MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
oh come on. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
nice and sweet one please update it soon


"Don't make your feelings like the garden; so that everybody walks on it...But let your feelings be like the sky, so that everybody wishes to touch it."
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
an amzng 1.... bt a biggggggggggggggggggggggg secret.... update sooon........ luvd d prt... 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part.... 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
OMG!!!!!!!!!

Ur ff is absolutely fantastic!! 👏

And the cliffhanger is deadly!

Please continue soon n do PM me!

Thanx in advance!


-Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

hey very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!...thodi khushi...thode gham....a very common but great part....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....can u plzzz PM me ur next post...neways thanks!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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yaaaaaaar ....aap kab update kar rahe ho?????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue karo....yahan main itni eagerly aapke post ka wait kar rahi hun🤢.........plzzzzz agla part post kardo ........!!!!!!!!!😭

Edited by dmglovernimisha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
👏 WOW i just read all of your ff from the starting to the end ! IT IS ABSOLOTELY AMAZING ! FANTASTIC ! its is awesome plz continue soooon pleae please please 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
hey wow yaar itws awesom yaar armaan ws so happppppppy 2 saw her lv twrds his family wow yaar nd dadi ws also soooo soooooooooooooo happppppppppppy it ws superb yaar realy lvd it yaar...........hayeeeeeeeeee kitna romantic wow yaar lvd it..................i hope now ur fne..............
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachu
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: samijan

oh come on. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

i m so sorry for the delay

nice and sweet one please update it soon


"Don't make your feelings like the garden; so that everybody walks on it...But let your feelings be like the sky, so that everybody wishes to touch it."


i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment

an amzng 1.... bt a biggggggggggggggggggggggg secret.... update sooon........ luvd d prt... 😊 😊

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment ya i have to keep a lil secreat 😉

amazing part.... 👏
cont soon

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment

amazing sweeeety
tooo goood

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for coment

OMG!!!!!!!!!

Ur ff is absolutely fantastic!! 👏

And the cliffhanger is deadly!

Please continue soon n do PM me!

Thanx in advance!


-Marisha

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment ya i knoe i luve it when i keep this some of my frens r like i will kill u when ever i do this but ihope u want kill me 😆😉😃

hey very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!...thodi khushi...thode gham....a very common but great part....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....can u plzzz PM me ur next post...neways thanks!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

~edited~

yaaaaaaar ....aap kab update kar rahe ho?????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue karo....yahan main itni eagerly aapke post ka wait kar rahi hun🤢.........plzzzzz agla part post kardo ........!!!!!!!!!😭

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment i realy very sorr but i was very bussy i hace to go to hopspital co i hade some alergic reaction n then i hade to chatcher up in my study so i was not here so sorry

👏 WOW i just read all of your ff from the starting to the end ! IT IS ABSOLOTELY AMAZING ! FANTASTIC ! its is awesome plz continue soooon pleae please please 😃 😃 😃

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment

hey wow yaar itws awesom yaar armaan ws so happppppppy 2 saw her lv twrds his family wow yaar nd dadi ws also soooo soooooooooooooo happppppppppppy it ws superb yaar realy lvd it yaar...........hayeeeeeeeeee kitna romantic wow yaar lvd it..................i hope now ur fne..............
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachu

i m so sorry for the delay n thankes for the lovely coment

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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

it was dr kirti n AR get shoked n they try to stand in her way so RM wont get caught but tooooooo late every 1 finds about RM


its kirti n shubhanker's wedding


ever1 is very bussy with the preparation it was a mehandi n sanget together al the girls a in one room n boys in another room they r getting ready al the boys r on shubanjer's side n girls r on the kirti's side n nani is a moderator of al


girl's room


anji, ridz n muskan n r dressing kirti for sangit n [its a seprat from boys] so girls a talking about it
muskan: aj to maine itna nachungi main bahut kushan hun kyunki aj hitlar ki shadi hai [dont realize that kirti is there]
anji n ridz r trying to stope her but she is muskan our chater bot wont stop
kirti: muskan main yaha hun
muskan: i m sorry dr kirti
kirti: its ok but app log samjyan ki ager main app log go ka saath stric na hun to app log kuch bhi thik nahi karnaga aur main hitlar sirf hospital main hun
anji: its ok dr kirti v understand ur position
ridz was not even utering a word she is thinking about armaan


