MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey just finished reading ur story......awesome yaar.... 👏 ..........all hands to ya.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....loved the way u framed the srtory.........nice imagination....keep it up...and plzzzz write the other parts soon....waiting for ur next part and tnz a ton for a story so wonderful like this..... andplzzz pm me once u get back and continue both of the stories......thanks.......

Edited by dmglovernimisha - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey u r writing a very nice story.......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon................................i am waiting here eagerly 4 ur next post....i just luv ur FFs..................neways thanks a lot..........

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Posted: 17 years ago

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its time to go home evry1 is in the locker room
armaan: ridz chalo huma mara ghar jana hai
ridz: main tum hara saath nhai jarahi
armaan: are ridz mana tum se kaha tha na ki mare gf yaha ai hui hai to huma use milne jana hoga
@ this ever1 is shoked
anji: armaan tum ko sharam nahi ati tumhari engagment ho gay hai phire bhi tum hari gf hai aur uper se tum chanta ho ki ridz use mila have u lost it
armaan: no anji i have not lost it but u al have ridz ek bar use milo bad main jitna marna hai utna mar lana mager muje pata hai ki use milna ka bad tum muje se muafi magogi apna asa bartav ki waja se
ridz: kya main tum se muafi magogi who bhi tum hari gf ko milna ka bad muje lagta hai tum na sach main oagal ho gay ho
armaan: thik hai main pagal hun but sirf ek bar mara saath cholo warna main dad ko boldunga
ridz: armaan ager tum na ya bat dad ko baty na to who hamari sagay hi tod danga
armaan: nahi todanga main abhi ja ka dad se bat kartahun
ridz stopes him
ridz: armaan ager tum na dad ko bata ya to dad bahut naraz hojayanga thik hai main chalongi tum hai saath
then every1 leaves the locker room
AR in armaan's car
there is a very wierd silence in the car no one is sayig any thing
@ armaan's home
they both enter the house
ridz is looking for a girl but she is no were to b found
ridz(to herself): lagta hai armaan ne muje pa ek prank khela
just as she says this to her self
armaan: gf kaha ho tum main agaya
armaan is looking 4 her n he goes to his room
ridz is standing in the leaving room n here armaan's voice
armaan: hai gf how r u i missed u sooooooooooooooooo much give me a hug look ridz is here to see u dont u want to meet her come down with me
then armaan is comming with some one but ridz cud not she who was the person
then we see a old lady in her 80's stnding by armaan
armaan: ridz this is my gf i mean my dadi
ridz gets shoked @ the word dadi then sudenly she goes to her n touchess her feet
dadi: are nahi bete hamara yaha ladkiya par nahi chuti who to sirf gala lagti hai n they both huge each other
ridz was felling guilty now n she rimrmber's waht armaan said
" muje pata hai ki use milna ka bad tum muje se muafi magogi apna asa bartav ki waja se "
armaan lookes @ her n smiles n says : i told u
ridz get tear in her eyes n armaan huges her
armaan: isma ro na ki kay zaroo rat hai its ok ridz hota hai
ridz: lakin armaan tum bol nhi shak ta tha ki tum apni dadi se bat kar rahai tha
armaan: lakin tum ko ea kyun laga ki main tum hara ala wa kisi aur se pyaar kar shakta hun
dadi: ahhhhhhhh
then they both come apart
ridz: main ander jaka ap logo ka liya coffee laker ati hun
dadi: uski koi zaroo rat nahi hai tu idhar aa aur mara saath beth aur coffe ya bana ka laya ga ja armaan humare liya coffee bana ka la
armaan goes to kitchen makes coffee 4 ever1 n comes out by then minne n dr rahul also had come there so they al were talking
ridz's phone is ringing
ridz: hello
shashnk: beta tum kaha ho??
ridz: papa main armaan ka ghar pa hun yaha pa uski dadi ayi hai to main unse milna ayi thi
dr rahul: are beta tum hare dad ka phone to muje do muje unse kuch bat karni hai
dr rahul: hello dr shahnk ap kasa hai
sahsnk: main thik hun
dr rahul: main soch raha tha ki ab shadi mai n 6 mahina hai to main london ho kar ata hun aur whaa jaker minne ka addmetion kar wana hai to haum kal ja rahai hai aur mai nchata thi kai ager ridhima aj yahapa ruk jati acha hota
shashnk: thik hai ridz waha pa ru k shakti hai
then he cuts the phone n
dr rahul: ridhima beta aj tum yahi ruk rahi ho jo ki hum kal ja rahai hai to tum hamare saath thoda time bita lo aur phir dadi bhi hama ra saath arahi hai
ridz: ji dad koi bata nahi main ruk jati hun
after hering this armaan has a huge smile on his face
dadi: acha to asa kara ta hai ki aj hum baha ja ka khana kayanga
ridz: alkin mara pas pahan ka liya kuch nahi hai
dadi: koi bat nahi main tera liya kuch layi hun to tu wahi pahan lana thik hai
then dadi n ridz go to guesst room n dadi give her pink butiful sari it was simplr but it was very butiful then every1 is ready n waiting for ridz
armaan: ridz chalo late ho raha hai
ridz: mai nabhi ati hun
n then ridz comes down wering the sari she was looking stunning armaan cud not see her coz his back was toeard ridz but every1 else can see her minne was looking @ her with her mouth open armaan saw that n
armaan: minnie tu ja kya hua hai tera muh kyun khula hai
minnie tell him to turn aroung in singh language n he does n he was about to faint after seeing the most butifull women on the earth then they al go to the resturant n then comes back home
armaan: dadi ap mara kamra main so jaya aur main yaha nicha sojata hun
dadi: nahi muje to mare bete ka saath sona hai
ridz: thik hai dadi ap mara saath sojana
then ridz takes dadi to her room n help dadi lay down dadi ask for water coz she had to take a madication ridz goes n gets water till then armaan is with minnie n odering her to go to bed then ridz was comming back from puting the glass of water in the kitchen after waords but as soon as she reachis her room armaan pull her in to his rom
ridz: armaan tum kya kara rahi ho??
armaan: tum se pyaaar
ridz start blushing n armaan's grip on her is geting titer
armaan: ridz ab gussa nahi araha muje pa hosputal main to tum bahut gusaa ho ra hi thi ab kya hua
ridz; i m sorry armaan muje laga......
armaan: tum ko laga ki such main mare koi gf agau hai rit
ridz just nodes
armaan: muje pa barosa nahi hai
ridz: ab pura bharosa hai plz muje muaf kardo
armaan: ager mana tum ka muaf nhi kya ho ta to tum is tara mere baho main nahi hoti
n try to kiss her but she moves her face n start blushing but this time she was not even trying to get out of his hand n not even saying anything its like she wanted to be ther for rest of her life armaan start nuzzuling on her neck n ridz closes her eyes armaan was surprise with her behavior but keep on nusseling then start kissing her neck solder just then a noice comes from the out side of the armaan's room so they both run out side n gets shoked to see ............................................................ .................................................
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Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

