN PAR ADI SAHI HAI............

Waise Niharika gayi kahan thi aur yeh admi kaun hai??😕 😕 😕DEKHO..............

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 17

AADMI-mam, aapka purse, aap jewellery ki store par chodkar aa gayi thi.

Aur itna kehkar, woh aadmi, niharika ko uska purse lautata hai.

NIHA-oh!thanky so much, main toh bhul hi gayi thi.

ADI-niharika, maine tumse kitni baar kaha, hai ki apni cheezo ka dhayan, rakha karo,magar, tum ho ki meri baat, kabhie, sunti hi nahin ho.

NIHA-what?

ADI-kya…what?...ab aap hi samjhayiye ise, meri baat, toh yeh kabhie, sunti hi nahin hai.ab aap toh shareef insaan nikle, isiliye purse lautane ke liye, yahan tak a gaye, magar yeh zaroori, toh nahin, ki har-baar aisa hi ho, aur waise bhi aaj kal shareef log milte hi kahan hain.

AADMI-sir, bilkul, thik keh rahein hain mam, aapko apne kimti samaan ka dhyan rakhna chahiye, aaj kal zamaana bahut kharaab hai.

ADI-wahi, toh main bhi kabse ise samjha raha hoon,magar yeh meri baat sune tab na.

AADMI-koi baat nahin sir, aisa hota hai, lagta hai aap dono ki, nayi-nayi shaadi hui hai.

NIHA-(chaunk kar)-shaadi?

ADI-haan, bas abhi-abhi, kuch hi der pehle hui hai.

AADMI-oh!congratulations sir, congratulations mam.

ADI-(smile karte hue)-thanky so much, darling, kam se kam thanx toh keh do, ab itni bhi kya naraazgi, apne chehre se is gusse ke parde ko hatao, aur ek pyaari si muskaan lao, plzzzzzzz,just for me sweet heart, kya tum mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakti.

Niharika ghoor kar aditya ki taraf dekhti hai.

NIHA-(gusse se)-adi……………

ADI-(in a flirtatious manner)-ok-ok, just chill, aur waise bhi mujhe toh tumhare gusse par bhi pyaar aata hai, kyunki gusse mein, tum aur bhi zyaada khubsoorat lagne lagti ho.

AADMI-ab gussa thuk bhi dijiye mam,aap kitni lucky hain, ki aapke husband aapse itna pyaar karte hai, meri toh aankhen bhar aayi sach mein, aaj kal ke zamaane mein itna gehra pyaar, kahan dekhne ko milta hai,main Bhagwaan se yahi prarthna karunga ki aap dono humesha aise hi saath-saath, aur khush rahein,achcha toh ab main chalta hoon, namastey.

ADI-(smile karte hue)-jii namastey.

Aur itna sunkar woh aadmi wahan se chala jaata hai.

ADI-kitna achcha aadmi tha na, hum dono ko kitni saari duayein de gaya, aaj kal……………

NIHA-itne achche log kahan milte hain, kyun?

ADI-are tumne toh mere muh ki baat keh di,kitna samajhti ho tum mujhe, ki mere bina kuch kahe hi mere mann ki baat jaan leti ho.

NIHA-(smile karte hue)-ab main nahin samjhungi, toh aur kaun samjhega tumhe, kyun? Ab chalein januuu……………

ADI-janu?

NIHA-(ghoorte hue)-haan janu, aur ab ………………..

ADI-samajh gaya, ki ab is janu ki jaan khatre mein padne waali hai, kyun?

NIHA-right, aaj main tumhe chodungi nahin adi, u just wait and watch…………….

Yeh sunkar aditya wahan se bhaagne lagta hai, aur niharika bhi uske piche-piche use apne purse se hit karte hue bhaagti hai……………………..

Next scene

Nihal, kiran, sagar, rahil aur pooja, sab ki shopping khatam ho chuki hai, aur sab log apne-apne stores se bahar nikal kar, shopping mall ke beecho-beech aakar khade hain, aur aditya aur niharika ka wait kar rahein hain.

NIH-ab yeh dono phir se kahan reh gaye.

POO-kahin dono phir se jungle mein gum toh nahin ho gaye na.

RS-agar yeh joke tha, na toh bahut hi silly joke tha.

KIR-are yahin-kahin mall mein kisi store par shopping kar rahe honge aur kya?

SAG-haan, don't worry, main abhi "AB", ko call karta hoon.

POO-ek minute, mujhe woh dono adi aur niha jaise kyun lag rahein hain.

