Mohabbat:(RP ff)-imp note on pg 81.

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Riti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#281

hiii Priti.M so Sorry ki me late comment de rahi hoo.tumhe
pata hai i was not in net.😭 Ab UD ki Baat.

kya update tha cutie.just too good. Poo in dono ki kya wat laga rahi thi aur ye kya nihal aur kiran kahin bhi shuru ho jate hain.hehe😆 😆 ab sag aya kabab me haddi.😉 par pyar hai hi aisa kahin bhi karne ka dil karta hai 😉

wow Adi ne Niha ke hath par hah rakha aur usko samjhaya bilkul sahi kaha usne apnon ke liye kabhi kabhi kabhi khud ke dard ko chupana padta hai.just awesome dilouges.

ab ye Niha Achanak kahan chali gayi.she is to misterious yar.ab jaldi use wapas lao warna apna Adi to pagal ho jayega najane kisko Nih samajh ke piche se bularah hai.
😆 😆 ne ways UD was superb....Plzzz update sonn
lots of love
Riti😛

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#282

so sweet fic.

update jaldi kiya karo.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: rlrl
hiii Priti.M so Sorry ki me late comment de rahi hoo.tumhe
pata hai i was not in net.😭 Ab UD ki Baat.

kya update tha cutie.just too good. Poo in dono ki kya wat laga rahi thi aur ye kya nihal aur kiran kahin bhi shuru ho jate hain.hehe😆 😆 ab sag aya kabab me haddi.😉 par pyar hai hi aisa kahin bhi karne ka dil karta hai 😉

wow Adi ne Niha ke hath par hah rakha aur usko samjhaya bilkul sahi kaha usne apnon ke liye kabhi kabhi kabhi khud ke dard ko chupana padta hai.just awesome dilouges.

ab ye Niha Achanak kahan chali gayi.she is to misterious yar.ab jaldi use wapas lao warna apna Adi to pagal ho jayega najane kisko Nih samajh ke piche se bularah hai.
😆 😆 ne ways UD was superb....Plzzz update sonn
lots of love
Riti😛

😆

HII RITI IT'S OK DEAR DON'T SAY SORRY, TUMNE COMMENT KIYA HAI PADHA KAR, AUR WAQT NIKAL KAR MAIN ISSE HI BAHUT KHUSH HOON, AUR TUMHE SAARE SCENES PASAND AAYE THANX A LOT SWEETY I AM GLAD. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: varshita

so sweet fic.

update jaldi kiya karo.

THANX VARSHITA FOR UR COMMENTS.I WILL UD SOON. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

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Shree85

@Shree85

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Posted: 17 years ago

#285

Hi,

I m a new reader of ur ff. I read ur ff in one go. It was superb. Please update soon.

Lots of Love

Shree

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Posted: 17 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi,

I m a new reader of ur ff. I read ur ff in one go. It was superb. Please update soon.

Lots of Love

Shree

HII SHREE FIRST OF ALL WELCOME TO IF, AND TO MY FF TOO, AND THANX A LOT FOR UR LOVELU COMMENTS DEAR, I AM GLAD, I WILL UD SOON. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#287

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!

Rihal kehta hai unke liye mazza ladko ke liye sazza hogi aur Pooja ke puchne par kehta hai ki wahi accha hai ke usse kuch samaj mein nahi aaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very naughty of him!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Sagar puchta hai ke Rihal Pooja ko kaise jhelta hai aur Rihal kehta hai adat padh chuki hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Beta yeh baat Pooja ne agar sun liya naa toh teri khair nahi!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Dono kehte hai ke iska kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Adi Niharika ke liye order karke usse coffee bhejta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳Aur dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaii!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I loved Adi's answer main bhi bas yuhi!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆

Accha kiya Adi ne jo Niharika ko samjhane ki koshish ki!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Niharika kuch batane hi waali thi ke Sagar ne call kar diya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Bad timing Sagar!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Adi Niharika ke aasu pochta hai aur usse muskurane ko kehta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Kiran toh abhi se Nihal ko aise daant rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Arre waah Adi aur Niharika toh chorus mein bolne lage!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Bechara Sagar Ananya ko yaad karke uske liye bangles le raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Magar Ananya ko huya kya hai aur woh kaha hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Rihal phasa hai Pooja ki shopping mein!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bechara!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Arre waah Niharika Adi ko watch pasand karne mein help kar rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good!!! 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nihal Kiran ko necklace deta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛He is so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Magar shop mein hi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sagar aagaya naa aur usne sahi kaha ke yeh jagah romance ke liye kuch theek nahi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nihal toh Sagar ko waha se bhagane ke chakkar mein hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Sagar bhi samaj gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved his teasing Nihal!!!!😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆Usne kaha control mein raho!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waise Sagar is intelligent enough not to disturb Adi and Niharika!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Niharika toh Adi ko sab kuch choose karke de rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai abhi se apni pasand Adi par chala rahi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ab yeh Niharika kaha chali gayi!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕That girl at the end was not Niharika I think!!!!😔 😔 😔

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Posted: 17 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!THANX DEAR.

