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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

hello dear,

tum please aisa mat bolo, hamara fic toh Raj Pri ke liye hi hai, 😭 woh dono jhagra karenge paar pyaar zyada hoga 😳

i ma so sorry but i love viky and hn jodi
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

wow wat n update...n rajeev teased priyanka soo much that was really sweet...dis update was just mindblowing..
Why did Gazala do such a mean thing.?last scene reminded me of that trust exercise where dat heavy wt was falling on raj n naina saved him

hello suhana,

tumne thik kahan, ab se main bilkul thanks nehi bolungi 😛 i am so happy for ur comments 😛 yes teh last scene was a eminder of Raj Naina trust exercise, tab Naina saved Raj, ab janab ki bari 😆

keep commenting

lots of love

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
update soon..........

h dear, thanks for your comment, and here's my next update for u, hope u like it 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

amazing......mindblowing
and raj teasing pri was just awesome
ud soon

thanks dear, tumhe Raj Pri teasing achha laga? aage aur bhi hai, hope u enjoy it 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ayip

wowwwwwwww!!!!! what an update....

liked arjun's dialogue...arrey wah ma baap saath saath aa gaye, bachhe ko kahan chhoda?.....well said arjun... 😆 😆

Poor Yudi....couldn't understand the trick earlier....

gazal!!!!!! 😡 😡 😡
How can she do this with Priyanka????
She was her friend....She was going to ruin her friend's life just for a single role in a film....She is sooooo mean.... 😡

As usual Rajeev saved Priyanka as a real life hero.... 👏 👏 👏

Waiting to see gazal being caught...
update soon....

thanks a lot dear,

am so glad u liked the update😳😃

Ghazal kya sach mein yeh kaam kiya hai? keep reading and find out😛

aur Raj toh hai hi Priyanka ke real life hero😳 isn't that our dream😳?

ghazal is caught today but there's a lot happening on the sets, please keep commenting😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hi Yaar,

Too good part.Raj ne Naina to so k uthe hua dekha bilkul pyari si cute si innocent si i loved the way u expressed it.

Kitne care karti hai Prachi ki humari Pri.Sach kaha Arjun ne ki mom aur dad saath me aa rahe hain.Raj yahi soch raha tha i hope.

Kunal k saath acchi nutanki ki Arjun,Harshad aur Vikas ne.Raj ne bata k Kunal ko accha kiya.Maza aa gaya jis ne ghadda khoda vahi us me gira.

Raj ne kaise leg pulling ki Pri ki ki mujhe dar hona chahiye tum ko kyoun ho raha hai.Vakai me Pri kuch moti jyada ho gayi hai.

Ye kya hua? Raj agar time par jump nahi kiya hota to Pri ka kya hota?

Update soon.

thanks dear,

haan Raj aur Pri ke sab scenes cute hi na, ta woh jhagra wala scene hi kyon na ho😳 they look sooooooooooo cute together 😳 hai na?

Pri aur Raj sach mein Prachi ke mummy daddy lagte hain! hahahaha

RAj toh hai hi apni fav "cadet" ki leg pulling karne ke liye 😃

par haan sets pe kuchh gadbad toh zaroor ho raha hai! keep reading aur please comment karna, thanksssss

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Posted: 17 years ago

hi dear, chalo a gaya update

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Posted: 17 years ago
UPDATE!!!!!😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

comingggggggggggg😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

EPISODE 16:

Priyanka was in a state of daze…and then she didn't remember anything….

She opens her eyes to find herself in her van, a doctor was standing by her.

Doctor: bas mamooli si chot hai, woh dar ke mare behosh ho gayi thi!

The rest of the unit was all waiting anxiously by her side…

Doctor: tum toh screen pe kitni bahadur dikhti ho, fir yahan itna dar gayi?!!! Hahahaha, don't worry, you are completely fine, bas tumhe thoda shock laga hai ishiliye ek din ka bed rest!

