Mohabbat:(RP ff)-imp note on pg 81.

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Riti

@-Reeti-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#291

hiiiii Priti kaisi ho dear ,ek baat bata ye UD tha ki ek scene tha aur itna chota part 😡 😡 😡 chal I understand tujhe Izhar bhi likh na tha hai na chal its okk.

Niharika ne Adi ko apna husband bataya hahahha chal achha mazaq tha par ek kahawat hai jo baat gusse me dil se nikalti hai wohi sach hota hai aur niharika ki muh se gusse se ye nikla ki Adi uska husbad hai to dil me to yahi tha.😳

aur ye ladki kaun thi jo adi ko jo jee me aye bol rahi thi. Idiot khair niharika ne achha sabak sikhaya usko .aur ye Adi bhi na paglon ki tarh niharika Dhund raha tha aur niharika khud bakhud uske pass chalke agayi 😳 😳 😳 Ud bahat achha tha dear ab jaldi se ek bada sa part update karna okk waiting eagerly 😊 😊 😊 lots of love 😊 😊 😊 Riti 😛

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#292

fantastic yaar

awesome ud

keep it up👍🏼

ud asap

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aarthi

@aarsow

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Posted: 17 years ago

#293

hey super n realy diff itz realy awesum,

hats of 2 u priti sis,

excelent,

Aarthi

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#294

really superb!!!!!!kya gussa hai!!!vaise gusse mein shayad dil ki baat nikal hi gayi yaaa nahin!!!!

well lets see..........updt soon

it was awesome

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 17 years ago

#295

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waiting for next asap.

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sana

@sanabmw

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Posted: 17 years ago

#296

hey priti...

are itana chota UD😭

yar thoda to bada karati bas ek hi scene add kiya tumne to..😕😕but jo bhi tha accha tha..adi ka sar khaa rahi thi woh ladaki😡😡ajeeb zabardasti hai yar aajkal ki ladakiyo ki bina baat k baat bana deebut niha ne kya seedha kiya use 😆😆😆adi ki wife bankar usse sorry bhi bulwa diya..aur adi uska to bura haal tha😆😆bechaara niha ko aise dekhkar darr gaya..chalo ab agali UD badi chahiye ok..this is 4 u👏

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 17 years ago

#297

Pritiii dear,
nice to see u in this fic...that u updated it after long time.
thnk god that Niharika mil gayi warna pata nahi Adi ka kya hota😆
u know after reading it mujhe Niha ke liye ek gana yaad aaya, remember the song......
Ga Ga Gussa Itna Hasin Hai toh Pyaar Kaisa Hoga, Pyar Kaisa Hoga !👏
n am dying to c that Mrs. Malhotra ka Pyar kaisa hoga?😉
yaar par hamesha ye Adi aur Niha ke bich kaun ajata hai jab baat important mod pe hoti hai😕
well plzzzzz update sooooooon.

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375400

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Posted: 17 years ago

#298

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.................................... PRITI................HOPE UR MAST.......................... TUMHARI UD PADHKE MAIN BHI MAST HO GAYI.......................... WAAH KYA UD LIKHA HAI TUMNE.......................... SABSE MAZEEDAAR TOH NIHA KA WOH SCENE LAGA MUJHE, JAB WOH KEHTI HAI KI, ADI USKA HUSBAND, KYUNKI USKE BAAD ADI KA CHEHRA DEKHNE LAAYAK HOTA HAI😆 SACHCHI MUJHE BAHUT MAZAA AAYA YEH WAALA PART PADH KAR........................ UR A SUPERB WRITER.................... AUR HAAN NEXT UD ZALDI KARNA OK DEAR................... WITH LOVE, DEEP.