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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry i havent been posting...
exams are coming up..
so i will post once they are finished in 2-3 weeks..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART FOUR:

Ria made her way downstairs into the living room where she saw all the family members hugging and welcoming Aryan home. He looked as if he was the heart of the Aggarwal family. Everyone seemed to love him. He was a perfect son to his parents and a perfect sibling to Adi and Avni. Aryan seemed to switch personalities according to whom he talked to. Ria watched him and tried to figure him out. He is very charming and I think that this is the very thing about him I'll have to be careful about, Ria thought.

Soon Aryan left with Adi and Uncle to sign some documents on their business. Aryan and Adi didn't go to work with Sanjay Uncle but their names were still a part of the business. They had their shares. Therefore, they had to sign some documents every now and then.

Ria slowly walked up to Aunty and yelled "Happy Mother's Day!"

Aunty smiled and thanked Ria and asked if she had called her mother. Ria nodded and told Aunty that she and Avni had planned their morning as a 'girls' morning out'.

Aunty: Do I really look like a girl to you?

Avni laughed: Ma! You don't have to look like a young girl. All that matters is that you feel like one.

Ria listened to the mother-daughter argument and smiled. How she missed her mom! Ria recalled all the special moments she had had with her mother.

At 10 a.m., the three women stepped out to do some shopping. They went to a couple of Indian stores and bought Aunty beautiful saris. They were having a wonderful time as they walked to a restaurant in the mall and took their seats.

Ria: I'll be right back. I have to use the washroom.

Avni: I have to, too. Ma, we will be right back.

The girls left and quickly walked back. As the came closer to the table, they saw Aryan sitting with Aunty.

Ria: Argh! Your brother really has bad timing.

Avni look frustrated as well.

The two girls had planned this for days! It was supposed to be only for girls.

Avni quickly apologized on her brother behalf as they got there.

Aryan saw Avni and Ria approach. The looks on their faces weren't pleasant. He quickly shot Ria a sorry smile and said: Sorry guys. I actually came to visit a friend of mine who works for the police. He told me to meet him and some of my other friends at the mall. I was just going home when I saw mom sitting here by herself. So I just dropped by to say hi.

Aunty: Oh don't be silly! The girls don't mind. Besides, we were almost done. Just lunch then we are going home. Why don't you join us?

Aryan: No, ma. It's supposed to be a 'girls' day out.

Aunty: Well, we already spend a lot of it together and we are almost done. Its only lunch you are going us for. And that's perfectly fine with the girls.

Ria gave up: Yea, Aryan. Why don't you join us?

Aryan sighed. He knew that the two girls didn't want him there. But he also knew that his mom wouldn't give up. She had seen after a long time and yearned to spend more time with him.

Avni soon forgot that she hadn't wanted her brother there and joined in the conversation between Auntie and Aryan, who was eating a banana while waiting for his lunch to come. Ria sat there thinking about Aryan and trying to figure him out.

Maybe he isn't as bad as I think he is Ria thought. He did seem extremely sorry about messing up our day. But then again, he could have so done it on purpose. Hmmm…I think that I should give him a chance.

Avni squeezed Ria's shoulder and said: Ria, are you still there?

Ria: Huh? Oh yea. Sorry.

Aryan wondered if she had been thinking about him. Because ever since he had seen her, the only thing on his mind was her.

Lost in thoughts, Aryan tipped over his banana peel.

Aryan: Oops!! My bad! Oh well, we are going now anyways. They can pick it up.
Ria got up as they were leaving and slipped on the banana peel. Her left arm, which was the arm of the cut, had slid against the table opening her sealed cut again. The blood started pouring out quickly, even worse than before.

Ria: Argh! That's the second time today I got hurt because of you!

Auntie: Second time?

Avni, Ria and Aryan started making different excuses to what had slipped out of Ria's tongue. But none of them could go any further. Soon, the three told Auntie the truth.

Auntie: Why didn't u just tell me before? Aryan! Take her to the hospital now!

Ria: No, Auntie. I will go after a couple of hours when my shift starts.

Auntie: No! It can get worse till then. Go now!

Aryan: She is right, Ria. It will get worse if we don't go now.

Ria saw no way getting out of this one. So she sighed and said: Okay. Let's go.

As Ria started walking, her ankle started to hurt as well. Aryan noticed this as offered support. Ria took his hand which eased her. When Ria got out of the car after the reached to their destination, she almost lost her balance and fell. She held on to the car as Aryan came running.

Aryan: Ria! What happened?

Ria saw the worry on Aryan's face and said: Don't worry. I think I pulled a muscle when I fell. It will be okay soon.

Aryan picked Ria up and walked inside. Ria looked as Aryan's face and forgot all her pain. It seemed as if she couldn't take her eyes off of him.

