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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rlrl

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Priti kaisi ho..HII RITI MAIN ACHCHI HOON SWEETY, AND I HOPE KI TUM BHI ACHCHI HI HOGI DEAR.
dear update achha tha i mean bahat hi jyda achha tha.aditya aur niharika ko dekh kar wo leady kya achha sochti hai na.mindblowingTHANX DEAR KI TUMHE PASAND AAYA YEH WAALA PORTION.
aur to aur.Niharika Aur ADitya ka bag aur suitcase exchane hojata WOH TOH HONA HI THA.
hai hahahaha.toooo good socho agar dono ek dusre ki kpade pehen
kar bahar niklate to.kitna maza ata na.Adi Salwar me aur niha jeansTAB TOH SACH MEIN KAMAAL HI HO JAATA KYUN, DUNIYA KA AATHWAN AJOOBA KYUN SAHI KAHA NA.
me.hehehe😆
😆😆😆😆 wese ye update me sirf niha aur adi hi chahe huye the.too good.aur ye log kab ek dusre se dosti aur pyar ki baten karenge dear.jaldi karwao na.bahat achha update tha .aur niha
kya keh rahi thi adi ko thode kapde pehenkar ana hehehehe.aur adi
bhi na bedsheet pehen ne ki aat kar raha tha ganda ladka hai.
Superb updae sweety ud soon mindblowing..awesome..DON'T WORRY DEAR WOH BHI JALD HI HO JAAYEGA, PYAAR BHI AUR IKRAAR BHI, THANX DEAR ONCE AGAIN FOR UR COMMENTS.



WITH LOTS OF LOVE
PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

hey awesome ud dear

ud asap

Hii karishma dear thanx for ur comments sweety, i am really very-very touched. WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hii Priti,
update very funny, like the all convo betn Adi n Niha. they are so cute couple. like the humor of Adi, kya baat hai kuch toh pehnahi tha😆
but don't u think it's very small one. next time want long one .

Hii namita dear thanx a lot for ur comments sweety, i am glad, ki tumhe yeh waala part pasand aaya aur mazedaar bhi laga, ya i too thought so but my fingers were paining dear, but don't worry next time i will try to give a longer part ok sweety. WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hii priti....

HII SANA DEAR I HOPE KI TUM ACHCHI HOGI, AUR TUMHARE COMMENTS PADH KAR MAIN TOH BAHUT HI KHUSH HOON DEAR.
maine UD bas abhi read ki hai aur sach bahot acchi lagi mujhe adi aur niha dono ek saath bolate hai😛😛😛aur lift main dono ki baate acchi thi waise adi was right niha bahot jayada sochati hai😕aur adi ne kya kaha k aakho aakho main aa gaye 😉😉aur dono k bags change ho gaye woh scene mera fav tha 😊aadi ki lines bahot acchi thi ..kaise bol raha tha k sukar manao towel tha warana bedsheet pehen k aata😆aur niha ne kaise sade hua bag ko ek dum se khubsurat bana diya b/c adi ka jo tha😃waah kya palati maari hai ...but adi was 2 sweet bahot accha UD tha..😊😊.sorry ha maine late comment kiya b/c kal main pure din busy thi..😲.but aaj sabse pehele tumhe hi comment diya hai..i hope u like my comment...aur next Ud jaladi karana ok..👏
lots of love
sana😛

THANX A LOT DEAR, FOR UR SUCH BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY COMMENTS, TUMHE MERE UD KE SAARE SCENES PASAND AAYE I AM REALLY TOUCHED SWEETY, MUJHE HAMESHA TUMHARE COMMENTS KA INTEZAAR REHTA HAI DEAR, AUR HAAN SORRY MAT KAHO TUMNE WAQT NIKAL KAR MERA UD PADH KAR COMMENT KIYA MERE LIYE ITNA HI KAAFI HAI DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiiiii priti.............sorry 4 being late......but i guess better late than never.......right???????? ok mujhe tumhaara ud bhut bhut bhut pasand aayeya........aadi ke dialogues aur uske kapde gaayab ho jaana.......hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....vaise main yahaan hasne ke liye smiley bhi add ka sakti thi par nhn kiya kyunki main khud hass kar dikhaaana chahti thi......taki tumhe yeh pata chal sake ki mujhe ud kitna pasand aaya.......ok now i m realy loooking frwd 2 ur next ud as usual.......hope u'll ud soon......on second thoughts..tum mujhe bata hi do ki tum kab ud karogi........and yes b4 i forget.....belated happy frndship day......sorry main yahaaan bhi late hun.....but again i guess better late than........u know exactly vat i mean😊and thanx 4 making me ur frnd.....i'll always cherish this relation......byeeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