Priyanka felt ashamed! How stupid of her to faint out of fear! But how did she come here? The possibility of Rajeev carrying her struck her immediately and she desperately prayed to God that it shouldn't be true…

Priyanka: How did I come here? (thinking) he bhagwan koi bhi ho lekin please please please Rajeev nehi…….

Everybody except Vikas starts smiling

Arjun: tere bachhe ke baap ne uthakar laya tujhe

Aliya: haan bhai mera toh shot bhi okay ho gaya, it was so natural!!

Priyanka: matlab? (still holding on to the last ray of hope)

Kunal: matlab our hero Rajeev ji carried you till here!!!!!!!!!!

Priyanka felt extremely ashamed, she remembered all the teasing Rajeev did and how she regretted fainting like this!

Aliya: Anyway now that you are fine, I think you need a little bit of rest, guys lets go from here and let her sleep.

Rajeev: take care Priyanka

And leaves before Priyanka could thank him….

Arjun, Kunal, Harshad: Apna khayal rakhna Pri

Ghazal comes to her: Baapre Priyanka, main toh dar gayi thi, aaj pehli baar mujhe lag raha hai ki I am so lucky main teri role pe nehi thi!! Lekin don't worry, tu jaldi se thik ho ja

Eveybody leaves except Vikas: kaisa mehsoos kar rahi hai?

Priyanka: tu mujhse baat mat kar

Vikas: kyon kya hua?

Priyanka: khud ko mera boy friend claim karta hai aur wahan se mujhe uthakar nehi la saka?

Vikas: main bhi yehi soch raha tha, mujhe bahot bura laga, tujhe bhi laga na? lekin tera hero kisi ko tere paas aane de tab na? jab tak hum kuchh samjhe tu faint ho gayi, aur woh tujhe jhat se utha liya!!

Priyanka: (smiling to herself) jhat se utha liya?

Vikas: (confused) haan, kyon?

Priyanka: kuchh nehi

Vikas: thik hai tu rest le, main chalta hoon

As everybody leaves Priyanka keeps thinking about the whole event again, ek anjana sa daar dil mein baith jata hai…it was really unexpected, agar Rajeev sahi waqt pe nehi pahoochta toh na jane kya ho jata…

There was quite a commotion outside…sher khan was checking the rope that had snapped…

Sher Khan: This no ordirnary accident, rassi beech mein se kata hua tha!..........

All: matlab?????

Sher Khan: haan yeh dekho, rassi agar tut ti toh iska fibre niklla hua hona chahiye, par yeh bahut safai se kati gayi hai, ki latak te hi admi usse gir pade

Aliya: oh my God!

Vikas: matlab koi jaan bujhkar Priyanka ko hurt karna chahta tha!!

Harshad: kahin tune toh nehi kaat diya Vikas?

Vikas: pagal hai kya tu? main kyon katunga?

Arjun: tere potential girlfriend kisi aur ki bachhe ki ma ban jaaye toh tujhe gussa toh ayega na?

Kunal: hahahaha, sahi kaha

Rajjev: be serious guys, lekin sach mein Priyanka ko hurt karke kis ko kya faida?

Harshad: woh zaroor unit se hi koi hai, baharwale toh the nehi…..

Arjun: (thinking hard) faida sirf ek hi ko ho sakta hai…

Harshad: matlab?

Arjun: socho tum log, aisa koi jo Priyanka agar shooting se hatt jaaye toh khush hogi

Kunal: aisa kaun hai yaar?

Arjun: jo kuchh dino se bahut ajeeb behave kar rahi hai, phone pe chup ke chup ke kisi se baate kar rahi hai……

Harshad, Vikas, Kunal: don't tell me?!!!!!!!!! You mean Ghazal?!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun: (tightening his jaws) yes, yaad hai naina ke role ke liye woh kitni jealous thi Priyanka se

Harshad: bas itni si baat ke liye woh aisa kaam karegi??

