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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: pritib0

hi sana and all rajeev khandelwal fans i have recently joined this forum iam a very big fan of your rn fiction and i really adore your story alot iwas waiting for this moment to comment on your story you are really doing a good job keep it up your promo is really very very exciting waiting for the reply plz do reply me iam new in this forum.

hii priti....

welcome 2 IF sweety😛😛aur tumne aaj join kiya hai aur sabse pehali post mere FF par ki hai wow i m so happy😊aur ha tumne mera FF kaha read kiya tha IF par😕tumhe meri story acchi lagati hai thank u so much,aur ha dekho maine tumhe reply kiya na agar koi bhi pro ho IF main to just ask me ok.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot sana iam really glad that u have replied to my post so quickly , i feel like iam the queen of this world once again thanky so much that is so sweet of you , now i am able to know that why u r so popular and so helping and adorable too,i will surely reply on your ff i really just love it thanky. keep replying.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Sana,
first i feel very sad when i read your note i am really gonna missed our first FF 😭 😭 😭 but after reading your good news that you are going to continue with new topic i feel such a realief 😛 😛 😛
aur waise tum aise kyun sochti ho ke ab koi tumhara FF nahi padhega . dont even think like it! you are the Shahrukh of this forum and we always love all love shahrukh in any role 😉 i hope sab mujhse agree honge!!!
so dont feel bad we are always with you ur wise mujhe lgt tum mujhse naraz ho itne dino se nahi koi PM na koi comment 😕 kahi hame bhul to nahi gayi janab!and i am sorry for not giving you any comment but i tell you the reason through PM hope you read it!
Ab baat tumhare Promo ki to after reading it i am desperately waiting to read the update , Raj! oh my god he is such cute!kitna tang karta hai naina ko but i think she will also enjoy it like us 😉 😉 .hope ke ab khandal jake to dono ek dusre ko apne dil ki baat bata de. it enough yaar cant wait for thei confession!
by the way update sooooooooooon.
luv you & your FF. ❤️ ❤️

keep smilling 😃keep writting 👍🏼
namita

hi ,,,namita...

sach main khudh bhi bahot ajeeb feel kar rahi hoo,mere liye mera FF sabkuch tha,par koi baat nahin jaise usako maine pyaar se likha tha waise hi yaha bhi main usi tarah se likhugi,aur tumne mujhe IF ka SRK kaha😆😆wow main bahot khush hui tumhaari yeh baat sunkar,😳😳thank u so much sweety,i love u😉

aur namita main tumse naraaz nahin hoo,pata hai kai dino se mera PC kharaab tha is liye maine kisi ko bhi UD hone ka PM nahin kiya tha,aur waise maine tumhe tumhaare PM ka reply diya tha yaad hai😊main bas PC se thodi pareshaan thi par ab sab thik hai ab main har UD par tumhe PM karugi don worry,aisa kabhi mat sochana k main tumse naraaz hoo😊

RN ka confession hoga ek din par abhi nahin ho sakata plzz thoda sa wait kar lo,main aage jo bhi karugi accha karugi bas mujh par trust karo.thanx 4 comment.

lots of love

sana😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

waiting for da updateeeeeeeeeeeee

UD 3 baje hogi.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i m waitinggggg
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 44

sherry naina aur raj k paas aati hai.

sherry:are tum dono yaha ho chalo bahar sab game khela rahe hai.
naina:ha woh main yaha pray kar rahi thi.
sherry:hey naina phir to jo maagana chahati ho maag lo.
naina:kyun?
sherry:b/c maine suna hai hum sacche dil se jo chahege god hamari woh wish zarur puri karege.
raj:accha.aur tumhe kaise pata?😕
sherry:maine book main padha tha.😊
raj:tum aajkal padhane bahot lag gayi ho sherry.😆
sherry:sab tumhaari sangat ka asar hai jaanu.😉

raj naina k saamane sherry k muh se janu sunkar sarama jaata hai.aur naina use dekhkar muskurane lagati hai.

