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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
Chutki 🤗

Your FF is Realli Unique , I will say that in every komment 😆 😆 😆

Now comin to the part.
Hai , Anjali is such a cute sister .. I like her character in this FF

Muskaan , Hai Rabba , that girl .. doesn't show much care to her promise 😳 .. Tutut .. Oh muskii , you will pay a big price later .. the guy is perfect fo you
😉

But still muskii the way you have described her side of emotions are jus WOW! You no how to form emotions in word i must say , brilliant job by you 👏 👏

Hmmm , Rahul .. i liked the way you showed his entry
He sounds a true darling 😳 😳

Awww he is cute ...
Atul ... Haha .. I love him so much in this FF
&& He is a flirt .. 😲

Who does he flirt with? ... His plants 😆 😉

Awww rahul and atul ... i love their bond 😳

Him teasin rahul 😉

Atul caught him looking at muskii bhabhi pic for 37 min and 14 seconds .. the guy loves her like krazy 😳

Atul , Took the pic and him laughin like a devil , gosh mukii .. your jus outstandin .. such a brother act 😆 😆 😆 😆

Well what else can i say , you left me speechless
What an exquisite FF You are writin , the grace of your FF , the way you have written it is so attractive ..
👏 👏

The spirit you put in to fit the situation was so grand. Fine enough the reader picture raise the scene.
Beautiful description you put in the first part... i WANT More 😍

Oi Blackmailing .. Better continue 2moz , Cuz i am 😉

😆

Love You Chutki 🤗
Edited by pink_09 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
loved it loved it loved ur very very good its sooo cue and plz updt sooooooooooooonnnnn 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
muksi 🤗
1stly soo sry cudnt read it wen u updated.... 😭
but u know wat?it was awesum!!!!!!!!!! i luvd it 😳 😳 plzzzz do continue soon cant wait 2 know wat will happen wen R goes 2 see M...n M's reaction? 😳
i like ur writing style a lot too..i can actually imagine the ppl n places wen u describe them...do continue soon 😃
natasha
Edited by mahandra - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Muskaan..I jus luuuuuved d story..ausom...After reading ur FF..im more n luv wid Rahul!!! 😳 😛 Ausom..amazing.. 👏 👏 👏 Wens d nxt update? 😳 😛

Thanks Mansi ur so encouraging 😳

soon...

take care

love muskaan

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

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wow Muskaan
i love the first part
its amazing i mean Muskaan is so sweet and Anjali is nice too
uff papa ji dont force her
thats great Rahul is understanding and i think he would give space to her
gosh Muskaan u r doing a great job
Love u loadzz sweety
natty

thanks soo much Natty di

glad u liking it

hai papa ji u will love him later 😳

take care

love u loadss too

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

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wow Muskaan
i love the first part
its amazing i mean Muskaan is so sweet and Anjali is nice too
uff papa ji dont force her
thats great Rahul is understanding and i think he would give space to her
gosh Muskaan u r doing a great job
Love u loadzz sweety
natty

Thanks soo much Natty Di 🤗

am glad u got time to read it even after all your exams thanks 😳 hopefully i will contiue to please you all 😳!

Love u loadss to

Take Care

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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kamx2

Heya muskaan! Totally loved it! Bahut interesting hai, loved yur description of muski, rahul...and lovina atul anjali as the lovin younger siblings at the moment!
Reli reli lovin t, do update soon, cant wait!
and yea dont worry, ppl will start commenting soon, cuz itz late in most places, lol 3am here in hk rite now, so u know wat i mean? 😆

Hi Kamal 😳

Aww thanks soo much 🤗 yep update is today 😳

yep lol thanks for ur support 😳

take care

Love Muskaan

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

i am having mixed emotions.....i am feeling sad fr muski and happy for rahul so one by one i'll explain my emotions after reading thz part:

muski's part:
classic muski style....anything to fulfill her wish.....i luvd luvd luvd her part...poor her has gotten stuck between career and mrriage and father....and she is always brings a "muskaan"to everyone's face.....awww......

rahul:
ommmmmmmmggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!he is already in luv wid our dearie muski.......aww..how sweet....and champ toh will always remain champ.....cool dude.....aww ur mr.i-am-to-cool-to-be-embarrased(rahhoooaal)was blushing.....i luv d rahul-atul pairz(dnt get me wrong 😆 )

muski seriously it rokd...it was amazing....terrific....2 cute.......mindblowinng....awesum......toooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooo gud!!!!! 👏

cont soon,
luv ya,
pragz!!

p.s-these words are not enough to describe ur ff...ur ff is so gud dat i hve ran out of words!!!!

