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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!==Thank you..

Aditya bimar hai badalte mausam ke wajaye se!!!! Thats sad!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”==yes..very sad..

Usko hamesha Naina yaa Raj ki godh hi chahiye!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Kaafi nakre hai uske!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊==haa..Raj aur Naina k saare goon aaye hain ..jo chees chahie usko har haal me pana hai..aur nakhra bhi karna hai..

Raj hi raat ko sambhalta hai usse kyunki Naina nahi soyegi toh uski tabiyat kharab ho jayegi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘==Uski duty hai yeh..

Naina ki baaton ko toh Raj ignore kar deta hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Accha hai isse Naina zyada jhagda nahi kar payegi!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ ==yes..is maamle me Raj bahut samajhdar hai..

Naina ne Raj ko Aditya ke sar pe haath rakhne nahi diya!!!! Very bad!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ ==Very bad indeed..

Raj ne sahi kaha ke Aditya ki wajah se unka rista nahi hai balke unke pyaar se Aditya aaya hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊==Raj is always right..πŸ˜›

[Naina keh rahi hai magar woh naa hi kehti yeh usse bhi pata hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj ne finally keh hi diya ke Naina ne usse nahi pehchaana jisse pyaar karti thi!!!!

Aur ab woh Rajveer ke pyaar ko nahi pehchaan rahi hai!!!!! ]==hmm..Naina thodi si sarfiri hai..dimaag hai uske paas..par istemal nahi karti..

[Naina ka breast milk sukh raha hai aur yeh baat bhi woh Raj se chupa rahi thi!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Aur woh davai nahi leti!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina bahut galat kar rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’]==Yes.This time Naina is wrong. Very much wrong..

Aditya injection ke baad roh raha hai aur chup nahiho raha hai toh Naina bhi roh rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭==Yes..She is feeling very much bad for her Darling Son..

Naina bachpan se hi aisi thi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›My God!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣==haa..problem toh bachpan se hi shuru hoti hai..

[Raj hasne laga aur usse tease karne laga!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Sunitaji ne pucha toh Naina ne kaha zehar!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Aur usse phir daat padi!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†]==Raj toh tease karega hi.. Pujjyania sasooma hi uski madad kar rahi hai..πŸ˜›

Raj ko baccho ke baare mein kaafi pata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊==Haa..ek bachcha pahle ho nahi saka..tab se Raj bahut savdhaan ho gaya hai..πŸ˜•

Raj is just the best dad!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘He is so caring!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊==yes..he is the best Dad..Dady Cool..πŸ˜†

Raj Naina ko pakad kar soh raha tha aur Naina Aditya ko!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 ==Yes..He is the best husband in town also..πŸ˜›

I hope Naina reciprocates the feelings Raj has for her soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==lage rahoπŸ˜‰




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Posted: 16 years ago
hi anu,
nice ud dear.... raj is such a loving husband .... uska tarika galat tha naina ko pane ka but he truly loves naina and his child.... i liked the last part where naina wakes up in the morning and see raj holding her.... that part was very sweet.... n do take ur time and enjoy the festival .... and happy navratri to u....
kads

Edited by kads_8302 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kads_8302

hi anu,
nice ud dear....
==thanks..raj is such a loving husband ..==indeed.. uska tarika galat tha naina ko pane ka but he truly loves naina and his child.... i liked the last part where naina wakes up in the morning and see raj holding her...==hmm😳. that part was very sweet.... n do take ur time and enjoy the festival .... and happy navratri to u....
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Posted: 16 years ago






Naina uthi...bina awaz kie uth gayi..par uska haath Raj ne pakad k rakha tha.. neend me hi.Naina kuchh der tak Raj ki taraf dekhti rahi,aise me Raj ki neend bhi toot gayi.Raj ne dekha Naina bistar me baithi hai..uski shakal se saaf pata chal raha hai ..k woh kuchh soch rahi hai...Raj ki neend puri nahi hui.. abhi tak..fir bhi Raj utha..Naina k kandhe par haath rakha usne..Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha...


Raj--kyaa hua?

Naina ne sirf sar hilaya..

Raj--almost saari raat hum nahi soye..aur abhi sirf 6 hi baje hain..abhi neend toot gayi?Neend aadhi ho gayi hai tumhari..

Naina ne in saare sawalon ka jawab nahi dia..usne Raj se poochha,"Office kitne baje jaana hai ..?"


Raj--aaj mujh me dum nahi hai...I am too tired..aaj nahi jaana office..main bata doonga baad me phone kar k..achha..suno..tumhe kuchh cheques par sign karne hain...