Kunal: hmmm professional jealousy…. Chal ghazal se poochte hai

Rajeev: hold on guys, are you sure u suspect her?!!! Mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai!

Yekin toh kisi ko nehi ho raha tha! But everybody remembered Ghazal's changed behavior for the past few days…woh thik se kisi se baat nehi ki, Priyanka se woh gussa thi role ko lekar aur fir woh definitely kuchh chhupa rahi thi…shak ka kida sab ko andar hi andar khayi ja rahi thi….aur fir itna bada hadsa ho gaya lekin Ghazal sab ek saath bhi nehi hai..

Arjun couldn't take it anymore…the moment he saw Ghazaal coming he went straight to her

Arjun: tu kahan gayi thi?

Ghazal: ghar pe phone karne, yahan pe signal nehi mil raha tha

Arjun: achha? Hum sab yahan hai, accident ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai aur sirf tujhe koi fikr nehi?!! tujhe abhi jana tha?

Ghazal: kyon? Tujhse permission lena padega kya?

Arjun: tune shuna bhi ki yeh accident nehi tha?

Ghazal: kyaaaa??????

Vikas: kyon tujhe nehi pata?

Ghazal: mujhe kaise pata hoga? Oh my God, fir kisne kiya yeh sab?

Arjun: woh toh tujhe zyada pata hona chahiye

Ghazal: tumlog kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuchh samajh mein nehi aa raha, (looking at everybody) why are u all looking at me like this?

The guys surround Ghazal: tune aisa kyon kiya?

Ghazal: maine kya kiya? Tumlog kya mujhpe sak kar rahe ho?!!!!!!!!!!believe me guys maine kuchh nehin kiya

Arjun: Ghazal dekh, tu khud nehi batayegi toh police bulana padega

Kunal: Unit mein aur koi nehi hai jisse Priyanka ko hurt karke koi faida hoga

Ghazal: (tears in her eyes) tumlog mujhpe sak kar rahe ho??

Vikas: toh fir bata tu chup chup ke uss Choube ke saath kya baate kar rahi thi?

Ghazal: woh toh kuchh alag hi baat hai…Choubey ne bataya ki hamara producer change hone wala hai….usne kaha ki yeh confidential baat hai, jab tak na ho tab tak kisi se na kahoon…..haan yeh sach hai ki mein naye producer se rapport bada rahi thi ta ki mere role ko zyada importance diya jaaye, par iska matlab yeh nehi ki main Priyanka ko hurt karna chahoongi………..

Vikas: kahani achhi thi

Ghazal: yeh kahani nehi hai Vikas, sach mein hamare naye producer hoga kal se, tumlog dekh lena, hamare purane producer Mr. Jhoonjhoonwala yeh film chhod rahe hai

Vikas: ek min, Aliya jiiiii

Aliya: haan batao Vikas

Vikas: aapko pata hai ki hamare producer change honewala hai?

Aliya: nehi toh!! mujhe toh Misra ji ne kuchh nehi bataya!! Mujhe toh yehi pata hai ki Mr.Jhoonjhoonwala fund kar rahe hai iss film ko……..

Arjun: ab tu bol Ghazal, director ko pata nehi, poore unit toh pata nahi, sirf tujhe aur Choubey ko pata hai ki producer change honewala hai, aur tu uss imaginary producer ko maska bhi marke ayi!!

Ghazal: (almost crying) believe me, achha Choubey se pooch lo

Rajeev: hold on guys, woh keh rahi hai toh sach bhi ho sakta hai, ek baar Choubey se pooch lete hai, kahan hai woh

Aliya: woh toh Mumbai gaya hua hai, Misrajike saath lautega

Vikas: toh hum Misraji se poochhe?