Omg thanks sooo much Pragati 🤗 lov ya lots

ur comment made me reach 9th cloud 😳 im soo happy that u like it

aww blessh ur too sweet Pragzie 😳 missing you lots come back soon

Take care

Love Muskaan

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Posted: 17 years ago
#79



Hi guys 🤗 thanks for eevrything part 2 is finally updated 😆 Thanks Mansi Hiba and Asthu for always reading my FF 🤗


-Chandhigarh Muskaan Home 12am-

Heartbroken and destroyed within self Muskaan somehow managed to carry herself home. She ran upstairs no being able to suppress the pain within herself any further she slammed her bedroom door shut and collided against the wall crying her heart out! One million thoughts spun around in her head, while tears flew from her eyes smudging her mascara leaving black marks around her eyes. She cried and cried she felt like her tears would run short…. It was the end of everything in her life, everything seem liked a dream one where she wished she could open her eyes and feel reassured but it wasn't this was a bitter truth for her. Just then she heard a knock on the door…
M: (sobbing) what is it, is there anything else left to add?
A: (holding her tears back) Sis stop crying please, at least see the boy first before you jump to a conclusion. Get out of there, staying locked in a room wont help you come and face the world and reality!
M: (wiping her tears) Anjalil go away I want to be alone I need some space! Rahul, that's his name right he's going to pay a price sis!
A: (scared) how is it his fault? That he loves you! Open the door NOW!!!
M: Go away please I beg of you
A: (crying) ok but please cheer up they will be here in a few hours….
M: Ha babaji what's going on shaadi and me with some random guy? No way!!! I so hate this "Rahul".

-Boy Family Arrives-


Few minutes were left for the boys' family to arrive! Muskaan was still in her room while MJ and Angie were in the kitchen preparing snacks. PJ was resting in the sitting room as doctors had discharged him with strict conditions and full care must be taken….

-Knock Knock!-

An: (Rahul and Atul mum Anu) Oh ji koi hai assi ithhe poch gaye hain ji!
Muskaan was disgusted by the sound of this woman and screamed from her room….
M: A mad woman is here go and check sis!
A: (running to the door) Respect sis! (She peeked from the tiny hole and saw Rahul and his family standing there) Mum Dad Rahul jiju and family is here hurry up! (She opened the door and welcome Rahul his mum and his dad) she looked around when she saw none else was there she was about to close the door when she bumped into a young boy/man!
His deo smell was driving her crazy, she felt nice when his body touched hers. While they leaned against each other for a few minutes living totally in the moment… Finally both of them gained the courage to look at each other. Anjali quickly got out of that awkward position and freeing herself from his muscular body…
At: Sorry actually I came in a separate car you know what I mean right sweetheart that's why but anyways….
A: (embarrassed) Umm yeah ok cool come inside everyone's gone in….
At: Ok hun let's get going ……..

-Sitting Room-

Everyone was introducing themselves and talking about Rahul and Muskaan doing a complete marriage talk when Rahul asked….
R: Umm aunty where's Muskaan?
MJ: (scared how Muskaan would be) She's coming probably getting ready (faking a chuckle)
R: (concerned) Aunty, Muskaan isn't being forced into this marriage is she? I don't want to see her upset, is she's not happy I don't want to proceed with this marriage (stern smile)
PJ: No Rahul you have got it wrong Muskaan is extremely happy to be with you right Gurpreet (MJ's name)
MJ: Yep Rahul she's happy (stuttering)
R: (not convinced) Glad to know….
The entire room went silent everyone was feeling heavy hearted especially Rahul, that's when Anjali finally ended the silence by saying:
A: I think I should go and get Muski now she's probably nervous to come down alone!
As: (Rahul and Atul dad) Ok beta but tell her not to worry about us too much anyways Rahul and Atul live separately from us and after the wedding Atul is going Shimla for a few days so Muskaan can settle in.
A: (touched) Aunty Uncle I'm relieved Muskaan will marry into such a caring and loving family!

