Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

omg
what a dhamakedar update.....
wowwwwww, this is damn interesting......ranveer is dead and everybody thinks rajveer to be ranveer......wowwwww

awesome plot, really superb

sab koi nahi..sirf Naina aur uske parents
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
mmmmmmmmzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
tooooooooooooooo goooodddddddddd
kya story hai yar
par raj naina ka zara jyda romance karna ok
i'll seeeeeeeeeee
i would love to see dem togrther
u r gre88888888888👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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0015 hrs..16th October,2006..

Parvez ko yaad aa raha hai..Naina to Veer kah k bula rahi thi Rajveer ko.. shayad Ranveer ko bhi Veer kah k bulati thi..isi lia usko samajh me nahi aya tha..

aur us din shayad Parvez ne bhi Raj ko Veer kah k bulaya tha..

ho sakta hai..Ranveer aur Rajveer..ek aise naam hai..sirf 'N' aur 'J' ka fark hai..Naina ko bhi dhokha ho gaya tha..

par Raj ne aisa kyon kia?

bachpan se dekh raha hain Raj ko..kabhi kisi ladki k sath koi aisa waisa sulook kia nahi usne..is mamle me saaf hai..fir apne bhai ki biwi k sath....

Blood ka pouch lekar nurse OT k andar gai...oxygen ka cyllinder bhi andar gaya...

dekha kar Raj zameen me hi baith gaya..

Raj ro raha hai..

Parvez ne kabhi aise nahi dekha Raj ko..

usko Raj ki fikar ho rahi hai..

Raj ko uthaya Parvez ne..bithaya chair par..

Parvez ne puchha,"bata..hua kyaa tha?"

Raj ne batana shuru kia..


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Rajveer aur Ranveer judwa bhai the..

4 saal k the jab unki maa chal basi..

tabhi se unke dad hi unke lia sab kuchh hai..

dono bhai ek jaise the..par Rajveer ne bachpan se hi apne baap k dukh ko baatna chaha..aur Ranveer kho gaya apne khayalo ki dunia me..

dono jawan hue..25 saal k dono hue..

Raj lauta America se..MBA kar k..dad ka business dekhna hai..

Ranveer ne Arts and Music ki padhai ki..

baap bete me tenison thi..par Rajveer ko dekh kar unke dad tasalli kar lete the k unka business unka rutba doobega nahi..

Rajveer aur Ranveer ne pyaar bhi tha..aur jalan bhi..jo chees Ranveer ko pasand aati thi yaa Ranveer k lia pasand ki jaati thi..Raj ko bhi achhi lagti thi.. par apni chaahat ko Raj man me daba k rakh deta tha..

Music ka shaukh Rajveer ko bhi tha..par baap k sapne k lia..usne apna armaan dafna dia dil k ek kone me.

Natasha naam ki ek ladki k saath Ranveer ki shadi tai hui..Ranveer k dad ne socha k Ranveer ki shadi ho gai to woh ghar ki taraf rukh karega...

Natasha ko Rajveer bahut pasand karta tha...par Natasha ko Ranveer hi pasand tha..

ek din Ranveer ne Banaras Hindu University me addmission lia..Music k bare me aur janne k lia..

uske dad bahut naraz hue..

par kaha k jaha hai jaao..Natasha s shadi kar k jao..

Ranveer ne kaha..padhai kar k aaon..fir karta hoon shadi..

Ranveer chala gaya..

saal bhar tak jab nahi lauta..

tab Rajveer ne Natasha ko kaha..k Ranveer nahi ayega tumhare lia..mujhse shadi karlo..dekha jaye to main aur Ranveer ek hi hai..

par Natasha ne inkaar kar dia..aur woh kisi aur se shadi kar k Germany chali gai..

Rajveer ko pahli bar gussa aya..Ranveer par..

na usne khud shadi ki..magar impress kar bhi dia Natasha ko..Natasha ne Rajveer ko take k bhao nahi puchha..


Ranveer to Banaras me maze kar raha hai..aur Rajveer..

Rajveer ko apni zindagi par bahut gussa aya..

sab kuchh hai uske paas..dad ka pyaar bhi..par azadi nahi..Ranveer k paas dad ki narazgi hai..par azadi hai..

Raj k paas apne zindagi k bare me faisla karne ki azadi nahi..
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Parvez ne ghadi dekhi..0025 hrs..