Aliya: I don't know guys, dekho agar yeh baat sach nehi hai toh isse yehi daba dena chahiye, yeh sab agfawe film ke liye achha nehi hai

Rajeev: sahi baat hai, aur fir hum producer ko lekar kyon lad rahe hai? our botheration is the accident…

Arjun: wohi toh janna hai ki Ghazal secretly kya plan kar rahi thi…

Ghazal: Enough is enough! Kab se mein keh rahi hoon I don't know anything about the whole accident aur tum log hote kaun ho mujhe poochnewale? You are just my co-stars, I am not answerable to you, agar police bulana hai toh bula lo

She walks out in anger

Aliya: I think it's just an accident, Sher Khan ji rassi aise khud tutne ka koi chance nehi?

Sher Khan: nehi khud bhi aise tut sakte hai, par mujhe lagta hai ki kati gayi…

Aliya: bas, let's resolve the matter now, producer agar change hoga toh dekha jayega, aur phir Ghazal ke khilaf hamara koi proof bhi toh nehi hai, kisi ne usse dekha toh nehi rassi kat te hue…so baat ko yehi daba dete hai, press ko agar pata chala toh bahut negative publicity hogi…bas hume thoda careful rehna padega

As they were talking they see two army officers walking towards them. One of them was the principal of the academy Brigadier Suryakant and the other was a young, handsome officer.

Brigadier Suryakant: I just heard about your accident Ms. Bose, I just hope everything is alright

Aliya: oh Thanks, but we think it was just an accident

B.S: Then it's fine, lekin aaplog thoda careful rahiye, as u can understand army academy hai, charo taraf khatra hai, kahi aaplog bhi na usme fansh jaaye…by the way yeh hai capt. Ranveer Singh Rathode, our officer on special duty and a faculty here, if you see anything wrong around here you can inform him

Vikas: (whispering to Arjun) arrey yeh toh real life Rajveer sir hai yaar, sukr hai hamare "Naina" yahan nehi hai!!

Captain Rathod comes forward and shakes hand with everyone

Cpt. Rathod: I am really concerned about the incidents happening in our academy, last time some of your actors spotted a few men inside the boundary, woh log guard ko ghayal kar ke bhage the, aur ab yeh accident, aapko humko dono ko hi thoda careful rehna padega…

Rajeev: thanks captain, par hume nehi lagta dono incidents mein koi taluk hai, but yes we'll be careful

Capt Rathod: taluk ho bhi sakta hai, aapke unit mein itne log hai, kaun kahan kya kar raha hai kya pata…pata nehi ek army academy mein kaise shooting ka permission diya jata hai! I really don't trust the film industry

Rajeev: film bhi ek profession hai, aur hum bhi apne profession ko lekar equally serious hai, aur imandaar bhi, aur fir gaddar toh army mein bhi hote hai

Capt.Rathod: I am sorry agar aapko bura laga toh, I was just trying to caution u all, but I like your spirit! anyway, nice meeting you, (to Rajeev) we'll meet again (smiles)

Aliya: ok guys aaj ke liye shooting itna hi, hope Priyanka kal tak thik ho jayegi

Rajeev: hmmm aaj agar pack up ho raha hai toh mujhe kuchh kam ke liye nikalna hai

Aliya: tum kya academy se bahar ja rahe ho, toh mujhe bhi kuchh kaam hai, chalo saath mein chalte hai

Rajeev: nehi Aliya woh mein……..

Aliya: oho samjhi tum Prachi ek case ke silsile mein ja rahe ho! Hmmm chalo mein bhi tumhara help kar doongi

Rajeev: tum kya help karogi?

Aliya: log mujhe tumse kam jante hai Rajeev, I won't draw public attention!

Rajeev: hmmm, good point, chalo fir, tumhe toh sab kuchh pata hi hai…

Rajeev aur Aliya jaane lagte hai, tabhi a spot boy comes and gives him a note. Rajeev reads the note, smiles and tells Aliya: main ek minute mein aya

NEXT UPDATE main jaldi karoongi, I have so many plans for the next episode, mein khud hi excited hoon😆

Edited by george eliot - 17 years ago

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