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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys 😊
this is my first fanfic so if anybody has any suggestions...do tell me
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PART SEVEN:

Ria looked at Aryan as he drove the car to his friend's beach house.

Ria: So um, I have to be your girlfriend there?

Aryan smiled as he glanced at Ria and said: Only if you don't mind.

Ria laughed: No problem. I will try my best just for you.

Aryan: So you won't mind if I hold your hand in front of everyone? You won't mind if I hug you in front of everyone?

Ria looked away for a second then looked back at Aryan and said: Only for tonight. But nothing that is…

Aryan: Oh, of course not. I would never do that.

Ria: Yes, I know. I trust you.

Aryan smiled again as they parked the car in front of the house.

As they made their way through the driveway, both Ria and Aryan slipped their hands into each others and looked at them. Somehow, this all felt so right to both.

Aryan looked up at a boy about his age, who was dressed in a red shirt and black pants, and said: Hey Shaan! What's up? Haven't seen you in a while.

Shaan: Well, that's your fault. You are the only that's always so into your work that you don't have time for your friends anymore. And hey! Who's this? My future bhabhiji (sister-in-law)?

Ria looked away embarrassed.

Aryan: Stop making her uncomfortable.

Shaan: Sorry! Sorry! Well, at least you got a girlfriend! Your first one ever!

Ria looked up at Aryan. She had thought that he must have had a couple dozens of them by now. She had been wrong about him the whole time. He wasn't like other boys. I'm glad I gave our friendship a chance, she thought.

Aryan: Oh shut up, Shaan. At least I am a decent guy. Unlike you guys who change your girlfriends more than you change your clothes.

Shaan: Hush man! I don't want Avantika to here that!

Aryan: Oh my God! Is that an Indian name I hear?

Shaan smiled as he replied: Yes, I have been dating her for the past few months now. I want to ask her to marry me soon.

Aryan smiled: Yes, finally you use some common sense and want to settle down!

Soon the three of them went inside.

Shaan: Hey guys, look who is here! Aryan and his girlfriend…um sorry, I didn't catch your name.

Aryan: Ria.

Shaan: And Ria.

Shaan introduced everybody to Ria as Aryan reunited with all his old friends. At last, Shaan took Ria to a beautiful girl dressed in an amazing red and silver sari.

Shaan: And this is my beautiful girlfriend, Avantika. And Avi, this is my friend, Aryan's girlfriend, Ria.

Avantika: It's a pleasure to meet you, Ria. Shaan's being dying to meet you. He was so surprised when Aryan said that he is bringing a date.

Ria laughed. Avantika and Ria became fast friends. They had so many similarities.

Ria: So are you and Shaan planning on getting your relationship any farther.

Avantika smiled and didn't reply.

Ria: Um. Is that supposed to mean yes?

Avantika laughed and as she was about to answer, Shaan took the spotlight and said: Well ladies and gentlemen. Now that everyone is here, I have a special announcement. Me and Avantika are getting married next month.

Everyone was shocked.

Aryan: Are you serious man!? Isn't this a bit too fast?

Shaan: Yaar, I know what you're thinking but I know that what I am doing is right! Me and Avantika are made for each other! We love each other.

Ria smiled and turned to Aryan and said: Shaan is right. If they both are happy then what's the problem?

Then she turned back to Avantika and Shaan and said: Congrats!

Avantika: Thanks, Ria.

Aryan: Yea, guys. Congratulations. Sorry I was being so difficult. I can see what you mean now.

Shaan: Hey man! No hard feelings! It's all cool.

Soon everybody else also wished Avantika and Shaan all the best for the future.

Ria sat watching Shaan and Avantika dance romantically in the middle of the dance floor. They are so lucky, she thought. I wish my kismet (fate) was like that too. Not everybody can get true love.

Suddenly a hand popped up in front of her face, bursting her thought bubble. Ria looked up and noticed Aryan smiling.

Aryan: Dance?

Ria smiled and gladly took his hand and she got up.

Aryan slowly pulled Ria closer to him as they both slow danced. Ria's heartbeat fastened as she tried to bring up a topic. She looked at Shaan and Avantika and said: They look so nice together. If only every couple in the world can be like them.

Aryan: But not everybody gives their stories a chance Aryan said.

For the next twenty minutes, Ria and Aryan danced without saying a word to each other and pretty soon, they were lost in their own world.