👏hey....i am the first one soooooooo....thanks a lot...plzzzzzzz continue soon....it is lovely👏...👏..thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

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hey yaar!.......u r not continuing or what??????????........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it!!!!!!!!

Edited by dmglovernimisha - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awww 😳 😳 😳 such a cute romantic part! glad the whole GF problem is out of the way 😆 plz continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wow..........it was such a romantic part..... 👏thanxxxxxxxxxxxx..........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....

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Nidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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nice update please update it soon

Remember 2 remember me.4get of 4getting me,even if u try 2 remember 2 4get me,i will never 4get 2 remember 2 remind u 2 remember me..Dost

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey wow yaar vryy nce update sch a cute thnk god ye gf pro solvd nd ridz realizd wow vryy cute update armaan goi 2 be faint wow she ws lookng stunning wow sooooooo romantic na..................wow armaan to khushi ho gaya now thy wll be alone..........wow thts to guuuuuuuuud.............jst lvd it,.........
kahi bhi suru ho jate hai nd kya dekha aisa.......
cont soooooooon
luv yachu

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: dmglovernimisha
👏hey....i am the first one soooooooo....thanks a lot...plzzzzzzz continue soon....it is lovely👏...👏..thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: zhasan2
awww 😳 😳 😳 such a cute romantic part! glad the whole GF problem is out of the way 😆 plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: coolvini4u
wow..........it was such a romantic part..... 👏thanxxxxxxxxxxxx..........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....

Originally posted by: AngelicSoniya
amazing part...very romantic...
cont soon

finally an update...ws a gud1

nice update please update it soon

Remember 2 remember me.4get of 4getting me,even if u try 2 remember 2 4get me,i will never 4get 2 remember 2 remind u 2 remember me..Dost

hey wow yaar vryy nce update sch a cute thnk god ye gf pro solvd nd ridz realizd wow vryy cute update armaan goi 2 be faint wow she ws lookng stunning wow sooooooo romantic na..................wow armaan to khushi ho gaya now thy wll be alone..........wow thts to guuuuuuuuud.............jst lvd it,.........
kahi bhi suru ho jate hai nd kya dekha aisa.......
cont soooooooon
luv yachu