hiiiii priti.............sorry 4 being late......but i guess better late than never.......right???????? ok mujhe tumhaara ud bhut bhut bhut pasand aayeya........aadi ke dialogues aur uske kapde gaayab ho jaana.......hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....vaise main yahaan hasne ke liye smiley bhi add ka sakti thi par nhn kiya kyunki main khud hass kar dikhaaana chahti thi......taki tumhe yeh pata chal sake ki mujhe ud kitna pasand aaya.......ok now i m realy loooking frwd 2 ur next ud as usual.......hope u'll ud soon......on second thoughts..tum mujhe bata hi do ki tum kab ud karogi........and yes b4 i forget.....belated happy frndship day......sorry main yahaaan bhi late hun.....but again i guess better late than........u know exactly vat i mean😊and thanx 4 making me ur frnd.....i'll always cherish this relation......byeeeeeeee

Hii dear first of all thanx a lot for ur such sweet-sweet comments, it's ok dear tumne waqt nikal kar mera ud padha, aur comment bhi kiya, i am really thankful to u sweety, bas mere liye itna hi kaafi hai, chalo tumhe mera ud padh kar hansi aayi, aur mujhe tumahra comment padhkar bahut khushi hui, i am grateful that u accepted me as ur friend thanx once again dear, aur haan main tumhe ud ki exact date nahi bata paongi because of electricity prob. but i will send u a pm when i will do the ud ok sweety. WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Adi aur Niharika chorus mein bolte hai aur ek dusre ki taraf dekhe hi jaa rahe hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 How romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

Par yeh kya dono ne ek dusre ki rooms ki keys le li!!!!!😛 😛 😛

Reception waali lady sochti hai what a cute couple!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉She is absolutely right!!!!

Niharika ko laga tha ke Adi usse naraz hai!!!😛 😛 😛Adi ne kaha ke woh 'woh' se aage ka sentence pura nahi karti!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Niharika ke kehne par ki woh log pahuch gaye Adi kehta hai woh bhi ankhon hi ankhon mein!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so romantic!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Hosh mein aate hi baat ko ghuma deta hai!!!!😕 😕 😕O God!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

I loved Adi talking to himself and saying behave yourself Mr.Aditya Malhotra!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉

It reminded me of the red saree scene!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He had said "Captain Rajeev Singh Shekhawat ish harkat ke liye aapka court marshaal ho jana chahiye"!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaiiii!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Adi gaana gaate gaate naha raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur uski ankhon ke saamne Niharika ka chehra aata rehta hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Isko toh pyaar ho gaya!!!!!

Adi white towel mein hai nahane ke baad!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiiiiiiiiii!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aur woh mirror ke saamne jake bhi Nikarika ka chehra hi uski aankhon ke saamne hota hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaaaiiiii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Niharika aur Adi dono ke bags badal gaye hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Aur dono ek dusre ke bags ko lekar niklate hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Adi towel mein hi nikalta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆This reminded me of the sequence in Yes Boss where Shahrukh goes to Juhi's room in a towel!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Niharika Adi ke bag ko sada huya kehti hai but then changes it to khubsoorat bag!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Niharika Adi se kehti hai ke uske saamne ish roop mein kabhi naa aaye!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ab yeh kaise ho sakta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Waise aisa kyun??😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Does she get seduced seeing him like this??😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Adi aur Niharika bhi naa!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Bina baat ke behes kar rahe hai dono!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Ab dono room mein sone chale gaye!!!!😊 😊 😊

Inka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Thanx sweety.

Adi aur Niharika chorus mein bolte hai aur ek dusre ki taraf dekhe hi jaa rahe hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 How romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳u liked it thanx, after all now the time has arrived in every bit there will be romance in the air.

Par yeh kya dono ne ek dusre ki rooms ki keys le li!!!!!😛 😛 😛exchange warna dobara mulaqat kaise hoti kyun.

Reception waali lady sochti hai what a cute couple!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉She is absolutely right!!!! bco'z they are the cutest couple.

Niharika ko laga tha ke Adi usse naraz hai!!!😛 😛 😛Adi ne kaha ke woh 'woh' se aage ka sentence pura nahi karti!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆so toh hai.

Niharika ke kehne par ki woh log pahuch gaye Adi kehta hai woh bhi ankhon hi ankhon mein!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so romantic!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️yes after all he is adi.