sherry:accha ab chale.
naina:kyun tum kuch nahin pray karogi?
sherry:nahin,mujhe kuch nahin maagana,mere paas jo hai main usi main bahot khush hoo.😛
kabhi zarurat hui to zarur aaugi yaha.😊

sherry waha se chali jaati hai.

raj:kabhi nahin badalegi yeh ladaki.
naina:sherry sach main bahot sweet hai sir.
raj:sweet😕 ...hahaha...mujh se pucho k kitani badi sweet hai yeh.
naina:kyun kya hua?usane aapko janu kaha is liye.hahaha........😆
raj: aham*...😆cadet sigh sab bahar wait kar rahe hai.

raj waha se khada hota hai aur naina abhi bhi wahi bethi hai.

raj:ab bahar nahin jana kyaa?
naina:aa rahi hoo.

saare hotel wapas aate hai.

abhi:ok cadets hum kal subah 7 baje yaha se jaa rahe hai sab log time par redy ho jana.
naina:sir mujhe kuch bolana hai.
abhi:ha naina bolo?
naina:sir main soch rahi thi k abhi KMA ko open hone main kuch din hai to main maa baba se mil aau.
abhi:yeh to acchi baat hai.tumhe zarur jana chahiye.
naina:to sir main kal 8 baje ki train se jaa rahi hoo.
abhi:par iski kyaa zarurat thi aap hamare saath aa sakati thi naina.aap delhi se bhi to jaa sakati thi.
naina:no sir woh maine yahi se ticket le li hai.
abhi:chaliye jaisa aap thik samajhe.
naina:good night sir.
abhi:good night.

abhi apne room main jata hai aur naina bahot khush hoti hui lift k paas jati hai.
aur jaise hi apne room main jane lagati hai woh dekhati hai k aalekh waha khada hai.

naina:are aalekh tu yaha.sab thik hai na.
aalekh:ha sab thik hai par tujhe kyaa hua?aise khush kyun ho rahi hai.jaise k lottery lag gayi ho teri.😉
naina:ha samajh k wahi lag gayi hai.😛
aalekh:kya?
naina:ahmm woh main kal ma baba k paas jaa rahi hoo,bas is liye khush hoo.
aalekh:accha par aise achaanak kuch baat hai kya?😕
naina:nahin to koi baat nahin,bas maa se baat ki thi aaj to maine unse kaha k main waha aa rahi hoo.
aalekh:chal accha hai thode din unke saath rahegi to mind set ho jaayega tera.😛
naina:tum log kab jaa rahe ho 7 baje.
aalekh:kyun tu apun sab k saath nahin aa rahi.
naina:nahin maine kisi aur train ki ticket lee hai.
aalekh:chal jaisa tu kare thik hai,apun chalata hai.
naina:aalekh ruk....
aalekh:kya .
naina:tu mujhe leke jayada mat soch mujhe pata hai tu yaha kya bolane aaya tha,
par mera yakeen kar rahul sirf mera dost hai,aur mera pyaar aaj bhi wahi hai jo pehale the.
aalekh:yakeen hai tujh par naina apun ko pura yakeen hai.😊
naina:thanx.aalekh ek tu hi to hai jo mujhe samajhta hai.
aalekh:accha chal ab tu jaa aur aaram kar.
naina:bye.

aalekh waha se chale jaata hai.

naina:to her self:mujhe maaf kar de aalekh maine tujh se juth kaha par main kyaa karu,
main tujhe sach bhi to nahin bata sakati,is waqt main rajveer sir k saath hoo aur main nahin
chahti k meri wajah se woh phir kisi mushkil main aaye ek baar meri wajah se woh mujhse
dur ho gaye the par is baar main unko nahin kho sakati,sahi waqt aane par main tujhe sab bata dugi
k rahul hi mere rajveer sir hai phir tu kabhi bhi mere aur unke rishatey ko lekar galat nahin sochega
plzz mujhe maaf kar de,maine hamesha tera saath diya hai.par is baar main apne pyaar k saath hoo.


next morning

saare hotel k bahar khade hai.