When they reached the information desk, the clerk said: Dr. Aryan. Welcome. Aren't you early for your first shift? And you too Ria. Aren't you early as well?

Aryan: Kate! Long time no see! I am not here for my shift and neither is Ria. She got hurt so we need to see Dr. Yagnesh. He is here, right?

Kate: Yes, he is. But I'm afraid that he is doing a surgery now, so you will have to wait a while. Why don't you do it yourself, Aryan?

Aryan: I would, but I don't know if I should. I am not on duty yet and I haven't checked in with Dr. Yagnesh yet.

Kate: I am sure that he will understand.

Ria: Put me down, Aryan.

Aryan slowly put Ria down. Ria walked a few meters across, turned and said: Aren't you coming, Aryan? I'll need help you know.

Aryan followed Ria to the supply room. Ria grabbed a few materials and walked back to Aryan. She gave the band-aids and cotton to Aryan and sat on the chair. Aryan started to clean the wound.

Aryan: I am sorry, Ria. You got hurt because of me both times. I should be more careful.

Ria felt his sincerity and whispered: No, it's my fault. I should have paid attention both times. First to the car and then to where I was stepping.

Aryan: Wow! You can actually be nice!

Ria: Oh come on! It wasn't my fault. It also had to do with your attitude.

Both started arguing again as Aryan randomly pulled out his hand and asked: Friends?

Ria starred at his hand and slowly went for it. Friends, she whispered.

By the time Aryan was finished cleaning Ria's wound, it was the time for Ria's shift and Aryan to check in with Dr. Yagnesh.

Aryan: Aite, I will check up on you later.

Ria smiled and left the room and left an extremely happy Aryan there. 😊
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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hey just caught up with ur ff it was realy good plz cont soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART FIVE:

Aryan knocked on the door of the head doctor in the hospital, Dr. Yagnesh.

Aryan: May I come in, sir?

Dr. Yagnesh looked up and smiled.

Aryan took that as a yes and walked in.

Dr. Yagnesh: Please, have a seat, Aryan.

As Aryan sat, Dr. Yagnesh praised him: You started helping out before you even started your duty. This is exactly the quality needed in a doctor. They shouldn't only work during their work hours. They should help people because they want to.

Aryan: Oh come on, sir. You would do that too.

Dr. Yagnesh smiled at Aryan's attitude then said: Alright. You're all set to get to work. You can go home today and rest. Take Ria with you to. She shouldn't work today with her condition.

Aryan: Thank you, sir. I will see you tomorrow.

Aryan found Ria and both left. They came home extremely tired from their day's activities. Ria slowly limped inside as Aryan supported her. As they walked through the door, Mina Auntie looked at them and smiled.

Auntie: Are you feeling better, beta?

Ria smiled and replied: Much better, auntie. Aryan helped a lot.

Mina smiled and said: Okay Ria, go and change out of those bloody clothes. Aryan, help her to her room and then you get freshened up and meet us for dinner.

Aryan smiled and held Ria's hand as she started climbing the stairs.

Ria: Ah!

Aryan: What happened?

Ria: It hurts when I climb.

Aryan smiled and scoped Ria up and carried her to her room.

As they both left, Mina walked up to Sanjay and said: Sanjay, did you see them? They look so nice together. It's like a jodi made in heaven.

Sanjay: Mina! You shouldn't say this. They just recently met each other. Who knows if they have feelings for each other? If we say this, they will think that they are under pressure and they might try to make us happy by ruining their own lives. We should give them time and if they want, we can go further in the relationship.

Mina: I am not saying that we should talk about it now. I am just thinking that it would be a pleasure to have Ria as our daughter-in-law. I know that we should give them time and we will.

Sanjay was about to reply as Avni broke in: Hey mom! Is dinner done? I am starving!

Mina: You are always hungry, Avni. No, dinner is not ready yet. It will be in about hour. Go see if Ria needs help.

Avni: Mom! I just came from there. Bhaiya is helping her and I am being ignored. She is fine, ma! I will just go watch some TV.

Mina smiled to herself hearing Avni's answer and made her way to the kitchen.

The next morning Ria woke up hearing a loud scream coming from the balcony. She instantly got up and ran out in her beige shorts and green tank top. Outside she saw Aryan holding a needle and trying to sew a button on his blue shirt that he had on.

Seeing this Ria started laughing and soon, she couldn't control herself. Aryan looked up at Ria and watched her laugh. She looked just like a little kid laughing like she was. She also looked so pretty with her hair flying around as she was trying to keep them in place. Aryan completely forgot that she was laughing at him.

Ria's laughter slowing died as she said: Aryan, if you don't know how to sew, I can finish that for you.

Aryan's thought bubble broke as he quickly looked away and said: Of course I know how to sew. Well, at least this button. Ma taught it to me when I was going to London. I'll do it.