Hosh mein aate hi baat ko ghuma deta hai!!!!😕 😕 😕O God!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒ab thoda toh waqt toh use samajhne ke liye.

I loved Adi talking to himself and saying behave yourself Mr.Aditya Malhotra!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉me too loved that part while writing it.

It reminded me of the red saree scene!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He had said "Captain Rajeev Singh Shekhawat ish harkat ke liye aapka court marshaal ho jana chahiye"!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaiiii!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️really dear.

Adi gaana gaate gaate naha raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊he is the cutest.

Aur uski ankhon ke saamne Niharika ka chehra aata rehta hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Isko toh pyaar ho gaya!!!!! bas samajhna baaki hai kyun.

Adi white towel mein hai nahane ke baad!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiiiiiiiiii!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️really hot na.

Aur woh mirror ke saamne jake bhi Nikarika ka chehra hi uski aankhon ke saamne hota hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaaaiiiii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳ab ehsaas toh tab hi hoga jab chehra baar-baar nazar aayega kyun.

Niharika aur Adi dono ke bags badal gaye hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Aur dono ek dusre ke bags ko lekar niklate hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊woh toh badalne hi the.

Adi towel mein hi nikalta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆This reminded me of the sequence in Yes Boss where Shahrukh goes to Juhi's room in a towel!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣really thanx.

Niharika Adi ke bag ko sada huya kehti hai but then changes it to khubsoorat bag!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆kaafi samajhdaar hai kyun.

Niharika Adi se kehti hai ke uske saamne ish roop mein kabhi naa aaye!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ab yeh kaise ho sakta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️hmmmm.......

Waise aisa kyun??😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Does she get seduced seeing him like this??😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳no yaar, abhi thoda aur waqt hai.

Adi aur Niharika bhi naa!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Bina baat ke behes kar rahe hai dono!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Ab dono room mein sone chale gaye!!!!😊 😊 😊ab subah agar uthna hai toh sona toh padega hi kyun.

Inka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳mujhe bhi kabhie-kabhie aisa hi lagta hai.

Hii shaina thanx dear for ur such sweet comments, mujhe toh hamesha hi tumhare comments ka intezaar rehat hai sweety, kyunki tumhari bhi mehnat tumhare comments se pata chalti hai, ki tum kitni gehrai se story ko padhti ho, i am flad ki tumhe yeh waala part pasand aaya sweety. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 14 Next morning at 7:00 a.m., sab log hotel ke restaurant mein breakfast karne ke liye ekatha hote hain, tabhie nihal poochta hai.

NIH-yeh adi kahan hai?

KIR-haan aur yeh niharika bhi kahin nazar nahin aa rahi hai.

SAG-mere khayal se woh dono shayad apne-apne rooms mein honge, main abhi dekhkar aata hoon.

POO-chalo main bhi tumhaare saath chalti hoon.