Naina--hmm..Appu ka diper change karna hai..

Raj--ohh

Naina--main abhi aai..



Naina ne doosra diper nikala..Appu ko pehnaya..aur dustbin me used diper feka..Appu ne doodh raat ko ugal dia tha..usko doosra kapda pehnaya..aur gande kapdo ko laundry bag me feka Naina ne..Appu ko Raj k paas sula kar Naina bathroom gayi..fresh hokar nikli waha se...Raj utha..woh bhi bathroom gaya..bathroom se nikla ...dekha Naina khidki se baahar dekh rahi hai...Raj ko shak hua..Naina khadi hai..kyonki woh waha se hil nahi paa rahi hai..woh diwar par apna sara weight daal k khadi hai...Naina ko shaayad kumzori ki wajah se chakkar aa raha hai..aisa toh hona hi tha..raat raat bhar nahi soyegi ..toh aisa hi hoga..Raj ki aankhe bhi bhaari hai..uski bhi neend puri nahi ho paai hai..Raj ne Naina ka haath pakda..Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha...


Raj--chalo..sone chalo...

Naina--mujhe nahi sona..

Raj--Naina..hum kai raaton se nahi so rahe hain..aisa karenge..toh hum dono khud bimaar pad jaayenge..Appu k baare me socho...

Naina--hmmm...Veer..I feel too tired...

Raj--I know..ek minute ..main abhi aaya...



Naina baithe baithe hi so gayi thi...Raj aaya uske paas...usko leta dia bistar me..Appu Naina k paas hi leta hai..Raj ne Appu ko pillow se gaurd kia..taa k woh geer naa jaaye...subha subha Naina ka chehra bahut khila hua lag raha hai...so rahi hai..Raj ko bhi neend aa rahi hai..par woh sona nahi chaahta.. Naina ko dekh kar uska dil bharta hi nahi..




Ek aur wajah bhi hai..Raj k andar ka Pati..jo apni Patni se pyaar ki ummeed rakhta hai..jismani pyaar ki ummeed..the physical love..Naina doosri baar pregnant hai..yeh pata chalne k baad..Raj bahut zyada concious ho gaya tha..pregnancy k initial stage par hi..Raj Naina k kareeb nahi aata tha..just for her safety..Naina ki pregnancy ki baat saamne aai..tab se le kar aaj tak..Raj Naina k kareeb hi nahi aaya..kuchh haalaat aise ban gaye..aur Raj ka apna darr bhi tha..Bahut din ho gaye hain..Naina k saath..Raj ne socha tha..k waqt aane par Naina sab samajh jaayegi..par aaj kal itna jhagda hota hai..Raj bilkul irritated ho jata hai..aur aaj kal Raj bahut zyada chidhchidha ho gaya hai.. kaafi frustrated mehsoos karta hai..Raj ki apni zarooratein hain..his physical needs..par in haalaat me aisa kuchh sochna bhi bewakoofi k ilava aur kuchh

nahi..Naina par zor nahi azmana chaahta Raj..par..ab usse aur intezar nahi hota..Naina par zor daalne ki bhi zaroorat nahi..Raj jo marzi kar sakta hai uske saath..par Raj ka zameer is baat ki ijazat nahi deta.. Naina is haalat me hain..Appu ko paida karte waqt Naina ko kaise mushkilon ka saamnaa karna pada..Naina kitni kumzor ho gayi hai..is waqt uske saath aisi harkat karna.. bahut hi sharm ki baat hai Raj k lia..


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Naina achanak se kuchh mehsoos kar rahi hai..Raj usko choo raha hai..par Naina apni aankhe kholna nahi chaahti..woh is kadar neend me hai..aur Raj ka uska itne kareeb hona..Naina muh se kuchh bhi kahe..usko achha hi lag raha hai..Raj k pyaar ki aadat pad gayi hai Naina ko..ab Naina chah kar bhi Raj ko nahi rok sakti..yaa fir woh rokna chaahti hi nahi..

Raj Naina k upar hai,uska pura weight Naina par hai,aur Raj Naina ko smootch kar raha hai..Naina k dono haathon ko..Raj ne apne haath me kaid kar k rakha hai..Raj ne kuchh der baad..Naina ko chhod dia..Naina ki ankhe abhi tak bandh hi hai..aur uske honth abhi tak kaanp rahe hain..jaise uske hontho ko thoda aur pyaar chahie..Raj waapas Naina ki taraf jhoonka..is baar ka kiss aur bhi intense tha..



subha k 8 baj gaye the..Sunita ,Naina ko jagane aai...par darwaze par ek note chipka hua tha..Raj ki handwriting me..