Rihal kehta hai unke liye mazza ladko ke liye sazza hogi aur Pooja ke puchne par kehta hai ki wahi accha hai ke usse kuch samaj mein nahi aaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very naughty of him!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆IT'S RAHIL NOT RIHAL DEAR.

Sagar puchta hai ke Rihal Pooja ko kaise jhelta hai aur Rihal kehta hai adat padh chuki hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Beta yeh baat Pooja ne agar sun liya naa toh teri khair nahi!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣SHUAKAR MANA KI SUNI NAHIN.

Dono kehte hai ke iska kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛AUR SACH HI KEHTE HAIN.

Adi Niharika ke liye order karke usse coffee bhejta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳Aur dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaii!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️SO SWEET NA.

I loved Adi's answer main bhi bas yuhi!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 ME TOOOO.

Accha kiya Adi ne jo Niharika ko samjhane ki koshish ki!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊AB WOH NAHIN KAREGA TOH AUR KAUN KAREGA.

Niharika kuch batane hi waali thi ke Sagar ne call kar diya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Bad timing Sagar!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒HMMMMMMM.......

Adi Niharika ke aasu pochta hai aur usse muskurane ko kehta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️YES IT IS DEAR.

Kiran toh abhi se Nihal ko aise daant rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉TOH AAGE KYA HOGA SOCHO.

Arre waah Adi aur Niharika toh chorus mein bolne lage!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛HAAN.

Bechara Sagar Ananya ko yaad karke uske liye bangles le raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Magar Ananya ko huya kya hai aur woh kaha hai??😕 😕 😕 😕AAGE PATA CHALEGA SWEETY.

Rihal phasa hai Pooja ki shopping mein!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bechara!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆RAHIL DEAR, AUR WOH BHI BURI TARAH SE.

Arre waah Niharika Adi ko watch pasand karne mein help kar rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good!!! 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳GR8 YAAR.

Nihal Kiran ko necklace deta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛He is so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️YES HE IS.

Magar shop mein hi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sagar aagaya naa aur usne sahi kaha ke yeh jagah romance ke liye kuch theek nahi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆HEHEHE.

Nihal toh Sagar ko waha se bhagane ke chakkar mein hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Sagar bhi samaj gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆SAMAJHDAAR BANDA HAI KYUN.

I loved his teasing Nihal!!!!😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆Usne kaha control mein raho!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆ME TOOOOOO.

Waise Sagar is intelligent enough not to disturb Adi and Niharika!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN KYUNKI SAMAJHDAAR KE LIYE ISHAARA HI KAAFI HOTA HAI KYUN.

Niharika toh Adi ko sab kuch choose karke de rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai abhi se apni pasand Adi par chala rahi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳HMMMMMMMM.

Ab yeh Niharika kaha chali gayi!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕That girl at the end was not Niharika I think!!!!😔 😔 😔 LET'S SEE.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#289

PART 16

Tabhie woh ladki jo ki piche mud kar khadi rehti hai, turn karti hai.

LADKI-excuse me.

ADI-oh…...i am sorry mujhe laga ki aap…...

LADKI-ki aap mere saath flirt karna chahate hain, main aap jaison ko bahut achchi tarah se jaanti hoon.

ADI-what do u mean?

LADKI-I mean ki aapka jo bhi intention hai, who mujhe bahut achchi tarah se samajh mein aa raha hai.

ADI-dekhiye main already bahut pareshaan hoon, aur aap hain ki tabse anaap-shanaap baki jaa rahin hain,

LADKI-kya kaha aapne, ki main bakwaas kar rahin hoon, aur aap.....aap kya kar rahein hain?

ADI-(angrily)-shukar manayiye ki ab tak, maine kuch bhi nahin kiya hai, aur tabse main aapki bakwaas sun raha hoon, lekin ab agar aapne ek shabd aur bhi kaha, toh main......

LADKI-toh......toh aap kya karenge haan?

ADI-toh main bhul jayunga ki aap ek ladki hain.

LADKI-kya?......kya kaha aapne?

ADI-wahi jo suna aapne.

LADKI-main tumhe…....

ADI-sochna bhi mat…...

Magar isse pehle ki dono ki, ladayi aur aage bhadti, ki achanak se niharika wahan par aa jaati hain.

NIHA-adi, tum yahan par kya kar rahe ho?

Aditya piche turn karta hai.

ADI-niharika, tum kahan chali gayi thi? Main kabse dhoond raha hoon tumhe, ab chalo yahan se.