SAG-ok chalo.
aur itna kehkar woh dono aditya aur niharika ko bulane ke liye jaate hain, kuch hi der mein woh dono fourth floor par aditya aur niharika ke rooms ke saamne pahunchte hain, aur dono ek saath aditya aur niharika ke darwaazon par knock karte hain.
POO-niha kya kar rahi hai? jaldi bahar nikal, sab humara breakfast table par wait kar rahein hain.
SAG-''AB'', jaldi kijiye, kya kar rahein hain aap sab humara niche wait kar rahein hain.
kuch der mein aditya aur niharika ek saath darwaaza kholte hain.
POO-(shocked)-adi , tum niha ke room mein kya kar rahe ho?
SAG-(shocked)-niharika, tum ''AB'', ke room mein kya kar rahi ho?
pooja aur sagar ki baat sunkar aditya aur niharika bhi shock ho jaate hain, aur ek saath kehte hain.
ADI & NIHA-kyaaaa?
aur itna kehkar dono apne-apne rooms se bahar nikalte hain, aur chaaron ek doosre ko dekhne lagte hain.
POO-tum dono ek doosre ke rooms mein kya kar rahe ho?
SAG-haan.
undono ki baat sunkar aditya aur niharika ek doosre ki taraf dekhne lagte hain, aur phir niharika kehti hai.
NIHA-yeh tum dono kya bol rahe ho? mujhe toh kuch samajh mein hi nahin aa raha hai.
ADI-lekin mujhe kuch-kuch samajh mein aa raha hai.
aur itna kehkar aditya sab ko poori baat samjha deta hai.
POO & SAG-oh! toh yeh baat hai.
ADI-haan , yehi baat hai.
POO- aur main samajh rahi thi ki......
ADI & NIHA- kiii?
POO-aham......kuch nahin, meri chodo, magar kya tum dono dekh kar chabiyan nahin le sakte the.
ADI-galti ho gayi meri maa, dhyan nahin tha.
POO-toh phir tumhara dhyan tha kahan par?
ADI-woh nih.......
SAG-ab bas bhi karo, nahin toh breakfast toh kya , lunch aur dinner bhi humein yahin par baaton baaton se hi karna padega.sagar ki baat sunkar adi aur pooja chup ho jaate hain.
NIHA-achcha toh ab hum chalein.
POO-lekin rooms?
ADI-jab niharika ko koi prob. nahin hai, mujhe koi prob. nahin hai, toh phir tumhe kya prob. hai.
SAG-koi prob. nahin hai ''AB'', pooja ab chalogi.
POO-ok, main toh bas aise hi keh rahi thi.
aditya, niharika aur sagar teeno ghoorkar pooja ki taraf dekhte hain.
POO-sorry.
aur phir chaaron hotel ke restaurant mein pahunchte hain.
RS-ab aa rahe ho tum log kahan the ab tak?
ADI-ab toh humlog aa gaye hain, toh chodo na chalo breakfast karte hain, waise bhi bahut zorro ki bhookh lagi hai.
itna kehkar aditya, niharika, pooja aur sagar breakfast table par baith jaate hain.sab log breakfast table par baith kar baatein kar rahein hain tabhie achanak se pooja kehti hai.
POO-(excitement mein)-by the way tum logo ne sagai ke baare mein kuch socha ya nahin.
ADI-hmmm......main bhi yahi poochne waala tha, toh batao kab karno hai sagai.
aditya ki baat sunkar nihal aur kiran chaunk kar uski taraf dekhne lagte hain.
ADI-kya hua? sagai nahin karni hai kya.
NIH-(turant)-nahin, nahin karni hi.
aur sab log nihal ki baat sunkar hasne lagte hain.
POO-guys do din baad valentines day hai kyun na hum log usi din sagai ka program rakh le.
RS- ya, why not.
SAG-that's a gr8 idea.
ADI-so guys tum dono kya kehte ho?
NIH & KIR-no prob.
ADI-chalo, isse achchi baat toh ho hi nahin sakti, toh taya ho gaya valentines day ke din tum dono ki sagai.
KIR-lekin bahut saari tyayaariyan bhi toh karni padengi.
ADI-woh sab tum hum logon par chod do, aur tum dono bas enjoy karo in khubsoorat palon ko.
POO, RS & SAG-haan.
POO-yeh niha kahan chali gayi?
ADI-main dekh kar aata hoon.
POO-haan aur use yeh khush khabri bhi suna dena.
ADI-wahi toh sunane jaa rah hoon.
itna kehkar aditya niharika ko dekhne jaata hai.
cut to niharika jo ki hotel ke lobby mein kisi se phone par baat kar rahi hai, aur bahar bahut tez hawa chal rahi hai.
NIHA-(shocked)-kyaaaa?
VOICE-i am sorry.
NIHA-plzzz aisa mat kaho.
VOICE-par ab kuch nahin ho sakta.
NIHA-magar ek baar koshish toh kar sakte ho.
VOICE-main samajh sakta hoon.
NIHA-tum mujhe kabhie nahin samajh sakte.
VOICE-magar meri baat toh suno niharika.
NIHA-mujhe kuch nahin sunna hai, aur ab sunne ko kuch baaki bhi nahi raha.
VOICE-magar tum meri prob. ko samajhne ki koshish kyun nahin karti ho.
NIHA-tum kehna kya chahte ho, aur kya samjhun main.
VOICE-lekin niharika......
NIHA-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hai.