-Upstairs Room-

Anjali climbed up the stairs only to find Muskaan checking out a young hunk in a light blue t-shirt and skinny jeans and some trendy trainers revealing his chest with a few buttons undone Muskaan was speaking to herself….
M: Hmm I wonder who this Greek god is …
A: (breaking Muskaan's trance) That Greek god is Rahul jiju or should I say your man who you was *ehem ehem* properly checking out (giggling)
M: (going red) Oi Anjali me and check that boy out gosh sis control your imagination its running a bit too wild.
A: Blushing huh? (Chuckling)
M: (a bit angry) Angie shut up me and blush for that freak seriously get a life girl!!!
A: (laughing) Aww you look so cute jiju will faint
M: (hitting A) whatever
A: Ok come I will show you jiju up close, come now their all waiting especially *ehem ehem*
M: Angie im going to kill you sis!!
A: Ok kill me but first see your hubby (chuckling)
M: Hai Babaji help me a mad sis now a mad hubby what will happen of me???
A: Muskaan come down seriously (relieved that muskaan was feeling better)

-Sitting Room-

Everyone was waiting for Muskaan when finally they saw Muskaan coming down the stairs the entire room went silent once again….

Rahul's mouth shot wide open he felt like an angel had come from heaven just for him. She was the most beautiful woman on earth he had ever seen. She looked so elegant in her white Punjabi suit her perfect curvy body her smell everything was driving him crazy he just wanted to go give her a cuddle! Just then Atul clicked his fingers in front of Rahul
At: Wake up bro bhabs is here
R: (breaking out of his trance) I know Atul I can see she so sexy… (Realising what he just said) umm I mean…
At: Its ok no one else heard (grinning) Aunty Uncle why don't we let Bro and muski Bhabs talk alone what say Mum and Dad?
Everyone agreed that Rahul and Muskaan should speak alone…Rahul was about to say something to muskaan as soon as everyone left just when Muskaan interrupted and said:
M: Listen Rahul I don't know why you love me when you don't even know me but I don't love you! I'm getting married but don't expect me to do things that I won't…. Maybe I will never be able to accept you or maybe it will take a long time…
R: (shocked) Muskaan I didn't know you're forced into this…
M: yeah whatever Rahul keep your distance
R: (feeling a lone tear escape his eye) Muskaan… (But too late she walked away in tears)
Anjali saw all of this and went and held Rahul's hand…
A: Jiju please don't misunderstand her she's in a shock she just came back from London today she likes you too I know that she was checking you out and all its just she's been through a lot in her life like(she stopped)…
R: (concerned and happy) Anjali what has happened??? Please tell me…
A: (unsure) Umm actually….
R: Anjali tell me if you care for Muskaan
A: (confident) Muskaan, umm she's not my real sister biologically she's adopted she found out when she went to college ever since then her life changed Papa ji didn't treat her the same everyone in the family like uncle aunts distanced from her she's been through a lot she always wished good for everyone but no good ever happened to her (crying) she deserves a lot of love promise me you will keep her happy and love her a lot please
R: (shocked and also crying) Anjali I will always keep her happy I promise come on lets go inside now….
Rahul and Anjali walked inside everyone was talking to the priest fixing a wedding date when the priest said tomorrow muskaan was shocked but felt no pain as she had already been through so much. It killed Rahul to see Muskaan like this and more than that it killed him too see her mum and dad agreed to have the marriage so soon even though they knew Muskaan was somewhat being forced. Not being able to do anything to improve the situation Rahul agreed as well hoping for the best thinking babaji must have thought of the best I will keep Muski happy that's my promise. As the night went pass Muskaan was going through one million emotions and feelings same with Rahul they were feeling like puppets of destiny… Morning came and afternoon came.

-Wedding Hall-

Muskaan was dressed in a red wedding lengah looking beautiful with all her gold jewellery her beauty to describe in words was impossible….Anjali herself looked beautiful in a hot pink sari making Atul stare at her every few minutes while Anjali couldn't stop drooling over Atul. While Rahul entered the wedding hall in a red sherwani with black mixed in looking so handsome that a girl would faint over him just when he saw Muskaan there screaming
M: Anjali sis help me put this blusher on please where are you?
Just then Rahul walked past her brushing his body against her leaning in. Seeing her shiver with his touch and presence he saw some hope in their relation and to add on he said
R: Muski, babes you don't need a blush your already blushing red (grinning) see you later
M: (breaking from the trance) OMG he just, oh god what will I do with him? Baba ji I need to control my feelings…..
R: (listening) Hmm I see babes you want to play it the hard way just like what I did now well then that's what your going to get anything to make you happy……

comment/critisice 😳

Edited by muskaan_2008 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
awsome job👏plz continue asap😳
Edited by Esha* - 17 years ago

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