Aur itna kehkar aditya niharika ka haath pakadkar use khinch kar le hi jaane lagta hai, ki achanak se who ladki kehti hai.

LADKI-haan-haan jao, aur dobara se mere saamne mat aana samjhe.

Us ladki ki baat sunkar niharika rukti hai, aur uski taraf turn karti hai.

ADI-tum ruk kyun gayi niharika, yahan se chalo plzzz, aise logon ke muh nahin lagana hai humein.

NIHA-ek minute adi.

Aur itna kehkar niharika us ladki ke paas jaati hai, aur usse kehti hai.

NIHA-haan toh aap kya bol rahi thi, zara phir se kahiye?

LADKI-kyun, aapko kuch kam sunayi deta hai kya?

Aditya niharika ke paas aata hai, aur usse kehta hai.

ADI-niharika chalo na yahan se, kyun bahas mein pad rahi ho iske saath.

NIHA-ek minute adi…tum thodi der ruk nahin sakte ho.

ADI-ok, as u say.

NIHA-hmmm…now tell me ki aapki prob. Kya hai?

LADKI-meri prob. Yeh mr. hain.

Aur woh ladki ishaare se niharika ko aditya ki taraf dekhne ko kehti hai.

NIHA-kyun, inhone kya kiya hai?

LADKI-yeh poochiye ki inhone kya nahin kiya hai?

NIHA-ok, kya nahin kiya hai inhone?

LADKI-yeh mujhe akeli dekhkar mere saath flirt karne ki koshish kar rahein the, aur baad mein mere saath battamizi bhi karne lage.

NIHA-oh, really, toh kya battamizi ki inhone aapke saath, zara main bhi toh sunu.

LADKI-yeh aap inse hi kyun nahin pooch leti?

NIHA-uski koi zaroorat nahin hai, kyunki mujhe inpar poora bharosa hai.

LADKI-aap toh aise bol rahin hain, jaise ki yeh aapke husband hain.

NIHA-jii haan, aapne bilkul sahi kaha, aur battamiz yeh nahin, balki aap hain.

Niharika ki yeh baat sunkar, woh ladki toh shocked hoti hi hai, par sabse bada shock toh aditya ko lagta hai.

ADI-niharika, tum yeh…...

NIHA-maine kaha na, aap chup rahiye, thodi der ke liye shant nahin reh sakte aap.

ADI-(shocked and is constantly looking at niharika)-ok.

NIHA-kisi aur par ungli uthane se pehle, khud ke andar jhaankar dekhiye, ki aap khud kitni tamizdaar hain, aur ab aap mere husband se maafi maangiye.

Aditya ne niharika ka yeh roop pehle kabhie nahin dekha tha, woh toh poori tarah se shock ho jaata hai, aur bas ek tak niharika ko hi dekhta rehta hai, aur doosri taraf who ladki bhi sharminda hokar aditya se maafi maangti hai, magar aditya ka poora dhyan toh bas niharika par hi rehta hai, aur who chaunk kar kehta hai.

ADI-haan-haan, it's ok, even I am also sorry.

Itna sunkar who ladki wahan se chali jaati hai.

ADI-(softly)-niharika tum thik toh ho na.

NIHA-(angryily)-kyun, mujhe kya hua hai?

ADI-nahin, kuch nahin, tumhe pehle kabhie is tarah se dekha nahin hai na, toh…...

NIHA-toh…

ADI-toh, kuch nahin, ab chalein mrs.malhotra…

NIHA-(chaunk kar)-kya kaha tumne?

ADI-ab yeh kya baat hui, abhi-abhi toh hum dono, pati-patni bane hain, aur tum itnijaldi bhul gayi.

NIHA-woh toh gusse mein mere muh se galti se nikal gaya tha.

ADI-ek toh tumne itni badi baat keh di, aur ab tum ise galti ka naam de rahi ho, tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho mere saath?

NIHA-adi mera dimag waise hi pehle se bahut garam hai, ab tum mujhe aur gussa mat dilao plzzz, warna main…

ADI-warna tum phir se gayab ho jaogi, aur main yeh risk dobara nahin lena chahta, khair yeh sab chodo aur yeh batao ki tum aakhir gayi kahan thi?

NIHA-main woh…............

Isse pehle ki niharika apni baat poori kar pati, ki tabhie wahan par achanak se ek aadmi aata hai.

AADMI-excuse me mam.

NIHA-(turning towards that man)-yes…

END OF PART 16, PLZZZZZZZZZ DO COMMENT.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#290

itne dino baad update kiya,,But mast tha..😛Niharika scolded dat girl for Adi...n she told her dat they r husband n wife..gud going.Ab yeh baar baar kaun aata hai n u stop dere only Do update soon👏

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