aur itna kehkar niharika phone cut kar deti hai, aur jaise hi piche turn karti hai, aditya ko apne saamne paatim hai, aditya dekhta hai ki niharika ki aankhon mein aansoon bhare hain, magar isse pehle ki aditya niharika se kuch pooch paata ki tabhie achanak se niharika aditya se lipatkar zor- zor se rone lagti hai, yeh dekhkar aditya ek dum shock ho jaata hai, aur use samajh mein nahin aata hai ki woh kya kare, aditya niharika ko tassalli dene ke liye apna haath niharika ke sir tak laata hai, magar phir kuch sochkar wapas apna haath niche kar leta hai, magar niharika ki takleef usse bardasht nahin hoti hai, aur aakhir kaar woh niharika ke sir par haath rakhkar use sehlaate hue chup karane ki koshish karta hai, magar niharika roti hi rehti hai, aisa lagta hai mano, woh apne saare dukh dard aansoon mein baha dena chahti ho, aditya bhi niharika ke gham mein poori tarah se doob chuka hai, aur uski aankhen bandh hain.
cut to the breakfast table.
POO- ab yeh adi kahan reh gaya.
RS-kahin niharika ko dhoondte-dhoondte woh bhi toh nahin kho gaya.
SAG-main dekh kar aata hoon.
NIH-haan, par zara jaldi aana, kahin undono ke saath-saath tum bhi na gum ho jaana.
SAG-don't worry is baar aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga.
aur itna kehkar sagar undono ko dekhne jaata hai.
cut to the lobby, jahan par niharika abhi bhi aditya se lipatkar ro rahi hai, ki tabhie achanak uske haath se uska mobile zameen par gir jaata hai, jiski awaaz se dono achanak se ek doosre se laga hote hain, aur ek doosre ki taraf dekhne lagte hain, aditya niharika ko uska mobile uthakar deta hai, tabhie achanak se unhe sagar ki awaaz sunai deti hai, aur dono chaunk kar uski taraf dekhte hain,(aur situation kuch aisi hai ki ek taraf niharika khadi hai, ek taraf aditya khada hai, aur undono ke beech mein sagar saamne se aa raha hai), sagar ko aate dekh niharika jaldi se apne aansoon ponch leti hai, sagar kuch hi palon mein undono ke paas aa jaata hai,(aur ab situation kuch aisi hai ki ek taraf niharika, ek taraf aditya aur un dono ke beech mein sagar khada hai).
SAG-''AB'', niharika aap dono yahan par kya kar rahein hain? main kabse aap dono ko dhoond raha hoon.
NIHA-woh......main......mera matlab hai ki.......hum.......
ADI-woh......niharika ke kehne ka matlab hai ki hum dono bas aa hi rahe the.
SAG-toh phir der kis baat ki hai chaliye.
ADI-haan chalo, chalein niharika.
NIHA-haan chalo.
aur itna kehkar woh teeno wapas hotel ke restaurant ke andar chale jaate hain. kuch der baad woh teeno pahunchte hain.
POO-thank God ki atleast tum log aa toh gaye.
NIHA-woh toh aana hi tha, after all humein ab kiran mam aur nihal ki sagai ki tyayaariyan bhi toh karni hain.
aditya jo ki niharika ko dekhe jaa raha hai apne mann mein sochta hai.
ADI-(to himself)-mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki, niharika ne apne dil mein koi bahut raaz chupa ke rakha hua hai, shayad koi aisi baat jo ki use humesha dard deti hai, aakhir woh kisse baat kar rahi thi phone par?
SAG-''AB'', ''AB''......
ADI-(chaun kar)-haan, kya hua?
SAG-aap kahan khoye hue hai?
ADI-kahin nahin bas sagai ke baare mein soch raha tha.
SAG-oh.
POO-ok, toh ab humein kuch shopping bhi kar leni chahyiye kyun.
RS-haan-haan, kyun nahin shopping ka toh doosra matlab hi hai ladkiyan.
POO-bikul sahi kha tumne, woh ladkiyan hi kya, jo ki shopping hi na karein, toh chalein.
KIR-neki aur pooch-pooch.
NIH-aaj toh hum poori tarah se lut jaayenge kyun adi.
ADI-meri fikar chodo, apni karo.
KIR-adi bilkul sahi keh raha hai.
NIH-haan-haan tum toh adi ko hi support karogi.
ADI-kuch jal raha hai kya?
NIH-koi baat nahin mr.aditya malhotra humara bhi waqt aayega.
ADI-jab aayega, tab dekha jaayega.
SAG-ab bas bhi kijiye aap dono, aur chaliye.
RS-hey guys, meri hotel ke manager se baat ho gayi hai, kuch hi der mein woh humare liye ek gaadi ka intezaam kar denge.
POO-that's gr8, chalo isi bahane hum log shopping ke saath-saath thoda ghoom phir bhi lenge kyun niha.
NIHA-kyun nahin.
kuch der baad sab log hotel se bahar nikalte hain, jahan par ek badi si car khadi rehti hai, sab log ek-ek karke usmein chad jaate hain, aur kuch hi palon mein woh car apni manzil ki taraf ravana ho jaati hai.
END OF PART 14. PLZZZ DO COMMENT.
Edited by pritib0 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow kya update tha............
wats bothering Niharika so much but atleast Adi is dere to take care of her everytime.So Nihal n Kiran are getting engaged on Valentine Day
superb n waiting for the next part eagerly

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