Soon the music changed from slow dancing to hip-hop and the couples began to dance to the new beat. All couple except one – Ria and Aryan. They were still slow-dancing on the side of the dance floor starring at each other.

Avantika and Shaan walked up to get a drink as they noticed Aryan and Ria.

Avantika: Awwnn. They look so cute together! I think that we found our couple of the party!

Shaan smiled: You know, Avantika, Aryan just brought Ria to this party so he doesn't feel lonely. But I swear, these two are made for each other!

Avantika: How do you know that there is nothing going on between them?

Shaan: Avni called just before these two got here. She told me to keep an eye on these two and to try and get them closer. I think we know that they like each other. But I don't think they realize it yet.

Avantika: I have the perfect idea of what to do.
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shaan and Avantika have been added on the chracters list on pg. 1.
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PART EIGHT:

Avantika finished her call, looked up at Shaan and said: Done!

Shaan: Awesome! So we're going to leave tomorrow, right?

Avantika: Yep! And what makes our plan so perfect is the weather tomorrow – rain!

Shaan laughed: Okay now, let's go to Ria and Aryan and tell them our plan.

Avantika and Shaan walked up to Ria and Aryan, who were now standing beside each other looking pretty uncomfortable.

Avantika: Hey guys! Do you think you can help us?

Ria looked up at Avantika and smiled: We can try.

Shaan: Well, the problem is that we want to spend more time with each other.

Aryan: I don't see a problem in that.

Avantika: Well, the problem is that since we're getting married, we aren't allowed to spend any time alone with each other until after the wedding.

Ria: So how can we help you?

Shaan: We were thinking – what if we all go for a vacation? Camping – what say?

Aryan: Hmm. Not a bad idea. But I have to work something out with work.

Shaan: Oh don't worry about that. I called Avni a while ago and asked her to call your work and ask for a few days off.

Avantika: We also got in touch with your brother, Aditya and asked him to get Ria a few days off from university.

Aryan: Oh, so you guys had this all planned?

Shaan smirked: Oh come on! It's not like we hang out a lot nowadays!

Ria: The idea is fine but don't you think it will kinda be boring with just us four?

Avantika smiled. She knew why Ria was asking this question. She was just uncomfortable with having just Aryan come with her.

Avantika: Oh, don't worry. We talked Avni and Adi into coming with us.

A smile of relief spread over Ria's face.

Avantika: Anyways guys, come on…dance!

Ria: Umm…no thanks.

Aryan: We were just dancing.

Shaan: Oh come on! Dance again!

After much pleading, Aryan and Ria agreed to dance again. Though both were uncomfortable, they were good enough actors to hide that and soon enough, once again they were lost in each other.

Hey, Aryan – a voice called.

Aryan: Hey, Prem.

Prem: Mind if I catch a dance with Ria?

Aryan couldn't find his words. Ria saw his struggle and quickly said: Um. How about after a few minutes? I have to tell Aryan something first.

Prem: No problem. I'll be back after 5 minutes.

Prem flashed Ria a gorgeous, big smile and left. Seeing his enthusiasm, Ria smiled to herself and shacked her head.

Aryan looked angrily at Prem walking away. He could he think that Ria would WANT to dance with him, Aryan thought. After he KNOWS that she is my girlfriend!

Ria looked at Aryan's angry face and said: Relax Aryan. Mein kahi nahi ja rahi hoon.

Aryan: No, you should go, Besides, Prem has a temper and I know that one of those killer smiles he gave you are hard to resist.

Ria smiled: he does have a nice smile but I think I would chose yours over his anytime.

Aryan smiled then sighed.

Ria: What happened?

Aryan: I am tired, yaar. It's almost 3 a.m. Lets call it a night, okay?

Ria: What about your ill-tempered friend?

Aryan laughed and said: It's not that bad, you know?

Ria smiled and they both left after saying bye to Shaan and Avantika.

The next day, Ria came down wearing beige, baggy shorts and a pink tank top over another white one. She had her hair in a ponytail and was wearing sunglasses. She looked quite hot from Aryan's point of view.

Aryan watched Ria walk down the stairs carrying a white bag. Ria saw Aryan and smiled.

Ria: Good morning.

Aryan smiled and said: So everything we need is in the car. We're just missing Avni and Adi.