SAG-kaun dono?

POO-are woh dono………

Itna kehkar pooja, apne haath ke ishaare se sab ko mall ki balcony ki taraf dekhne ko kehti hai.

NIH-oh God! Woh dono, adi aur niharika hi hain, magar yeh dono bhaag kyun rahein hain, aur kisse?

SAG-haan, yeh baat toh mujhe bhi samajh mein nahin aa rahi hai.

RS-me too…………….

KIR-oh God! Tum log duffers ke duffers hi rahoge, aankhein khol kar dekho, woh dono, kisi se bhaag nahin rahein hain, balki adi,aage bhaag raha hai, aur niharika uske piche- piche bhaag rahi hai.

NIH-SAG-RS-magar kyun?

KIR-well dono idhar hi toh aa rahein hain bhaagte-bhaagte, toh unhi se pooch lena.

Aur kuch hi der mein adi aur niharika, bhaagte-bhaagte, mall ke beecho-beech sab ke paas pahunch jaate hain.

ADI-ab bas bhi karo yaar, aur kitna maarogi, bachche ki jaan logi kya?

NIHA-haan, aaj main yeh bhi kar guzrungi.

Aur itna kehkar niharika apna purse zor se aditya ki taraf hit karte hue fekti hain, magar aditya niche jhukh jaata hai, aur woh purse jaakar, pooja ke sir par lagta hai.

POO-ouch………….ah mera sir phut gaya………….yeh tu kya kar rahi hai niha, aaj kya P.T.USHA banne ka irada hai tera.

ADI-haan, aur KHALI bhi………………….

NIHA-I am sorry pooja, tujhe kahin choat toh nahin lagi na.

POO-nahin,main toh thik hoon,par tujhe kya hua hai?tu kyun is pagalon ki tarah adi ke piche bhaag rahi thi?

NIHA-woh actually adi tabse mere saath mazaak kar raha hai……

POO-mazaak, kaisa mazaak?zara hum sab bhi toh sune……..

NIH-SAG-RS-KIR-haan-haan, aakhir majra kya hai?

NIHA-woh………………

Magar itna kehte-kehte niharika ruk jaati hai……………aur aditya ki taraf dekhne lagti hai……………..

ADI-are meri taraf kya dekh rahi ho, batao sabko ki maine tumhare saath kya mazaak kiya tha…………..aur agar tumhe koi prob.ho rahi hai toh main toh bata deta hoon………….

NIHA-nahin………….kuch nahin…………bas aise hi, mamuli sa mazaak tha……………

ADI-socho mamuli se mazaak mein yeh mujhe maarne ke liye mere piche daud padi…………….agar wakaiye mein yeh mazaak na hokar haqeeqat hoti tab toh shayad qayamat hi aa jaati kyun niha maine sahi kaha na………….

POO-are lekin mazaak kya tha, koi mujhe yeh batayega bhi ya phir nahin………………….

ADI-kuch khaas nahin bas ek joke maara tha yaar……………

POO-oh, aur niha bhi na isse toh halka sa bhi mazaak sahan nahin hota hai…………………….

NIH-yaani ki khoda pahad aur………………….

KIR-nikli chuhiya……………..

RS-chuhiya nahin…………….

POO-toh……………

SAG-ADI-p.t.usha……………hahahahahahahaha………………….

POO-aur woh bhi kya raftaar mein nikli hai……………………

ADI-SAG-RS-NIH-KIR-haan, bilkul raajdhaani express ki………hahahahahahahaha………

NIHA-ha…ha…ha…mujhe bilkul bhi hansi nahin aa rahi hai……….tum sab ke in silly jokes par………………………

ADI-(apni hansi ko control karte hue)-toh phir kahin tumhara irada, dobara se apna purse uthakar, hum sab ke piche bhaagne ka toh nahin hai na………………………

RS-ho bhi sakta hai, u never no……………hahahahahaha……………

SAG-NIH-KIR-POO-haan, may be…………….hahahahaha………………

ADI-so niharika, kya irada hai tumhara?P.T.USHA ya phir THE GR8 KHALI……………hmmmmm…………………..hahahahahaha………

Niharika ghoor kar aditya ki taraf dekhti hai………

ADI-ok-ok……..ab mazaak bahut ho gaya….let's cut it guys.

POO-haan, aur waise bhi itni saari shopping karne ke baad, toh mujhe bahut tez bhookh lag rahi hai…………..

KIR-haan, even I am also feeling damn hungry…………………….