hey guys thnxs a ton 4 al ur lovely coment sorry i was not able to PM each n every1 of u but thnxsa agine 4 loving my story n i m realy sorry for the late update but i was sick now i m lil better so decided to come n post the story its comming in a bit

luv

~Nruti

Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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armaan n ridz finds dadi on the flore she is a diabitic n she had a low suger seeing dadi like this armaan is totaly lost n dont know what to do so ridz takes the charge n takes dadi to hospital dr kirti putes ridz incharge of dadi's case now she is still not gud (coz whaen u have a low suger ppl tend to pass out n they can even sleep in to coma) ridz is trying she level best n she sussede but dadi is still unconseous
ridz is looking 4 armaan to tell him the gud new that dadi is now shaved but he is no where to be found then sudenly she remember waht happen to armaan when minne was sick so she stright went to stare case n he was there crying ridz went to him
ridz: armaan............
armaan got up n went to ridz
armaan: ridz hows dadi doing???
ridz: armaan dadi is doing very nice she out of danger she is sleeping rit now but will wake up in an hour.
armaan did not say any thing n just huged her realy tight ridz huged him back armaan was still crying
ridz: armaan dadi ab thik hai tum rona bandh karo
armaan:.............................
ridz: armaan tum sun raha ho na mana kaha tum rona bandh karo
armaan: thnxs ridz
ridz: kia liya
armaan: tum na dadi ko bach liya warna mai napna ap ko kabhi muaf nahi karpata
ridz: armaan tum ko kya ho gaya hai tum kabse itna formal ban gaye who bhi mara saath!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
armaan: ridz muje laga ki aj mana dadi ko kho diya u knoa mare ma ka bad who hi ek hai jisna muje samja hai lakin dad ki waja se main aur dadi alag ho gaye aur aj jab itna salo ka bad hum mila aur unko is halt mai ndekha ka mara dimag kam karna band ho gaye aur main ya soch na laga ki mana dadi ko khi diya aur tum na sab kuch samabal liya muje aur mare famili ko....
ridz: galat tumhar nahi humara parivar our family armaan aur any way this prooves that i m better doc then u r(just light tine the mood) n then they both start laughing
armaan: indeed u r hahahaha
NEXT DAY @ SANJIVANEE
atul,anji,armaan n ridz r in the cafe
every1 know about armaan's dadi
atul: armaan dadi kasi hai ab
armaan; ab who thik hai
anjil: of course ho gina mere bahan ki pasent hai
every1 start lauginh
just then muskan n rahul comes in with a big hude smile on their face
muskan: hi guys
al: hi
rahul: guys v have agud news 4 al of u
atul: "v" waht do u meen by "V"
muskan: iskan ya matkab hai ki main aur ya
anji: ha to bolo na gud news kaya hai
rahul: main aur muskan shadi kar rahai hai
ridz: kya? kab?
atul fell from the chair n he fainted (ha ha ha ha)
armaan get some water n try to splase some water on his face but no point so finaly armaan get a bucket full of water n throw it on atul then he comes to the sence
anji: atul r u ok??? waht happen?
atul: ya anjali i m f9 but rahul dont do this agine it was very gud joke. but as u can se i was about to have a heart attace so plz dont do this agine.............
rahul: atul ya mazak nahi tha
muskan: ha atul
anji: comon muskan tum kab se rahul ki side lana lagi
muskan looking @ rahul: jab se mai nuse pyaar karna lagi!!!!!!!!!!
then armaan just hold ault as he was about to fall agin (ha ha ha ha)
anji: waht??????????????
ridz: di ya thik kah rahi hai
arman: champ apna ap ko sambhal ya log mazak nahi kar rahi hai
while this was hapenning rahul n muskan had a eye lock rahul cud not belive that muskan finalty sad it n in fron of every1 so he was shoked n he was starting at musakn with wide open eyes n open mouth n muskan was just blussing @ rahul's condition
then they brok as the anounce ment came
:SARE INTERN DR KIRIT KO REPORT KARE
armaan: chala warna yaha pa koi bhi shadi ya pyaar karna ka layak nahi rahi ga
every1 laught @ this n they al make their way to the nurse station
dr kirti: gud morning aj ap log bade kush lag rahai hai kya bat hai
atul: ji waho rahul aur muskan shadi kara rahaihai na isi liya
dr kirit was surprised but she was very happy.
she went ot muskan n said: have a happy life ahaed lagta hai sanjivanee main aj kal sab ka dil mail rahai hai
every1 was shoked to her this from kirti