"Hum dono puri raat nahi so paaye,Appu ki wajah se,isi lia..jab tak hum khud naa jaag jaaye..please..disturb mat kijiyega..aur zara mere office phone kar dena..k main nahi aa raha hoon aaj office..I am too tired.."


Sunita ne darwaze par knock nahi kia..vaakei me dono tired hain...aur Appu ko toh Naina hi doodh peelayegi..koi zaroorat nahi hai inko disturb karne ki..



kamre k andar..kuchh aur hi ho raha tha..Naina k bartav se bilkul samajh me nahi aa raha tha k itne dino tak Raj se woh kis tarha jhagadti aa rahi hai..Raj uske kareeb hai..usko pyaar kar raha hai..Naina ko zara bhi aitraaz nahi hai is baat se..


Raj--I love you..Naina..

jawab me sirf..Naina ki ki tez dhadkan ko mehsoos kia Raj ne..aur kuchh der baad..sab kuchh shaant..Raj k honth Naina k gale se shuru ho kar kandho tak..aur fir..uske neeche..Naina khud apne nighty k buttons khol rahi hai.. raat ko..Naina sirf nighty pahen kar soyi thi..Appu k aane k baad..Naina bina inner k hi kapde pahenti hai..Appu ko doodh peelane me aasaani hoti hai usko..

thodi der baad.. "Nahi..aaah.. Raj..nahi...please.. ab..nahi..ohh.. Maa..Raj.." ..Naina k zuban se yehi saari baatein nikalne lagi..

Raj--hmm..mm..Naina..please...I am hungry..let me satisfy myself..my hunger..

bas..Naina ne aur kuchh nahi kaha..

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dopaher k 12 baj gaye the...is bich Naina ne do baar Appu ko doodh pilaya hai...aur fir se sula dia..par ab bistar se uthna hi hoga..bahut der ho gayi hai..


Naina ko ab bahut bura lag raha hai..Raj par fir se gussa aa raha hai..is baar Raj par ilzaam yeh hai,
"Raj ne mera faida uthaya hai..delivery ki wajah se main kumzor ho gayi hoon..Raj ne usi kumzori ka faida uthaya hai.."

Raj--fir se sar pe bhoot sawaar ho gaya?abhi tak toh sab bahut achha lag raha tha..dobara,yaar,chalo..tumhare brain ka treatment sab se pahle karana hoga...

Naina--You raped me...

Raj--lage raho..


Naina--khud ko kyaa samajhte ho..?

Raj--tumse shaadi karne k pahle..is shaher ka Eligible bachelor..aur ab..main sochne samajhne k bahut upar uth chuka hoon..mera sar mat khaao..

Naina--mujhe Dehradun jaana hai..

Raj--dekh..ab main tera Pati hoon,main hi tera sab kuchh hoon..yeh tera ghar hai..aur woh tera beta ..jo maine tujhko dia hai..samhaal..zyada sar mat khaa ..already..bahut khaa chuki tu..tujhe rehna hai..toh yehi rehna hai..nahi rehna hai toh yehi rehna hai..


Naina--khabardar..mujhse tu tadaak se baat mat karna..main koi kamwaali bai nahi..tumhari Biwi hoon...

Raj--arre haan..aap toh humari Biwi hain..thanks for the information Mrs. Malhotra..aap nahi batati..toh..mujhe kaise malum hota?Thanks..

Naina--very funny..

Raj--OK..cease fire..abhi chalo..khana khaate hain..bahut bhook lagi hai..

Naina--mujhe nahi jaana..

Raj--Naina..not again..tum zid karogi..aur Appu ko bhugatna hoga..Doctor ne jo kaha..bhool gayi tum?


Naina--tum jaao..main Appu ko lekar aati hoon..

Raj--hmm..


Naina ka nature hai yaa London ka weather..kabhi baadal..kabhi beejli..kabhi dhoop..kabhi chhaaon..kabhi baarish..Raj ne socha tha Appu thoda bada ho jaaye..fir Naina ko London ghoomane le jaayega..par..Naina khud hi London ko saath lie ghoom rahi hai..Raj..tera kyaa hoga?Yaar..aaj kal Mumbai k kai businessman k ghar par phone aate hain underworld don k..ransom.. hafta.. aur bahut kuchh..khabar bhi chhapti hai..Police protection bhi milti hai..yaar.. koi aakar dekhe..Rajveer Malhotra apne ghar me lia baitha hai..barood ka dher..aur yeh Appu..kitna achha hai..kaun kahega..k Naina iski Maa hai..ek Maa hai..jo Raj par ilzaam lagane k chakkar me hai..sara ghar sar me utha kar rakhti hai..aur beta...kitna shaant ..susheel..humesha doodh peeta hai..aur sota hai...koi jhamela nahi karta...bilkul Raj par gaya hai..uska Beta...