Raj--main kyaa karta..apne armaano ka gala ghot ghot k ..main paagal ho gaya tha..jab Naina ko dekha..tab apne zindagi k sukhe zameen par baarish ki boond ki tarha lagi Naina ..main majboor tha.

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OT me..

Doctors Naina anaesthesia dene ki koshish kar rahe hai..par darr bhi hai.. patient kitna jhel payegi?

bahar hi bahar Naina ki behoshi sab ko dikh rahi hai..

par uske dimag k andar ek hulchul si chal rahi hai..uske subconcious mind me..

2001..July..Session shuru hua..BHU me..

Naina Hindi Sahitya ki student..

Ranveer aya Music me Masters karne...

dono ki mulakat University k cultural function me hui..

Ranveer k ki awaz k jadoo me Naina madhosh ho gai..

dhire dhire dosti ..aur kab pyaar hua..pata nahi chala..

aur fir shadi..2004 me..

sapna jaisa lag raha tha sab kuchh...

Naina ko anaesthesize kia gaya..


Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb...really amazing update...thanks di for this wonerful update... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww
oh my, poor raj, really poor raj.............
and poor naina............


its a wonderful update..... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Too good!!!

Kahani shruru hui!!!

Bechara Raj....uske saath hamesha galat hua!!!Uske papa ne bhi Ranveer ki shaadi karwani chahi Nattasha se!!!!!Poor him!!!!

Responsible beta banne ka kabhi usko koi faida nahi mila!!!! 😭 😭 😭

I hope Naina gets well and the baby too!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
wowwwwwwwwwwww
too good
tomar sab story amar favourite
darun story
different
u rocked
but poor Raj 😭 😭 poor Naina 😭 😭 😭
excellent story
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!

Kahani shruru hui!!!

Bechara Raj....uske saath hamesha galat hua!!!Uske papa ne bhi Ranveer ki shaadi karwani chahi Nattasha se!!!!!Poor him!!!!

Responsible beta banne ka kabhi usko koi faida nahi mila!!!! 😭 😭 😭

I hope Naina gets well and the baby too!!!!

Raj ek baar hi selfish bana..jab usne Naina se shadi ki..Raj bahut dukhi hai..Naina ko samajhna hoga..

and Naina ki haalat thik nahi..dekhte hai doctors kyaa kahte hai..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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2001 me BHU ka annual function..

Banaras..Indian Culture ki prishtha bhumi..sangeet..aur sahitya ka shaher..

aaj is shaher ka dil ek naye Gayak ne jeet lia..

koi Ranveer Malhotra hai...

awaz me woh jadoo..woh gehrai....hall me baithe ek ek admi ka dil jhoom utha....

Ranveer hall se bahar nikal raha tha..

aise me ek ladki ne autograph manga..

"hi..I am Naina Agnihotri..BHU me hi student hoon..Hindi ki..1st year.. autograph please,,,"

Ranveer ne dekha..ladki ko..umar maximum 18 baras..

baal khule hue..ek khadi ki kurti pahni hui..aur ek faded jeans..haath me rudraksh ki mala bangle jaise pahni hai ladki ne..gale me bhi rudraksh..

all over a girl..with a cool and hippie look..

Ranveer ne dekha kuchh der...

Naina--hello..autograph!!

Ranveer--yaa sure..

Naina--thank you..

Ranveer--Banaras ki rahniwali hain aap?

Naina--nahi..main hostel me rehti hoon..mera ghar hai Dehradun..

Ranveer--achha..ghar me kaun kaun hai?

Naina--mammi aur papa..

Ranveer--ok..here is your autograph..

Naina--thanks..bye..

Naina bhaag kar chali gai waha se..

1 hafte baad fir mulakat hui..library me..

Naina padhai kar rahi thi..

Ranveer--namaste..

Naina--namaste..baithite..

Ranveer--bahut dhyaan se padh rahi hai aap..

Naina--haa..aap to yeh par Music me Masters karne aye hai na?

Ranveer--hmm..

Naina--kaha se aye hai aap?

Ranveer--Mumbai se..

Naina--ghar me kaun kaun hai?

Ranveer--Meri maa jab hum 4 saal k the..tab chal basi..ab sirf dad hai..aur mera bhai hai.. ..Rajveer..

Naina--achha..woh kyaa karte hain?

Ranveer--usko business me zada interest hai..is lia dad ko assist karta hai..

