'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 2

Episode: 2

As the train is about to start the young lady again is looking outside, her eyes r moist for some reason. Her cell phone rings and she speaks softly and she has tears in her eyes but controls her teary eyes. She doesn't let the tear drop come out of her big beautiful eyes.

She looks around to ensure none observed her emotional state, and her eyes fall on the child, who is also teary eyed, the child is thinking something and looking outside. She feels strange and looks at the woman who is with the child, coming close to the child hugging him, talking to him so that he smiles. The man looks at the conversation of the woman and the child, he gets a tensed feeling and he looks in front and observes the teary eyed lady in front. He is confused that the lady is teary eyed looking at the child or with some other reason.

Dekho itefaq hai kaisa,

Umda hai dard akhon mey ek jaisa,

Dono anjaan dard ki wajah kya hai?

Kiss modd jane dard ke raaz bayaan hai…

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After a while the child is playing with cards, the man goes towards the door as he wants to smoke. Later the woman goes to the toilet telling the child she will be back in 5 minutes and as the child waits and realizes its more than 10 minutes he is alone, he cries and the lady who is reading a book looks at the scared child. She sits near the child and tells him not to cry. The child still afraid cries loudly and the man worriedly comes running, he takes the child in his arms and kisses him….

Child: Papa… kahan gaye the aap…. Main akela tha..

(The man looks where the woman went)

The Man: Etansh beta, main yehin tha, sorry beta.. aap aise matt roo…

Etansh hugged him tightly and kept his head on his shoulder and buried his face not wanting to look up but be close enough that nobody takes him away. The lady who was sitting felt how much the child loves his father. The woman came and the man spoke,

The Man: Kahan thi aap… Etansh bahot darr gaya tha… aap ussey ek pal bhi akela matt choodo.. waise main bhi dyaan rahunga… (He said with guilt)

The woman said, sorry and tried to cheer Etansh

but Etansh didn't want to look at her. The man explained her, 'he will be fine… give him some time.'

The lady in front smiled at the affection the father and son have…

Kitna Sehmasa yeh Masum hai,

Apne Papa ke kareeb isko sukun hai,

Dekh Anjaan ladki inhe muskurayi hai,

Rishtey ki mithaas issey chu karjogayi hai…

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another fab part. and i will never be bored reading ur fic. I just love all of them. they become interesting as they go on so no ques of getting bored

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another fab part. and i will never be bored reading ur fic. I just love all of them. they become interesting as they go on so no ques of getting bored

Awww Golu... u r too quick to reply ..and so sweet of u yaar... feels nice u genuinely liked my work... my short stories i feel were interstign enouhg.. this long episoe stories am a bit confused whetehr they generate the same .. chalo ur comments have boosted my spirit.. 😃

wonderful start but the episodes are so short! Oh well, you always update frequently. Looking forward to the next episode! Great work. 👏

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

wonderful start but the episodes are so short! Oh well, you always update frequently. Looking forward to the next episode! Great work. 👏

Hi Rabia... yup the episodes r too short... even i wondered... but i just had divided accordign to the segements... but i think i will post these quick so that u can read oen after anotehr and get invovled int eh story....😃

Episode: 3

After some time everyone was having food, Etansh was so disciplined that it surprised the young lady. Etansh was feeling bored and as he looked around; the lady observed him.

The young lady: Hey u were playing with the cards, u know tricks using the cards.

Etansh (a bit hesitant): No.

The young lady: I will show u, bring ur cards…

The Woman: Etansh dekho aunty kya trick dikhati hai…

Etansh looked at his father and as his father nodded his head to go. He said to the lady,

Etansh: yeh lijiye cards…

Young lady: Okey idhar aoo main tumhe dikhati hun,

She showed him some tricks using the cards and Etansh was surprised. He wished to learn how he can do that himself. She was making him learn the trick. The woman smiled looking at the way Etansh was enjoying along with the lady. The lady was talking with him lovingly and explaining him, Etansh was getting excited as he did the trick by himself.

Even his father was enjoying looking at Etansh and his excitement. Etansh's cute smile made him feel relax.

Yeh chotey chotey pal kitne pyaarey hain,

Masum ankho mey sapne kitna sarey hain,

Beite ki muskaan dekh chehre pe chinta kam hue hai

Apne dukh ko bhul ladki masum ka dil behla rahi hai…

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Episode: 4

After some time Etansh was sleeping in his Papa's lap, the woman asked the lady

The woman: Aap Jalandhar jaa rahi hain?

The lady: Jii

The woman: Jalandhar mey rehti hain?

The lady: Ji main nahi rehti, meri didi ka Sasural wahan hai. Main apni didise hi milney jaa rahin hun. Aap Jalandhar ke reheney wale hain?

The woman: Haan hum wahi rehtey hain! Mera sasural Mumbai mey hai, Maiyka Jalandhar mey hai…

The lady: Achaa… Waise aap ka bachha Etansh, bahot pyaara hai.

The woman: Ji (she smiled), waise yeh Mera Beta nahi hai, yeh mere Bhai ka beta hai, main iski Bua hun…

The lady: Oh.. achaa…

The woman: Aapka naam kya hai?

The lady: Mera naam 'Parikrama' hai

The woman: Mera naam 'Vaani' hai, aur yeh mere Bhai Etansh ke Papa… 'Vyomesh' hain…

Parikrama: Vyomesh… (She wondered as it was the first time she heard such a name)

Vaani: Waise to Vyomesh hai, hum sab Vyom kehke pukartey hain.

Parikrama: Etansh shayad apni Maa jaisa dikhta hai... aap jaisa woh nahi dikhta…(looking at Vyom)

Vaani & Vyom just gave a fake smile and didn't speak much. Parikrama could sense that they weren't pleasant enough to hear that… she felt may be the husband and wife had a tiff… or may be some other reason… she thought in her mind…

Parikrama: (in her mind) Rishto ki kadwahat hai, yaa Rishta kho gaya hai, bacchey pe to asarr karegi hi… (Wondering was the reason Etansh was teary eyed in the beginning)

Ek kadi nazuk thi, abhi woh dard ki kaddi shayad jhidi hai,

Apna dukh bhul dusrey ki zindagi ke bare mey soch rahi hai,

Dekhen yeh kaise rishto ki sacchaee tak pahunchtey hain,

Kaise rishto ko suljhatey hain ya phir khud inmey ulajhtey hain…

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mindblowing , awesome & perfect bhoomi i love to read you again and agin 👏

awesome! I wonder who Etansh's mother was. Continue soon.

great parts. waiting for more. vyom and etansh relationship is sweet. he is really close to his father. I think he has lost his mother or she left and has gone with someone?????? just my guess work.