NIH-toh phir der kis baat ki hai, yahan par ek bahut achcha restaurant hai, wahin par chaltein hain.

SAG-RS-haan………….chalo…………..

POO-magar yeh sab shopping bags…….?

ADI-don't worry, main in sab cheezo ko, car mein rakhwa deta hoon, tum log chalo…………….

KIR-ok……….

NIH-aur haan adi, is baar zara jaldi aana, phir se kahin gum mat ho jaana………………….

ADI-don't worry is baar aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga…………..

Aur itna kehkar aditya ek baar niharika ki taraf halke se muskuraakar dekhta hai…………aur phir wahan se chala jaata hai………………

Niharika bhi aditya ko jaate hue dekhti rehti hai……………

POO-ab chalegi bhi, ya phir yahin par rukne ka iraada hai tera, niha-niha…………

NIHA-(chaunk kar)-haan……………

POO-kya hua, kahan kho gayi tu, chal na………..

NIHA-tu chal, main abhi aati hoon……………..

POO-are lekin tu jaa kahan rahi hai?

NIHA-tu chal na, main bas thodi der mein aati hoon……

POO-are magar, kam se kam yeh toh batati jaa, ki tu jaa kahan rahi hai?

NIHA-tujhe aakar sab kuch batati hoon…………..(in a slow voice)-kisi ko meri madad ki zaroorat padne waali hai bahut jald…………

Aur itna kehkar niharika wahan se chali jaati hai………….

POO-yeh niha bhi na………….chodo yaar, main chalti hoon, mujhe toh bahut zoro ki bhookh lagi hai…………

Aur itna kehkar pooja restaurant ki taraf chali jaati hai………….

Cut to aditya, jisne yeh toh keh diya, ki woh yeh saare bags, ko lekar gaadi mein rakhwa dega, magar usne yeh nahin socha tha ki, yeh kaam usse akele nahin hoga, bas chal nikla saara samaan haathon mein lekar, par usse sab kuch thik se samhal hi nahin raha tha, baar-baar uske haathon se ek na ek bag, gire hi jaa raha tha, aur wahan par khade sab log adi ki haalat dekhkar us par hanse bina nahin reh paa rahe the.

ADI-(to himself)-hey bhagwaan, yeh main, kahan phans gaya, maine aakhir kyun yeh zimmedaari li khud par, aur yeh ladkiyan bhi na, jab shopping karne ke liye niklengi toh, saari ki saari dukaane hi saaf kar jaayengi, aisa lag raha hai mano ki, thok par sab kuch utha kar le aayin hain, aur pakka sale toh zaroor lagi hogi……………

Tabhie aditya ke piche se ek awaaz aati hai…………………lagta hai ki kisi ko meri madad ki sakht zaroorat hai……………..aur aditya piche turn karke dekhta hai…………………..

ADI-tum……………?

NIHA-haan, main………………….

Aur itna kehkar niharika zameen par gire hue shopping bags ko uthati hai…………………

ADI-(smile karte hue)-thanx……………..

NIHA-(smile karte hue)-hmmm………in friendship no thanky and no sorry ok.

ADI-(smile karte hue)-yes…………….so no thanx……………

NIHA-hmmm………toh ab chalein………mr.malhotra……….

ADI-bilkul mrs.malhotra…………………

Niharika aditya ki taraf ek baar phir se ghoor kar dekhti hai………….aur phir hasne lagti hai……………yeh dekhkar aditya bhi muskuraane lagta hai……………………aur phir dono bahar car ki taraf bags rakhne ke liye ravana ho jaate hain……………………

Cut to the restaurant.

Jahan par sab log ek badi si dinning table par baithkar baatein kar rahein hain………………….

POO-aaj hum logo ne kitni dher saari shopping ki hai, main bata nahin sakti ki main kitni zyaada excited hoon, bas kal ka din, aur parson valentines day ke saath –saath kiran mam aur nihal ki engagement ceremony………..wow……….i am so happy.

RS-haan so toh hai, parson ka din toh vakaiyi bahut zyaada khaas hai hum sab ke liye.

SAG(nihal aur kiran ki taraf ishaara karte hue)-haan, magar sabse zyaada khaas toh in dono ke liye hai…………..kyun nihal bhaiya ?

NIH-(halke se muskuraate hue)-haan, so toh hai, balki mere liye toh woh din, woh pal ek khubsoorat khwab ki tarah hoga…….meri zindagi ka sabse khubsoorat khwab…………….