Naina--aur aap yeha music sikhne aye hai..good..

Naina kuchh der baad boli..ab mujhe chalna chahie..dosto ne aaj ghumne ka plan banaya hai..

Ranveer--main aapko aapke hostel tak chhod doon?mujhe thoda walk karna hi..

Naina--ok..chalie..

Ranveer--aap humesha aisi Hippie ban k rahti hai?

Naina--it looks cool..you know..

Ranveer--yaa I know..well..achha hai..par yeh rudraksh ki mala..bas aapke haath me ek chhillam ki kamee hai..varna aap pura Zeenat Amaan lagti..Hare Krishna Hare Raama ki..

Naina--thanks for the complement..actually..yeh malaye bahut bhaari hai.. bhagwan na kare..kabhi agar musibat me fansu..to dushman par waar karna asaan ho jata hai..

Ranveer--to fir mujhe aap se dushmani nahi karni..yeh mala se agar mujhe maar padi..to main gaya..

Naina hans padi....

Ranveer--friends?

Naina--yaa..friends..


"Raj,
aaj meri dosti ek ladki se hui..bahut achhi hai..sab me hokar bhi sab se alag hai..bejhijhag sab bol deti hai..bahut saaf dil ki hai..Naina naam hai uska..Naina Agnihotri..B.A. ki student hai..1st year ki..umar yehi koi 18 baras..I know mujhse 7 saal chhoti hai..par kyaa fark padta hai..Raj..pahle kabhi maine aisa mehsoos nahi kia..aab jake maine jana k actually main kyaa chaahta tha..Naina ko jab dekhta hoon..to aam ladkion ki tarha lagti hai..par khaas hai woh..aisa nahi k main uske bare me biased hoon isi lia..nahi ..jab tu usse milega tab tu bhi samjhega k main kitna sahi tha..sach kahoon to ghar chhod k mera bhi dil nahi lag raha tha Banaras me..par ab dil lagane ki wajah mil gai hai mujhe..Naina..uske dil ka haal janne me waqt lagega..par main jaan lunga zaroor..
With lots of Love,Ranveer."


Raj ne yeh khat padha..hmm..bhai saab aaj kal dil lagane me busy hai..achha hai..aur sirf Naina ki baatein..kyaa hai yeh Naina..actually jab insaan pyar me hota hai na..tab chudail bhi pari lagti hai..Ranveer ka haal bhi kuchh aisa hai.. bull shit.

Raj ko aur bhi kaam hai..Banaras jane k ilava..Raj ko agle hafte Bristle jana hai business k silsile me..


dheere dheere Naina aur Ranveer ki baatein bhadhi..aur mulakatein bhi...

Ranveer khush tha Naina k sath..

Naina khush thi..kyonki is shaher me koi aisa tha..jo kabhi bhi uski madad k lia aa sakta tha..

dekhte dekhte 3 saal beet gaye...

Ranveer Mumbai nahi lauta..par in 3 saalon me..Rajveer ko bahut letters aur email bheje..har mail me Naina..

Rajveer pareshaan ho jata tha..adhe mail to bina padhe hi delete kar deta tha..

ek din Ranveer ne puchha.."Naina..ab padhai to puri ho gai..ghar jaogi to kisko miss karogi sab se zada.."

Naina--naturally...tumko..

Ranveer--I don't want to miss you..

Naina--to?

Ranveer--mujhe yehi par Music Teacher ki naukri mil rahi hai..saath me fellowship bhi..kyon na tum bhi mere saath raho..

Naina ne sar jhuka lia.."kaise?"

Ranveer--shadi karogi mujhse?

Naina chup..

Ranveer--kyaa hua..jawab do..

Naina chup..

Ranveer---tumne haa nahi kaha..ok..no problem..

Naina--maine naa bhi nahi bola..

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Rajveer ne bataya k Ranveer Banaras me hi Music k lecturer k post me naukri karega..aur wahi pe ek ladki se shadi kar k rahega..

yeh sunkar uske dad aag bababoola ho gaye..itni badi himmat..itna bada faisla akele kar lia Ranveer ne..

Nahi..agar Ranveer aisa karta hai to uske lia is ghar me koi jagah nahi..ladki k ghar walo se nahi mila..aise kaise shadi kar lega??

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum one indeed...naina ka character sketch bhaut accha hai.. 😛 really a amaaazing update..thanks di for this sweet part...

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