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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome
too good
update was fabulous
update soon...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
thnx for updting......

it was fabulous
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update. πŸ‘
Welldone Anu.πŸ‘πŸΌ
Sach me Naina itni typical hogi maine bhi nahi socha tha yaar.πŸ˜•
Kuch bhi ho Raj bhi aadmi hai insaan hai us ki bhi kuch feelings hai par Naina ka bhi kuch samajh me nahi aata majra.😑
Vo bhi ajeeb behave karti hai jab Raj us k paas aa kar us ko chuta hai us ko pyaar karta to vo bhi satisfy ho jaati hai bilkul bhi resist nahi karti😳 par agle hi pal jaise kaatne ko daute hai.😲
Us ko kya laga sapne me ho raha hai sab poore ek saal Naina se door raha Raj😭, kabhi Appu k liye aur kabhi Naina ki weekness k baare me soch kar par Naina ko kya problem hai.πŸ€”
So kar uthe hi laga Naina ko ki Raj ne Naina ka rape kiya hai us ko kamjor jaan kar.πŸ˜”
waah waah Naina aur Naina ka dimaag.πŸ˜‰
Mujhe ye waala dial bahut hi jyada accha laga:-
Raj--fir se sar pe bhoot sawaar ho gaya?abhi tak toh sab bahut achha lag raha tha..dobara,yaar,chalo..tumhare brain ka treatment sab se pahle karana hoga...

Naina--You raped me...

Raj--lage raho..


Naina--khud ko kyaa samajhte ho..?

Raj--tumse shaadi karne k pahle..is shaher ka Eligible bachelor..aur ab..main sochne samajhne k bahut upar uth chuka hoon..mera sar mat khaao..

Naina--mujhe Dehradun jaana hai..

Raj--dekh..ab main tera Pati hoon,main hi tera sab kuchh hoon..yeh tera ghar hai..aur woh tera beta ..jo maine tujhko dia hai..samhaal..zyada sar mat khaa ..already..bahut khaa chuki tu..tujhe rehna hai..toh yehi rehna hai..nahi rehna hai toh yehi rehna hai..


Naina--khabardar..mujhse tu tadaak se baat mat karna..main koi kamwaali bai nahi..tumhari Biwi hoon...

Raj--arre haan..aap toh humari Biwi hain..thanks for the information Mrs. Malhotra..aap nahi batati..toh..mujhe kaise malum hota?Thanks..
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Baba re kitni nautanki karti hai NainaπŸ˜› agar nahi chahiye tha ye sab to pehle hi Raj ko mana kar deti na roka kyoun nahi?😳
Raj ne bhi room k bahar note laga kar accha kiya jis se koi disturb na kare un dono ko.πŸ˜‰
Kitne dino baad Raj satisfy hua tha aaj☺️par Naina ka dimaag sach me pata nahi kahan rehta hai.πŸ˜’
nice yaar update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Appu..kitna achha hai..kaun kahega..k Naina iski Maa hai..ek Maa hai..jo Raj par ilzaam lagane k chakkar me hai..sara ghar sar me utha kar rakhti hai..aur beta...kitna shaant ..susheel..humesha doodh peeta hai..aur sota hai...koi jhamela nahi karta...bilkul Raj par gaya hai..uska Beta...
ah ye to meri fav lines thi....mujhe nhn pata main kitna hassi hun ye padh kar....aaas paas waale mujhe paagal samjh rahe the.....par inko kaun bataaye ki main nhn ye naina pagal hai....aur vo dailogue bhi itna fuuny tha na...jab naina raj se kehti hai..."u raped me" aur raj bhi itna mahan hai ki kehta hai"lage raho"πŸ˜† aur raj jab usse tu tu karke baat kar raha tha...wah wah raj keep it up....vry nice ud.....and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz iss baar ud jaldi karna
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi anu ,
great part.... well naina to puri pagal lagti hai... but the dialouges between RN were very funny.... i was laughing while reading the ud... u raped me this is too funny.... and ud soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was superb
ye dono ekdum bachacho ki traha ladte hain
last bit was so funny where u did comparison between Appu and Naina
love the update
plz continue soon this time and plz continue ur other fics too plzzzzzzzzz

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