Boy's room


since they al r on shubhanker's side they also have to tack care of navnita [shubhanker's daughter] n she is geving them al a headac ha ha ha ha
armaan: bacha dekho aj ap ko apka papa ki sangit main jana hai na to plz necha utra jao ur ya kapda panahan lo [she is on top of the cupboard n not comming down]
N: nahi main nahi ana wali papa ko bulao ya mama ko ya use didi ko bulao
rahul: kon se did yaha pa teen hai
N: who jo sab se kub surat hai who wali
atul: ohhh iska matlab tum anji ki bat kar rahi hai
rahul: nahi who muskan ki bat kara rahi hai
armaan: nahi ya ridz ki bat kar rahi hai
atul: anji
rahul: muakan
armaan: ridz
n they al start fighting on who is the mist beautiful
N: STOP...........
n they al look at her
N: main unki bat kar rah ihun jo ri...dhi...
she cant say the naam as its heard for her to pronunce but armaan get ti
armaan: ridhima rit
N: ya plz unko bolo na plz muje unka pass jana hai
armaan: bacha hum nahi ja sakta unka pass who ladki wala hai aur hum ladka wala
N: to kall rat ap kyun gaya tha unka pass aur unko papi kyun da raha tha aur............
armaan interupt: asa kuch nahi hai mai nto unki sirf mada kar raha tha
N: ap ko kaya main andhi lag ti hun mana dekha apna hunko yaha [pointing to check] pa kiss di this aur unka haath bhi pakda tha aur.......
armaan: bass bach ab jaldi se ya kapda paha nana necha ajo
N: nahi jab tak ap unko nahi bulaong imai nanahi utarna wali aur ager nahi bulaay to main sab ko bata dungi ki apna kall rat kya kiya tha phir kehana nahi ki main bola nahi tha
atul n rahul start laughing out loud n armaan has his hand on his head n navnita id gigaling
armaan: thik hai mare ma main usko bulata hun
N: main ap ki ma nahi hun main apki gf hun
n she strach his check n says my cut bf
n they al start lauging
armaan goes to girls room n knock
anji opens
anji: kya kam hai??
armaan: who ridhima ka kam hai plz use bulo na
anji: armaan uska bina ek pal nahi raha shakta
armaan: asi bat nahi hai plz tum use bola oana
anji: no armaan she is bussy
armaan: plz anji its very imp
anji: ok u wait here
anji goes from there n ridz comes
after looking @ ridz armaan is totaly lost
ridz: armaan kya kam hai??
armaan:.......................
ridz: ARMAAN !!!!!!!!
armaan comes back from his dream land of ridz
armaan: ridz plz mara sath chalona ek kam hai
ridz: armaan tum pagal ho gay ho main nahi a shakti yaha kam hai
armaan: ridz plz mere mada kardo plz who navnita cupbord pa chad gayt hai aur uterna ka naam nahi la rahi hai aur who abhi tak tayar bhi nah ihu hai plz who tum se milna chahti hai plz chalona
ridz: ya koi mazak nahi hai na
armaan: i swere its not a joke
ridz: ok
then they both goes to boys room
navnita is still on the cupboard n ridz goes to her
ridz: are mere acha bacha necha utar jao chalo main tum ko tayar kar ti hun chalo
n as soon as ridz says this navnita comes down with the help of armaan
atul: wah kya bat hai hum tino ise adha ghanta se itna pyaar se samja raha tha to nahi mani aur ridz na bola to ek second bhi nahi lagi use utar nai main
armaan: ya u do have a maginc ridz n give his milion doler smile
now ridz is dressing navnita
armaan is staring @ her n think how can she do this aure dekha kitna pyaar se use dress kara rahi hai ohhhh gos i luv her
n start imaging he is in their bedroom n ridz is dressing their lil angel n playing with their just like a small child n start smilling
he comes out of his transe n lookes @ navnita n ridz
N: hay bf mai nkese dekha rahi hun??
armaan: u r looking very beautifull just like a pari....... thanks ridz
ridz: its ok armaan main ise apna saath lajati hun werna ya tum ko phir se parasaan karagi
navnita: aur washa bhi muje iska saath nahi rahana
armaan: kyun kya hua tum to mere gf ho to phir
N: no now ua cant b my bf coz i have some1 else
armaan acting as if he is hurt: nahi navnita tum asa nahi kara shakti main mara jaunga tumaha ra bina
navnita: to tum inka saaht chala jana ya tum ko bacha lagi aur washabhi tum inko id papi detaho to phir mere kya zaroorat hai
after leasaning to this ridz start blushing n armaan start amilling looking @ ridz
armaan: to tum kiska saath jao gi
navnita runes toward rahul n huges him n says he is my new bf he is very handsom , cooooooool n he is RAHOOOOOOOOOOL
n they al start laughing

Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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