sherry:RK yeh kya tum aaye bhi akele aur jaa bhi akele rahe ho,tum chalate saath to aur maza aata.
raj:sherry,ab main bhi kyaa karu mujhe bhi car wapas deni hai.
sherry:ha yeh bhi sahi hai,par tumhaare bina accha nahin lagega.
raj:to tum mere saath chalo car main.

naina yeh baat sunkar darr jati hai k kahin sherry saath na aa jaaye.😆

sherry:are naina tum thik to hona.
naina:ha woh bag haath se gir gaya.i m ok.😆
raj:bolo chalogi mere saath sherry?
sherry:no RK main tumhaare saath aati par yaha main sab k saath aayi thi to jana bhi inke saath hi jana chahiye na,warana sab kya sochege.
raj:mujhe pata tha,chalo koi baat nahin.
pooja:sherry chal hum late ho rahe hai.
sherry:ok RK ab hume chalana chahiye
raj:chalo main tumhe station tak chod deta hoo.
sherry:naina tum bhi saath aa jao hum tumhe bus stop par chod dege.
naina:ok
sherry:aalekh tum sab jao main RK k saath station aati hoo.

aalekh naina k paas aata hai.

aalekh:tu bhi jaa rahi hai na naina.
naina:ha bas tum log jao main nikal hi rahi hoo.
aalekh:chal to apun bhi chalata hai.apnaa dyaan rakhana.
naina:hmm tu bhi apnaa dyaan rakhna.bye.

naina sherry aur raj teno car main hai.

sherry:naina tum bus se jaa rahi ho.
naina:ha yaha se bus lee hai aage se train karugi.
sherry:are par tum RK k saath hi chali jao.
raj:yeh kyaa baat kar rahi ho sherry,naina ko delhi jana hai aur mujhe mumbai.
sherry:to kya hua tum dono akele ho maine socha company mil jaayegi.

raj,sherry aur naina teeno apne dil main soch rahe hai.

raj:ab tumhe kya pata sherry k hum saath hi jaa rahe hai,bas tumhe station chodane ki der hai.
naina:company to humari hi rahegi sherry rajveer sir aur main akele nahin saath hai.
sherry:main jitana chahti hoo k yeh dono saath rahe utanaa hi dono alag rahete hai,dono saath main kitane acche lagate hai,
par nahin dono ko apne apne kaam hai,kaash main naina ko bata sakati k RK hi usaka pyaar hai,par kya karu RK se wada
jo kiya hai.ab bata bhi nahin sakati.

raj gaadi rokata hai.

sherry:lo naina tumhaara bus stop aa gaya.
naina:ha,accha sherry bye.apnaa dyaan rakhana,bye rahul.

naina ki baat sunkar raj ko hasi aati hai.

raj:bye naina,i hope tum apnaa yeh trip enjoy karo.😉
sherry:ofcourse karegi apne ghar jo jaa rahi hai.ok naina hum chalate hai mujhe bhi station jana hai waha sab wait kar rahe hoge bye.
naina:ha sahi kaha tumhe jaladi jana chahiye kahin train miss ho gayi to.
sherry:to kya hua agar miss ho gayi to RK hai na saath,usi k saath chali jaugi.

naina yeh baat sunkar pareshaan ho jaati hai,aur raj usaka face dekhkar samajh jaata hai.k woh kya soch rahi hai.

raj:ha sherry dont worry main hoo na agar train miss bhi ho gayi to kya hua,tum mere saath aa jana.kyun naina sahi kaha na maine.😉
naina:ha sahi kaha.tum kab galat hote ho rahul.😡

naina gussa hokar dekhati hai raj ko.

naina:accha ab jao warana late ho jaoge.😡
sherry:ok bye.


raj aur sherry naina ko bus stop chod kar station jaate hai.

sherry:lagata hai hum late ho gaye hai jaladi chalo RK.
raj:hmm kahin train miss na ho gayi ho.
sherry:hey woh dekho ali.
raj:thank god,hum late nahin hua.

ali raj aur sherry k paas aata hai.