KIR-(halke se smile karte hue)-jismein hum dono saath milkar haqeeqat ke khubsoorat rang bharenge ……………..

POO-wow……………so romantic………………….hai na RS……………

RS-hmmm………kuch kaha tumne?

POO-(rahil ko hit karte hue)-RS, tum bhi na, kitne unromantic ho…………………

RS-(in a flirtatious manner)-well main romantic hoon, ya nahin, yeh toh sirf wahi ladki bata sakti hai, jo ki mere dil mein rehti hai……………………..

POO-(gusse se)-kya?kaun hai woh RS?mujhe uska naam batao?

RS-chill kudiye, chill maar,zara kaleje wich thand rakh uska naam kya, main toh tujhe usse personally hi milva doonga, bas valentines ke din tak wait karle, aur haan, ek baat ki guarantee deta hoon tujhe, ki jab tu use dekhegi na, toh bas dekhti hi reh jaayegi, zor jhatka, zor se hi lagega tujhe……..

POO-(gusse se muh banakar)-mujhe nahin milna hai,tumhare dil mein rehne waali se, use tum shauk se apne dil mein bithakar rakho, sabse milwaane ki kya zaroorat hai, kahin kisi ki nazar lag gayi toh………………………

RS-mere hote hue kiski majaal jo uski taraf aankh uthakar bhi dekhe, phir buri nazar lagana toh bahut door ki baat hai…………..

Yeh sunkar pooja gusse se rahil ki taraf dekhti hai…………….

RS-oh!main toh darr gaya……………

Yeh sunkar pooja wahan se uthkar jaane lagti hai………….ki tabhie rahil uska haath pakad leta hai……………..aur pooja turn karke uski taraf gusse se dekhti hai……………magar rahil use dekhkar bas muskuraata hi rehta hai…………..aur rahil ki hansi dekhkar pooja ka paara aur bhi upar chadne lagta hai……..aur woh gusse se rahil ka haath jhatakkar wahan se chali jaati hai………….

SAG-ab ise kya ho gaya, yeh kahan chali gayi…………..?

RS-don't worry, aa jaayegi, ise beech-beech mein is tarah ke daure padte hain………….hahahahaha…………………

Rahil ki baat sunkar sab log hasne lagte hain……………..

Cut to aditya and niharika.

Jo ki car mein saara samaan rakhwa rahein hain.

ADI-iska matlab ki tum mujhse naraaz nahin ho.

NIHA-agar naraaz hoti toh yahan par nahin hoti.

ADI-(smile karte hue)-haan, so toh hai………

Aur dono ek doosre ki taraf dekhkar muskuraane lagte hain.

Cut to the restaurant, jahan par kiran aur nihal akele baithe hain , kyunki rahil, pooja ko manane uske piche gaya hai, aur doosri taraf sagar, ke kisi friend ka call aa gaya hota hai, aur restaurant ke andar network ka prob. Hone ki wajah se, sagar bahar nikalkar usse baatcheet karne mein busy rehta hai……

Nihal aur kiran ek doosre ki aankhon mein is kadar khoye hue hain, ki unhe apne aas-paas ke mahoal ki koi khabar hi nahin hai, tabhie achanak se kisi ki awaaz sunkar dono ko hosh aata hai………aur dono us awaaz ki taraf turn karke dekhte hain………

KIR-(chaunk kar)-avni, avni shergill, right.

AVNI SHERGILL-(MOUNI ROY-AKA-K.T.OF KSBKBT).

END OF PART 17. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ DO COMMENT.

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Posted: 16 years ago

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.....aapne ud kar diyaaaaa?????????????????aur vo bhi itna lamba???????????????????/ye kaise ho gaya??????????hum aaapke ati aabhaari hain........nhn nhn hamne abhi ud padhi nhn hai bas hum ruk nhn sakte the apni khushi zzahrir karne ke liye....iss liye pehle hi comment de rahe hain........baaki ka comment ud padhneke baad aapko denge............tab tak aap pratiksha karen.........dhaneyawaad pritiji

aapka sadaaaa shubh chahne waali

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Priti
Update was really very funny..😆
Adi is teasing Niharika a lot ..n Niharika bhi mall mein paaglon ki tarah bhaag rahi hai Adi ke picche....Kuch to hai😉😉😉 ....So finally Engagement day is near .Niharika helped Adi dat so cute..Their scenes were really cool n gud 👏Yeh RS kisse Pyar karta hai..I think its POOJA 😃
Yeh New entry kaun hai???????
Do update soon

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