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lakshmi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

nice name 4 d thread..................gr88prt.........
update sonnnnnnnnnnn 😊

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Ishaqzaadi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Hina your fanfics rock..cant wait for the update! 👏

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

WAH WAH WAH WAH ... nice going di....
3rd thread??????? AWESUM !!!!!!!!!!!!
BRILLIANT........
FABULOUS....
OK NEED MI THESAURUS AGAIN !!!!!!!!!!!
LOLOLOL!!!
OKAY...
PLEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE SOON..........
LUV UR FF !!!!!!
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Hina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mehma24
hinu di ye lo aaj ka song 😆

aa jaane jaan
tera ye update kahan,kahan,kahan
updaye k liye,hai aas lagaye
oh hinu di de jaa na

oh badal se baarish tapke hai
tapke hai,to update de do na 😆
dil ye humara maange hai
maange hai,tu samjhe na 😭
aa la la la la la aa kyun tadpaaye,
tu kyun tarsaaye
oo hinu di de do naa

aa jaane jaan
aa jaane jaan
tera ye update kahan,kahan,kahan
updaye k liye,hai aas lagaye
o hinu di de jaa na

o dur se kitni ayi hoon
ayi hoon, tu jaane na
update ka gaana laayi hoon
layi hoon, tu maane na 😭
aa la la la la la aa bedardi se,
tu kyun thukraye 😭
o hinu d de do naa

aa jaane jaan
tera ye update kahan,kahan,kahan
updaye k liye,hai aas lagaye
oh hinu di de jaa na

chalo ab to gaana bhi gaa diya,ab to jaldi se update do 😭 😭

Great song Mehmu!

Loved it

Sorry I had to go into a meeting

But I've got the update her now

I'll be posting it now just after adding the last scene

Love u

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

wah yaar mehmu di maza aa gaya

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

hina di looks like hum is thread pe bhi conquer kar lenge

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

kahan gaye sab log mujhe akela chod ke????????????????

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

hina di mujhko aapse urgent baat karni hai

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Tania

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Hina congo on the new thread.. Just read the last 3 updates, they were awesome as usual 👏 👏

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Hina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Part One:

Sanjeevani:

Nana looks out of the window and imagines Keerti dancing in the rain

Like Juhi Chawla did in Chandni

He smiles to dream of her and then suddenly gets annoyed and disturbed

That's 'coz Shubhankar made an entry into his dream

And now Keerti dances with him happily

He goes

Tu bohot bewafa nikli re Keerti

Tuney apne Majnu ke sath barsath ka item no. bhi gaa dala ,wo bhi mere hi sapne me

Ab mai tera sochunga bhi nahi and wipes his dry eyes dry

He thinks

Wo Lovely kaha gayi re?

Chal uske sath hi apne ujhde hue sawan ka dard baath ta hoo

Wo bhi badi dujhi aatma lagi mujhe

And goes looking for her and all over the hospital

And finally thinks of the terrace

Lovely loving the lovely monsoon

And dancing like a wannabe Kajol but appears more like Saroj khan

She imagines Rahul as the man of her dreams

Rahul does everything that Sharukh does in the song

And Lovely blushes everytime he appears in her dream sequence

Then she spots Nana watching her

And thinks ye Raj ki jagah Raj ke pops kyu agayi ji?

She then realises its really Nana watching her dance like a maniac

And she stops like a statue

Nana goes

Teejja aila sala!

Ye 100 kilo ki Kajol itna phudak phudak ke naachegi

To phir poori Sanjeevani hil jayegi

Aur saare mareez to seedha zameen me bina mare hi garr jayenge

Lovely goes

Oji ye Nana kaha se agaye?

He knows she's embarrassed and to make her feel okay

He goes

Acha tha!

Acha laga tera barsaat ko enjoy karne ka style

Karna chahiye

Kabhi kabhi aisa bindaas dance karma chahiye

Lovely thinks

Oji,inhone to shayad sab dekh liya

Ab kya karoo?

And goes

Nanaji ,ohi aap bearish ka maza nahi lengey ji?

Nana goes

Lekin mere paas mini skirt nahi hai

Lovely goes

Oji koi baat nai jee

Hum aise hi naach lete hai

And they dance together to

Ab ke saawan aise barse……………….

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Shashank babu and Padmabala romancing in the motor gaadi :

Pyaar hua ikraar hua hai

Sings Shashank's heart

And Padma blushes everytime her heart recognises the tune

They slowly drive down the road with windows down in true 50's style

Shashank then finally decides of letting her know what she means to him

And goes

Padma,wo mai

Paddy panics that its actually happening now

Shashank says

Padma,mai tumse ye kehna chahta tha ki……

And beep beep goes his fone

He goes

Sorry,ek minute Sanjeevani se hai

And answers the call

He looks worried after the fone convo and goes

Sorry Padma,mujhe abhi hospital pohochna hoga

Emergency hai!

Paddy goes

To chaliye,mai bhi aapke sath chalti hoo,

shayad apke koi kaam aa jaoo

Shashank goes

Are you sure?

I can drop you home if you want

Paddy says

Nahi,I'm fine

Aaap chaliye Sanjeevani

Both sigh and feel relaxed in a way to have skipped the awkward confession again

And they turn to Sanjeevani….