ali:aap aa gayi hum aapka hi intzaar kar rahe the.ab chale train ka time ho gaya hai.
sherry:ha ,ok RK main chalati hoo.tum kab tak aaoge KMA.
raj:main 2 din main aa jauga ok.
sherry:accha main wait karugi.
raj:aur suno.
sherry:kya?

raj sherry ko dheere se bolata hai.

raj:hooda k saath jayada baate mat karana ok.😡
sherry:hahaha......ok.bye.😆

sherry ali k saath chali jaati hai aur raj apni car lekar wapas bus stop jaata hai.
jaha naina usaka wait kar rahi hai.raj naina k paas jakar car rokata hai,aur naina bina kuch bole
car main aakar bethati hai,aur car khadi hai dono kuch bol nahin rahe hai thodi der baad dono
ek dusare ki side dekhate hai.


naina:hmmmm...woh kya kahete the aap.
raj:MISSION ACCOMPALISHED .....😳😳
naina:right..

aur dono hasane lag jaate hai.

raj:par humne accha nahin kiya,sherry se bhi juth kaha.
naina:ha aur maine aalekh se juth kaha.mujhe sach bahot bura lag raha hai.
raj:bura lag raha hai,cadet sigh 😕
naina:ha sir.
raj:par yaha jaana to tum hi chahti thi,maine to kitana mana kiya.par aakhir mujhe manna hi pada.
naina:hahahaha......accha kaise?
raj:tum to baat hi nahin kar rahi thi mujhse,aur mujhe yeh accha nahin lag raha tha.😭
naina:sach...kyun accha nahin lag raha tha.?😉

raj yeh baat bolkar chup ho jaata hai aur naina woh to raj k muh se yeh sunkar khush ho jaati hai.

naina:aapne jawaab nahin diya...
raj:i think hume chalana chahiye.😆

raj bina naina ki side dekhe car start karata hai.

naina to her self:naina kya bol rahi hai tu yeh, yeh kaise sawaal kar diya maine.

raj to him self:mr.rajveer sigh shekhawat aapko ho kya jata hai,abhi to khandala main pure do din naina k saath rahena hai,
aur agar aap aise hi bolate rahe to pro main aa jaoge.😆😆

next scene

sherry dekhati hai k hooda akela betha hua hai woh usake paas jaati hai.

sherry:helloo...
hooda:are sherry aa na
sherry:kya baat hai bade chupchaap ho.?
hooda:nahin to aisa kuch nahin hai.
sherry:accha hooda tum mujhe rajveer aur naina ki baat batao na jo us din adhuri reh gayi thi.
hooda:tum un dono k baare main kyun janna chahti ho.?

hooda sherry ko dekhata hai.sherry ko kuch samajh nahin aata k woh kya kahe.

hooda:bolo na kya karogi unke baare main jaankar.
sherry:woh bas....
hooda:tumhe apne RK k liye tension ho rahi hai kya?
sherry:nahin hooda aisi koi baat nahin hai.
hooda:good hona bhi nahin chahiye,phoolan sirf rajveer ki thi.
sherry:par tum mujhe unke baare main aur bhi kuch batao na,k kya woh dono ne kabhi kuch kaha tha ek dusare ko.
hooda:nahin jaha tak mujhe pata hai sir naina ko pasand karate the as a cadet par ,
pyaar karate the ya nahin yeh main nahin janata.sayad ha.
sherry:tum aisa kaise keh sakate ho?
hooda:sir ne naina k liye bahot kuch kiya tha sherry,unhone ritu mishra se engagement ki thi,sirf naina k liye.

sherry yeh baat sunkar heran hoti hai.