Avni: No you aren't. Not Avni and Adi. Just Adi. And listen guys. There isn't enough space in the car for the four of us. We have too much stuff. There is only space for two. I was thinking that since Adi and I have to go to a friend's house for an hour, why don't you two take the other car and go on. We will come with the stuff later. And besides, I know that it will take you a bit longer because you haven't seen the sight. So take your time and come. We will probably be there when you reach.

Ria: But –

Adi: Avni! Hurry up or I will get killed!

Avni: Sorry, guys. But I got to go. I will see you guys there.

Avni hurried out to meet her brother.

Aryan: Um. Let's go.

Ria: Yea.

Both Ria and Aryan set off to go to the camp sight. As they got out of L.A. and in the country side, big drops of water began to pour.

Their trip to the camp site was almost silent. Occasionally, Aryan or Ria asked each other a question or two. Suddenly when they were about a mile away from the camp site, the car stopped.

Aryan: Not now! Argh!

Ria: What happened?

Aryan: I don't know. Something's wrong with the engine, I think. But I don't know how it can go wrong. I just got my car checked a week ago and I can't even catch a signal and call for help from my cell!

Ria: Relax, Aryan. We aren't that far. We can walk there.

Aryan: In the rain?

Ria: Oh come on! It's just rain! Besides I love getting wet in the rain. Let's go!

They got out of the car and started walking.

Aryan: Thank God that we didn't have any tents or bags or anything!

When Aryan didn't get an answer back, he looked beside him and found no Ria. He searched around for Ria and found her beside the car dancing around in circles. Aryan starred at her for a while and smiled. He had never seen such a beautiful scene. There – Ria was dancing in the rain and behind her were some beautiful mountains. Aryan walked slowly to Ria.

Suddenly Ria stopped and looked at Aryan. She noticed that he was wearing a blue shirt with buttons open half way down. A side of his shirt was tucked in his light blue jeans. She looked up at his face and found him starring at her. Everything else went blurry as she looked at him and soon they were caught in an invisible force holding them together (no…it wasn't gravity :P).

Ria suddenly looked away: Umm…we should get going. They are probably waiting for us.

Aryan: Yea. Okay. Let's go.
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a good part i loved aryan and ria's little romantic rain scene wat a classic
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PART NINE:

When Aryan and Ria found their site, their friends were already there.

Shaan: Holy crap! Where were you?

Avantika secretly smiled then made a serious face and said: You know how worried we were?

Ria: Umm…our car broke down so we had to walk here for the last bit.

Avni exchanged looks with Avantika and said: Oh, I wonder how that happened.

Adi then came out of a tent and sighed: Finally! Now, the big blue tent is the girls' and the red one is the guys'.

Then Aryan looked at Shaan and said: And no going in the other tents at inappropriate times.

Shaan smirked and replied: Oh please. I would never do that.

Ria made her way in the tent and saw everything set up already. Then she turned and found Avni right behind her.

Avni: Let me guess. You want to go for a walk?

Ria smiled: Well, no. I wasn't planning that, but now that you mention it, I think I will.

Avni: Okay, but I am not coming. Oh, and the best route for a walk is going up the mountain on the path that has white markings on it.

Ria thanked Avni and left. Avni laughed and went out to ask Shaan if he had done his part.

Ria sighed. She smelled the fresh air and thought how long it had been since she had had such peace. She didn't want to return to the camp site as she was feeling so splendid and relaxed. Ria was so lost in her dreams that she didn't see a big ditch in front of her.

Just as Ria was about to fall, a hand reached out and caaught her in time. Ria looked up and found Aryan looking down at her. And once again, they starred for a while longer.

Avni: Hey guys! There you are! Both of the late comers are late once again!

Aryan set Ria straight and the three of them set back to the site.

Ria: It's gorgeous here!

Avantika: Yep. It sure is!

That night Ria slept really well. When Avantika and Avni noticed Ria was in deep sleep, they got up and left to meet Shaan outside.

Shaan: Hey guys! Our plan is working!

Avni: I know! I followed Ria when she went for the walk and apparently she didn't just meet bhaiya on the way, she almost fell and bhaiya caught her!

Avantika smiled: They are such an adorable couple. I just wish they already realized how much the love each other. They are totally meant for each other!

Shaan hugged her and said: Just like us.

Avni: Argh! Guys! Not now!

The next day, Ria woke up. She noticed that there was no one in the tent. Ria got up and put a cloth over the transparent plastic entrance of the tent and slipped pink track pants with a white tank top.

She walked out and saw that everyone was already up eating breakfast.