Ria smirked and said: Help yourself.

Aryan started to sew as Ria watched him. Every once in a while Aryan would look up to see if Ria was watching. Ria looked away as she saw him look.

Aryan: Ah!

Ria suddenly ran to Aryan.

Ria: Aryan! Stupid! If you don't know how to do it, why do you even try? Give that to me.

Ria snatched the needle from Aryan's hand and started sewing the button on. Aryan happily watched Ria as she was so close to him. Ria looked up at Aryan as she finished and poked herself.

Ria: Ouch!

Aryan looked at Ria's finger which had started to bleed just like Aryan's was and started laughing. Ria irritatingly looked at Aryan and soon she had started laughing as well.

Avni made her way through Ria's room as she came to call her to breakfast. Where is she, Avni wondered. As Avni was about to leave Ria's room, she heard laughter coming from the balcony. When she saw Ria and Aryan outside trying to control their laughter, she smiled to herself. Who knew these two could laugh with each other and not always at each other, she thought.

Avni: Ria! There you are. Don't you have to go to university today? Adi is waiting for you downstairs. He wants to talk to you about some project that you guys are starting in Ontario.

Ria: Oh, shot! I completely forgot! Today is when we have the meeting with the company who is willing to sell us their land! Okay guys, I better go! Bye!

Aryan watched with disappointment as Ria made her way back in her room to get herself ready.

Ria got ready and rushed downstairs to breakfast in less than 10 minutes. Aryan was already sitting there talking to Sajnay and Adi about their family business.

Ria and Adi quickly ate their breakfast and went over their project outline.

Sanjay: So what is your project again, Ria? Adi keeps telling me but I don't get it completely.

Ria: Well uncle, I've had this dream of building a huge hotel back home in Canada and it's about time that I start working towards it. We won't start building it for about 2 years. So far me and Adi have come up with some designs of the exterior and some interior in the hotel. We need this company today to sell us their land in order for us to officially start our project.

Sanjay: Well you do know that I am willing to help with the finance, right?

Ria smiled: Uncle, we don't need anything right now but if we're ever in a financial crisis, we will be sure to ask you.

Sanjay: Oh! Independent workers! I like that! You guys are willing to earn respect and fame with your own hard work. That's fantastic! I am proud of you both.

Adi and Ria smiled as Adi said: Thanks Dad.

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Mina was pacing from one side of the room to the other.

Aryan: Ma! Stop worrying!

Sanjay: Yes, Mina! They will be here soon!

Mina: Soon? It is almost midnight! They left at 9 in the morning and now it's almost midnight! They haven't even called once!

Aryan: Ma! They aren't kids anymore!

Mina: You shut up, Aryan! You are older than both of them and you still call to tell me when you will be late. Adi – okay I am not surprised that he didn't call. But Ria? She always calls and tells me!

Avni: Mom! Chill! They might have just gotten caught up in something!

Mina: No! What if something happened? Aryan! Call Chief Manes. Ask him if there have been any accidents.

Aryan sighed and took out his cell. As he was about to dial the number as Ria and Adi walked in.
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a grt part plz cont soon
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Hey i just caught up with ur FF n i think its Fabulous!
Great writing skillz!!!
Eager to read da next part...Plz cont sooon!

Love,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART SIX:

Aryan looked at Ria and Adi and got extremely mad all of the sudden. He realized that he had been so worried about Ria the whole time. Soon, Aryan blew up.

Aryan: Where the hell were you both? Did you know how worried Ma was?

Mina and Avni both exchanged looks.

Aryan: Adi! How could you keep Ria out like that till so late? What if something happened to her?

Ria looked at Aryan and saw his face. It was red with anger. When Aryan looked at her, Ria's heartbeat fastened. She couldn't look at him. It was too painful too see the worry on his face that he had for her.

Adi: Bhaiya, calm down. Listen to us at least.

Sanjay: Beta, you should have at least told us that you were going to be late. Your mom was so worried.

Adi: Sorry, papa. It wasn't our fault. Some dude started behaving badly with Ria while I went to get the car. He started calling Ria stuff and when I came back, he took her purse and ran.

Ria looked down. She felt so guilty about making everyone worry. She looked up at Aryan who was starring at her. As their eyes met, both of their faces became red and they both looked away.

Avni: Oh my God! Are you serious? Did you guys get hurt?

Ria looked up and answered: No. We didn't get hurt.

Mina: Are you sure you both are okay, beta?

Ria: Yes Auntie. We are both fine.

Sanjay: How did that take a lot of time though?

Ria: That didn't take all the time. We were in the country side – out of L.A. That is where our meeting was held. And Adi forgot to fill the gasoline tank up. So we had to wait for someone to come and fix it up. And Adi didn't take his cell because he didn't need it since I had mine. But my cell got stolen in my purse, we didn't have a way of getting in touch.