sherry:what?naina k liye kyun ?
hooda:sab meri wajah se hua tha,maine sir aur naina ko ek saath naina k room main dekha tha aur bahar jakar.
un dono k baare main maine kuch bol diya jo k galat tha,bas sir ne naina aur apne rishtey ko dunia ki baato se bachaane k liye
ritu mishra se sagaai kar lee.
sherry:phir naina ko rajveer se pyaar kab hua?
hooda:sherry pyaar to bahot pehale se karati thi woh sir ko pata hai woh apni har choti choti baat ko lekar sir k paas jaati thi,
aur apne dil ki baat unse hi karati thi.
sherry:ofcourse hooda naina unke paas hi jayegi na naveen k dost jo the woh.
hooda:tumhe ek baat kahu,tumhe yakeen nahin hoga.
sherry:kya?
hooda:tumhe pata hai naveen ko kisane mara tha?

sherry yeh baat sunkar kuch nahin kaheti.woh samajhti hai k hooda lala ka naam lega.

hooda:batau naveen ko kisane mara tha.
sherry:hmmmm..........
hooda:CAPT.RAJVEER SIGH SHEKHAWAT ne mara tha...............
sherry:KYAAAAAAAAAAAA.............

next scene

raj aur naina dono car main hai,aur naina woh bas raj ki taraf hi dekh rahi hai.

raj:kya hua?
naina:hmmm kuch nahin bas kuch soch rahi thi.
raj:kya?
naina:pehale wada karo aap hasoge nahin.
raj:naina batao main nahin hasuga.
naina:pata hai mujhe darr lag raha tha k kahin sherry sach main na aajaye aapke saath.
raj:hahahaha....
naina:aapne wada kiya tha k aap nahin hasoge,par aap to....

naina apnaa face window ki taraf kar leti hai.

raj:ok nahin hasata par naina main janata tha k sherry nahin aayegi mere saath.
naina:woh kaise?
raj:sherry GOA un sab k saath aayi thi to woh jayegi bhi unke saath,woh kabhi bhi
apne dosto ko akela nahin chodati,dosti nibhaane main woh bahot pakki hai.
naina:aap use bahot acchi tarah se janate hai.
raj:ha ab itane mahino se usake saath jo reh raha hoo.
naina:sir sherry aapki bahot acchi dost hai.
raj:hmmmm sherry meri bahot acchi dost hai,sach kahu to naveen k baad agar koi dost mila hai mujhe to woh sherry hai.

naina raj ki baat sunkar thodi udas ho jaati hai.

raj:naina....naina kya hua?
naina:nahin kuch nahin bas bhaiya ki yaad aagayi.

raj car rokata hai.

raj:naina naveen aaj bhi hamare saath hai,aur woh kabhi nahin chahega k tum use aise yaad karo.
naina:sir hum bhaiya ko bekasoor saabit kar paayege na?

raj naina ka haath pakadata hai.

raj:naina ab yaha tak aa gaye hai to aage bhi sab accha hi hoga ,mujh par yakeen hai na tumhe,dekhana main ,
naveen ko begunaah saabit kar k rahuga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.
naina:nahin sir aapko kuch nahin hoga,maine apnaa bhai kho diya hai,aur aap mujhe kho kar wapas mile ho,ab plzz
aisi koi bhi baat mat karana.
raj:mujhe kuch nahin hoga,main ab jo bhi kar raha hoo soch samajh k kar raha hoo,bas ab kuch hi dino k der hai
phir sab accha ho jayega.

raj naina k aasoo pochata hai.

raj:chalo ab rona bandh karo,warana log sochege k main tumhe rula raha hoo.
naina:hahahaha.......sir aapko darr bhi lagata hai.
raj:ha ab tum aise road par rone lagogi to,mujhe darana padega na.

naina hasane lag jaati hai,aur raj use dekhkar khush hota hai.

end of part 44

next UD 3 june ko hogi😛😊

Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
too cute....
Raj itna darta kyun hai????????
update was really gud....n i'm waiting for 3rd June
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
toooooooooooooooooo good 👏 👏 👏
bas ek hi prblm hai
ye dono duffers kab confess karenge yaar
n i hope ki sherry ko pata chal jaye ki raj bhi naina se pyaar karta hai to wo un dono ko saath le aayegi
nahi to in dono se to kuch bhi nahi hoga 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
awesome too good very nice update soon asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
superb.excellent ud 👏 .cont soon..........

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