Ria: Morning guys. Sorry I slept till so late. I haven't had such a sleep in ages!

Avni: No problem. That's what vacations are for! Besides, you're mostly always busy with either the hospital or the university or extra classes and what not?

Ria smiled and sat down in the empty space beside Aryan.

Aryan: Good morning.

Ria smiled and said: So what's the plan today, guys?

Adi: Oh, today I got the manager of the camp site to organize a game for us.

Aryan: Game?

Adi: Yep. There is a big red flag hidden somewhere on this ground. It's within a mile IN the camp site. We basically get a partner and find that flag. Whichever team finds it first, wins. Simple.

Ria: Are there more rules to the game.

Shaan: There aren't any specific rules. But there are a few. So we have a handout with the rules and stuff.

Avantika: Oh and just so everyone knows, me and Shaan are partners.

Everyone laughed: We know!

Then Avni quickly said: Adi is my partner.

Adi: Huh? What? Why?

Avni: Because! You are really good at finding stuff and I want to win!

Adi: Umm…Okay, sis. But if we don't, I don't want to get killed.

Avni gave Avantika and Shaan and small thumbs-up sign and smiled.

Avantika: I guess that leaves Ria and Aryan together.

Aryan smiled: No problemo!

Ria saw Aryan's enthusiasm and smiled back at him.

Ria packed her knapsack and went out the tent to meet Aryan.

Ria: Ready?

Aryan: Yep. All set.

The game started and soon all three teams went separate ways. Ria and Aryan walked in silence for a long while.

Ria: Aryan! Are you sure we are going the right way? Where are the boundaries?

Aryan: I have no clue, Ria. It's my first time camping here, too.

Ria: Well, at least we have a GPS with us. From what I see, we are still in the boundaries.

Aryan sighed: Ria, I am tired.

Ria: Is winning big for you?

Aryan smiled: It is for me if it is for you.

Ria: I don't really care. And since we don't care about winning, let's have a break.

Aryan sighed, closed his eyes and sat down. He didn't notice that Ria was sitting behind him. Aryan stretched and lied down. Before he knew it, he was on Ria's lap.

Ria looked down at Aryan as he looked up at her. A sudden gust of wind blew and Ria's hair flew on to her face. Aryan pulled his hand up and took them out of the way so he could see her face. Ria's heartbeat fastened as Aryan touched her face. His fingers were warm and gentle. Ria took her hand and went through Aryan's hair. Aryan smiled as Ria took her hand away. Things started to get uncomfortable and Aryan got off Ria's lap.

Aryan: Sorry.

Ria looked away. Another quick gust of wind blew and it started to get a bit chilly.

Aryan: We should get going. It's getting cold.

Ria agreed. She stood up as Aryan stretched. Aryan looked up and saw a red piece of cloth on the tree they were sitting under.

Aryan: Ria! The flag! It's on this tree!

Ria looked up and said: It's so high! How are we going to get it?

Aryan started climbing the tree and threw the flag down as he reached it. Ria caught the flag and got frustrated: Aryan! Come down! NOW!

Aryan saw the worry on Ria's face and smiled.

As Aryan jumped of the lowest branch of the tree, which was higher than Ria, he fell sideways.

Ria threw the flag in the side and ran to Aryan.

Ria: Idiot! Who told you to climb the tree? Huh? What if something happened to you? What would I do if you got hurt?

Aryan: Don't worry, Ria.

But it was too late. Ria was already worried and scared. She saw the wound on Aryan's hand and freaked out!

Ria: DON'T WORRY?? LOOK AT YOUR HAND!

Aryan looked down and noticed how much it was paining. He sighed and looked up at Ria. She was crying.

Aryan: Ria! No, don't cry! I am sorry.

Aryan hugged Ria. She leaned against his chest as mumbled: You better be. And don't ever do that again!

Aryan smiled and said: I won't. I promise.

Ria pulled away from Aryan and picked up the flag. She tore a piece of it and wrapped it around Aryan's hand. Aryan carefully watched her. His pain decreased immediately as she touched him.

Ria: Better?

Aryan looked up and nodded.

Both of them got all their supplies and headed back to camp.

When they returned, Avni, Avantika and Shaan were all interested in knowing why they took so long. After Ria recited their story to them, Shaan smiled with satisfaction. We are getting closer and closer to our goal, he thought.
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg Sweetu ur FF is going so sweet hun...Nice idea of bringin two lovers close...the plan is workin already....great parts i loved them...looking forward to wen Ria n Aryan will confess their love to eachother!!!
Really like all characters of ur FFs!!

Cont. sooon!
Love,
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PART TEN:

Ria woke up in the middle of the night and looked around. No was beside her. She got up and checked outside. She didn't find anyone there either. Where are they, she thought. Let me go see if the guys are there.

She opened the guys' tent and walked in. No one was there besides Aryan. He was sleeping so peacefully and was shirtless. Ria starred at him. He looked so stunning. As Aryan turned, his hurt hand slid against the ground hurting him.

Aryan moaned and got up. He looked up and found Ria standing in the side.

Aryan: Ria? What's wrong? Why are you here at this time? And where is everybody else?

Ria shivered and said: That's what I came to ask you. Where is everybody else?

Aryan dug a sweater out of his bag and wrapped it around Ria.

Aryan: Let's go.

Go where – a voice came.

Aryan and Ria looked at the door of the tent and saw Shaan standing there.

Shaan: I thought you said that we aren't allowed to go into other tents at inappropriate times. What's going on now?

Aryan sighed and said: It's not what you think, Shaan. Ria came here to ask where everyone was.

Shaan: We were just outside. Avni thought Avantika had a fever so she called Adi and me to check. But she is fine now.

Ria: Thank God! I was so scared!

Shaan: Sorry about that. They saw how you were sleeping so well so they didn't want to wake you up.

Ria made her way back in her tent and fell asleep again.

The next day was the last day of camp. They were leaving the day after in the morning. They talked and played games the whole day.

Avantika: Guys! Let's play Antakshari!

Adi: Okay! How about boys against girls?

Avni: Okey dokey. Let's play.

The six of them sat in front of each other and Avantika started singing: Mujh pe to jaado, tera jaado chal gaya, yeh ishq mere dil ko chal gaya, yaadon mein teri mera har pal pal gaya – teri baton se mila temptation, tere pyar ne diya vibration, yeh dil ne kiya confession – chori chori ankhiyan ne, chori chori ankhiyan ne, dil tera le jana.

Avantika and Shaan shared a sweet, special moment as Ria watched and smiled. I wish my life was like that too, she wondered as her head automatically turned to Aryan.

Then the guys exchanged looked and smiles and sang: Na na na na naa re na re na re, Na na na na naa re na re na re, ho sadde naal rohoge to aish karoge, zindagi ke saara mazhe cash karoge, ho sadde naal, heh heh, sadde naal.

The game continued for a few more minutes and the girls ended up with a "j".

Avantika: J! I can't think of any songs with that that haven't been sung already!

As Avni and Avantika were thinking, Ria looked at Aryan, smiled and sang: Jaadu hai nasha hai, madhosiyan hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaao kahan. Dekhti hai jis tarah se teri nazrein mujhe, main khud ko chupaao kahan.

Aryan looked at Ria and he couldn't take his eyes away. Ria starred back at Aryan and realized that she had meant every word that she had said.

That day, she couldn't stop thinking about Aryan. She wanted to be where he was but she didn't know how to face him.

Aryan also spent the day thinking about Ria. Did she mean what she sang, he wondered.

That night neither of them could sleep. Aryan got up and walked outside. His eyes kept looking at the girls' tent. He was wishing that Ria would come out.

You're in love, Aryan – a voice behind him said.

Aryan turned around and found Shaan.

Shaan: Aren't you? You love her. You can't stop thinking about her. Everything you do reminds you of her. You like the way her hair smells, the way they fly, the way she tries to take them out of the way. Don't you? Tell me, Aryan, do you love Ria?

Aryan sighed: Yes, Shaan. I love her.

Shaan smiled: Glad to hear that. Finally.

Aryan: I've loved her since the first time I saw her that night. I don't know what it is about her. She is just – different, different than every other girl on the planet. I just –

Shaan: Just what, Aryan?

Aryan: I just wish I knew what she thinks about me.

Shaan: The only way to find out is by telling her how you feel.

Aryan: If she turns me down, I don't think I'll be able to love ever again.

Shaan: Do what I am saying – tell her…before it's too late.

Saying this, Shaan left.

Aryan sighed and looked up. God, he wondered, please tell me what Ria thinks.

Aryan looked at the girls' tent once more as the entrance opened.

Ria – Aryan whispered.