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Baarish tip tipping on the bike:

Rahul and Muskaan thoroughly enjoy their rain song

And Muskaan is now a fan of Rahul's singing

They wriggle and dance on the bike and want the ride and rain

To go on and on and never ever end

But they eventually get to Muski's house

Rahul goes

Tera ghar itni jaldi kasie agaya?

Muskaan goes

Itni tez bike chalaney ko kisne kaha tha

Thoda dheere chalata

To koi baat hoti na

Rahul goes

Tuney hi to kaha tha bhaganey ko bike

Ab keh rahi hai tez chalayi

She goes

Ab to tu rehen de ha

Jab ghar paas agaya tab tujhe badi masti soojh rahi hai

Rahul grins at her cute romance and her masti drives him crazy

As they pass the corner into the her street

They hear

Ghodey jaisi chaal
Haathi jaisi dum
O sawan raja kaha se aye tum
Chak dhum dhum
Chak dhum dhum
Chak dhum dhum chak

Rahul stops the bike and walks into a shed to see a bunch of kids dancing and singing in the rain

Muskaan follows him there

and smiles at the kids and joins them to play and dance

Rahul loves her innocence and her smile makes him sing

Koi ladki hai,jab wo hasti hai
Baarish hoti hai
Chanan chanan chun chun

Chak dhum dhum ,chak dhum dhum chak dhum chak

Sing the kids in chorus as they all dance

Muskaan smiles and sings

Koi ladka hai
Jab wo gaata hai
Saawan ata hai
Ghumad ghumar ghum ghum

Chak dhum dhum,chak dhum dhum,chak dhum dhum chak

They dance away like carzy in the rain with the kids

And now Muskaan has had her real Masti!

Ho oh ho ho hums Rahul

And Muskaan hums Hmmm laaa la laa …………………………..

And the beautiful rain-drenched masti night ends there

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The professinal sinners for the last time (but now really at it):

Badal yoo garajta hai……………….

Armaan with Riddhima wrapped in his arms

Has a flashback of his hasty kissing series

And gets worried of the closeness again

And to break through from the sinning possibility

He gets back to his naughty teasing self

To watch Riddhima dance and sing

Bahar bhi toofan
andar bhi toofan

And he sings

Beech me do toofano ke
Ye Guptas ka makaan

Winks and continues

Aise dil dhadakta hai

And he goes to hear her heartbeat and sings

Arey,aise dil dhadakta hai
Dar kuch aisa lagta hai
Chamak chamakke lapak ke
Ye bijli hum pe girjayegi……

And while singing the song they end up in the balcony

To enjoy the actual rain fall and to get soaked and drenches in love

.......................................

Now to the debutante sinners:

Atul watches Anjali go crazy in the rain

And imagines his rain sequence

With Anjali draped in an orange saree

She looks hot and voluptuous when the wind blows and she sings

Chunri lehrayi……
Payal chankayi…….
Chudi khankayi…….
Liya bechaini ka jog……

And Atul sings

Laga laga laga re
Laga laga laga re
Laga prem rog………

Laga laga laga laga re laga prem rog………………….

Annnnnnnnnnnddddd

Atchooo! Sneezes Anjali

Atul comes out of his sizzling dream and goes

Anjali!

Maine kaha than a tumhe sardi lag jayegi?

Chalo ab jaldi se gaadi me baitho

Anjali goes with a heavy voice

Sorry Atul!

And atchooo she goes again

Atul goes

Acha ab jaldi se gaadi chalu karo

Warna raat bhar yahi cheekti rahogi

And they get into the car

Anjali shivers in the cold

Atul goes

Sorry Anjali

Mere paas kuch nahi hai tumhe dene ko

Agar maine ye shirt utaar di na

To mai meri dream sequence wala bina shirt ka Salmaan khan ban jaoonga

Anjali goes

What?

Dream sequence?

Tum ne kya dream kiya Atul?

Atul giggles and goes

Nahi! Mujhe sharam ati hai

Anjali laughs

Acha mat batao

And drives off smiling away

She looks at him from the corner of her eye and thinks of

How complete she feels now

She's happy to have her funny ,cute and adorable Atul back

Who loves her like no one else would or could ever

And she feels blessed to be the one for him

She then thinks of the trouble Armaan and his crew bought to their relationship and goes

Atul!

Armaan aur baki sab ne hamarey sath jo game khel hai

Atul goes

Ha saley ki mai watt laga doonga

Mujhe kehta tha ki mera dost hai

Aur nikla mera Jaani Dushman

Usey to mai….

Aur Rahul aur Muskaan bhi Bewafa nikley

Aur ha Ridz?,wo aise kaise kar sakti hai yaar

Wo to meri pyari Sali thi na

Lekin pata nahi kyu Armaan tumhe apni Sali kehta hai?

Anjali agrees

I know,maine bhi notice kiya tha

Lekin

Atul goes

Chodo,us baat ko

Ab ye sochna hai ki un sab se badla kaise liya jaye

And get thinking for a payback game plan

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Guys,me in a hurry
So will leave it here and continue with the rapchik
gana of Shubh and Keerti in the next one
and the big surprise and shock of the evening is due soon
Aur abhi AA and AR ko ek aur gana gana baaki hai
Guess the songs and
Please reply to this first part of my new obsessive ff
I hope I've made it worth
See u all soon
Take care
Love u
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago

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