Mina: Did anything else, that was important, get stolen?

Adi: No, Ma. Nothing else. Ria didn't have anything else that was important in her purse and thank God that the project file was with me. It also took a bit longer because we had to go fill out a form for Ria to get her new cell and to make sure that her old one can't do her any damage.

Mina: Okay. Good. I am proud of you both.

Sanjay: By the way, kids. How did your meeting go?

Ria grinned: It was awesome, uncle. They loved our ideas. They just want a detailed drawing now so they can finalize it.

Avni: That's great guys!

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Ria changed into her pajamas and stepped out in the balcony. She saw Aryan standing in the corner.

Ria: Aryan? Are you okay?

Aryan: I should be the one asking you that. Are you okay?

Ria: I know you were really worried about us. But you shouldn't have poured all the anger out on Adi like that. It was my fault, not his.

Aryan looked at Ria: You are right. It was your fault. Why do you have to look so beautiful?

Ria looked in Aryan's eyes and her heart started beating so fast.

Aryan noticed how uncomfortable he had made Ria and suddenly changed the topic.

Aryan: So umm…Dr. Yagnesh was saying that you are going to stop volunteering.

Ria: Oh yea. I am actually going to work there. Like actual hours instead of when I want to.

Aryan smiled to himself. So I will get to spend more time with her and see her beautiful face more often, he thought.

Ria: Um…I should go to sleep. I have to start working on the details of the project tomorrow.

Ria almost ran to her room wanting to get out of the awkward atmosphere that Aryan had created.

A few months went by and by the relationship between Ria and Aryan stayed the same. They would act like best friends for a while and then sometimes the moments between them would get incredibly uncomfortable.

As Mina walked down the stairs she noticed Aryan sitting on the sofa and chewing his nail.

Mina: Aryan beta. What happened?

Aryan: Huh? What do you mean what happened?

Mina: Oh please. Don't play these games with me. I know that you are worried because you always chew your nail like that when you are. So tell me, what's the matter?

Aryan: Okay, if I tell you, don't give me some stupid idea.

Mina smiled: Okay, I will try my best to give you a non-stupid idea.

Aryan: Okay, so my friends are having this Valentine's Day party and they invited me. I want to go but they are all bringing dates. I don't want to go with some stupid girl that goes flat over me.

Mina laughed: Why don't you take Avni with you?

Aryan: Ma! I told you not to give me a stupid idea and this one is like stupider than the stupidest. I am NOT taking my sister. That's so wrong!

At that moment, Ria walked out of her room wearing a beautiful, white, halter dress. Both Mina and Aryan looked up as Mina said: Ria. Why don't you take Ria with you?

Aryan couldn't help starring at Ria. He was too busy looking at her that he didn't hear his mom.

Mina: Ria, come here, beta.

Ria smiled and walked down the stairs to where Mina and Aryan were seated. Aryan suddenly looked as Mina said: Ria, Aryan's friends are having a Valentine's Day party. Can you go with Aryan as his date if you don't mind? Because Aryan doesn't want to get stuck with a girl that practically "drools over" him.

Mina winked as Ria laughed: Sure, Auntie. I don't mind. When is it?

Aryan: Today evening.

Ria: Is there a dress code for the party?

Aryan: Red.

Ria laughed Right. Valentine's Day. Okay. Wait. Why is the party today if Valentine's Day is tomorrow?

Aryan: Well, some guys, unlike me, actually have girlfriends they want to be with tomorrow.

Ria laughed again and left to find herself a dress suitable for the party.

Avni ran down the stairs and said: Oh my God. Ria looks breath-taking today! I swear!

As Avni saw Aryan standing beside her, she gasped and said: Wow, bhaiya! Who knew that you had good taste as well? Jeans with a red shirt and a black coat? That looks amazing! I swear, I HAVE to go get the camera. Wait till I come back, okay?

As Avni ran back upstairs, Ria walked out of her room. She was wearing a red, halter dress that was knee length. Ria had also curled her hair. Aryan looked up at Ria as she looked back at him. Unable to take their eyes of each other, Ria walked down the stairs as Aryan walked closer to them.

Mina: You look gorgeous, Ria.

Ria looked away from Aryan and smiled: Thank you, Auntie.

Avni came down with her camera and took some pictures of Ria and Aryan.

Mina: Take one together now.

As Ria and Aryan stood together for a few shots with each other, Mina smiled and whispered: This has got to be the cutest couple on this planet.
Edited by Sweetuuu** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww so cute...nice part dude.....cant wait to read abt valentines party....hope thre will b some romance btw da two !!!

Cont sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read ur ff for the first time.. its very cute waiting for more romance though! x 😊
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aww so cute..........just read ur whole ff...continue soon plsp...

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