Ria looked down and walked to the car. She opened the door and got a bottle of water out. She drank some and closed the lid. As she was about to walk back in the tent, Aryan called out: Ria! Wait!

Ria slowly turned around and asked: Yes, Aryan?

Aryan: Do you believe in love at first sight?

Ria: I…I don't know.

She quickly turned back and walked in the tent.

Aryan sighed and soon he went back in too.

Every time Ria closed her eyes, a picture of Aryan flashed in her mind. She looked beside her and found Avni in deep sleep. She looked at the other side and saw Avantika looking at her.

Avantika: Ria, listen to your heart. You love him. Don't ignore it. You've loved him ever since you've understood the meaning of love.

Ria sat up and tears rolled down her eyes. Avantika sat up to comfort Ria.

Avantika: Are you okay?

Ria: You're right, Avantika. I love him. I love more than anything! But every time I grow attached to someone, they are taken away from me and I have to suffer the pain. I don't want that to happen again.

Avantika wiped away Ria's tears: Oh, Ria. Nothing like that will happen. You have to trust God. I won't say or do anything for you. Tell him when you are ready. When you have the faith.

The next day Aryan woke up in the morning and came outside. Everyone was already there. They had almost everything packed up. Aryan looked around for Ria but didn't find her anywhere.

Shaan saw Aryan's eyes searching for Ria and whispered: She went for a walk.

Aryan gave a "thank you" smile to Shaan and took off to find Ria. He found her sitting under a tree lost in deep thought.

Aryan: Ria?

Ria looked up at Aryan and said: Hi. What are you doing here?

Aryan: I just came to ask you if…if its okay that we get home a bit late.

Ria stood up and asked: Why is that?

Aryan: Well, the day we got here, I found the number of a garage near here and called them to pick the car up from the road. So today we have to go pick it up. It might take a while. You know…the forms and all.

Ria: No problem. I don't mind waiting.

Ria and Aryan silently walked back to the camp site. Everything was packed and they were ready to go. Aryan looked around and thought about everything that had happened since they arrived here. The way he has slept on Ria's lap, the way he had hugged him, the time she sang the song to him. Everything.

Adi: Okay, bhaiya. You and Ria will kinda have to cram in the car until we get to the garage. It's not that far away – just two miles.

Ria and Aryan sat in the back seat. There was hardly any space there because they had the two tents in one side. As the car started, Ria fell against Aryan's chest and Aryan put his arms around her to prevent her from falling. For a while, they starred at each other.

Adi pulled up at the garage and said: Here we are.

Ria and Aryan quietly got off.

Avni: See you guys at home.

After Adi and Avni left, Aryan started walking towards the garage door.

Aryan: Excuse me? My name is Aryan Aggarwal. I called a few days ago and told you to pick up my car from the road that goes to the camp sites.

The man talked to Aryan for a while then Aryan walked to Ria and said: Ria, the man isn't done yet. He said it will take three more hours. If you want I can call Adi back and tell him to pick you up.

Ria: No, that's okay. I will wait with you.

Ria and Aryan sat in the waiting room. The garage was owned by an old couple. A lady came in with a tray of chocolate chip cookies and said: You must be hungry. Have some.

Ria smiled and thanked the lady.

I am Mrs. Jackson, my husband owns this place. – she said smiling.

Mrs. J: I know you will be bored sitting here for three hours, Mr. Aggarwal. Why don't you take your wife and go on a drive with one of our spare cars? There is a lot of sight-seeing in this area, Mrs. Aggarwal.

Ria looked at Aryan as he looked back.

Mrs. J: I must say you two make an extremely good couple. Did you recently get married?

Aryan: No, Mrs. Jackson. We aren't married.

Mrs. J: Well then, what are you waiting for? Get yourselves in a church and get married already!

Aryan didn't reply back and Ria was also speechless.

Ria took the keys from Mrs. J and both of them went for a drive around the countryside.

It's beautiful – Ria whispered.

Aryan looked at Ria and agreed: Beautiful.
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thank you 😊
i am trying my best to make it interesting.
I am also posting parts up really fast because I want to finsih this quickly before summer finishes. Hope you all like it and please give me comments. Positive or negative. 😊 Thank you.
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thank you 😊
i am trying my best to make it interesting.
I am also posting parts up really fast because I want to finsih this quickly before summer finishes. Hope you all like it and please give me comments. Positive or negative. 😊 Thank you.

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