“Life gave me a puzzle”full story updated - Page 3

As usual this was was fab..like the rest of u're short stories ..the puzzle was just too gud... what stood out was the male character expressing his feelings...n how can one miss those awesome lines ...gr8 dear..keep it up...hope u post the next one soon..

gd story that was very very touchin

Originally posted by: binidoshi

As usual this was was fab..like the rest of u're short stories ..the puzzle was just too gud... what stood out was the male character expressing his feelings...n how can one miss those awesome lines ...gr8 dear..keep it up...hope u post the next one soon..

Hi Bini,

I am feelgin great that u read the story at last... and gettign ur comments was soemthign i was awaitign from long.... so u enjoyed liked to read the sotry.. male charcter expressign hsi feelgin 😆 hope i did justice... u loved to read the lines bhi in bntw.. chalo my work to done.. 😃.. ya i will try to eat ur brains now n then... next one..??😕 r u kidding... i have posted none stop stories i need a break.. and most necessary u all need a break..😆.. lets see.. mood kuch aur keh raha hai... dekhtey hain..😳

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

gd story that was very very touchin

HI freaky angel.... glad u liked the story ... it touched u .. feels absolutely happy.. 😃

Hi Bhoomika,i am replying for the first time!! 😃

Lovely story yaar,very touching n great!! 👏

bhoomi another awesome fic. @The narration is beautiful. Its true for a single women its difficult to stay in a city all alone.

U have written abt how a married women can still travel alone but not a single women is so true. Walking on the streets of any city whether its mumbal or delhi orany other city its not easy. I feel more secure to travel around all alone after marraige rather before. Even at around 8 in the evening if i have to go out somewhere i can but not earlier.

good to see both of them together in the end.

U are a wonderful writer bhoomi.. waiting for more fics from u.

Originally posted by: sarikalrl

Hi Bhoomika,i am replying for the first time!! 😃

Lovely story yaar,very touching n great!! 👏

Hi Sarika... Even I am replyign u for the first time..😆.... Am so happy that u liked the story and loved it... it touched u and I feel like still I did a ok job.. i always get nervous when i post thinkign whether it will be coem across well... ur comments assur me.. 😃....

Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi another awesome fic. @The narration is beautiful. Its true for a single women its difficult to stay in a city all alone.

U have written abt how a married women can still travel alone but not a single women is so true. Walking on the streets of any city whether its mumbal or delhi orany other city its not easy. I feel more secure to travel around all alone after marraige rather before. Even at around 8 in the evening if i have to go out somewhere i can but not earlier.

good to see both of them together in the end.

U are a wonderful writer bhoomi.. waiting for more fics from u.

Hi Golu,

Any comment from u is very very special for me, not only becoz u r my dear friend but a fabulous writer urself..😃

I am glad u like the narration, I really experietnted and felt like pata nahi u all will get the sory ya kahin confuse na ho.. but feels so nice when U r sayign hat it was indeed good.

About the story and the way a single women faces problems... Yes I have travelled in delhi , mumbai & hyderbad... and Delhi for one any woman stayign there will tell what eve teasign is actually... its a bad case...and the more u try to object it becomes a biggeer headache... dotn know how girls go throguh that torture... Atleast we have brother , daddy , uncle to take care what abt other who may be poor, single and living alone..?

I agree with u and this is also my observation, I am not married but i observe things and feel the pain... Even teasing is so common and its strange most of the men feel its nto a big issue... just a whistle or a song .. what so big issue that a girl feel liek crying? a mere push kya hot ahai? kcuh kiya to nahi na.. i wonder when this mentality will change... Am so glad that Golu after reading this tory u shared with me the thoguhts which i wanted to take up...thats what i want in the comments... whether the issue touches or not... does the emotions come across strognly ornot...

Luv ur comments and ur feelgin , thoguhts from the story.. Golu ur appreciation encouragement really helps me..and guides em to keep on writing... 😃 luv u dear.. tc and next ff still nothign on mind.. so letss see.. may be it will take some time...😃

hey bhoomika..

i just read the whole ff... and i seriously loved it./.. i loved the fact tht u got a good msg across... actually even i was confused at first... but later throughout the parts i finally realised wht was going on...lol 😆

i was glad the 2 were 2gth at the end... i actually imagined AK playing the role of the charactrs 4 some reason..lol 😳

loved the whole ff... ur a gr8 writer

xx

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Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey bhoomika..

i just read the whole ff... and i seriously loved it./.. i loved the fact tht u got a good msg across... actually even i was confused at first... but later throughout the parts i finally realised wht was going on...lol 😆

i was glad the 2 were 2gth at the end... i actually imagined AK playing the role of the charactrs 4 some reason..lol 😳

loved the whole ff... ur a gr8 writer

xx

Hi .. Am gald that u felt like reading this one and read it in one go... uuuh wow!! good to see u didnt get bored but it kept u to read all the parts...😃. And u were confused as well in the start😆chalo the hcarcter in the story is noraml.. 😆..hmmm agey agey sab sulajh jo gaya😉

So liked the ending... yup they meet eaach other and made them to be togetehr in teh end..😳..Oh u imgained AK in the roles...hmm interesting.. yup K is that short height as the guy in this story adn A is having a good buotl and suits as a gym trainer... ..pheww i didnt realise this...😆thanks now even I can imagine tehm in this role.. but Kripa needs to get some more weight for thsi role..😉

all ur appreciation helps me.. tc