armaan: ma'm kya apka bhi dil mill gaya dr shubhanker ka saath
kierti gave him a dadly anger look
armaan to him self: armaan tu to gaya aj ridhma ILU
then suddenly kirti start lauginh
kirti: dr armaan mai nto sirf mazak kar rahi thi ap to such mai ndar gaye
then every1 had a another shoke but the gus one n every1 start laughing
kirti: ok bahut ho gaya hasi mazak main ap ko ap ki duty alot karti hun
kirti: dr rahul ap dr muskan ka saath children ward main, dr atul ap dr anjali ka saath roundes karanga n dr armaan ap aur dr ridhima genral ward main rahai ga aur hai aj ap sab ki lunch ka bad chuti hai
atul: kyun???
kirti: kyunki aj koi naya case nah ihai aur ap log na pich al kitna dino se bahut hi acha kam kiya hai so i think that u al deserv this ok then back to duty
then she leaves
every1 is realy happy
atul: are aj ya hitlar ko kya hua hai gabar se basanti kasa ban gay
rahul: aba tu na usko basanti kyun bola
armaan: tuje kya problem hai
atul: hai tu je kya problem hai
rahul: dhano ko kya yaha pa
atul: muakan ki sccoty
rahul: exatly to phir musakn hu na verru ki basanti
armaan: to verru ko hai
rahul: tuja nahi pata college main ko veeru banta tha????
armaan: tu ......................ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ab samja to tu hai sanjivnee ka veeru aur muskan hai tere bashanti
at this muskan start blushing
atul: ok sorry baba lakin muje abta samj nah iaraha ki tum dono shadi karna wala ho
rahul: atul tu na suna na muskan na kya kaha cafe main who boli ki who muje se pyaar karti hai aur mai nbhi use pyaar karta haun aur uska oaents aur mara parents na ha bol di shadi ka liya to ab hum shadi karanga lakin abhi tak shadi ki dat fix nahi hu hai aur hamari saga yahi agla hafta
armaan: idea kyun hun sath main shadi kara
atul: armaan tu pagl ho gayah ia tere ridz ka saaht shagay ho gay hai aur tu chi chi chi ah obhi uskan sam na main na nah isoch that ki tu asa niklaga armaan
armaan: aba chamoa main aur ridz and rahul aur muskan ek hi din shadi karnaga
ridz: yes armaan itsa very gud idea hum asa hi karnaga kyun musakn
muskan is so blushing that she can take it any more n run from there rahul try to go after her but armaan hold him n they al go to their duty
@ dadi's room
armaan come to see dadi
armaan: Hi gf kasi ho tum???
dadi: mai nthik hun tu kasa hai??
armaan: ek dam fit n fine
just then ridz comes in for the check up
dadi: ya lo mer bati a gya tere hi rah dekha rahi thi
armaan: wow dadi main apka pota hun aur muje se bat kana ki baja ap dr basket ko yad kar rahi thi
ridz: dadi mai nthik hun mage kya pana apka promiss pura kiya
dadi: hai kiya
armaan: kon sa promiss???
dadi: isana muje se promiss liya hai ki ager main apna khayal rakhjun gi aur ager kuch bhi gad bad ho to mian use ya tuje bat du aur asa nhia kiya to waho muje se kabhi bat nahi kara gi
after hering this armaan get realy happy(to himself): ab to pura yaki ho gaya ki tum se shadi akrna ka jo mara fasla hai who ek dam sahi tha thank you ridhima for every thing that u do 4 me n our family ILU ridz my basket
ridz: armaan muje lag ta hai ki main dadi ko aj deschar kar sak ti hun tum dekho na inki progress kafi achi hai
araman comes out of the thought n lookes @ the report
armaan: ya dadi ridz thik kah rahi hai lakin ridz tum ko nahi lagta ki huma dr kirti se bat karni chaiya pahala
ridz: u r rit armaan
they were about to leave n dadi stoped then
dadi: armaan tum ise kabhi jana mat dena ya bahut hi pyaari bachi hai
armaan looking @ ridz: ha pyaari to hai
then they leave they were talking to each othern ridz sees somthing in the starcase so they both go ther n pick in ther
its rahul n muskan
rahul was holding muskan by her waist n muskna had her head on his chest.
rahul: muskan muje tum se kuch keahna hai
muskan: hummmm bolo
rahul: muskan tu khus to hai na???is shadi se????
muskan: oy tuje kya mai nlikh ka du ki main tuj se pyaar kasrti hun n then start bliushing
rahul: kya bat hai pehla gusa dekha ti hai aur bad main sharmati bhi hai main to mer jaunga
muskan blussis even more
out side the stare case
ridz: armaan dekhona ya do no kitna acha lagtahai na ek saath
armaan: main dekh hi to raha hun its just beutiful
(armaan was staring @ ridz )
ridz sees that armaan was staring @ her not looking @ RM she start blushing just then she shes a shadow behind them
ANY GUESS????????????????????????
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Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago